This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 28


Hi guys….u knw wht…I m really overwhelmed by yr cmnts…I never expected this much luv for my this ff as my previous ff got so much luv frm u guys nd this is a totally diff version..tht was funny nd this is a bit emotional….but still u guys proved me wrong….luv u alllll!

Chalo lets start the epi…..

#taneja mansion…twinkle’s room

Twinkle’s POV (guys kunj’s voice would be introduced soon pls don’t get bored uh! I knw u guys like kunj’s pov more…but this is necessary)
My chain of thoughts were broken when I felt a soft hand around my cheeks “hw much u cry twinkle” he said…when did he came back? Was I crying?

I quickly wiped off my tears “s…sam” I whispered “shh..its okay…u kn w wht u really look cute when u cry” he said ….”sam!” I exclaimed “hehe…accha sorry twinkle voh ek problem hai…I will not….” He said…oh no yaar…again! “no sam…not this tym…u will hv to cm to my contest nd thts it” I said being a bit harsh “twinki yaar….try nd understand..voh ek deal hai…very important wali ..nd vaise bhi….y do I need to cm to yr concert….ur toh my personal singer nd I m yr one nd only V.I.P…right?” he said sitting beside me “ya right” I said rolling my eyes. And again “tring tring” “sam yaar…this is height!” I exclaimed

“twinkle I need to take this…see u tomorrow directly aftr concert” he said hurriedly moving out




The whole room was messed up….cloths lying here nds there …nd the empty space were occupied by his books nd we could see kunj sitting on bed with his hands continuously rubbing his hairs as a way of showing confusion….just then jeenie (his PA) came
#kunj’s pov
I was sitting on my bed…hell confused just then jennie came “oh my god sir! Wht hv u done to yr room” she exclaimed “thank god jennie u came…look na…I m so hell confused …why does this airport people alow on luggage of 8kg (if m not wrong) per person..i want to take this all” I said , crying like a baby

I could see a hell baffled jennie in front of me for she has never seen my this shade…she always used to think me as a serious kinda person “jennie..pls help me…should I take this white shirt..or this blue one” I said holding them in my each hand “but sir I suggest u should take more office attire with u na…as yr main motive is the deal with sameer singhania” she said. Ya jennie thank you..u can leave now, I will handle it myself” I said faking sweetness, she just smiled nd went

I again ended up on the bed with hell lot of confusions….but 1 thing was clear tht I was not going to take much of tht boring office attire with me…twinkle ke paas voh pehenke jaunga toh….sochke ke darr lagta hai re!


#taneja mansion…twinkle’s room

Here also we could see the whole room messed up…cloths lying here nd there

#twinkle’s POV

“WHAT SHOULD I WEAR MAHI!” I exclaimed throwing another dress on the bed (both r so same …isnt it?) “oh god twinkle! Is this the first tym tht ur doing a concert tht ur so confused or it happens eveytym with u?” asked mahi trying to find a place to sit “but mahi its my first concert in india na!” I exclaimed. Mahi just rolled her eyes…nd oh wow! She found a place to sit..she was abt to sit when “don’t u dare sit!” I exclaimed…a scared mahi again stood up “yaha teri behen itni pareshan hai your baithne ki padi on help me now!” I exclaimed “selfish kahiki” she said to which I just rolled my eyes

“I think u should wear this 1” she said picking up a yellow coloured one piece “no! its too tacky” I said
“okay…then wht abt this?” she asked picking up a a red cloured one piece “I just wore it on my second last concert in LA” I said shrugging my shoulders “OH MY GOD TWINKLE!” u just wore it in yr second last concert nd tht too in LA…so recent na!” she said taunting me “mahi…teri choice itni kharab kabse ho gyi yaar kuch dhang ka dikha na” I said being frustrated

“oh! Meri choice kharab lag rhi hai tujhe…ja u only select I m going” nd she started going towards the door…I pulled her back “u r not going anywhere unless we select a dress for me!’ I ordered

She made an irritaed wala face nd started searching for a dress…I too got enganged in selection. Just then our eyes went a same dress…we both looked at eo with lightened expressions “tht one!” we both exclaimed nd gave a hi5 to eo.×0%2F2013-women-s-one-piece-dress-plus-size-short.jpg&

hope it works…its a white coloured one piece having red roses all over


#the day of concert

Finally the day had arrived…the most awaited day….for twinkle the day her first indian song would be released…but little did she knw tht it was gonna be her most special day…not bcus of her concert but bcus she was going to get the part of her which had went away frm her.

@the concert place

A huge…HUGE crowd can be seen….fighting for the tickets….sm r crying out of excitement as they got the ticket whereas sm are crying as they were the unlucky ones.

