First Love in School (nesam) part 8


Part 8
Wildlife journey with nesam confession πŸ˜‰

Thanks a lot everyone for your constant support and love. Feel so blessed!!! Thanks my silent readers as well. Keep reading!!

They moved to the park accompanied by two forest guards. The team got divided unknowingly, the male in the front, ladies in the middle and children at the back. It was going to a very long walk. They were provided a jeep but walking gives a different pleasure. Dont you agree?
All of them behind were the teenage and it was going to be a good day for Neil since no Rahul in the picture. His eyes were glued to the girl with camera. She completely looked like a photographer capturing even an insect that her eyes never failed to spot.
Neil’s POV(chuckling): she thinks herself as Bear Grylls shooting for discovery? Eh?
I am an adventurer, but she is not…she is not an adventuress. She is a ‘wanderess.’ Thus, She didn’t care about money but only experiences.
He observed.

“Careful!” he shouted whilst her feet failed in air. She looked down and saw the creature that she was going to put a feet on.

“Oops!” she mumbled. He had a keen observation on her.

Wait, what? observation? He was observing her?

This made her conscious, very conscious. An uneasiness passed through her blood. She noticed her brother little far from her with the other children. No doubt the teenage might be sticked to him due to his ever charming looks and personality.

Her mom turned to assure she was alright and signed her to come fast.

Neil was behind her. She was so busy with the camera that she didnt even noticed everyone moving so fast. Her Dad might have left her seeing her immense and deep love in photography and in assurance that her brother might be with her.
But hell, they had a fight yesterday.

“Is that your hobby?” Neil asked gently over her shoulder.
He didnt wanted to spoil this amazing moment with her by his ego and arrogance.

She turned and warmly replied “yes” she got inetrested and happy that someone acknowledged about it.

“we should move fast. They are ahead” she cracked annoying him a little.
He was trying to pull out a topic and she was thinking about the other members. His effort will go in vain and drown if she persists.

He took a big step to walk by her side.
“Dont worry. They wont leave you” His voice was deep, husky and modulated. He assured her with a slight curl of lips.

“Yeah. They wont but still…” she again countered and that was quite enough.

First thing, he never paid attention to any girl..ANY! come what may! And here, he is giving his attention to her like a idiot love stricken puppy and she is kind of ignoring him.

On the other hand, Sam was having a strange feeling in the pit of her stomach realising his presence.
She was feeling like when she is swimming and want to put her feet down on something solid, but the water’s deeper and there’s nothing there. In one moment she was feeling everything and then she was feeling nothing.
Others had moved farther and if they dont follow now, maybe they will lose them. The environment was calm and cool. The cloud was showering their love today by shielding the sun.

Meanwhile, Neil was sending her a feeling which they both felt but couldnt understand. She was going to freeze, her fingers were getting cooler and it needed a warm blow. He was walking with her shoulder to shoulder. She could feel him though there was no intense thin happening nor any proximity. But the pumping of her heart speeded. She could literally hear her heratbeat as if it wanted to jump out of her chest.

“We both are together so stop worrying” It was his third try. If she oppose again he would loose his calm.

Sam could barely control. She wanted to hold his hand. Feel the warmth that she always does when he embraces her in his arms. Her body was getting numb.
God! What was she thinking she needs to control but … her tongue didnt helped and bit out hurriedly.

For a long time,’ Sam said, β€˜I had a crush on you. I just wanted you to know.’ she honestly said.

Neil looked at her as if to check that he’d heard correctly.

“I love you.” he said leaving her in utter shock.

She didnt believed her ears and stared stupidly at him. She was frozen.dumbstruck.surprised.shocked.
Both faced each other and he leaned in.

β€œSay it,” he whispered against her lips.

β€œI love you.” Hearing her own words, she gasped at the rush of emotion.
She wanted to cover her lips for the outburst.

He put his hands on either side of her jaw and took her mouth on his.
Her eyes bulged out. She didn’t respond for a few seconds. Her mind lagged behind what her body was feeling.

It was just a small lovely kiss. He released and smiled looking at her. He felt so complete and prefect now.
He embraced her in his arms which she was craving for the last few minutes.
His arms wrap around her waist tighter. She was space bound. A rocket about to blast off. They remained like that for a few seconds till her body shrugged.

Where were they? Where are the other members?

“Hey.. Did you got the way?” she asked him aloud.

They were walking for around half an hour. By now, Samrat also turned back to have a look.

“Piyali…where is Sammy?” he lightly asked.
“She is with Neil” Piyali assured.

