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Fights filled with love (episode 1)

administratorBy administratorJuly 21, 2016Updated:July 21, 201620 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hi all…..
I am here with the episode 1 of “fights filled with love”….thank you soo much agnnipriya , sunanda, snehal, tanu, tanu, sree, ruksy, riyadcruz, sonia, kavina, meranal and akasha for the support….and also to all silent readers for the silent support…

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In a big mansion in ajmer..

A beautiful room is shown…and then a girl is sleeping peacefully under the banklet…..she is looking like cute innocent doll….she smiles in her sleep….most of the boys will be stunned by her beauty and grace…Her hair was a rich shade of raven black…. It flowed in waves to adorn her glow while the soft winds flowed through her from the window….she has a glowing skin. ..Her eyes were closed…. she had a straight nose, full lips which is soft pink in colour – she seemed the picture of perfection…..

Suddenly a boy opens the door of her room …and came in…the person stares at the sleeping girl…the boy is soo handsome , charming, dashing and attractive…..he seems to be so naughty.. he has ..deep black eyes.. shiny black hair…he smiles naughtily at the sleeping girl…he has such a beautiful smile that any girl can fall for him…..

boy;;{in a loving tone}…how cute…she looks so innocent

boy;;{in a fake angry tone}…only in sleep..

then the boy moves towards the sleeping girl and looks at her naughtily and take the jug which is filled with water and the next moment…

splllaaaaashh…..

girl{shouts};; aaaaaaaaaaa…….tusnami….tusnami…..

boy;; hahahahahahahaha…..

girl opens her eyes and looks at the boy shockingly..later it become angrily….

girl{angrily};; what the hell….what are u doing here….why you through water on me…you
duffer

boy{angrily};; ohh…..hello….i just helped you to wake…uma maa told me to wake you up….

girl;; is this the way to wake anyone up…

boy;; not anyone…but u…

girl;; u……..

an old lady comes there by hearing the shouting…

old lady;; what happen…

girl and boy looks at the lady..

girl;; dadi….see…what have he done…he put water on me…

boy;; what to do….is there any other way to wake up this girl..

girl;; you can first call me by tapping lightly

boy;; i didn’t feel to do like that…mad..

girl;; what…you call me mad…

boy;; any doubt…

girl;; u….

boy;; u….

dadi looks at both and shouts;; stop…why are you both fighting always…don’t you guyz don’t have anyother job……just fighting always….and atharv {yes…the boy is atharv}…why you throw water on her…why can’t you call her by tapping lightly…

atharv;; vo…dadi..

dadi;; i don’t want to hear anything…sorry bolo…

the girl smiles by hearing that and shows a funny expression so that atharv get angry….dadi sees that

dadi;; vividha…i told him to say sorry…and you are showing funny expression…tell sorry to atharv..

vividha and atharv looks each other angrily…

vividha;;no…i won’t say sorry to this idiot..

atharv;; me…too…won’t say sorry to this mad..

by saying both turns to look at dadi…but they didn’t see her…

they hear a sound “woww…”

they turns….and sees dadi near the window…

vividha;; dadi…what are you looking…

both vividha and atharv moves near the window…and sees….

dadi staring at a good looking boy who is talking in phone standing in the side of the road..

dadi was continously staring at the boy…

vividha and atharv looks at dadi then at the boy…

they calls..dadi..

but dadi who was lost didn’t hear them….

both together shakes and loudly calls “dadi…”

dadi comes out her dream world and looks at atharv and vividha who was looking her…

dadi by seeing them smiling..blushes…

vividha;; wow….dadi…you looks cute while blushing…
by saying she slightly pulls dadi’s cheek…

atharv;; dadi it will so nice if the boy propose you..

dadi;; why?

atharv;;….He proposed, You Smiled! No Teeth!!!! He Died….

dadi;; atharv…..(and beats him with her hands)

vividha;; u…how dare you make fun of my dadi..

atharv;; what is your problem in that…

vividha;; i have problem…bcoz she is my dadi…i won’t let anyone make fun of my dadi ..understand..

vividha;;by the way….why you came here….to wake me up and make fun of dadi..

atharv;; hello…i came here to take uma maa to temple….not to hear your bak bak……..

vividha;;u….

before vividha to continue…dadi says “stop”

dadi;; why are you always fighting…..atharv…you came to take uma to temple naa…then go…and vividha go…and fresh up…

both nods and leaves…

dadi;; now….let me calmly enjoy…

by saying she goes near the window and stares at the boy and throws a flying kiss without the boy’s notice…

but it is noticed by a beggar grandpa….he thinks it is for him….and blushes……and throws a flying kiss to dadi..

dadi….who sees….gets irked….and gives a angry look …the grandpa again smiles and continously throws flying kiss to dadi…

dadi gets shocked and closes the window…

dadi;;{in a irritated angry tone}… “what a man he is…..yuck….”

