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Home»Fan Fiction»This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 23 (my birthday treat!)
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This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 23 (my birthday treat!)

RitziBy RitziAugust 14, 201631 Comments6 Mins Read
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Helllllllo guys…..ya u read it right today (14th August) is my bday!!!! And u r the best things ever happened to me…..I m glad tht I m here…..cherishing my happy moments with u all. My 1 year got completed in tu….ya u beard it right! It wason my last birthday when I came across this site….nd srsly I m glad! Kabhi kabhi sochti hu agar aap log nhi hote toh mera kya hota…..accha so this was my surprise nd the twist is still left….wanna know what! Then continue reading

Episode 22

So let’s start the epiiiiii……..

Twinkle’s POV…….
I reached the top of the stairs…. Shit! I m late! “Twinkle! Cm fast!” Said mahi gritting her teeth. I quickly ran down “morning papa” I said giving a small hug to him…..buttering u know.”morning princess” he replied. I went nd sat beside kunj who was continuously giving death glares to me…..arre but zyada nahane ke chakkar mei late ho gayi toh kya karu!”now pls guys will u tell me don’t increase my curiosity” dad said “mahi twinkle…..cm on girls” he continued seeing us all sitting their numb. “Umm…..dad voh….umm twinkle….will tell u” said mahi “ME?” Look she is confessing….. Oh not again mahi! “Me….no no….arre kunj tell na!” I said “haan kunj….tell” said dad “mai….voh…. I….I forgot wht i was going to say …..uv u con….tinue bro” said kunj. Now dad’s gaze went on uv who was literally sweating. “We want to marry each other!” Said uv nd kunj together….. Making dad stand up “WHAT! u nd kunj want to marry eo……but…wh…what can I…do….I will only suggest u to go to abroad as it is common thing their” said dad….”WHAT!!!” Said uv nd kunj getting up from their place. Me nd mahi looked at eo nd then we too stood up….ab baith ke kya karein.

“N….no uncle….we don’t want to marry eo” said uv “then?” Asked dad “we want to marry your daughters” said kunj……oh finally sm1 told “OK” said dad sitting down nd within a fraction of second he stood up again “what!” He shouted his lungs out ……shit! We r gone we r gone. I pressed my fists tightly

“Haan voh uncle…..I want to marry mahi” said uv “I want to marry twinkle” said kunj in one go. Hey stop it u naughty head…..why do u want to bounce so much at this moment ….hey! Don’t get me wrong I m talking to my heart. We nd mahi looked at eo nd then at Yunj who were standing together ……their facial expressions were horrible….. Even ours were no less. Oh fish! Dad is moving towards them…….dead! They r dead.

I closed my eyes with fear.

Its been few moments nd I hv still not gained strength to open my eyes. “Thank u soooooo much dad!” It was mahi’s voice. Thank you? I opened my eyes. OOOOOMMMMMGGGG is this really happening….. Is it true….is dad really hugging kunj nd uv……what does it mean…does it means a yes? “Dad” I whispered. He broke the hug with Yunj nd started cmng towards me nd mahi…..I could makd out tht kunj and uv were equally in trauma. Dad came nd hugged me nd mahi together “I m really happy tht u hv chosen such a trustworthy life partner for u guys!” What! O MY GOD! I knew tht everything will be fine….but this much easily….tht I didn’t knew.

“Dad?” Asked me nd mahi together ….breaking the hug “arre its a big yes from me….I m ready to get u both married with the love of yr lives” said dad…..me nd mahi were numb…continuously looking at eo…..talking with eyes….asking is it true… Suddenly a big wala curve appeared on my face nd I jumped on dad “thank u so much…thank u thank u thank…..u r the best dad in the world” I said hugging him tigthely …..mahi also joined us “we love u dad” said mahi. Dad broke the hug nd went towards kunj nd uv. Surprisingly both TOUCHED HIS FEET kunj ka toh thik hai but uv …..did he touched dad’s feet. “Thank u so much uncle” both said together “oh cmon boys….. My daughters cannot get anyone else better than u….but I hv one condition…..u will hv to keep them happy always nd luv them unconditionally” said dad….aww dad I love u

“Sure uncle!” Said uv nd kunj……”no uncle…..call me dad” papa said to which kunj nd uv smiled nd said “dad” together.

Me nd kunj were continuously looking at eo….the feeling….the expressions …..the happiness cannot be described in any words….bcus it was beyond the world of words….”were is maa?” Asked mahi making me strike tht the fact was true. “Oh she has went to nearby ramji mandir” dad said “great!” I said “I think we should go there…..we will tell maa there only….as well as we will taking ramji’s blessing too” i said “when did my chotu sa baccha became so big yaar” said dad caressing my hairs. “Tring tring” my phone rang….its chinki….oh shoot I completely forgot abt the project yaar “mahi uv….this is important call…u guys go I nd kunj will join in smtym” I said to which they nodded. They went towards mandir nd I went to my room to check sm files which chinki was asking on call. Dad nd kunj were left alone

End of twinkle’s POV……..

