The Fragile Trust (Chapter 3)

The Fragile Trust
Chapter 3

A/N: Thank you so much for your comments previously. I’m sorry for I haven’t yet replied to all your comments. I’d gotten no time. I’ll try replying to them by the evening.

Anyway, Merry Christmas to all of you!

In case if someone missed out on the previous chapter, here’s the link below:

Chapter 2

HAPPY READING!

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(TWINKLE)

We both settled down opposite to each other in the living room. Kunj was wearing a blue shirt along with black pants. I wondered how could someone look so handsome all the time!

We didn’t know what to talk. We kept staring at each other and stealing a few glances in between. “Do you drink?”, he asked me. ‘Does he hate girls who drink?’, was the first thought that struck my mind.

“Yeah, why? Don’t you?”, I questioned him back. “I do, but in a limit. I don’t have alcohol stored in my flat”, he replied. “Oh, do you stay alone?”, I asked. “Yeah”, he replied ruffling up his hair. ‘He looks cute’, I thought.

“Usually guys tend to drink more”, I mused. “Do you like guys who drink more?”, he asked. ‘What the hell!’, I cursed him for his words right at the moment in my mind. “I don’t mind guys who drink or smoke. Being bad isn’t that worse either”, I remarked.

He rubbed the back of his neck and smiled at me, an unusual one. I wondered what was going on in his mind. He got up from the sofa and walked towards me. I hurriedly got up from my place and said, “I’ll get my phone from the room.”

I was nervous. I don’t know how I’d react to the proximity between us. I didn’t want him to know about me been stalking him and developing a soft corner for him. He sat down on my place and pulled me onto his lap.

“K..Kunj”, I stammered as he wrapped his arms around my waist. I liked the feeling of being so close to him, but I wondered what would he think if he saw me completely flushed out. I looked into his eyes which were earnestly looking at me. He tucked the hair strand behind my ear and stroked my cheek. I couldn’t help, but blush.

Suddenly my phone rang and I immediately got up from his lap. I cursed the person for calling me during the intimate moment between us. I ran inside to pick up the call, but it was disconnected. ‘Was it just to disturb our moment?’, I thought furrowing my brows.

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“Would you mind a playing a game with this liquor?”, I asked as the two of us gulped in one peg. “No”, he replied. “Let’s have a competition then”, I said. “What competition?”, he asked resting his hands on the arm seater of the sofa.

“We’re going to see who drinks more of this liquor and the one who drinks more should give a dare to the other person and they should complete it”, I said pouring out another peg for both of us. “Get another bottle”, he commanded. I laughed and went to get another bottle.

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“Kunj, I’m going to win”, I said completing my fifth peg. “I won’t let you Ms. Taneja”, he replied and gulped in his fifth shot. I liked the way he competed for everything. We gulped down a few more pegs and after my eleventh peg, I gave up.

“Kunj, it’s over. You win”, I declared while he gulped his twelfth peg. We both were totally drunk by now and I tried getting up from my place, but again fell down.

“Your dare”, Kunj said looking at me with his unusual smile completely out of his senses. “What?”, I asked him like a complete drunkard. “You need to kiss me”, he replied. “Okay”, I said and got up from my place.

I stumbled while walking towards him and slightly pecked his right cheek. “Dare completed”, I announced and clapped. He held my hands and pulled me closer to himself while I fell upon the arm rest.

“He.. Here”, he said pointing at his lips.

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A/N: This story will be including a good lot of premarital romance. Hope no one has an objection regarding it.

46 comments

  1. Anam_sidhant

    |Registered Member

    Eeeeee,yayyyy you posted!!!you don’t look romantic at all,then how you write such romantic ffs?!😂😂 anyways,it was hell cute!😍😂 loved it!! Ik you’re not going to post soon! But then too post soon!x😂😂. Love~anam🎈

  2. Kritika14

    |Registered Member

    Dude,
    I curse you, you’ll die soon! Wtf? Why did you end so soon? Couldn’t you show the rest of it too? I swear, you’re more hopeless than I am.

    Anyway, this was fab! What’s wrong with Kunj? I mean, that’s great that they’re coming near to each other but why all of a sudden when they’ve not known each other for a good time?

    You really gotta post soon and if you don’t, b*t*h you’re dead! 😂
    P.S – I’m serious!

