This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 35

Hie guys….arre Baap re….aap log gusse mei lag rhe ho….Nhi Nhi…khush lag rhe ho….uff…sorry….actually sorry bahut hi chotu sa word haina…kya karu…bahut busy thi…vacation toh khatam bhi hogya….par kaam khatam nhi hua…u guys donno..kitna tym nikalke I’m writing this epi…….
ONLY FOR U GUYS!
So pehle epi start karein….then bak bak.. Kk?

Arre…pehle purana epi yaad toh kar lo
Chapter 34

Sorry guys…summary Nhi de paungi…busy life!

So let’s start…

#twinkle’s POV
Pls help! My heart screamed….it was not willing to love kunj back….the one who betrayed me…but it was helpless….it was weak….BCUS HIS TOUCH IS STILL ITS ONLY WEAKNESS… He was still kissing my armpits….he still remembered my fav. Touch….I was still in tht position… My arms were still in his clutches… Pinned up in the warm….my waist was still clutched by him…my lips were still conquered in his lips…..everything was still…..I was still breathing heavily…. My eyes were still drowning tears…..whatever it was…..beyond all tht ‘stills’ the biggest still was ……I STILL LOVE HIM…ya…nd I cannot run away frm tht truth…but not this tym….I will not let him play with my heart….with my body…with my hormones anymore….”kunj…..leave me” I whispered being weak….nd with tears…”no twinkle…pls let me Hv it” he whispered nd bit my left armpit leaving a love bite there “aah….kunj” I screamed.
He then looked up nd moved his face towards mine…..within no tym he sucked my tears… Making me loose again…why can’t I just stop him!

He now bent towards my neck….nd started placing his lips there….I just love it….but I don’t hv to show it to him…tht I still crave for him… For his touch….for his love. “Kunj my body doesn’t belongs to u anymore….. It belongs to…” I said but was cut by him…..he quickly looked up nd said “NO! Yr body only belongs to me…I m the owner of it nd I m not interested in keeping it for sale! Did u get tht” he exclaimed punching his hand on the wall…making me feel the goosebumps ‘u hv awakened the devil….twinkle’ my heart whispered…. Tht was true!

“Hey….did tht Sam touched u?” He asked suddenly… Making my eyes go wide.
“How does it even matters to u” I said

“Twinkle….did he touched u?” He asked again ….trying to control his anger
“Ye….yes” I said….which was ofcource a lie… But I had to.say tht to make him realise tht I hv moved on in my life. I could see him angry….his anger could not be described him words I swear…..the anger was so much tht it was enough to bring shivers down my spine.

“U didn’t opposed?” He asked in a fake calmness behaving like a kid for sure. “Y should I…he has full rights on me….aftrall we r engaged” I said. I could see him closing his eyes….actually clutching his eyes…..he opened his eyes with a thud
“Where did he touched u?” He asked making me more scare….I hv never ever seen his this shade….
He released my arms ….but my waist couldn’t escape. “Here” he asked placing his hand on my arms …..I gained sm strength reminiscing his betrayal… “Yes” I said confidently. I could see the anger rising in him…but smwhere it gives me peace…..”here?” He asked pinning my one arm above my head nd placing his hand on my armpits …..I was shocked by his behavior “does he knows yr fav. Touch?” He asked “yes!” I exclaimed bringing my hand out if his clutch.

“Did u had s*x?” He asked. This was it….I hv had enough of his torcher… Not anymore… Hv can he even think tht… How can he not trust me…I closed my eyes to gulp down this question nd to calm myself…. “ANSWER ME DAMN IT!” I heard him saying….I quickly opened my eyes. “It doesn’t matters to u” I exclaimed “Twinkle….DID U GAVE YRSELF TO HIM COMPLETELY!” He asked clutching my shoulders tightly…. I winced in pain “YES……WE HAD A S*X” i said pushing him nd shouting my lungs out….he was there….boggled…… Full of tears…….numb….nd still…..I found it was a perfect opportunity to run away frm him nd I started to walk…..but he clutched me…..nd again pinned me to the wall….”then hv s*x with me too….today…now…here” he said seriously demanding like a child. “Stop joking kunj…stop kidding me out!” I said