“And Raghav?” Samrat asked.
“Oh he is with the children. A little behind” Piyali said in a very confirming tone.

Neil turned to Sam.
“Hey I thought you and Rahul have something?”

“What?” she shouted amused.

“Yeah. Dont you guyz have something? ”

“What something? He is my best friend.” she tried to explain with a valid reason.

“Oh. Then what’s Divya?” he interrogated.

“she is also my best friend.” she simply said trying to understand what logic he was applying.

“best friend is only one my dear.”

“Eh? Who said that? I have two.”

“Thats what I am saying that you cant have two.”

“What do you mean?”

“Pick one” he insisted.

Sam got lost in thought. Actually right, Who will she chose if asked ?

Neil chuckled and moved by her side.

He kept both his hand around her delicate shoulders and made her sit alongwith him.

“You’re minend I’ll kill any bastard who tries to take you from me.” his voice became cold and low. She felt a sudden possessiveness in his eyes. He was implying to Rahul. Did he knew that she will chose him over Divya? no! She wont.

“Leave that. So tell me when you got a crush on me?” he asked changing the topic and recalling the words she had bit out half an hour back.

“Hey! We are stucked here and instead of moving fast you are asking me this question?” she avoided his question feeling awkward and shot in one breath.

He slided his left hand around her waist and pulled her for a side hug and her head rest on his shoulder.

“I think it was during that amazing night on the kitchen counter. Or maybe it was the morning you stepped in the bus and passed me a glance. Or the evening when you speeded up your bike.”
Testing things, his right hand reached for her hand, and, to his joy, she glared, but she let him take it.

He kissed at the top of her head and smiled satisfied hearing those words coming out from her throat sweet and soft.

“I cannot imagine living my life without you. I want to see your face in the morning, and then at night, and a hundred times in between. I want to grow old with you, I want to laugh with you, and I want to tell my friends about how managing you are, all the while secretly knowing I am the luckiest man in town.”

β€œWhat?” she demanded.

He shrugged. β€œA man’s got to keep up appearances. I’ll be universally detested if everyone realizes how perfect you are.

Both laughed out on each other arms.

“Hey but your friends include my brother.” she complained.

He laughed again, the boyish smile.
“Dont worry about that” he assured though he didnt cared about anybody except her and his mother but he didnt wanted any doubt to build up on her beautiful innocent heart.

“I love you Sam and will always and forever.” he said removing all the other things running in her mind and the happy positive things got a place.

Neil was saying her name, and he was sending her a feeling. It was courage and strength, and something else too, as if he were standing with her, as if he’d taken her within himself, letting her rest her entire body for a moment on his backbone, her mind in his mind, her heart in the fire of his. The fire of Neil’s heart was astounding.
She almost could not believe, that the feeling he was sending her was love. But now she was engrossed in his arms and the world was out of her vision.


That’s one of the first things that comes out of young people’s mouth when they’re in love. FOREVER. And that’s cool, it’s all good-until you get old enough to realize what forever is.

Precap: Fight and accident.

I am sorry were eager and I couldnt help and updated it without the fight scenes.
I feel I didnt reach upto your expectations cause confession scene seemed diFficult to me.
And about fight ..that is more interesting between couples aren’t they? And who knows how long this teenage love love will last….????

Want to end an ff soon since I am getting myself indulged in new ones. Well, not this one…
Please support me for my another story thats in the link below

Please drop down your view and stay happy!!! Keep smiling πŸ™‚

Credit to: Roshni

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  1. Roshini loved it…I loved it…no need to be sorry update was perfect…will be waiting for the next one and also kindle…do let me know when are posting that πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚

    1. Gauri diiii thank you sssoooo much!!!!! Well, still working on kindle. Stuced for now. Withing four days I guess..
      Now I am waiting for dpo πŸ™‚

  2. Hey roshni……cute confession scene……n d liplock was lovely too ……lovd d epi…..n good way to blurt d mattr frm sam…..
    So now how r u dear…..i hope u r doing well…..n lots n lots of love…….keep smiling….hugs…n tc

    1. Hiiii dev!!!!! Thankssss a lott for tge constant support! πŸ™‚

      How are you? M doing fine. I have filled up a truck with your love now… I hope I return it well through my stories πŸ™‚

      1. Hahaha
        ……i thought ny love got filled in a rocket… truck b chalega……
        Im doing good … bord in my vacations……odr than this im reading my fav murdr story…..n im planing 2 go to cousins home for 2 days…..
        Love u n happy sunday