    All my love,
    Monica 😬 (feels weird but alright! 😂)

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Cutie Pie 😂,
      How’s life? Did you just curse me? You MEANIE!!! I hate you Monica!! Seriously, I’m glad over the fact that the feeling is mutual😏

      Jokes apart, thank you so much pretty!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Frankly, idk why, but everyone asked me about Kunj!! I wonder which prologue did you people read, on a serious note. Anyway, since you all have a doubt regarding it, I’m planning to put up Kunj’s voice soon. Hope you all get your confusions cleared.

      The next update is coming up soon.

      All my love,
      Ria.

  3. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Yepiseeessee!!!! U posted ur ff😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍woaaaah but a shot episode ☹️…
    Bu never mind. I loved it😍😍😍😘😘omggggg its sooo cute…. lovely. How do u write so much of romance and that to soo nicely.
    I dont mind romance at all😉😉
    Is ur ff going to have a happy ending?? Plz do confirm this
    Post soon
    Love u❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Chiku,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. Haha.. it is of the same length as the others, but since I left it in the middle, I guess it seems to be short.

      Well, this is only the second chapter. I haven’t yet thought of an end now. Will let you know when I stabilise my mind on one particular idea.

      Love,
      Ria.

  4. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    Why on earth did you end so soon. I wanted to read more of it and it came to an end. Also I have a question, is Kunj a play boy or mysterious person, because Twinkle has been known for her crush over Kunj but about Kunj? I guess a lot waits of him to be reveal!

    Coming to the chappy, it was damn amazing. Romantic, Cute, Hot and all words of dictionary which one could say to describe such a romantic chappy!

    Well definitely I won’t mind premarital romance as far you post your Fan Fiction soon 😉 Also I remember I complimented you on your FF, ‘I Love You (A Twinj journey) Comeback’ that you are amazing at ‘Romance’ but you said that you’re no good

  5. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    Why on earth did you end so soon. I wanted to read more of it and it came to an end. Also I have a question, is Kunj a play boy or mysterious person, because Twinkle has been known for her crush over Kunj but about Kunj? I guess a lot waits of him to be reveal!

    Coming to the chappy, it was damn amazing. Romantic, Cute, Hot and all words of dictionary which one could say to describe such a romantic chappy!

    Well definitely I won’t mind premarital romance as far you post your Fan Fiction soon 😉 Also I remember I complimented you on your FF, ‘I Love You (A Twinj journey) Comeback’ that you are amazing at writing “Romance’ but you said that you’re no good but one who write such romance can never say so. So keep it up dear!
    Loads of Love and Support!
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much sweetheart! I’m glad you liked the update. A short one? Haha.. Well, frankly, it’s of the same length as the other two chapter, but I guess because it came to an end in the middle of the scene so, you all feel it’s short.

      About Kunj, everyone has been asking me the same. Idk why because I specified the minute details about this crush part in the prologue. Just to clear out on your doubts, I’ll add a chapter with Kunj’s voice pretty soon.

      The next one is coming up soon.

      All love,
      Ria.

  6. SidMinTwiNj

    |Registered Member

    Hey ria
    Its so amazing and romantic… Love it… Ria try to write bit longer epi… Damn excited for next epi… Try posting next pretty soon… And I don’t mind romance.. Dirty mind😂😂😂😂🙈🙈🙈

    Love you😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter. Well, it ain’t that short. It’s of the same length as the previous two. Plus, long updates won’t be possible if the updates need to regular. If you all are okay to irregular updates, then I’ll update really long updates twice a week, may be or once.

      The next one will be up soon.

      Love,
      Ria.

  7. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Awesomeeeeeeee! Simply majestic…i feel Ria is naughty in life…that is why she is able to spice things up so well😋😉
    Naughtiness in the air…oh my god! I’ll faint! I dont know if its me or i felt that it ended too soon…make it longer next time dear! Awaiting impatiently for that kiss…

    Love u
    ~Ayu

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ayu,
      Dirty minded!!! Naughty. Well, I am too indecent, okay. I’m just telling you. So, don’t assume😜

      Well, well, thank you so much! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. The kiss. It’s a question whether it’s going to happen or no though because I didn’t mention romance before confession so, 😜 Haha.. let’s see what I write further ahead.

      The next one will be up soon.

      All love,
      Ria.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Riddhi,
      There should be some suspense too😂 Well, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

      The next one will be up soon.

  8. Manvi

    Hey Ria☺☺
    This one was awesome…☺……
    Haha…. twinj drunk….. purani yaadein taazi ho gyi😆

    Waiting eagerly for next one💕💕

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Manvi,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update and also happy that you could recall the TEI memories.