“U think I m kidding” he asked “then ur wrong” he continued nd turned me backwards…. My back facing him…..my one cheek was in contact with the wall “leave me kunj…. Wht the hell r u doing” I said

“How dare he touch my girl!” He said nd twisted my one arm “aaah!” I shouted nd started crying like hell “kunj its paining….pls leave me…pls” I begged him….”no no…kunj wht r u doing…stop it” I said when I felt him opening the zip of my dress. “Ur mine” he said….I think he has gone mad…..”kunj…. Ur not at all like the kunj whom I used to love” I said but it didn’t mattered to him “sameer should not hv touched u twinkle” he said nd started kissing my bare back. ENOUGH! My mind spoke nd I gained the strength. I pushed him with full force….nd turned towards him. “Twin…..” He said but was stopped bcus of my slap…..I slapped him hard…..very hard… Actually I don’t regret it….he deserves it…he needed it to cm out of his junoon…”Shut up…. Kunj…..just shut up!” I said zipping my dress.

“I m glad…..I m glad tht dad decided to make me marry to sam….I m glad to hv Sam in my life…I m glad tht u came back….orelse I would Hv not seen yr this shade….nd I would I hv not.started hating u to the core….yes kunj sarna yes…I loved u….still love u…..but wht u did today….made me hate u to the core….don’t u Hv trust in my….how can u think tht I would hv let sam even touch me!” I cried out “this means…..” He said “yes….I was lying….I was kunj sarna….just to see how much more u can fall…how can u…..” I said but suddenly I felt everything revolving around me…my vision became blurry…. Nd I donno when everything went dark.

To be continued……

How was it…..sorry agar accha na laga ho toh…voh practice chut gyi haina…nd vulgar hogya ho toh bhi maafi dedena….I will see u guys later…tata

44 comments

  1. Baby

    |Registered Member

    yr ritzi dear i was missing it lyk w8ing for it
    n finally bt srsly i 2 didnt expected dis frm kunj ohhhh god vulgar ka toh pta nhi yr bt pain bhot tha emotional episode loved it ohh shit kash yeh nhi hota well luvd it 2 core♥♥
    love u lods….▬☻☻♥♥
    post nxt asap♥

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Thank u sooooooooooo much baby….but I hv a doubt…whether u liked this shade of kunj or not…if not then I m really sorry girl

      • Baby

        |Registered Member

        hey ritzi wat can i say i mean in anger if a biy hurts a girl ofco a girl wont lyk it but as its d cost dat boy is hurt sooo no words it was speechless episode was osm loved it post nxt asap cant w8 i mean u no twinkle loved him bt now toh she will hate him naa
        love u lods sis♥♥

  2. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Holla
    Woaaaah it’s amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍i am soo very happy to se u back. Woaaah loved it. Omgggg kunj ki junnoniat. Its scary man. But loved it.
    I am soo happy seeing ur ff. its not at all vulgar. Its just out of the box
    Plz post next soon
    Love u💜💚

  3. nusaiba

    ritzi,basically i’m a silent reader of ur ff from the very begining.but today you made me comment.i’m fully confused whether rebuke u or give you thanks.the epi was as usual superr se upper wala epi.plz plz plz plz do cont. soooon.eaaagerrrly waiting fr the nxt epi.love u & ur ff to the core.

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Nusaiba dear…..I m on cloud nine to see ur comment dearie….it really means a lot…keeping loving me nd my ff bcus I lobe u too…hehe

  4. twinj

    Hey ritiz,
    I am cmting for the first time in ur ff,so sorry for that but really yaar u made us wait a lot.The epi was too gud.Itna acha tha itna acha tha baat he maat karo.Aur mere hisabse yeh bilkul bhi vulgar nahi tha.Enjoyed the epi.Post soon.

