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The Fragile Trust (Chapter 4)

RiaBy RiaDecember 28, 2016Updated:January 18, 201749 Comments4 Mins Read
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The Fragile Trust
Chapter 4

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously. Many of you had questioned me Kunj’s behaviour. There might be something screwed up with it so, keep reading to know that.

Special dedication: Anam_Sidhant

In case if someone missed out on the previous chapter, here’s the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

HAPPY READING!

• • • • •

(TWINKLE)

I felt the colour on my cheeks rising as soon as Kunj dared me to kiss him. I widened my eyes and asked, “Kunj, what are you saying?” “Th.. that’s your dare Tw.. Twinkle”, he replied. I tried to free my hand, but he tightened his grip over my hand and pulled me closer.

“Kunj, no”, I said and freed my hand immediately. I walked back and stumbled over the carpet. “Twinkle is such a loser. She’s not even completing her dare”, he said. “K.. Kunj, that’s not the type of dares I was talking about”, I replied still walking backwards.

He stood up from his place and walked towards me stumbling over every possible thing in the middle. “Miss, you didn’t specify which type so now this is your dare. You shall complete it or else you’ll be proved a loser”, he muttered. “I’m not a loser”, I complained as he placed his hands on the wall cornering me.

“Prove it”, he remarked. ‘What’s wrong with this guy? He’s such a flirt, I swear. It’s not that I don’t like boys who flirt, but directly a kiss!’, I thought.

“I don’t know to kiss”, I replied trying to avoid the current situation. This proximity between us was actually driving me crazy. I could feel the colour of my cheeks constantly rising. “Okay then”, he paused in between and I heaved a sigh of relief. I don’t know what effect this kiss would’ve on me when the proximity itself affects me so much.

“I’ll kiss you”, he continued and I widened my eyes and looked straight into his brown eyes. ‘God! Why are you doing this to me?’, I thought while he stroked my right cheek. “Twinkle, are you nervous?”, he asked as I nodded my head disagreeing inspite of the fact that I was nervous.

He moved closer to me and our legs brushed against each other’s which sent a shiver down my spine. I closed my eyes tightly being able to feel his warm breath on my face. He moved closer to me and straddled over my waist. I loved the warmth which I could feel in his embrace. He pulled me up by an inch and pushing me against the wall, he kissed me. An ecstatic kiss.

___

It’d been around a minute and I swear on myself, I’d never felt so good before. I ruffled up his hair as he continued kissing me. He slowly bit my lip and I opened my mouth to let out a moan when he curled up his tongue with mine.

‘Gosh! He was so good at this’, I thought and quickly brushed my thoughts away. I could just stay in his embrace for my entire life with him kissing me.

___

He pulled after a good lot of ten minutes and looked at me earnestly. “Twinkle”, he muttered huskily trying to regain his breath. I looked down completely flustered. “You taste DIVINE”, he completed. I looked up at him flustered and smiled. I ruffled up his hair and hugged him tightly. He lifted me and walked towards the sofa. He placed me on the floor below and laid down upon me. He rolled over and I came upon him.

“One more?”, he asked. I let out a soft laugh and smacked at his arm. I hugged him and rested my head on his chest while he wrapped his hands around me. Protectively. I smiled and closed my eyes while he kissed my head and closed his eyes. I looked up at him and smiled looking at his innocent face. I pecked his lips and resting my head on his chest again, drifted to sleep.

• • • • •

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    49 Comments

    1. Zuha Fatima on December 28, 2016 9:00 am

      Hey! You rocked it Ria. Simply superb. The romance was damn hot. I was biting my lips and was smiling as I read the ‘Kiss’ part. Seriously, this was amazing. You described the scene well.

      Well, when I opened the site, I wished that either you or Monica would’ve posted the FF and when I saw your post I was damn happy 🙂

      Anyways, take care and try posting soon 🙂

      Loads of Love and support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:25 pm

        Thank you so much Zuha! I’m glad you liked the update and the ‘Kiss’. ? Aww .. you wished for my FF? That really means a lot. Thank you so much! ❤

        All love,
        Ria.

    2. Presha on December 28, 2016 9:03 am

      Hey ria its awesome amazing fabulous

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:26 pm

        Thank you so much Presha! I’m glad you liked it. ?

