Feelings is our Language {A RagLak love story} part 5

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Story till now,
Laksh parents have settled in America, but they die in his childhood, Laksh becomes a cop(police) and he is lonely most handsome bachelor. Ragini is a village girl in India, her chote papa Rp brings her to US as Ragini’s dadi is dead and she is alone. Ragini was treated as only a maid by Sujatha(Rp’s wife) which depresses Ragu further. Once, RP happens to have accident and he misses Ragini somewhere who is waiting for Rp in some area. Then, some goons try to kill Ragini, who is protected by that US cop Laksh. Laksh takes Ragini to home and due to language problem both have communication problem, but however both can understand their feelings. Their new friendship is growing passionate day by day..

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So, here Ragini doesn’t know English, so her dialogues and POv’s will be in Hindi and translation is given below within brackets.

Hindi translation credits: Akshata

Epi 5

As it was weekend. Saturday, Laksh was sleeping still in his room. It was already 11’ o clock.
Ragini who wakes up early as every day, she does all the works.

She was looking at the photos of Laksh childhood. He was looking cute in krishna’s attire. She smiles looking at it.

“aap bahut pyaare ho..”
(‘How cute you are..!’)
she says and touches his cheek in pic.

‘what are you doing..?’ she hears Laksh’s voice. Ragini trembles and turns back. She then realizes, she was wearing a sleeveless white one piece and it was above her knees. She thought Laksh won’t wake that early, she has kept her lehenga in washing machine. It will dry in the drier within one hour. She thought to wear it before he wakes. But, she is booked now.
Now, he is seeing her bare shoulders and legs. She bends her head and she turns red. She wanted to run away, but her knees became weak to run due to shy. She stood there only as someone tied her there. Ragini was twisting the dust cloth in her hands due to nervousness.

Ragini is thinking,

“Yeh itne jaldi kyu uth gaye? Swara chachi chhote papa to 12 , 1 baje uthate the. Yeh 11 bajehi utg gaye?”

(“why he has to wake just now..? swara, chachi, chote papa used to wake up at 12 or 1. Why he woke at just 11..?”)

Laksh understands that she is feeling shy. And, even he is aware that something is happening inside him, when he is looking at the most hottest girl in the world in front of him. And that too he is alone. But, he brushes away his thoughts and controls himself rubbing his nape and taking a sigh.

Then, his gaze shifts to puja mandir. It was closed since many years. Laksh opens that room only for cleaning. But, today garlands and flowers were kept to idols and photos.

He goes and stands before puja mandir.

Rockey comes near Ragini and Ragini to avoid any eye contact with Laksh she carries Rockey(the Maltese puppy) and goes somewhere.

Laksh was still looking at pooja mandir and he remembers a small flash of his childhood.

‘His mom, Ap was making garland with flowers and little Laksh was giving her one flower after the other. She lights the deepas in front of idol. She sings some bhajan song…’

Laksh remembers it. a tear drops from his eye.

“thank you Ragini. You have reminded me my mother. She used to decorate this room in same way…”
Says Laksh and turns back, but Ragini is not there.

“Ouch rochy bhaiya shant ho jaayiye.”
(ouch..! Rockey bro, plz be calm..)

Laksh hears Ragini’s voice from the common bath room. He goes near it, and the door is open. Ragini was giving bath to Rockey in small dog’s bath tub. Laksh smiles.

Maybe, Rockey being crazy has split water on Ragini, she was wet on top. And, being wet that too wearing a white dress, she was transparent a little.

“Hawww Gaaad..!! this girl is making me too nervous day by day..!!” thinks Laksh and about to leave,

“aaahh..” he hears Ragini’s slight scream and he turns back. Ragini’s feet wound was not cured yet, and maybe it has pained as she hit bath tub without seeing. Laksh goes near her,
“Ragini, take care..” says Laksh and he holds Rockey.

Now, Ragini stands suddenly and moves back. She was bending till now while making Rockey bath. Ragini starts pulling her dress down.

“Kahi unhone hume pichhese dekha to nahi”
(“did he see my back thighs..??”)
Ragini bites her lower lips. From the time she became a complete girl, she never showed her legs to any boys. But now..!! “oh no..!! those thoughts are making her nervous more and more.”

Ragini silently about to go away, Laksh who has washed Rockey completely takes him out of bath tub,
“hey Ragini, give that towel..!” he asks. Ragini stops there itself. She understood that he asked for the towel. Now, she simply can’t go away without helping him. Ragini nods her head and brings towel near Laksh. She holds towel and Laksh wraps Rockey in that towel.

“Hold him.” Laksh says and gives Rockey to Ragini. Ragini holds it and comes into hall.

