FF SWARAGINI…..

SWARAGINI….
This is the first time I am writing a fanfction.Please suggest me whether I should continue or not.

CHARACTER INTRODUCTION
Ragini:sweet,modern,wants to be a fashion designer,loves her sister and family a lot
Swara: down to earth , traditional, wants to become a singer,can take avatar of Jhansi ki rani for her family
lakshya:handsome,flirt,does’nt believe in true love,loves his brother and mother a lot
Sanskaar:handsome,true gentlemen , helpful

SCENE1
a room is shown.A beautiful girl comes out of the washroom wearing a yellow anarkali suit ,she is swara
“Ragu uth jao warna phir se mom se data paregi”.a girl woke up wearing shorts and tube top,she is ragini.Just then somebody knocked the door a lady entered,she was sharmistha ‘Swara,ragini get ready soon.some guest are coming.”.they both shouted”Yes mom!!!!!!”in unison

SCENE 2
In a room two boys are shown.one is doing workout .He is very charming and very cute……he is sanskaar.The other one is listening to music,he is very handsome …….he is lakshya

PRECAP
Dp comes to gadodia mansion…….marriage proposal for swara

Guys please suggest the pair AND ALSO TELL ME WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT

Credit to: ridhi

22 comments

  1. Angel

    Hmm its different very nice….rag modern swara simple…continue all the best but plz let it be swasannnn

  2. Anu

    Hey ridhi,its very Gud nd different from other
    The pair should be of one nd only swasan nd raglak
    Nd plz its a request that after sometime make swara alaso modern

  3. nice work ridhi.
    make swalak as in real serial it is swasan so have something different,as u did with their looks….its a request plz make swalak

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