dadi;;{blushingly}….but that boy is so hot….
dadi smiles..and dreams she and that boy dancing….

but dadi’s dreams broke…by the laughing of a boy and girl…who has seen all the things…
dadi looks at them

boy comes to dadi and says “what dadi….you are romancing with a beggar…”

dadi;; what??….that stupid….i am not loooking at that man…..i was looking at that handsome boy….he was really cute….

boy;; dadi….you are really cute…

girl;;….dadi….can i tell u something..

dadi;; ya…tell…

girl;; vo…we can go to that boy’s house…

dadi;; for what…

girl;; with a proposal..for our…..dadi…

dadi{smilingly};; ankit….guddi….you two are really sweet

ankit;; dadi….you didn’t ask who is your groom…

dadi;; vo…boy..

guddi;; nahi…

dadi;; then,…who?

guddi and ankit {together};; boy’s dada….

dadi;; what…..you both are going to make me marry to his dada……i will kill you both…

guddi and ankit runs….followed by dadi behind them…

after sometime…vividha gets ready to go to her office…she hurrigly eats the breakfast and leaves…

after sometime….everyone in the house hears vividha shouting from front of the house…..

everyone hurrily goes to see what happen…

kailash;; what happen betta…

vividha;; papa…..just look at this…that khadoos has punctured my car’s tyre..

kailash;; khadoos?

vividha{dramatically};; vo…tumari….atharv betta

dadi;; did you see him doing that…

vividha;; no..

uma;; then how can put that blame on atharv…

vividha;; maa…none of the other wil do this…he has just born make me in trouble….

ankit;; leave it didi…

vividha;; how will do to office…it’s really urgent for me to be there fast..

sujatha enters…

sujatha;; what happen ?

vividha;; vo…meri car has got puncher…i want to reach office fast..

sujatha;; ohh…

suddenly she notices atharv going to office…

sujatha;; “atharv..”

atharv turns…

sujatha;; atharv ..plz….leave vividha at her office and go…

atharv;; what….no…maa….i can’t drop this girl with me…

vividha;; hello…i am not going to come with me….it’s better to walk than coming with you ..

kailash;; vividha….listen …is it very urgent for you reach at your office..

vividha;; yes papa..

uma;; then go with atharv in his bike…

atharv;; but…

sujatha{with fake anger};; drop vividha and then only go to office..

atharv;; ok…

atharv and vividha stares angrily…

atharv starts his bike…

atharv;; are you any queen….who wanted to be invited to sit..

vividha ;; u…

rajesh ;; no…plz don’t fight..

vividha stares angrily at atharv and sits at back ….

atharv and vividha leaves…

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PRECAP;;

atharv dropping vividha in the middle of the road….

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do tell your opinion and if it’s not good do tell……i will stop writing it….
thankz for reading 🙂 and sorry if any mistake 🙁

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20 Comments

  1. Batool on July 21, 2016 11:59 am

    wow nice..!!

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 5:38 pm

      thank you very much batool….
      keep supporting…
      ♥

  2. rooktima on July 21, 2016 12:00 pm

    awesome ??

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 5:39 pm

      thank you very much rootikma…
      keep supporting….
      ♥

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 5:40 pm

      *rooktima

  3. trusii on July 21, 2016 2:31 pm

    nyc….

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 5:40 pm

      thank you very much trusi…
      keep supporting…
      ♥

  4. S.F.A on July 21, 2016 2:41 pm

    Awesome start but are they married.
    Plz inform me

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 5:41 pm

      thank you so much S.F.A
      no…they are not married…..
      keep supporting…
      ♥

  5. Anusri on July 21, 2016 8:08 pm

    Who is rajesh?

    • Aahana on July 21, 2016 8:22 pm

      atharv and guddi’s father…may you don’t have read the intro…here is the link

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/fight-filled-love-intro/

  6. Anusri on July 21, 2016 9:04 pm

    Ohh..kk..BTW your story is very nice 🙂

    • Aahana on July 22, 2016 5:02 am

      thank you so much anusri….
      keep supporting..
      ♥

  7. Sunanda on July 22, 2016 7:32 am

    Nice Aahana superrr

    U did a great job

    • Aahana on July 22, 2016 5:28 pm

      thank you very much sunanda…
      keep supporting…
      ♥

  8. Sunanda on July 22, 2016 7:52 am

    Nice Aahana superrr

    U did a great job

    I think rajesh is atharv father right

    • Aahana on July 22, 2016 5:28 pm

      yes…rajesh is atharv’s father

  9. snehal on July 22, 2016 9:11 am

    funnyy yaar…i love dadi…..cont it

    • Aahana on July 22, 2016 5:29 pm

      thank you soo.. much snehal…
      keep supporting
      ♥

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