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End of past…..

#present…

#twinkle’s room (Amritsar)

Its been morning now ….twinkle was reading her diary the whole night…..she turned the next page….nd found it empty…..all the pages were emptied.

………. Twinkle’s POV……..
This was the last tym when I saw kunj happy…..then smthing happened…..donno what….but smthing which was not suppose to happen the incidences which took place after this were worst enough for me …..I just don’t wanna think abt it……this was the reason why I left writing the diary.

Just then “aah” I shouted as sm1 closed my eyes keeping the hands on my eyes. “Don’t tell me it is .. ……..MAHI!” I shouted…… How can I forget this touch….. Eventhough I m feeling this touch after abt 5 yrs….but good things cannot be forgetton. She took off her hands from my eyes nd I quickly stood up nd hugged her tightly.

Precap: past: “twinkle I don’t love….I don’t wanna marry u” “no kunj don’t do this to me” present: “hello my doll” “SAM!”

So how’s the precap…. Sorry I wanted to write more but sorry as soon as the clock struk 12 msges nd phone calls u see….nd I don’t want my ff to get deleted don’t worry I will post soon

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    31 Comments

    1. Sabrina on August 14, 2016 5:04 am

      Happy birthday ritzi!! Hope it was as amazing as u!!???

    2. Sidhanshi on August 14, 2016 6:16 am

      A very happy wala birthday ritzi.. May God bless u forever… Nd thanks for the birthday treat… Loved it & love u too…

    3. Isha_ on August 14, 2016 6:56 am

      Ritzi happy birthday ?????? wish you a happy happy birthday 14 august your birthday and 15 august mine you know all of my family memebers though i will be born on 14 august on the independence day of pakistan but me a lazy bone born on 15 august anyways once again a happy happy happy birthday and a happy independence day to all

    4. Meeta on August 14, 2016 7:52 am

      Happiest birthday Gal.
      Enjoy your day.
      Party hard.
      Epi was very good.
      Seriously, waiting.

    5. rashiverma2199 on August 14, 2016 8:02 am

      Happy birthday ritzi…..have a good day and successful year ahead….
      Birthday treat was awesom….????

    6. Dolly on August 14, 2016 9:01 am

      Hey ritzy
      Firstly many more happy writtens of the day dear

      N it’s awesome

    7. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 14, 2016 9:05 am

      awesome amazing fabulous epi…..Happy birthday dear…..

    8. ranabulbul on August 14, 2016 9:28 am

      Happy wala bday ritzi

      May god bless u with all the happiness of the universe and today is my friends bday so her name is ritvika and may God bless u Botha and amazing epsodoe

    9. harshi_23 on August 14, 2016 9:43 am

      Happy birthday… N abt ur ff it’s jst osum..luv it…n hav a osum day

    10. dreamer...arundhati on August 14, 2016 9:44 am

      Ritzi a bigggwalaa happyy bday to u…. May god bless you and always be happy and smiling…. Wonderful episode… Luv u.. Ctd soon and enjoy

    11. twinjfan.tamanna on August 14, 2016 10:33 am

      Whether it is night or day Friends,
      we will always stay
      Whether it is summer or fall
      Our friendship will always stand tall
      Whether we face good fortune or bad luck With each other,
      we will always be stuck
      Happy birthday to such a wonderful friend
      May out friendship never end…♡♥♡♥ HAPPY BIRTHDAY RITZI…MAY THE GODS BLESSING SHOWER ON U….BTW the episode was awesome. .cant wait for next episode…

    12. shikha on August 14, 2016 11:10 am

      firstly a very happy birthday to you
      keep smiling keep writing like this 🙂
      may god give you a lot of happiness
      now coming to the story
      awesome story
      I read both the parts just now
      and these are really very very wonderful
      RT agreed for their marriage very easily wowwww how good he is
      ohhhh but now the flashback ends opsss I forgot about the past present thing
      bit it seems so interesting
      post the next part soon wanna know what happened to them or Kunj

    13. kruti on August 14, 2016 11:27 am

      Happy Birthday Ritziiiii?????❤❤?have a gr8 blast
      Superb epi ritzi Just cant wait to see d nxt epi

    14. SIDMIN-daamini on August 14, 2016 11:48 am

      Happy birthday di !!!!!????
      May all your wishes cone true and you have lots of fun
      And the episode was amazing can’t wait for the next one
      Plzz posted the second one asap???