    Lots of luv,
    twinj

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      I m so sorry for making u wait Darling… Was a bit actually very busy…anyways….thank u so soooo sooooooooo much for commenting

  5. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    Finally miss ritzi is here i was damn happy to see your episode kya dhamake daar episode tha yaar loved it from now ur dhamaka Queen for me I used to comment on your previous ff but I was a silent reader of this ff and commenting now plz post soon

  6. Said

    Yaayyy…finally your back…im sooooo happy i can’t tell you how happy I’m right now…..the episode was AWESOME…and it wasn’t vulgar at all…
    Please please don’t end it when ever you’ll post we will always wait for you AWESOME ff..but please don’t end it
    And Try to post the next episode soon..IF you can
    Loads of love ❤️

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Ooooo said …..I m so happy to read yr name on my cmnt box….don’t worry dear..I will not end it soon…but I m not sure abt the regular updates

  7. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    OMG Ritzi finally you came back I thought your forgot your own ff I am damm angry on you I just na hate you
    Loved the episode Twinj’s closeness Twinkle’s feelings and her lie Kunj’s madness and at the end Twinkle faints why ????? Post soon can’t wait
    and challo for this good episode I forgive you 🙂
    Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Sidmin 😭😭😭😭😭 sholly na…maaf karde…but u don’t knw hw am I blushing to read yr cmnt….nd yr name moreover… Leave abt my ff…let’s talk abt hr ff…I m in love with yr both the ffs dear….one ff in which kunj is a womanizer nd the second fs ….love like the way I do…supeeerrrb yaar…pls don’t end tht soon pls!

  8. Ramya

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    Hey ritzi thankgod u r back I was waiting fr u eagerly n episode was awesome episode just loved it n plssssssssssssssssss asap srsly I can’t wait

  9. Anayaali

    Ritzi i dont know that what is ur age i am 15 but then also i want to call u by ur name i hope u dont mind and now come to the epi it was super sa bhi uper really i dont have words to explain it i am soooooooo glad to see u back after such a long time and i was waiting for ur epi and when i saw that u have posted i bit my finger in excitment plzzzzzzzzz try to post nxt asap and it is the longest cmnt i have ever write

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Anayaali yr cmnt srsly touched my heart yaar….nd m reaaaallllllly lack of words donno hw to thank u….but srsly thanks for yr long cmnt yaar….love u dear

  10. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey ritzi I’m so happy to see u back…when I saw ur ff I was jumping like a maniac…missed ur ff like hell…today’s epi was amazingly amazing…I’m shocked to see this shade of Kunj…I so loved Kunj’s shade…ritzi plz don’t ever think of discontinuing ur ff…I know ur hell busy and can’t post regularly so I’m OK if u post with long gaps…desperately waiting for next episode…ritzi when will Krystal n u post ur colab ff? When will u post next episode? If u read my comment do answer my questions.

    #love ❤

  11. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Mein mar jawan! Ab iss dil ka kya karun??? Mar gya tere iss epi par…kya likha hai boss! Hats off! N i loved that Kunj! Saath mein Twinkle ke liye bhi bura laga….par i found it super exciting! Donnon ki ye takraar was a treat!!!! Mujhe kabse intezaar tha iss epi ka! Pta hai??? Ab zyada wait na karvayo…jaldi post kar dena…meri curiosity level aasmaan choo jaayegi…pls pls pls!!!🙈🙈
    Love u❤️

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Nhi….tu toh baat hi mat kar mujhse….ab mei apna nest epi tab tak post nhi karungi…jab tak tu tera epi na post kare…badi aayi post it soon bolne wali… Hehe….thanx by the way

      • Ayu

        |Registered Member

        Achcha! Main Mujhe tashan dikhane lagi??? Sahi hai! I hope ki tera next epi tayyar hai kyunki mera next post ho chuka hai😋😋😂🙈

  12. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Ritzi, I swear, I was waiting for your FF since long.
    Huh?
    At last you’re back.
    Meyn, that was eternal bliss.
    Vulgarity was on peak.
    Just loved it to core.
    Loves. ?