“Hey bhagwan hum to laksh ke samne se nikalna chahte hai. Par hum saamne jhyada dekh rahe the”.
(Hey bhagwan, she wanted to escape from sights of Laksh.. but she was booking more further.)
Ragini thinks and looks at Rockey who is looking at Ragini in cute big innocent eyes.

“Pagal rocky sab apke wajah se hua.”
(“Stupid Rockey..! this is all bcz of you..!)
Says Ragini looking in big eyes at laskh and rockey looks innocently in ‘bow’ expression towards Ragini.

{hehe, bow expression in sense.. the only doggy expression. Which we can’t understand}

Laksh brings a hair blower and he sits on couch.

“bring him here Ragini.” Calls Laksh. Ragini goes near him.

“Nahi..!! ab woh kahi hume pass se na dekh le.”
(oh no…! he is going to see her too close now.)

Ragini stands before Laksh and Laksh takes Rockey into his hands, and while doing both hands happen to touch. Ragini feels more awkward. As soon as handing over Rockey to Laksh, she runs to her room.

Laksh looks at her.
“Why this girl is feeling this shy..? the truth is even I’m feeling something when she is around..!” thinks Laksh and he too smiles. Ragini runs into her room and closes the door. She looks herself into the mirror. She blushes and blushes… and she keeps blushing. Why..??? why is she feeling shy..??? is she liking him…??? Ragini slaps her head slowly to drive away her thoughts.

Then knock at door.

“Kya woh hume thodi der ke liye akela nahi chhod sakte?”
(Don’t he leave her alone..???)
She thinks and opens door. Ragu hides behind the door and shows her head only out. But, however her eyes are bent.

Laksh: Ragini, I said I will take you to shopping. Get ready soon..!!

Ragini: haaa..???

Ragini looks at him in question mark as she can’t understand.

Then Laksh gestures,
He shows finger to her… and he points towards himself… then he gestures driving steering. ‘shopping..shopping’ he repeats those words..

Ragini then gets answer.

Rag: Oh to aap hume bade bazzar me le jaane wale hai. Aur hume bhi chalna hai aap ke saath.
(oh.. you want to take me to mall..? I’m ready..! even, I wanna come..!!)

Laksh nods his head and leaves to his room. Ragini jumps and runs near drier to take her lehenga and then she runs to her room.

“tho.. ye puliswale hume bade bazzar mein leke jaane waali baat kar rahe the.”
(‘So.. this cop was tellling that he will take me to mall yesterday..??’)
she gets excited and gets ready in her lehenga.

Laksh gets ready and he waits down stairs. Rockey was playing here and there. Just then Ragini was descending the stairs. She was happy to go to mall, as she went several times with swara and sujatha, but she never got anything. They never buy her anything. But, Ragini likes those big malls and everything. So, she is excited to see.

Laksh smiles looking at highly exciting Ragini. While she was decending the steps in run, her lehenga choli keeps going aside from her stomach and keeps falling back again… but Laksh looks at her mesmerized. He keeps his eyes wide open on her. then he suddenly turns his head again…
‘what am I doing..??’ he thinks.

Ragini comes before him.. ‘chale..?’ she asks panting.

Laksh nods his head as he understood. Ragini smiles and keeps going. Laksh remains at back and keeps looking at her thin waist lovingly.

They both sit in the car, Rockey sits in back seat, Laksh has already kept seat belt to it.

Ragini is struggling to keep that seat belt.

‘I will..’ Laksh says and takes the belt. While taking belt from her hand Laksh slightly touches her waist accidentally. Ragini closes her eyes and bends her head.

‘I’m sorry’ Laksh says. She turns her head at window feeling awkward. Laksh rubs his back of head and then drives.

Precap: Shopping time..!!! and Ragini drunk.. her dance

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64 Comments
    1. Astra

      thanks avika

  1. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Astra

      thanks dear

  2. Keerthu

    Awesome dr

    1. Astra

      thanks dear

  3. Akankshanna

    Amazing

    1. Astra

      thank you..

  4. Lovely7

    Amazing sis

    1. Astra

      thanks dear

  5. Rasha

    dear sis y so late for this update.. I seriously love this pls be regular..

    1. Astra

      thank you di

  6. Mintu

    Awesome sisy..!!! Raglak moments r superb..!!! Wow… Precap is lovely… What ragu going to do with lucky..excited to know it..!!! how r u dear??? Missed u nd ur ff..!!! Finished ur xam??? Post ur all ff soon dear

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot mintu dear.. yes i have finished my exam.. I’m fine and hw ru dear?