    3. Sara28 on December 28, 2016 9:27 am

      Hey Ria!
      And you said you didn’t know how to continue? This was awesome. it was really cute! Tbh, I was actually excited for Tushar and Naina but I’m not complaining about this ?. I loved how you described such a moment so perfectly. Keep it up! Love you!

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:30 pm

        Hey Sara,
        Firstly, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update and found it cute? Are you serious? You were waiting for Tushar and Naina scenes? ? I didn’t know you’ll like them so much. Anyway, that you already read about them so, don’t complain. ?

        All my love,
        Ria.

    4. SidMin23 on December 28, 2016 9:45 am

      Cut episode and kunj dare to twinkle n their ? part was superb

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thank you so much SidMin! I’m glad you liked the part. ?

    5. Anayaali on December 28, 2016 9:50 am

      Superb….
      Awesome…
      Lovely…..
      Plzzzzzzzz post nxt asap….

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:33 pm

        Hey Anayaali,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one’s updated. ?

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-5-ria/

    6. Chiku on December 28, 2016 10:15 am

      Hey ria
      Woaaah its lovely❤️❤️❤️Specially the kiss part. U r so naughty man??????????u make me go ? crazy with ur ff. its just mind blowing man. I seriously loved it
      Waise u look so innocent but u r ????????soooo……… ( fill in the blanks by urself)

      It was short episode ☹️☹️☹️Try posting long one
      Love u❤️

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:35 pm

        Hey Chiku,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and the ‘Kiss’ you naughty head.
        Who told you that I’m not innocent? I’m damn innocent. It’s just that I’m indecent?

        Love,
        Ria.

    7. Adya on December 28, 2016 11:32 am

      Hey Ria di..
      OMG.. damn cute! I’m lacking words to praise you.. that was sooo amazing.
      When I read the kiss part… I was like wow..
      Two indecent people make up a good bond right ??? ???
      I’m too excited to know what happens next. Try posting soon.
      Love you!

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:37 pm

        Hey Adya,
        Thank you so much darling! I’m glad you liked this update. Of course. Indecent people make a great bond.

        Love,
        Ria.

    8. adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 12:05 pm

      i m a big fan of urs app itna acha likhte he ho ………ria di plz post soon can i be ur frnd

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:37 pm

        Thank you so much Adeeba! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    9. Anam_sidhant on December 28, 2016 12:07 pm

      Heya Ria, how are you, how’s sanskaar?!??
      Well,thankyou for uploading the episode soon.but I wished you would have uploaded it yesterday!??

      Now coming to the episode, thank god you didn’t used my idea. otherwise I would have cursed my self only!?

      And the episode was actually up to my mark,it was so sizzling hot, Your ff is slaying man. I just loved it!❤️

      Post next one soon!

      Love~anam?

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:41 pm

        Hey Anam,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. You shouldn’t be having so many wishes ghost. I’ll be updating when I want to be frank?

        Hatred,
        Ria. ?

      • Anam_sidhant on January 2, 2017 1:23 am

        Huhhhh!?

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 4:51 am

        ??

    10. Manvi on December 28, 2016 1:04 pm

      ??? Awesomeeeeee.. . ……
      ??? hot hot hot….damn hot man..??
      Awww i luv the episode……

      Aww the kiss….. it was really a bliss to read the episode…..
      U explain everything so beautifully…
      I jzz luv the episode…

      Waiting to see their reaction after the hangover??
      Post next soon….. ☺?

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:42 pm

        Thank you so much Manvi! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    11. Monica on December 28, 2016 3:47 pm

      Heya!
      Okay, idk what just happened! I’m flushed! But dayum girl, the romance was on fire! and you say I write it amazingly, look at you babe! Moreover, I’m pretty sure that you have a naughtier head than me so befaltu mein mujhe badnaam na kar ?

      Also, sorry for keeping you waiting! Now you know why! You see, I’ve a lot of worries, as I’ve told you! But don’t you worry, I’ll always be there even I’m busy! Just text me when I don’t show up, alright?

      Anyway, I’ve spoken a lot now, Bye! ?

      Love you! x

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:46 pm

        Do you know you’re hopeless? If not, then let me tell you briefly that you’re the BIGGEST HOPELESS, but do you know, I love this hopeless a lot, lot and lot.

        Haha.. thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. Aap hi toh meri adhyaapika hain. Aap ka padhke hi likha tha maine? Tujhe pata nahi kya I’m paid for badnaaming you??

