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Forgiveness- Raglak OS

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Doctor comes out Laksh asks what happened he takes him to ICU where Ragini is lying helplessly.

Flash back 1
Ragini and Laksh are school mates not so good friends, only hi bye relation.
After 5 years in the hospital.
Ragini: Tensely Uttara is everything fine how is ur dad
Uttara : ya yar , he is fine. Thanks Ragini I am lucky to have a friend like u
Doc: Hi Utara you can discharge your father today, by afternoon I will make sure all his formalities are completed.
Uttara; thanks doc with a sigh of relief.
Ragini: Laksh with a big smile on her face, how are you
Laksh: Hey hi

Uttara stands confused, u both know each other; Ragini explains that they r school friends and Laksh asks Ragini for coffee tomorrow and she agrees.
In the coffee shop, Laksh waits for Ragini . Ragini enters in red salwar with black border; Laksh was mesmerized with her looks and felt she was so different from school.
Ragini : Sorry sorry for being late making sorry face starts the conversation; you are doctor that’s great.
Waiter comes and takes their orders. Both go with Cappuccino.
Laksh: What abt u, what do u do.
Ragini; I works in Australi, here for 2 months’ vacation.
Laksh: What about your parents and the big house you used to live near the school.
Ragini: In a sad tone explains how their relatives cheated them. They became bankrupt, so she had to work to clear the debts as half of them is done. She composes herself and does not want to spoil the mood. Then they exchange their number and started to talk.
Slowly they started to enjoy each other’s company; whenever both are free they just keep on talking for hours, got to know well with each other families. After few weeks, Ragini calls Laksh.

Ragini: Hi Laksh I will be leaving to Aust in couple of days.
Laksh: wow that’s great yar and dnt worry I will be there for your send off.

Ragini leaves for airport hugs her mom, dad and bids adieu. Laksh gives courage to take care of her and not to worry about anything. Flight leaves after 3 hrs. Until then he did not feel anything for her after her flight left, he goes to hospital.
The whole night was very difficult for him, he does not know why he is having these strange feelings, why he is missing Ragini this much and he realizes his love for her. The next day he got call from her informing that she reached safely and he was so damm happy and curious to know whether she also had same feeling.
Few months passed and both of them became so close calling every day, exchanging gifts and their life seemed to be happy. After few months Ragini also fell for Laksh but she did not express it to him.

One evening Ragini gets call from Laksh.
Laksh: Hey is it possible to meet.
Ragini: smiles Laksh you have to wait for 3 more months for that.
Laksh: desperately says ok and asks her to meet his friends’ family who resides in the same area
Ragini: But I dnt knw them, how can I she is not comfortable but agrees to meet them tomorrow as Laksh pressurized her.

Next day she enters the house and was taken aback when she saw Laksh. She blushed in happiness as he came and hugged her tightly. She too responded the hug. She did not want to him let her go. He kneels down and gifts the ring, I know this is dramatic, she laughs with tears, Will you marry me, I want to roam around with you , I want to be in my success, failure and support me hug me fight with me ,will you be mine.
Ragini had mixed emotions as she did not know how to react and was cloud nine at the moment, she did not say anything and she runs away to the corner. He goes near to her and turns her and sees her crying Laksh: What happened Ragini, I am waiting for your reply, tell me something and please don’t be silent. She then hugs him and says I love you Laksh, I can’t live without you. Both had a bone crushing hug. This was the most awaited day in both of their lives.

Then both exchange a passionate kiss. It was the most beautiful night that passed so quickly. Next morning Laksh asks Ragini to resign her job as he his taking her with him. She agrees and both leave happily to India.
Laksh informs his family about his love, whole family agrees for the marriage as his decision is what matters and they bless him to be happy as always. On the other hand in Ragini’s home everything was a mess as her parents did not agree for her marriage telling her that already they had lost their property and now they don’t want to lose the self -respect in the society this shatters Ragini to the core.
She begged her parents no to do this to her but in vain no one heard to her. She informed the same to Laksh, he calms her down by saying not to worry about anything for now tomorrow he will come and convince her parents.

Laksh tries to convince Ragini’s parents but in vain. Ragini talks with her dad that Laksh will take good care of her and she will be happy with him. But both of them do not agree and are more concerned about their society and reputation. Her parent then warns her to leave with him immediately if she wants him or to stay with them as their daughter and marry the person whom they choose. Ragini was shocked and does not know what to do.

She was crying continuously and Laksh could not see her crying asks her to stay with her parents as he cannot see her in pain. Ragini then informs her parents that she is going with Laksh as he is ready to sacrifice his love but cannot see her in pain. She then leaves with Laksh as the whole family curses her for being irresponsible and not having respect for her family.

