“FIRST LOVE IS ALWAYS FIRST” EPISODE 2

Hey guys …its me back …..thanks for the comments ….plz keep supporting ….
I will try to finish with less episodes ..or depends upon the comments and the story line shape out

So here is the story
The same man …..goes to a lonely place …
It is covered with tress and a beautiful lake flows there …..its night so the river sparkles …..like there are pearls ….
He goes and sits on the sand .
He remembers
FB
A girl is blindfolded and the same man and catching her shoulders and walking -.
Girl : where r u taking me ?
Man : array have some patientance dear ….
Girl nods .
Man unfolds …..
Girl : wow ……lucky ….its so beautiful dear ! ….
(Yes the man Laksh ..Laksh maheshwari)
Lucky : do u like it !
Girl : I love it …….thank u for bringing me here …
Lucky smiles …..
The girl hugs him …..tightly ……and he too hugs her back
Girl : thank u for making my life special ! Don’t leave me ……..
Lucky : never .
FB ENDS
so the man is Laksh …..
Tears start to roll from his eyes ….

The screen shifts to MM
Ap : again …..he scolded ….u .
Girl : haan ma ….
Ap : I don’t know what is the problem with u both …….no one is saying me also …
Girl in mind : how could I say …that I snatched ur won love from him .
Girl : mom …even I don’t know ……
Ap : he was the one who was reluctant to marry u …..but now ….he is not …..I don’t know what is happening only god can make a way ….
Girl in mind : but god can’t give him or me …..them ……….they can’t comeback again ….because we both sent them far from us
(The girl gets tears )
Ap : don’t worry dear …I will talk to him …
Girl : OK ma …..
Saying this ap leaves ….
Girl : I am waiting for the day when he will accept me whole heartedly .
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Its almost past 12 : 30 .at night ..
The girl is waiting for him without eating …..while the others slept ….
Laksh comes home .
Laksh was standing stably …..he was on moving (drunken)
The girl sees him ….
The girl goes towards him …..
Girl (caring) : r u drunk …
Laksh (not in sense) : haan ….so what ….even u want to drink ….
Girl (frustrated) : Laksh plz …..stop ur nonsense ….first come with me ….what if bade papa and ma …sees …
Laksh : let them ……(he starts to shout)
The girl keeps her hand on his mouth ……they both share a eye lock .
Laksh jerks her hand ….
Laksh : listen …..u just stay away …….u can never become my love …..my sweetheart …..my life ……my angel …….
The girl drags him into the room ….

@Laksh room …
Laksh gives a tight slap to her …..
Laksh : listen …never touch me …..u don’t deserve ….
Girl holding one side of her cheek
Laksh : do u know the pain ..how it is to burn alive ……but she got that death ……..u and ur brother did ….it to her ……how she must have felt ….god ! ……she would have cried …but u merciless creature ……(he cries )
The girl also gets tears …..
Laksh : even u r a girl ……don’t u know how it is too ……ur brother an another merciless creature …..wait a sec …that burn cannot be felt with words …I will show u now …
The girl was shocked ….
Laksh takes match box ….
Girl (cries ) : no Laksh no …plz …..no …..
Laksh : something she begged u right ……but did u both stop ….NO ! …..now even I won’t stop …..
Girl catches his leg ….
Girl (cries) : no Laksh ….plz ….leave me …..plz ……..
Laksh : no way …..today u r gone ……………forever ! …..
Girl (cries ) : plz Laksh ….no ……..whatever u say I will do plz ….
Laksh : oh really …whatever I ask …u will give …
Girl (cries) : haan ….I will give whatever u ask ….
Laksh : good …OK then …give her back …
The girl was shocked …
Laksh : give my angel , my heart , my sweetheart , my love ……..my destiny back …come on give my princess back ….

Girl (cries) : I ….I ….how …..
Laksh : u can’t right ….u can’t give her back right ….then u don’t deserve to live ……
Laksh takes match stick …..
The girl grabs and throws it ….
Laksh again gives a tight slap to her …….
Laksh (cries) : give my princess back …..give her to me ….I want her …..
Laksh takes a wine bottle and breaks it …
His hand starts to bleed heavily ..
The girl was double shocked …………
The girl goes and touches his hand …..he jerks ….
Laksh : stay away …….do u get it …..just stay away ……….
Girl (cries ) : Laksh ..plz don’t do it yourself …plz …..
Laksh : I didnt give u the decision …its my destiny …..my fate OK ….no one can rule (he shouts)
Girl cries ….
Laksh : wait a sec ..before I die ….I will kill u …first …….
The girl was shocked …..
Laksh came closer to her ….the girl kept on moving back ……
Girl (cries ) : Laksh ….plz ……
Laksh kept on coming ……he pins to the wall
Girl : Laksh (she cries and was scared)
Laksh : bye …….
He takes the broken glass and was about to stab ….
The girl pushes him and runs outside and locks the door …
Inside …
Laksh (shouts) : hey u come back …I want to kill ….u …..I what to kill u ….come back …..
Outside ….
The girl sits on knees and cries ………..

Precap : not decided ……
Hope u all like it ..and plz comment …..ur comment gives us power …

With love ,
Dolly

Credit to: Dolly

12 comments

  1. Lovely ( FF Broken heart)

    Hey Dolly it was an awesome update! I know I a bit eager but please udate soon, and yes please I know the title of your story is first love is always first, but please don’t make Ragini as a villain :'(
    Keep continuing <3

  2. Hahahhaha… It was somewhat funny when he screamed..” hey you come back. I want to kill you” lol

    Well, I really want swalak ff to be more than swasan 😀 … Offo Ragini seems to be the wife of laksh :/ :v i dnt like him slapping her. He can be just simply rude to her and hatred filled…. I so wanted to see this side of laksh in swaragini where he stands for swara… But always blind!!!! Then his brother took over his love 🙁 🙁
    Thanks for writing on swalak.. If you want I will fill the comment box 😀 but keep writing

  3. Is swara dead.? Pls dnt do dis u said its ful SWALAK na thn pls make swaras entry give swalak scene..waiting fr nxt

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