  13. Aanya_pandey

    |Registered Member

    My god!!! Ritzi.. episode ws really very hot.. i can’t tell u hw much i missed this ff of urs.. aaj ki to sham safal ho gyi ye update padh kr 😋

  14. Priya23

    Pls take it my every word seriously coz i……….. Hi ritzi I m silent reader of ur all ff and os. I m big fan of u…………. I m from Bangladesh….and i m studying in 11th class…….u don’t know that u stole my heart… not today when u wrote ur first ff… I craved 4 comment to ur ff always and talk to u my whole heart out but I cudnt… i always pray to god that wish i can told u about my fillings 4 u…..u don’t know that how much I love u…… I always want to see u and when u set ur pic in ur profile that time I was in awww……… U look very pretty and beautiful………that time i was extremely happy that i saw my dream girl…. my happiness has no to bound that i can’t express towards u…..u r my enspiration girl and u don’t know that how beautiful and golden ur heart and I can’t describe it…….don’t think ki I buttering u….naah every words i wrote about u its true and I wrote it with my heart…..i had tears in my eye wg8 now and u couldn’t believed that I m crying bcoz of happiness ki told about my fillings to u…… u no how i missed u and always thought about u and ur ff…….i m happy and glad see u r back and I waiting 4 ur ff desperately and thought when ritzi post her ff and when I saw ur ff I m like omg ritzi post her ff…….I know I m talking to much but what can I do I can’t stop my self coz its my first comment ur ff plss forgive me if I said anything wrong to u coz I just want to tell u my fillings about u………..can u accept me as ur sis if u don’t than as a frnd plssss….and plss give ur ans if u like or want……I luv u alotsssss and so much……ok I think u don’t no that what is vulgar and its not at all Bulger its a situation when a person lost their mind…..u r a brilliant,,fabulous,, amazing,, awesome,, romantic,, and comedian writer jitni tarif karu kaam hay…hahaha…..yes I know Hindi ….ok I think I eat ur Brain so much ok….love u soooo much…..bye….tc…..

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Priya….yr each nd every word just filled my heart with joy….happiness…. Proudness…..u knw I was So stressed since yesterday….. But u won’t believe… Aftr reading yr this cmnt….I m flying like a maniac….jumping like a kangaroo… Hehe….nd ya blushing like a lover….yr words really touched the string of my heart….I want to meet u more than u want to meet me…..gosh…. Can’t just tell anything…. Love u yaar

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      So sorry dear…my cmnts seems nothing in front of yrs…but there r moments in our lives tht we cannot express our feelings….I m suffering frm the same dear

  15. SidVee

    Yaaayy!! Glad to see you back again Ritzi 🙂 🙂 was missing u n ur ff n was waiting fr u to upload desperately.. n i was very happy to see your update today 😁😁.. today’s epi was amazing.. never expected kunj to behave like that 😦😦.. but loved this shade of kunj too.. but felt bad for twinkle😓😓.. loved theit tashan.. n it wasn’t vulgar at all.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤❤

  16. Aamu

    |Registered Member

    To tu aayi….halkat…kamini..agar post ni karti ir me mar jaati to tujse badla lene aati k tune post kyu nahi kiya tha.. .
    Teri wajah se muje TU open karna pada woh b monday ko…mene pronise kiya tha ki me TU last sunday ko open karungi..uske vaa direct after march but tune promise todva daali ..
    Besharam..
    Huh
    Jaaa…ab me kattttiii
    Ab tere epi k baare me kuch ni bolungi…
    Waise bhi speechlesss…tha
    Ekdum amazing….
    Or haaa me read ab nahi karpaoongi kyuki ab kuch b hojaye me TU open ni karungi..lekin tu apna post karna me wapis aakar pkkka read karungi…aab ek saaaath…
    Mazaa ayega
    Suna…..
    Bahbye…
    Will miss ur ff
    Love u…♥♥♥
    Or haaa twinj scenes bohot cute or damn romantic the….just loved it…

