The forced marriage….a swasan ff….(part 4)

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Hiii frndzz….i am sree nandana back with another part of my ff…i hope u like it….plz support me with ur comments…..post ur pov as d comment…i am so sorry 4 d grammatical and spelling mistakes….. in last 2 parts I got less comments…..plz say if there z any mistake…..many asked me not 2 make d marriage a forced 1….but guyzzzz….many love stories starts after marriage….shivika & nairan r d best example…so sorry 4 making it a forced 1….swara z a sherni and she will remain like that….i promise that…..and guys let us start with recap and d link 2 previous part….

Link 2 previous part:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/forced-marriage-swasan-ff-part-3/

Recap- sanskar decides 2 marry swara 4 revenge….

In gagodia house:

Sumi along with dida and ayush was sitting in d hall….suddenly they hear d calling bell….

Sumi-ayush….can u go and open d door???i am having a little leg pain….

Ayush-sure maa…..

Saying this he goes and opens d door….he sees maheshwari family @ d door….

Ayush-maa…some1 came….

Dida and sumi comes there…

Dida-plz come inside….we r sorry….but we didn’t identify u….

Parvati-no…it’s not ur fault….anywaywe r maheshwaris…

The name maheshwaris echos in their mind…

Sumi,dida&ayush-maheshwaris….

Parvati introduces every1 2 gagodias and vice versa….

Parvati-we came here 2 ask swaa’s hand 4 sanskar….

Dp-sanskar wishes 2 marry swara….

Dida-but…

Sumi cuts her….

Sumi-parvatiji….i will call shekhar now….and after that we can take a decision……

Sujata-sure……..

Sumi-ayush….plz go and call swara 2 come back…

Ayush-ji maa……

Sumi goes and calls shekhar….

Sumi-hello shekhar…

Shekhar-what happened sumi???

Sumi-shekhar….maheshwari family came and asked swara’s hand 4 sanskar….

Shekhar-but….what did u say??

Sumi-I thought 2 say something after u come….

Shekhar-what’s ur opinion???

Sumi-I am okay with it….and u??

Shekhar-me too z okay with it….

Sumi-shekhar….u just come home now…

Shekhar-okay…..i will come just now….

Sumi-bye….

She cuts d call…she comes back…..

Meanwhile Ayush:

Ayush calls swara….swara takes d call….

Ayush-hello didi….

Swara-hello ayu….

Ayush-didi….maa asked u 2 come here now itself….

Swara-ayu….is there anything serious????

Ayush-didi….maheshwari family z here now….

Swara-Maheshwaris???

Ayush-they wants make u Mrs.Sanskar Maheshwari….

Swara-what the hell???me and sanskar….no way…

Ayush-haan didi…but u should come here now itself…

Swara-haan…I will….

Ayush-bye didi…

Swara-bye ayush…

Ayush goes back….

Sumi-Ayu…did u call shone???

Ayush-haan maa….she will come in a while….

Sumi-okay….

Just then shekhar comes…

Shekhar-namaste…

Maheshwaris-namaste….

Ram-shekharji….we came here 2 know about ur opinion on making swara our bahu….

Shekhar-we r happy 4 our swara….

Just then swara too comes there….

Ram-swara…beta we know about ur argument….

Dp-sanskar was not agreeing 2 marry any1 but he agreed 2 marry u…..

Parvati-so u should tell ur decision after thinking a lot…..

Sumi-no maaji…v don’t have any problem with this marriage…

Dida-anyway we will tell our final decision tomorrow….

Parvati-okay…this card has our number…

Parvati gives d card 2 sumi….

Sumi-okay….we will finalise d decision tomorrow…

Ap-by d way we r leaving now….

They give all d gifts they got 2 swara even though she refused…..they goes….

After they goes:

Sumi-maa….what was d need 2 ask 4 some time…

Dida-sumi…u and shekhar told d decision…but what about swara’s wish???

Ayush-maa….dida z ry8….its didi’s marriage and she should decide it….

Shekhar-ayush u just stop it….

Sumi goes 2 swara….

Sumi-swara….do u have any problem with this marriage???

Shekhar-shona…we r doing it 4 ur happiness….

Ayush-but papa….her happiness doesn’t depend on sanskar…..

Shekhar-swara…u have 2 marry some1 1 day or another….then why not sanskar…

Swara-papa…..i don’t trust him…..

Sumi-swara…u have 2 do this marriage otherwise u won’t see my face ever….

Swara-maa…

Shemish goes….swara goes 2 her room and so does ayush and dida…. After a while ayush and dida comes 2 swara’s room….

Precap:Will sanskar change his behavior towards swara????swasan marriage….

Wait and read…..I know that its little stupidity….sorry 4 that….plz support me with ur comments…in my ff no separation track…

By sreenandana…

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46 Comments
  1. Awesome dear

  2. Awsm dear… no swasan scenes and its tooo short..
    And why u always write its stupidity..if u again write dat na i wont commnt…u shld have faith on urself…

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq……sorry 4 making short and from next part i swear that swasan scenes will b there…..tnq 4 ur support didi…..i won’t write that sentence from 2day….

  3. Yashu24

    Awesome sweetie..???
    I loved it..
    Hmmm..sanskar’s behaviour is really a question mark.. let’s see what happens next..
    Waiting for next part ?
    Take care
    Keep smiling, stay blessed?
    Love you ????

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq mickey didi….i will post asap….sanskar’s behaviour will b changed soon…..

  4. Amazingupdate… pls post next update soon…

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq……i will post asap…

  5. Soujanya

    awesome

  6. Phoniex

    Nice dear

  7. Amazing

  8. Independent

    I didn’t​ expect Sumi to blackmail Swara I thought it will be sanskar

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq….u r ry8….sanskar too wll blackmail her….

  9. Rachna

    Awsm.Dr…

  10. Aashi26

    Hi baby I’m sooo solly for not commenting earlier….actually I was stuck with my dad’s function then family trip and after that OS competition in all this mess I couldn’t check ur posts….just now read all the posts they are fabulous…and regarding this one it was awesome..but shemish are totally mean to swara , hope sanskar will fall for swara soon…bye baby take care and I love you….

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq didi…..its okay…even i a silent reader of many ff….sanskar will surely fall 4 swara….otherwise we will make him fall 4 swara…..

  11. Awesome

  12. Nice story

  13. Seebu_s

    nice dear

  14. Amazing dear its goood continue soon

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq…i will post asap…

  15. loved it

  16. Neptune

    hey dear it was awesome but please make it a bit longer and i don’t understand why shemish are hell bent to make her marry to sanskaar i really want to read what happens next………..

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq….i will try 2 make it longer….i posted d next part…here z d link…
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/forced-marriage-swasan-ff-part-5/

  17. Simi

    Awesome dear.. How can they compel Swara to accept the proposal..?? Hope sanskar will change his mind

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      tnq…sanskar has 2 change his thoughts 4 swara anyway….

  18. nice…read 3,4,5th chapters in one go?

  19. Meera_s

    wow..it is going interesting

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