    2. Ohhoooo so ur case is just like me now… I am all bored as well … Soon we will move to hometown and I am waiting for that πŸ˜€ :d …..
      I digested much of the love na so now loaded in truck …. πŸ˜€ :p will use them once I feel lack of it

      1. Okok….keep those in stock….

  3. Wowwwwwwwwwww chewweeeeettttttttt πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ it’s a cute ff πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ loved it πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

    1. CCute is a word that I am always fond of πŸ˜€ thank you suga!!!! πŸ™‚

  4. Omg… Omg.. Omg…. Wowww wowww…. Its just tooo goodd…. Luvdd itt…??????

    1. Thank you so much Nt… But when are you updating your ff??? Or i guess i missed it ??

      1. I haven,t updated it yet… Xams… Didn,t get d chance to write… But once in a day i search for the update from u and kfar…. I just luv rrading ur n kfar’s stories…Dey r just marvellous… Dey soothe my mind… Though kfar’s stories are lyk once in a blue moon updates…. So plzzz update fast fast??? n wen r u gonna update “Till dat date”????

      2. Nt dil chura lia yrrrr….. Like waiting for mine n kfar stories…. Lots of love baby.. And the other ff are on break.. Will update in last .. Now I have other two to pen πŸ™ .. Do read my new ff plzzz I would love to see you there
        In which class are you? and all the best for exans πŸ™‚

  5. Hyy roshnii dii..!! Uhmm actually i wanted to knw in wich class u r..elder dan me or younger?nd frm where u r..??☺
    So i m in class 10 nd im from delhi?

    Well the epi was fab?
    Awesum episode nd i enjyd it 2 the core?
    Keep writing?

    1. Heyyy sweetie Thank you so muchhh..
      I am elder than you.. Seventeen … Finished my XIIth and I am from assam

      1. Ohk!! Dats a beautiful place?
        I hav been dere when i was young?
        U wont mind me calling me ‘di’??????

      2. No no arushi…i wont mind. in fact I am loving it. πŸ™‚

  6. Hi roshini di……it is veryyyyyyy…..cute episode today…loved it a lot like anything????…. Neil and Sam love confession part is sooo cute??….ur really a great writer and ur writings r so interesting………can’t wait fr the next…..pls update soon… it a lot.
    Roshini di wht ru studying now????

    1. Hello Ria Thanks a lot dear for the appreciation but still have a lot to learn u c …. I have started feeling so good when someone calls me dii… hehehe I never felt being elder so its nice to hear that.!
      Just finished XIIth std.

      1. Hi….roshini di ….I just finished xth std….so I am younger than u……

    2. Yup riaaa… I love to hear “dii” word from you..
      Did you got the three months break???

      1. No..di…only 2 months…n in that 1 month already completed….so only 1 month left..?
        Di….when u r going to update” you are only mine”????waiting for it

      2. Till now I havnt started on that.. the story is still roaming on my mind…need to pen it down.. but right noww working on kindle !!! πŸ™‚

  7. Aaawww…my Roshu baby came back so soon???

    Well the epi was spot-on my friend…all the thoughts running inside Sam’s mind were so beautifully described, Neil claiming his love for her, Sam telling him about her crush, their cute conversation and the short and sweet confession…everything was really brilliant…
    Also the new montage is just so amazing…aptly describes today’s epi…well u know in manmarziyan show…more than ardhika, l fell in love with NeSam pair more…they r just too adorable for me too resist, so thank u again for writing such a beautiful ff on one of my fav pairs list(which is a very long one…let me tell u???)

    Eagerly waiting for the next part…would love to see them fight over what???
    And ur moral at the end is also relatable dear…generally teenage love gives one momentary pleasure and before u know it, the whole relationship flies out of the window and what is left with u is only bitterness…Love is a feeling which could only be understood with age…the person with whom u wanna spend ur life should be able to accept u with all ur flaws and love u the same till the end, all these require a certain amount of understanding which isn’t available during our teenage years(Ok m gonna stop blabbering now…what to do my Guruma avatar doesn’t leave for one second too???)

    How r u? Hope u r great…and don’t dare to end this one so soon, let us enjoy a little bit more…and about ur ff on Swaragini, chillax yaar…if u can’t concentrate on both couples, no problem dear…m happy u wrote on swalak but please keep it like that don’t wind it up with Sanskar, actually l had high expectations from the CVs that they ll make RagSan and SwaLak…but gayi bhains pani me??? so l soothe my heart by reading the ffs featuring them(thank God for all the wonderful writers), and m also fed up of all the fights between both the clan of fans of swasan and raglak, so altogether stopped watching the show and concentraing only some good ffs….
    Maun point is u write on any pair, l ll always support u in ur each and every endeavors like a true fan and friend( lf u start writing about Swasan too, dil pe pattar rakh lenge lekin tumhara saath na chodende?)…

    Gudni8 and sweet dreamzzz my dear…lots of love and hugs???