Twinkle is seen singing in her bathroom like a small happy nd excited kid “this is when the feeling sinks in…I don’t wanna miss u like back be here…cm back be here” she is so happy tht she almost changed the sorrowful accent of the song into a childish one

On the other hand a plane is shown landing….a hot handsome guy cmng out of the airport removing his shades….a big smile has took place over his lips just then one of his bodyguard told “sir…we hv arranged for twinkle taneja’s concert VIP ticket for u” kunj smiled….the only words which came out of his mouth were “I m coming my girl”

To be continued….

Accha sorry na! I knw it was short but suspence mei chodna was important na! thik hai as I compensation I will post my fs ‘cant u see me…I m the one u searching for’ right now but I don’t knw y it takes tym to get posted

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  1. Anam_sidhant

    Yaar I can’t bear this suspense?? please post next asap pleaseee❤❤ going to this epi! was fantastic?

  2. Supriya18d

    Nice part yaar…pls unite Twinj soon.

  3. My first comment on your ff as Iam a Silent reader but I rectly made an account for tu and Iam happy that I got to read so many ff in tu thank u guy for hard work on writing on Twinj. Waiting for next update and kunj word Iam coming my girl is killing it. And hope u post it soon.

  4. I love it l. Pls update next epi today pls

  5. Yr hey ritzi baby here yaad hun. nhi naa i no dat sry me cmnt nhi kr paa rhi hun vo computer kaharab ho gya hai n ye phome kisi kaam ka nhi bdi mushkil se acha sa cmnt likha menw vohang hogya phone or ab firse i hv to ek tih i can’t. lovin n ryt my cmnf fr 1 of my fav ff yr fr sure jaisehi cmputer thik ho gaa mera cmnt. amazing. episode luving d track ritzi bevhara kunj dis rt pta nhi khaan pr kuch bhi typ hi rha hai dry i jst hope dis cmnts reaches to u all n u too ritzi mene abhi kisi chiz pr cmnt nhi kia merko bhul mt jana sb log plshhhh n very excitd to c more of kunj haye jaise hi plane land kia mere chere pr ek smile ne bhi land kia tha luving it or phele ke epispdes were qyt emotional sbko phonch jayega saari ffs pr paka plomish by baby

  6. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute epi…..loved it

  7. Fan

    Awesome epi dear!!..i can’t wait to read the next epi..plz post asap

  8. Ayeshakhanum11

    superb ritzi u did iti mean ur such an amazing awsome fabulous writer

  9. Romaisha

    Oh god the suspense is killing me! Please post next epi soon! Please! ??
    Can’t wait !!
    Oh yah .. Today’s epi was hell awesome! Picking dress was funny.. ??

  10. Maggi

    Omg!!!!!I’m damn excited yaaar…luvd it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    CNT soooon

  11. Awesome epi… Loved it… Next epi jaldi post karna ok!!!

  12. I know I’m new.. …Nd quite excited 2 join the TU family ……actually I visit TU regular ly ……………
    So now the ffs…….
    An aweeessssdooooommmmmeeeee one……….. ………I’m liking forward to it reply.. . …??????

  13. Marvellous……good going waiting for twinj meet.

  14. ohhhh so at last they are gonna be together I know I know but at least face to face maybe
    m so excited for the next episode
    and the way you described Kunj’s entry in India was so good
    I was imagining all that sooo much
    plzzzzzzzzz continue soon

  15. Meeta

    Why do u do this?
    Inni jaldi kyo khatam kiya?
    Wanna read more.
    Okay post jaldi.
    Love you.?

  16. Amazing epi.. can’t wait to know how will they react when they come face to face.. do cont soon ?

  17. SidMin

    Loved it the episode was awesome and Twinj gonna meet Just can’t wait for it Post soon 🙂

  18. R.S.H.H.P

    Nice episode ritzi loved it twinj gonna meet yeeee

  19. Sujina

    ritzi…amazing yaar
    both twinj are messy 2 choose cloth…
    loved kunj last dialogue n twinkle singing…
    eager 4vd most awaited part…plz post asap-?
    live u…???

  20. Kruti

    Ritzi I am so damn happy…….Firstly coz ur posting d epis soon nd we r getting atleast 1 per day
    Nd secondly coz of this tremendous piece of writing……sacch mein it was damn good
    Specially that Kunj nd Twinkle ka mess???????
    Ab jaldi se nxt part post karo…..eagerly waiting

  21. Loved it

  22. Srija

    can’t wait any longer
    please please update soon
    oh sorry i forgot to tell about the episode well it’s mindblowing amazing ??????????????????????

  23. Shreya098

    Loooved it❤❤…
    I am soo excited for the next epi…. Plzzzzz post it asap

  24. Hey ritzi amazing dear Loved it
    N eager to know wt happens when twinj faces eo

  25. Sayeeda

    Hey ! Ritzi ….episode was really an amazing one…..awesome yrrr ….
    Loved it to the core

  26. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….lovely episode….can’t wait for their meeting…

  27. Baby

    Ritzi luvd it n d track Is going amazing post nxt soon

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