      The next one will be up soon😀

  9. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Mm…
    Dirty minded girl !!! Well same pinch. Haha! You are not the only dirty minded. I’m always there to support you !

    Now get ready! Slap ; pinch ; and kick…
    You know what I hate you… how can you just end at such a cute and lovely spot… I just hate you for that … I swear I’d have killed you if you would have been in front of me.. but undoubtedly the episode was amazingly written… the romance had a cute essence and I love it..

    Post soon…
    Love you!

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Adya,
      Mm.. (Copying you 😜)
      Aap ne mujhe maara? 😭😭 Ab bhi lag rahi hai. Okay, I’m kidding 😂 Well, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Oh, and by the way, I knew I wasn’t the only indecent one 😜

      The next will be coming up soon.

      Love,
      Ria.

      • Adya

        |Registered Member

        Okay so now it’s your turn to copy right?? 😂😂😂 Keep on!
        Well hann Maine apko mara ! Any problem ?? Hope so no !
        Yeah even I knew that we both are not only the indecent one! There are a many more to go….
        Love!

  10. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    Not fair Ria,
    U can’t just end it like that. So sorry I missed this post and thank you so much for pointing it out to me! It was so good! The romance was on fire and I’m guessing the next chapter will be even more hot! Now I’m having doubts on Kunj. His actions were quite interesting. Who is he really? So many questions and so little answers. So post soon! Love you! 😂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya beautiful Sara,
      See, see, everything is fair in love and war. Yay!!😂

      Okay, okay, now that I ended it, I can’t do more of it, but what I can do is …. Skip the romance in the next one😂 Something all of you are waiting for!! Haha.. I won’t do that, but whether the scene will take place or no is a question!!

      Anyway, thank you so much beautiful!! I’m glad you liked the update. You need not be sorry 😘

      All my love,
      Ria.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey SidMin,
      It’s all my pleasure that you could recall TEI memories through this chapter.

      The next one will be up soon.

  11. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria di!
    Firstly, thanks for passing by the link of this or else I’d have surely missed it due to lack of time and proper signals.
    Secondly, no offence but I seriously want to kill you for ending it so soon! I mean, like, there was so much going on at one point and then, done. Like, seriously?😏😏😒😒
    Thirdly, after throwing out all my anger, I must tell you that this episode was fab! I’m so damn desperate to know what Kunj has gotten in his mind, after all! Does he even feel for Twinkle the same way she does? I really do hope so. Besides, everything was so perfect! And of course, I wouldn’t mind watching all those romantic moments!😬😬😅😂 Like, who would?
    Also, I’m replying to the reply you’d given me on the previous chapter here as well. So, after viewing the comments I’ve received, I think I’m not gonna be quitting my FF after all! Of course, provided that the posts gets quite irregular, then. So, I guess that makes you talking to me, once again, on official terms, right?😉😉😉
    I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next update and I hope you do post it at the soonest. Also, do let me know about the same as well.
    With love,
    Anshita😘😘😘😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Anshi,
      Thank you so much sweetheart! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, okay, sorry for ending it there, but I wanted to keep the length of all the chapter more or less the same plus, I prefer keeping some suspense😛

      About Kunj, everyone has been asking me the same. I think there are some confusions provided I tried clearing the crush part in the prologue. But that’s alright. I soon will be including chapters in Kunj’s voice so, hope everything sorts out at that time.

      As I told, we’ll be talking like before and I’m really happy that you’ve reconsidered you decision of discontinuing it. Ofcourse all of us love it a lot.

      The next one will be coming up soon, hopefully tomorrow. I’ll privately message you about it.

      All love,
      Ria.

  12. SidVee_Yashvee

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria, this was really amazing.. and the way they were behaving was soo cute.. drunk twinj will bring more fun😛😛.. and I also don’t mind pre marital romance 😛😛. . Do cont soon ❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Yashvee,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m really glad you liked the chapter plus, found drunk TwiNj cute😆

      The next one will be up soon.

  13. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ohhhhhhhh god ria sry yr nhi kiya mene cmnt 😀
    pichle do posts par bt srsly trust me m in luv wid it
    sooooooooo cute till now ♥♥
    srsly ohh god dey meeting eo n den twinkle stalking him n d way u described everything
    as always perfect fabulous yaar…………….. 😀
    or ab yeh drunkard state n kunj getting close to twinkle osm
    luv u lods sis♥♥♥

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