    1. Yaar nupur maiiii kya bolu ab?? I am seriously smiling with each word of yours… My sweetheart you are gonna drive me crazy with tareefein… I should search for a word that is more apt instead of a thank you.. That looks so small right now..!!!! Muaah muaaaahhhhh…… β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘a bone crushing hug for your so supportive love. You are ready to read even on swasan awwww…… But dnt worry I will never write on them hahahaha…… We ship the same pairs swalak and ragsan dunno y someone feel ragsan as siblings.. I never felt so they look so perfect with each other that people got crazy!!!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

      1. Me too have the same doubt…actually tejaswi and varun are long-time buddies in real life and l really like their off screen bonding,so l thought they would make a wonderful pair on screen too…actually the people who think them bro sis they should read ragsan ffs keeping an open mind and see how beautiful their chemistry can be…and hamare Swalak ke liye kya kehna yaar…they r too adorable and a blind ll only not love them…chodo ye sab kaam Ki baat suno…

        Haaye meri hadi tod di…chal ab tumhari bhi tod deti hoon with same bone crushing hug???

        Aur halchal kya he apke??? Hey if not medical what would u like to pursue…me toh totally confused?

        And when ll u update ur next epi of kindle???

    2. Actually me too love nesam a lot but somewhere love them more individually… His features as a friend are what we also search for in our frnd circle. Sam is sweet and a little immature girl. This jod is perfect and ardhika are perfect mature couple so I cant handle them. πŸ˜‰
      I see you know a lot about love..!!!! Keep sharing so that I an be Cautious regarding that πŸ™‚

      1. Arey m Guruma, so have to know about all stuffs na otherwise apne bhakton Ki peedayain kaise dur karongi…ask me on anything aur Guruma apke dukhon ka THE END karengi????

      2. Hahaha…. True and I read the ff by azure that you suggested.. red fate of ragsan its mind blowing!!!!

        Yaar I am also totally confused about it … Such a head ache when I think about it… πŸ™ πŸ™ you say?

        Issi me mujhe apni advice de do nupur!!!

      3. Red string of fate****

  8. Awwwww loved the confession u should see me now am all smiles ????. Lots of love to u, stay blessed

    1. Awww gianna loved your comment di… tha k you!!!! πŸ™‚

  9. Very cute confession…u wrote very well…narration is so good…that’s why I told you if ardhika is here or not…but its k..only if u consider in future with another ff on them,will b happy…?? tc?

    1. Hii rosie… Thankyou so muchhhh!!! Yup Iwill try to write on ardhika… Once I end one of my ff.. cause It will become tough to handle all now

  10. Hey it’s awesome epi…….. I like it……….. and last line……… that people love u forever u untill they understand what forever meant………. I loved it……. in fact it is right talking about forever love is easy but it is difficult to follow it……. and fight this is the biggest true of life it’s part of it I don’t know love forever exits or not but fight forever really exists……. hihihihi…… hi hi… ??any ways it was awesome…. love u tc….. ?

    1. Thanks a lot deeva.. Hahaha ya right fights are everlasting lol!!! Love you too :* πŸ™‚

  11. The confession was awesome, waiting for your next update. πŸ™‚

    1. Thanksss a lott brin

  12. Read it last nyt…..but commenting now only……..neil n sam llloooolllll their love confession… cute…….really like a school studemts….coz they really dnt knw how to express….i thought.
    …lol….till that day??????

    1. Ya truly they are doing like that only!!! Afterall teenagers they are! Till that day got a long break! πŸ™

  13. Roshni dear tell me some of ur interests or hobbies or stuff u ll like to do ur entire life other than medical field, then after listening to it l might be able to provide some solution…Acche se batana varna Guruma pagla jayegi aur faltu solution pakda degi??? But dear l ll try to help at my level best?

