Feelings are complicated Os part 2

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Hey guys I’m back with “feelings are complicated part 2”.

Seriously guys u made me beyond happy with ur comments

Thank u SidMin,Sochi,Purnima.agrawal30,Adya,Ramya,Maria,Roshini125,Chiku,Ananya_pandey,Stg,Simiyy

Thank u guys it means a lot

Recap:- Twinkle’s first day at school. Twinkle meeting Kunj. Twinj becoming friends. Leap. Twinkle to love Kunj. Kunj proposing Shanaya. Twinkle feeling hurt. Kunj telling Sneha that he likes Twinkle. Twinkle to come to know about it. Twinkle extremely happy. Twinkle going to propose Kunj. Kunj telling Shanaya that he acted to like Twinkle, actually he wanted to make shanaya jealous. Twinkle hearing it breaks down. Twinkle decides to suicide.

Twinkle’s POV

As soon I took the knife from the fruit basket, I placed it on my wrist
and………………

Third person POV

Next scene
On the other hand Kunj is seen crying his heart out.
He was sobbing like anything, his eyes were as red as blood because of too much crying. He placed his hands on his eyes and harshly erased his tears. He stood up from the bench on which he was sitting. The bench was located in a nearby park. Suddenly the rain gushed down from the clouds making him all drenched. Falling with a thud on the ground, he again started crying. Again putting his hands on his eyes he did the same thing and said, “no Kunj, no. U won’t cry for a such a worthless person. She means nothing to u anymore. She is out of ur life forever. I HATE U SHANAYA” he cried out so loud that even a deaf could hear him. (Kyun guys?? Laga na shock!??? 😏😏😏 Tum logo ne Kya Sochi tha ke Kunj Twinkle ro raha tha?? Well some of u might have guessed it I guess. Do tell me in comments who thought what, ok??)

Flashback

Kunj is seen walking on the park and talking to one of his friends on the phone. Suddenly his eyes get stuck on a particular direction. He closes his fists, his eyes blood shot red.

Now the screen shows Shanaya with her lips locked with Karan one of Kunj’s friend.

Kunj quickly motioned towards Shanaya, grabbing her from her elbow

CHATAK!!
(Yes guys Kunj slapped her)

A- How dare
K.k.k Kunj?? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho baby??

K- shut up!!!! Just shut up u whore. How dare u to cheat on me?? Because of u I had to lye to my Twinkle. She might be thinking that I like her. Just because of u!!!!! Shanaya doh doh nao par savar karogi na toh ek din doob jaogi.

By saying this he went and sat on a bench like a lifeless body

Flash back ends

Kunj was still crying, when his phone rings.
He receives and exclaims, ” what!!!!!! Wait!!! Don’t let anything happen to her I’m coming!!”

To be continued

Sorry again yaar for such a short writing and also for the suspense

And I’m also thinking to change it in to a Ss instead of os what say???

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13 Comments
  1. Hlw azreen….I m first time cmnting ur os maybe….u r very awesome writer….I read ur other os to that is very beautiful and awesome…. And…. The epi is very nice and emotional…………luv it very much yaar…..Omg….yeh shanaya chudail kunj ki life se out ho gaya filling great…..felt bad 4 twinj…..post next epi soon or wo v long wala…..will be waiting…. Luv uuu…byyyyy….

  2. Chiku

    Hey arzeeen
    Woaaah its just amazing 😍😍😍😍lovely. Just loved it.
    Finally twinj will be together soon
    Waiting for next one
    Post soon
    Love uπŸ’œ

  3. Amazing os azreen I’m loving it pls continue soon

  4. Aanya_pandey

    That ws excellent piece yrr.. and hope to soon read further part of ur OS😊

  5. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing…eagerly waiting for next part

  6. SidMin23

    It was beautiful and now waiting for twinj to be together soon. Do post next episode ASAP

  7. Adya

    Wooowwww arzeen….do whatever you want but pls post the next one….
    Lovely
    Post soon….

  8. Ramya

    Azreen it was awesome
    Please asap N i think twinkle cut her wrist
    Pldsss asap dear

  9. Hey azreen it’s amazing…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next soon…can’t wait to read next epi…

  10. Hey azreen it’s amazing…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next soon…can’t wait to read next epi…

    #XOXO

  11. Anshikajainn

    Sooo cuuuteee

  12. SidMin

    Post soon Just Love it πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

  13. Ayu

    Hey Azu! Sorry for the late comments…cant help it when wifi connection is crap…but i really loved this epi. Do cont soon😘

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