  17. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    missed u so so much ritzi… jab maine tumhare ff ka.naam deka I was like… agai yeh tho agai… I m really really glad that u are back… lekin hamesha ki tarah jab waapas aathi ho tho dhoom macha ke aathi ho…

    ritzi today’s epi was so so emotional yaar… matlab tears rukh hi nahi rahe… wow… amazingly written… I loved it…

    love you

  18. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hi Ritzi, how r you dear? Happy to see u back after long time…well todays epi was amazing fabulous mindblowing n emotinal too… it was not vulgar… I think it was demand of situation….. kunjs obssession for twinkle was scary n now twinkles pov about kunj is also seems scary…. feeling bad for both of them….. well thank u so much for giving ur precious time to posting ur ff for us….

    Well now let me intrdoduce myself….. so…. Hi I’m SHALINI a silent reader of ur ff n have joined TU a month before n also writing a ff…. every one here call me NEHA…. I’m your big fan n crazy about ur ff…. n you’ll not believe but its true that since many days I was thinking to give u PM to post ur ff but couldn’t… thought whether u’ll like it or not… but now I’m sooo happy bcz u’ve posted ur ff n also I’m cmnting for the first time on my favourite ff n sharing my feelings about u with one of my most fevourite writer…. waise I wanna talk to u more but samajh nahi aa raha kaise karun… In short u can say to talking with u I’m feeling like I’m talking with my fevourite selibrity…. really yarrr i just love ur ff n ur writing skill n u too….

    Well I’m very talkative girl soooo… would u like to be my friend?

    Now ba byeee n come soon with next epi… I’ll be eagerly waiting for that….

    ♥Lots of love♥ N ♥Keep smiling always♥

    “Shalini/Neha”

  19. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hi Ritzi, how r you dear? Happy to see u back after long time…well todays epi was amazing fabulous mindblowing n emotinal too… it was not vulgar… I think it was demand of situation….. kunjs obssession for twinkle was scary n now twinkles pov about kunj is also seems scary…. feeling bad for both of them….. well thank u so much for giving ur precious time to posting ur ff for us….

    Well now let me intrdoduce myself….. so…. Hi I’m SHALINI a silent reader of ur ff n have joined TU a month before n also writing a ff…. every one here call me NEHA…. I’m your big fan n crazy about ur ff…. n you’ll not believe but its true that since many days I was thinking to give u PM to post ur ff but couldn’t… thought whether u’ll like it or not… but now I’m sooo happy bcz u’ve posted ur ff n also I’m cmnting for the first time on my favourite ff n sharing my feelings with one of my most fevourite writer…. waise I wanna talk to u more but samajh nahi aa raha kaise karun… In short u can say to talking with u I’m feeling like I’m talking with my fevourite selibrity…. really yarrr i just love ur ff n ur writing skill n u too….

    Well I’m very talkative girl soooo… would u like to be my friend? I hope my talks didn’t hurts u…. if yes then really sorry for that

    Now ba byeee n come soon with next epi… I’ll be eagerly waiting for that….

    ♥Lots of love♥ N ♥Keep smiling always♥

    “Shalini/Neha”

  20. Priyanka (Hyderabadi)

    So u r back dear..it is not at all vulgar ..
    I loved this side of kunj..I am commenting for the first time..and I know bit too late eagerly waiting for your next update..post it soon dear.. introducing myself I am Priyanka from Hyderabad yeah I am from South but still I can speak Hindi perfectly like u guys..I am introduced myself because you have to know there is someone from Hyderabad who likes sorry I am wrong who loves your writings..are u forgot about your hate evil revenge love ts please try to post it eagerly waiting..next time I will comment soon……

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