        I’m not so jobless man. C’mon. ? I of course miss you comments always, but yeah I am lazy too. I can’t keep telling you?

        All my love,
        Ria.

    12. Sohi on December 28, 2016 4:03 pm

      Yaar the episode was rocking
      It was just fab
      Liked it very much
      Do continue

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:47 pm

        Thank you so much Sohi! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    13. RUTU..... on December 28, 2016 4:21 pm

      Hey Ria it was fantastic fabulous amazing episode loved it post next one soon

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:50 pm

        Thank you so much Rutu! I’m glad you liked the update.

        (Welcome to Telly Updates – Tashan-E-Ishq fandom) ?

    14. shreya098 on December 28, 2016 6:30 pm

      It was amazing ria…
      Looved it

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:51 pm

        Thank you so much Shreya! Im glad you liked the update. The next one has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-5-ria/

    15. Ramya on December 28, 2016 8:13 pm

      Superb ria
      Awesome
      Loads of love keep smiling

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:52 pm

        Thank you so much Ramya! Im glad you liked the update. ?

    16. SidMinTwiNj on December 28, 2016 8:51 pm

      Hey ria
      U r a liar… U said u r not so good at writing romance… Than what is this which u wrote haan? Damn this epi is so amazing… TwiNj kiss tho ????❤❤❤❤ I tho read this epi 3 times… Dont know why I couldnt resist myself from reading it again and again… Waiting to see how the story will shape up…

      Love you ??

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:53 pm

        Hey di,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and the ‘Kiss’ too. ? Well, thrice? You gotta be kidding me. It wasn’t written that well either. Anyway, thank you!

        Love,
        Ria.

    17. SidVee_Yashvee on December 28, 2016 10:24 pm

      Wow Ria, their romance was sizzling ?? and hotttt.. and it was so beautifully described.. really loved it.. e
      Waiting for the next ❤

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:55 pm

        Hey Yashvee,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and the romance too. ?

    18. Riddhi on December 28, 2016 10:37 pm

      Hey ria u r really good in writing romance scenes m today’s episode was so hot
      After reading this episode I m feeling so hot hot ????

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:56 pm

        Thank you so much Riddhi! I’m glad you liked the update. Does someone require any ice???

    19. kruti on December 28, 2016 11:52 pm

      That was pretty cute romance…the kiss was just???
      Continue asap

      Love u

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:57 pm

        Thank you so much Kruti! I’m glad you liked the update and the ‘Kiss’.

        Love,
        Ria.

    20. Simiyy on December 29, 2016 12:36 am

      Hey Ria
      it was really hot
      try to post the next one soon
      loads of love

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 10:58 pm

        Hey Simiyy,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update.

        Love,
        Ria.

    21. Shalini15 on December 30, 2016 12:20 am

      Hi Ria, how are you dear? well episode was blast… hayeeee my naughty girl what a kiss.. it was too hot… yaar jab sirf kiss itna hot hai toh toh full romance kaisa hoga? offo kya silly que puch rahi hun main I know that bcz I’ve saw it on your previous ff n after all you are my romance queen… it was awesome episode… loved it… post next asap..

      N really very sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes actually I was busy so was not active on TU since few days n could not read ffs… now only read all parts…. soooooooooo sorry pls maaf kar do…..

      Lots of love♥♥

      “Shalini/Neha”

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 11:03 pm

        Hey Shalini di,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. ‘Romance Queen’ and me!! Nah, never.

        Also, it’s okay. Don’t worry. I do understand your part. Plus, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-5-ria/

        Love,
        Ria.

    22. Aanya_pandey on December 30, 2016 1:21 pm

      Ooh my god.. Ooh my god.. Ooh my god..
      This ws so so so cute??

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 11:04 pm

        Thank you so much Aanya! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    23. Purnima.agrawal30 on December 31, 2016 5:44 am

      awesome amazing fabulous

      • Ria on January 1, 2017 11:05 pm

        Thank you so much Purnima! ?

    24. baby on January 7, 2017 2:40 am

      ohhhhhhhhhh goody…………
      ria………………am speechless as always
      yaar kya khun m like ohhhhkk soooo damn romantic♥
      widout confession hosh aane ke baad kya hoga hehe
      loved it yaar 😀 fabulous amazingly written
      love u lods♥♥♥♥♥♥

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