      1. Mintu

        I’m fine sis.. ? take care dear

  7. Asra

    awesome astu dear….raglak scenes r supper dear….rockey bow expression superbbb dear….loved it alot….ragu rockey s bhaiya for u…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear

  8. Amazing dear

    1. Astra

      thanks ashnoor

    1. Astra

      thanks aleeza..

  9. Asw

    Amazing yaar keep going

    1. Astra

      thanks dear..

  10. Amazing dear

    1. Astra

      thanks rehna..

  11. Awesome I was missing this ff pls post soon eager to know what will happen next

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot sinni.. i will try to update sooner..

  12. Darshini

    Asthu it’s damn good…lovd eaglak moments…
    Poor Ragu…
    Lovd her innocence and rockey’s bow expression…aww…
    Excited for the precap…ragu is drunk…wow something fun is waiting for us…
    And I missed u a lot dear…thnk god ur xams got finished…tc da…

    1. Astra

      yes yar, something fun is ahead… thanks a lot darshu… missed u too yar..

  13. Harita7

    its really a new concept and very interesting too.awesome update .
    no language is need to express our love .update soon ……………………..

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot haritha.. yes, you are right..

  14. After a long time. I really really really miss u and all ur ffs. Interesting episode and Raglak scenes are beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz post next part ASAP

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot ammu… and i have missed all too.. i will try to post sooner..

  15. Nice. When you will post next part waiting for it

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot

  16. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot

  17. O dear.. I was waiting for this update.. This is one of my favourite ff.. Pls don’t take long for next update..

    1. Astra

      thank you so much dear…

  18. Awesome part

    1. Astra

      thanks malu…

  19. Akshata

    Aww rocky bro is soooo cute. Finally they have started understanding each other though they r using sign language but still…. Update soon

    1. Astra

      thank you so much dear…

  20. Amazing & mind blowing.. Eager for further update …plz update soon 🙂 loved it

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear

  21. A.xx

    amazing and loved it xx

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot yar..

  22. Awesome

    1. Astra

      thanks sherin

  23. Harinipriya

    Hey Astra the episode is blockbuster today! Raglak scenes are superb! This is my fav ff. Waiting for next part. And if u r feeling lonely then say ‘hi’ to me, I will chat with u dear. Because I know the pain of loneliness. Sorry if I had hurt u. Anyways today’s episode is superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear… and u didn’t hurt me yar.. it’s only you who reacted for my status.. and I’m glad for it… i would never feel lonely anymore… surely i will talk to u when i feel lonely…

  24. Harinipriya

    that’s good. Love u so much and ur ffs so soooooooooooooooooo much! 😀 I will wait for u. 🙂

    1. Astra

      love u too a lot dear… and even i love ur updates…??

  25. Yashu24

    ??????why you are feeling sad????
    I am angry with you….as you don’t talk with me also and saying that you are feeling lonely… this is not fair didu… !!! Keep smiling..!! We have only one life to be happy..so why to be feel lonely and sad… just live it happily..!!! Don’t dare to be sad again…

    Hummmm…I think my talks affect you a lil and now you will be happy…

    Okkk coming back to the story
    So as usual no need to say anything…as Your ff makes me spellbound… speechless.. It’s my favourite ff… Brilliant!!!!???
    HEY RAM I gave you a big lecture…now I have to stop my bak bak…or else you will pelt stones on me????
    Keep writing like this…
    And the most important thing… KEEP SMILING!!???
    LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHH?????????????????

    1. Astra

      awwww… my lil sis.. i know u love ur sissy a lot… but, i was even sad then to talk to anyone… but I’m perfectly ok now… i have to change my status… i also love u a lot my micku… and ya.. i never say I’m lonely again… *holding ears* and i will shortly comment on all ur updates.. I’m lil stressed to read anything.. ok dear… take care and love u…

  26. Awesome

    1. Astra

      thanks anju..

  27. Awesome

  28. Sorry for late comment

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot… it’s ok.. no problem..

  29. IQRA222

    astruu di where were you again you know i missed you so much much much
    and now na you should not go on such a long holiday because i really miss you and maybe next time na i will cry ha and why was my didu sad did something happened or did anyone say anything to you tell me i will go and ask them
    and and coming to the episode it was so so lovely awesome superb fantastic fabulous
    raglak scenes were really muahhh!!!
    and rocky rocky he is so cute we got so many raglak scenes because of him so a pat on head
    and and i am waiting for the next part eagerly and i now you wont make your chotii wait haina so post soon
    bye bye

    1. IQRA222

      and has sorry for the late comment and doo keep smiling

    2. Astra

      thank you so much dear… it was a long looooooong story yar. it’s ok.. I’m fine now… all our frnds cheered me up when i was feeling lonely.. that’s it dear. love u too a lot dear.. take care…

  30. Awesome​…

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