    15. TwinjSidMin on August 14, 2016 12:03 pm

      Many more happy returns of the day ritzi…may God bless you and fulfill all your wishes…have a blissful day dear…party toh banti hai yaar?????…now coming to today’s episode it was flawless…post next soon…cant wait for long time so plzzzzzzzz post it soon…if possible post it today itself as a birthday treat to your friends and ff readers…love you to moon and back ritzu…

    16. Chiku on August 14, 2016 12:13 pm

      First of all happy birthday day ritzi ??????????????????????????????????????????
      Nd cming to episode bit was awesome waiting fr next episode….
      Nd i eant to tell one thing i am chehak i changed my name to chiku on tu…….
      Hope u remember me ?

    17. Shatakshi on August 14, 2016 12:59 pm

      A very Happy Birthday Ritzi
      Gbu…n pray that this year u rock ur boards???

      So cake to banti h na

      ?????????????

      OK buss zyada nahi…nahi to tere s*xy figure ko nazar lag jaigi???

      N the episode was Awesome
      I have a hint that Rt might have told something to kunj n so he is doing so

      N I have a question…who is Sam??
      Love u dear❤❤❤

    18. Joonakanksha on August 14, 2016 1:14 pm

      Happy bday dear
      God bless you
      and twist was amazing
      Eager to know what would have happened

    19. shreya098 on August 14, 2016 2:04 pm

      Happy birthday…?????????
      May u get all the happiness in life…

      And precap…..what a twist..
      I am soo curious to know the reason behind kunj’s decision

    20. SidVee on August 14, 2016 2:13 pm

      Many many happy returns of the day! HAPPIEE BIRTHDAY TO YOU.. god bless you :).. and coming to ur ff it’s amazing and awesome.. can’t wait to know what happened next.. do cont soon ?

    21. Sayeeda on August 14, 2016 2:23 pm

      Happy birthday to u…. Happy birthday to u…. Happy birthday dear Ritzzziiii… Happy birthday to you….???????????????..

      May ur all wishes get fulfill…. All ur dreams come true… Keep rocking with ur ff as always u do….

      Episode was too good nd awesome…
      Loved it

      Love u ????

    22. Sameera on August 14, 2016 3:56 pm

      Happy birthday Ritz may god fulfill all of ur wishes n have a blast today

    23. SidMin on August 14, 2016 5:27 pm

      HAPPY BIRTHDAY RITZI may god full fill all your wishes
      Count not the candle but the light they give
      Count not the years but the life you live
      once again Happy Birthday
      Loved the episode and this RT must only have asked Kunj To earn like him so that he could keep Twinkle happy (maybe) waiting for the next episode 🙂

    24. Chandra on August 14, 2016 5:40 pm

      HAPPY BIRTHDAY RITZI . May God bless U and fulfill ur all wishes . Alaways keep smiling .

    25. Aishwarya.twinjfan on August 14, 2016 5:57 pm

      Happy birthday Ritzi
      Many many happy returns of the day??????????

    26. foreverfanoftwinj on August 14, 2016 6:10 pm

      Happy birthday to u ritzi……:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂
      Dekh generally meri aadat hai Ki mai birthday walon se party mange bina un logon ko chodti nhi
      But pata hai fr d first time aisa krne ka mann nhi krra
      And if my friends come to know Ki Maine tujhse party nhi li then they would surely come and check me whether I m OK or not…
      Thank god none of them know about tu varna mera kya hota..
      And u know y Maine tujhse party nhi mangi because ab party mangungi toh mai lalchi kehlai jaungi
      Ab batati hun party na mangne ki asli wajah
      Ab tere ff ne hi party ka kaam kr diya
      Itna mast epi tha ki party jaisa lag raha tha padh k
      Party aur ff ka relation nhi samjha na
      Relation agle epi mein batungi
      Tab tak keep thinking
      Chal bye
      And haan wishing u a veli veli hapy birday
      Tu jo chahe tujhe mile
      Tera net kabhi khatam na ho

    27. baby on August 14, 2016 8:32 pm

      hey ritzi a happy wala birtday dear
      amazing episode i suer osm
      bt d precap n d present omg wt hpn aftr dat gr8 suspense n
      d precap past is quite scary
      yr eagerly w8ing fr nxt episode dear post asap
      god bless u n fulfill all ur wishes
      agn a happy bday n
      luv u dear

    28. Jennifer on August 14, 2016 8:33 pm

      Happy wala bday…..Sry but i not remembered ur Epi very very sry for it?nd vnc again happy bday????

    29. Jennifer on August 14, 2016 8:34 pm

      Can u give a short summary plz?

    30. Angita on August 15, 2016 8:08 am

      Happy belated birthday yaar..haan jaan I’m late but for give me
      Amazing update

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