    1. Ya sure nupur… I have interest in many things but never got a perfect class on that… just remained a hobby or something to do in leisure time …
      I REALLY love Painting, and everyone say I am very good in reading..I want to join any mass communication thing as well but I dnt like social things!!! I MEAN i dont have that hold on it… Biology and English are what I can go on with interest…. Northeast dnt have platforms πŸ™ πŸ™ I want to say a lot but have to stop πŸ™ chalo itne me kuch bata do.. shayad kuch acha mil jaye !!! lost girl

      1. Sorry dear for the late reply…Its a long one though…

        1. U like painting, so my guess is u might be liking sketching too…If u do so, u can pursue a career in architechture. I think u do have manipal uni in the north east, u can apply there as its submission date hasn’t passed-it is in top 10 best arch. colleges of India or if u have given jee mains u can opt for govt architechture institutes during counselling. Or if u want any further info about better arch colleges, u can search them on net…but before that u need to give NATA( It is an exam which is recognised by all colleges in arch. For further info please check about this stuff on net)

        2. English- U can do +3 in it and then go for mass communication…It isn’t necessary u hav to pursue journalism…Some companies hire u for writing their articles or stuff in a permanent post…or u can do a course on advertising and copywriting and get recruited in ad companies…

        3. Biology- u can opt for +3 in botany, Zoology or Biotechnology( which is a growing field now)…after that if u can get good score in GATE exams u can pursue ur further course in any of IITs and then apply for PH.D in same institute or u can even go abroad and after returning back, u can take up a teaching job as a lecturer or u can get into the research field in one of the national laboratories…

        4. Commerce…u can opt or it too. then pursue ur CA and u can work in the finance field

        5. Economics- opt for +3 in this, after that prepare for MBA and then if u r too good u can get recruited in leading companies…

        6. If u have given JEE then get into engineering stream too if u want then only…and either u can prepare 4 MBA or for M.Tech and Ph.D and get into a teaching job…

        So these r the options…think wisely about what what u want as it’s the question about ur whole life…Do tell me if I have been of any help…I have given u some hints about the specific lines mentioned above but if u wanna know further about a particular stuff, u can get it via the internet…

        Keep smiling and stay blessed:):):)

    2. O my god.. your knowledge is too vast dear… Well, It was really very helpful. I am going to google about it now. commerce and engineering isnt my zone… 1,2,3 i hope I get something in it. thanks babes

  14. the confession was really nice………loved Sam’s courage to start with it…………….plzz update sooon…………….I’ll read the other ff and comment on it………… request: will you write an ardhika ff too ?????????? plzzzzzzzzzz ?????

    1. Thank you so much aastha!!! Ya I will try to … Write on ardhika .. Once i complete one of my ff.. I will try for sure

  15. hiii…..diii….hope u r damm gud…and this part is also the same …lovelyyyy …..started to read ur other ff you r only mine….I lov the way u represent the leads….waiting but frankly can’t wait …luv u diiii….

    1. Hey payal thanks a lot. I saw your comment on the ff itself and I cant express how happy I am yrr… it Really feels very good to see your compliments πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ afterall it encourages me to write more

  16. Awesome??

    1. Thank you bhabya!!!

  17. Roshni.. Epi was just excellent nd i must say tht i njoyed thoroughly πŸ™‚ wat yaar u r creating interest on serials through ur ffs.. After reading this i became fan of this serial and NESAM.. Nd now swarigini.. Wat next dear?

    1. Hayee kavya this is one of the best compliment I have ever got yaarrr… actually the same happened with me when I read kfar stories.. hey if you havnt read yet now then do read “billionare bamker and chirpy beauty” … It will drive you crazy !!!! :f
      And thanks a lottt dear.

      1. If u r saying thn i must give a try.. I will surely read tht dear..!! Keep going dear our support will be always with u πŸ™‚

      2. Hey I thought you’ve read it. you missed something very very very interesting… Words fail infront of her ff… The reason I fell in love with nesam ..i am getting dreamy.. jaldi parho!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      3. roshni baby.. i am not able to find that ff dear πŸ™

      4. I really want you to read this… so here is the link forfirst chapter… and for the next plzz google cause Cant get all in a link..

        For few of the chappy

      5. Thank u so munch darling ..!! Love u ??

  18. Awesome post soon eagerly waiting for the next episode ASAP

    1. Thank you Sam πŸ™‚

  19. Awesome episode roshni. . .I just loved it to the core. …very cute n sweeeeeet confession. ..neil sooo possessive. ..wowwww. . Thx for updating this series. ….love you soooooooo muchhhhhh honeyyy. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh

    1. Hey Roma thankss a lottt….. this means a lot to me. Yes, your comment means a lot to me.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ glad that you loved it πŸ™‚

  20. roshini sorry for not getting to chat with you..
    amm I was looking through my comments in first love in school and I saw when u ask me if I am on fb… so I’m deciding to answer it now
    yeah I am on fb r u on
    if u r “what’s your name”?
    eagerly waiting..

  21. Hey roshni when will you write next part…… eagerly waiting plz.. post as ap…

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