Flipped (Confrontation) OS

Hello guys! Before you read the story you need to know that swara and sanskaar are in same school. Sanskaar is Swara’s childhood crush and she wanted to share her first kiss with him. She used to irritate him like hell…. , but to get rid of swara, Sanskaar had made up with kavitha, but gradually fallen for her and he started to make her jealous. One day Swara’s mom explained her about the things which are right and wrong, and she distant herself from Sanskaar and though him as a player!. Also, Swara family is shifting to Mumbai. Basically, This shot goes around their confrontation!,
Next day!
Third person pov~
While swara was going, somebody had caught her wrist.
Person: Swara this letter is by sanskaar. He wants to meet you in private.
Swara- but why?? Ohh had a break up with kavitha so now trying to play with my feelings! ?
Person- nope dear! It’s nothing like that. He’s not proposing you.
Saying this the person went away leaving our swara confused.
Sanskaar pov:
I was happy today. Somewhat I feel everything was going to be fine between us. I just feel like to express my feelings with her. I wanna announce that I love her! These incidents , making swara jealous only proved I’m in love with her! ??…
While walking through the streets making my way towards school, everything seems to be happy and living.

The fiery, golden orb rose up from the horizon spreading its magnificent rays of light everywhere. The darkness of the night lost once again and parted away like a defeated king giving up his thrown. The sky was as blue and delicate as a porcelain teacup, the hills rolled gently in all directions, intersected occasionally with the silver ribbon of a river. The very shapes of tree were like frozen streams.
When our inner self is esteemed, everything looked so soothing. Similarly with our sanskaar he found that today was a very beautiful and creative day by nature. Everything was going to be good. CROSS FINGERS

The birds were chirping,everything was happy, indeed blissful. I reached school. I sent a letter through Rohan to swara mentioning to meet me at xyz park at 5 o’ clock.
During assembly I found myself staring at swara.. Magic of love indeed. It’s so. Pure, it was beautiful. I can’t believe I was in love, but to make swara mine I had to talk to her first.
I had a feeling of jubilation.
Swara pov:
Ritika told me ssankaar was staring. What? Oh my god? Is it? Ummm….wait swara..all boys are the same and sanskaar is even one of them. The flirty, exuberance fliter and player. I don’t know about what he is going to talk.
5:00 pm at xyz park!
I went there to found him standing near the lake. I tried to control myself not to go but damm my heart for it! Why had I fallen for him? Not answerable, just because of his eyes. Stupid, infact naive . I cannot hunch even for what was going to happen.umm state of obscurity
He’s now standing in front of me holding my hands. What he proposed me? Seriously I can’t believe it!
Sanskaar: I love you swara. I don’t know why are you ignoring me? Why don’t you sniff my hair but I want that pleasure back. I want to see you staring at me, passing me the weird smiles. I don’t know when n’ how I had fallen for you but swara trust me I had flipped for you!

The boy who is my childhood crush , the one who I wanted to share my kiss is proposing me!! Those scintillating eyes were speaking a lot, they were pure filled with eternal love for me, at an instance I was reminded by my mind that I had a vow to my mother. I can’t break it.
Me:(pushing him) you moron, after playing with kavitha’s feelings you’re are trying to play with me. Go hell with you Mr sanskaar maheshwari. I know your games. The day when you were talking to Himanshu at library about fooling Kavitha.
He was shocked!

Me: You’re just player. I cant believe you can do this. This was not the sanskaar for whom I had fallen !
After finishing my tirade for this imbecil person. I swirled and started moving but then he caught hold of my wrist making me thrash on him! I could feel his hands on my waist.
Me: Sans…..sanskaar leave me! Please!
Sanskaar (Pleading
voice): No…you know what that plan was made to make you jealous

Before he could complete….. I pushed and ran away!
All the boys are same, even sanskaar!
I hate him! I never want to see his face again! I never want my life to be spoiled like my sister.
Thank God I’m shifting to Mumbai. It’s better to stay away from him.
Sanskaar pov
When she pushed I realized what was I upto! Damm it I proposed her! How can I be such a jerk.. Shit!
What does she think of me?? A player?? Seriously? Am I a player? How to make her believe that this plan was her! Everything had got into wrong path. It all happen in an extempore! I lost her. Day after tomorrow she’s leaving to Mumbai forever. Leaving me alone. Broken. Was my love not true? I don’t know whether I will meet her again! I was here to confront her not to propose. Watching srk movie had made me enough of cheesy and filmy! This is real life dude..every story is not a blandiloquent fairytale.
Two days later:
Today at dusk she left me. She went to Mumbai leaving me. I was so immersed in swara that it’s seem impossible to forget her. I want a second chance to rectify everything, to fix all broken things! To eschew all the hurdles!
I went to that park again, the petrichor reminded me of the mistake I had done. I had to seek for forgiveness from her. This incident left me jejune! I wish I could meet her, confront her. I’m missing my swara like a hell!
So guys how was it?? I hope I could break silence of you people! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
From love,

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    1. Aashi

      Thank you!?

  1. Kakali

    Aashi,, i knew it, it’s u only..!! loved the story dear.. But acc to me Sanskar needed a second chance to rectify his mistakes,to make Swara believe that He Honestly Loved her.. this story is still not completed for me.. I would love to read if u write another part … !!
    U r doing a great job dear..!! continue ur passion in writing..!!
    Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Aashi

      Thank you bae;!, surely I will try to write second part but will need time!?

  2. Simi

    Nice ?

    1. Aashi

      Thanks ?

  3. awesome
    make part2 plz

    1. Aashi

      I will try for sure; thanks ?

  4. Arshaanya

    I ve read it alrdy… dis was ur ff rite??
    Continue it na plz

    1. Aashi

      Yaa it was but I didn’t knew how to.proceed! So dropped it

  5. Nic…….i think it’s incomplete

  6. Anniya

    This was one old ff na, pls if possible then continue it…
    By the way it’s nice

    1. Aashi

      I will try?

  7. Nice..complete it please..

  8. Abirsha

    It’s nice dr…..

    1. Aashi

      Thank you!

  9. SNY


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  10. Scooby

    Superb but need a proper ending may b second part…

    1. Aashi

      Thank you…sure I will try to write!

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  12. Raina

    awesome dear, i loved it.but is it an os? because its not ended, you are planning to write second part?

    1. Aashi

      I will try my best to write second part!?

  13. Zelena81196

    amazing….. but was this the end? because it didnt seem like one…. will you be updating this?

    1. Aashi

      Yeah sure!

    1. Aashi

      Thank you

  14. Soujanya


    1. Aashi

      Thank you so much ?

  15. AnuAnn

    Nice dear

    1. Aashi

      Thank you ?

  16. Shreeyu

    Awesome Dr… Well I never read ur ff..but can conclude it would b amazing try to give one more part…???

    1. Aashi

      Definitely I will try!

  17. Vyshu10

    nice…continue it

    1. Aashi

      Thank you!?

  18. ur description is soooo good

    plsssssssss give a second part

    1. Aashi

      Yeah sure I will give…tysm?

  19. Wonderful

    1. Aashi

      Thanks you!?

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