Ragini and Laksh get married in a simple manner and start a new life happily. Laksh promises Ragini to unite her with the family. Ragini hugs him tightly and thanks him for coming to her life, Laksh stops her and thanks her for choosing him and kisses her on her forehead. Both share an eye lock. They consummate their marriage.
But Ragini is always thinking about her parents and the pain haunts her. Whenever she tries to talk to them they just ignore her by saying their daughter is dead. This makes her more upset. Years pass by, one day when Ragini brings breakfast to Laksh, she is about to faint he holds her in her arms and takes her to room. He sits next to her when she opens her eyes he kisses her and thanks her; she did not understand what he is up to. Soon there will be a person to share our love, she thinks for a moment and he kisses her tummy she becomes so excited and hugs him happily.
When she calls her parents to inform about their grandchild they are not even ready to listen to her. Months pass by, Ragini is in her ninth month she informs Laksh that she is missing her mother and wants her to be with her and cries likes a child. I know you are taking good care of me. You always make me feel special but now I want my parent’s plzzzzzzz.

Laksh could not see her crying. Laksh promises that he will full fill her wish at any cost and assures her parents will be there during her pregnancy. He makes her sleep on him. Laksh tries to contact her parents but in vain, so he leaves to her native to convince her parents. In the beginning they did not listen to him but once they heard there are going to become grandparents, they became so happy and did not want to show it.

He then explains how Ragini misses her family and the pain is haunting her. He then adds about her wish, tears flow from their eyes. She is not happy without you; she is worried plz for this time talk to her. Ragini’s mother can’t stop her tears and wanted to meet her immediately. Laksh bring everyone home and calls Ragini I have a surprise for you. She is shell shocked to see her parents. She feels that she is the most luckiest and happiest person in the World for now. She sees them from stairs and tears rolls down while coming down she slips and falls from the stairs crying vigorously due to the pain in her baby bump.

Laksh rushes her to the hospital and tells that he does not want to be with her as he cannot see her in pain and will not be able do the operation. Doctor informs that her situation is critical and should immediately undergo a surgery. Laksh knows her situation well; he knows baby can’t be saved as she fell with her stomach. Laksh is hell shocked, her parents are feeling let down by their daughter. They pray to god telling they want their child back, they r not angry with her. After 2 hrs of surgery, Laksh asks what happened, doctor takes him inside
Present Day;

Laksh goes near Ragini and kisses on her forehead. I made a mistake; I should have never come into your life. It’s because of me you are struggling for life today. Please don’t leave me alone. I miss you, I love u Ragini kisses on her forehead.
A drop of tear is slowing rolling down her and her last words I love youuuuu soryyy and she closes her eyes forever.

When she wanted forgiveness, her parents were not ready for it but when they are ready to forgive her, she is no more. Forgiveness is the best gift u can give to the person, if it is not given at right time, it loses its value.
I know this is not that good if you did not like it I am really sorry.

27 Comments
  1. Raglakholic

    It’s so heart touching os
    Totally loved it dear
    Nd u said right
    Forgiveness is the best gift u can give to the person, if it is not given at right time, it loses its value.
    Nd well said dear
    Please do write more on raglak

  2. awesome amazing excellent superb mind blowing brilliant speechless next part soon don’t be late and yaa thanks to all raglak writers for writing mind blowing concept and they are just brilliant hope we get more raglak ff ts ss O’s and plzzz raglak ff give daily ff or be regular and yaa plzzz write more bcoz now days raglak ff is very less in comparison to Swasan so all raglak ff writer plzzzz it’s a request plzzz

    1. SRSL

      Its an os which is over nikky…what next part are you talkinhlg about…😅😅😅

  3. Emotional and nice os, please post more raglak stories

  4. SRSL

    Awsm dear…loved it..its truly emotional..and real life story for some people….I have actually experienced this in front of my eyes…my aunty but she is alright she did not die…even the baby…

  5. It was very heart touching… u made me feel emotional…

  6. tnk u dear 4 ur emotional story..itz reli reli a heart touchin story..plz kp continue writin raglak ff story coz we r mizin tem lik hell..tnk u 1s agin dear..

  7. It’s emotional and beautiful
    Your words about forgiveness is awesome
    Please write more on raglak

  8. Astra

    Emotionally beautiful…

  9. Sreevijayan

    Awesome os dear..bt why everyone is cmng up with sad ending..

  10. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved it to the core
    What u said is absolutely true
    Thanks for the OS
    And the information too

  11. Beautiful

  12. Asra

    awesome dear…but it’s really heart touching dear…loved it….tkcr dear…

  13. wonderful story
    Awesome

  14. Anu

    I guess this was swasan os na? It has been converted in raglak! I dont remember writer’s name?

    1. Samaira … Mirna herself is d writer of that SWASAN OS… she just made it a RagLak version…

      Awesome Darlz.. even though i didn’t read this but i remember each n every scene about that OS.. after all i love it na.. TY dear…

  15. Yes anu it was swasan os converted into raglak

  16. Fats

    Awww this was really emotional. RagLak’s bond was so pure and beautiful. It’s sad how their end was so tragic. Thank you for writing such a nice OS. I loved it 💗

  17. That was emotional

  18. soooooo gud

  19. Uffffff yr hrt tchng suprbbbb

  20. IQRA222

    simply awesome and heart touching

  21. No words dear it’s really outstanding

  22. Good..heart touching os..

  23. Hemalattha

    heart touching os. Totally loved it dear. RagLak’s relationship was so beautiful.

  24. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it

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