This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 10

Ya ya as usual m late……kya karu yaar….kaha tha na test r started…..this is torcher…..ughhh! OK leave…..many of u asked me tht why don’t I show twinkle’s POV so as I said be4 tht twinkle’s POV has gr8 mystery so……hv patience Dearies….now let’s start the epi…..

Recap: twinj missed their train nd went a hotel….their romance in bathroom nd now let’s start

Kunj’s POV

It was past n hour nd we had changed our cloths…..twinkle sat on bed being exhausted so I sat on couch just opposite to her “pls call mahi now….there must be full network here na!” I exclaimed “is it necessary” I heard her whispering “ofcource it is…..don’t u want to go to manali ” i said making her aware of the fact tht she was caught ” y….ya w..when did I say n..no ” she picked up her phone nd ran to balcony…….. After a while she came back nd again sat on bed “I called her nd she is relieved now….she nd UV will maintain the situation there nd we will go by tomorrow” I just nodded “we have 1 whole night to spend kunj!” She said coming back in her sherni avatar…..which only reminds me of the bathroom incident…..he bhagvan Bas kal take meri izzat bachaye rakhna….bad mei mai khud bachalunga “what if I say tht I felt down knowingly so tht we miss the train” she said making me go more shock…..my eyes widened up “what…..r u insane?” I said ” arre chill…..I just told u to imagine tht” she said very freely ” u r beyond impossible…… Now u will say tht there was full network in yr phone all day long but still u didn’t called them” i said making her big eyes go more big….but y is she behaving as if a thief is caught red handed…..what ever….as I told before she is beyond impossible…….wait….why the hell is she coming towards me….no no stop pls…but she sat beside me ……very close “hey kunj……yr eyes….share the deepest mysteries….”

She said in a serious voice “w..what r..ru saying twinkle” I said shivering bcus she was right but how did she came to known about tht “kunj…..if u don’t share anything with me tht doesn’t mean tht I don’t cm to knw abt ur problem…. Bcus there is sm1 who always shares all yr sorrow with me” her this line made me shock…..I never told my any secret to any1….who’s she talking about “who!” I asked desperately “yr eyes” she replied immediately “ya….yr eyes tells me everything kunj….nd I mean it” she is managing to generate shivers in my body……I was thinking tht I only would understand her eyes but no…..I was wrong nd just then I felt smthng warm on my palm….it was so relaxing…..ya as expected it was twinkle’s heaven…..I mean her palm….her this touch made me feel so relax….it gives me such a soothing affect…..seems tht all my worries r fading away ” when I was of 6….my father left us…..I saw the struggles made by my mom to raise me….she not only had to look after me but also had to fight with society….. From tht day I came to know the importance of money in this world…..nd from tht day I took an oath tht one day I will surely give all the happiness to me mom….my bebe” I said….but wait….I was not suppose to say tht….I don’t know y I did so…..nd now this tears….they r just not stopping….I quickly wiped my tears as I don’t want my twinkle to think tht I m weak but perhaps she noticed it nd she wiped my other tear then she hugged me as tightly as she could but I didn’t responded as I knew tht her this 1 touch will make me fall for her more….nd I don’t want to destroy her life aftr doing tht “kunj I hv complete trust on u….I knw tht u will succeed in yr goal but don’t forget to live yr life kunj…..u should understand tht we have only this life….no second chance…..enjoy the life kunj….u were absolutely correct when u set ur goal but yr this goal just took away yr life from beneath…..do study but enjoy the life kunj” she said still hugging me nd shrugged her away from me as it became difficult for me to hold my feelings “its easy for u to say twinkle….just look at yr life….no worries….no responsibilities no horrible past….. U hv the right to enjoy not me” i said sarcastically ” who the hell told u tht i don’t hv any problem…..EVERYONE HAS SM AWFUL PAST!” She said tears flowing endlessly from he’d cheeks…..

I never knew this shade of twinkle…..but wht does her last line meant….. I want to knw wht she really means….now I m able to understand tht behind this lively face….there is a hidden mystery…..nd I want to know tht any how…. I want to ask her but i don’t hv guts ” when I 9……my mom died due to cancer” was her reply making my heart to skip a beat “w…what….t..then l..leela aunt…y” I said trembling “ya she is….my…stepmother” she replied sobbing heavily….. I was correct ……she has a great mystery in herself “t…win..kle” I said sobbing as I couldn’t see her crying ” after my mom’s death….dad brought her new wife (leela) nd her daughter to our home forever…..the shock of death of my mom was not less nd when they both came….. I went into depression…. A serious 1…..I always thought her to be rude….I insulted her nd her daughter where ever possible….” She said but wait…..” Did u just said her daughter…..u mean….” I said getting shock after shock “mahi” she replied immediately….. What! Mahi is her stepdaughter I can never ever imagined tht…..the bond they share I even more than real sisters “but leela maa loved me nd mahi equally ……soon I became comfortable with them as they both were the only 1 who brought me out of depression….. I nd mahi started to share same room…..we became really close I started to realise tht she nd maa are bliss in my life” she said with still tears in her eyes “twinkle….I didn’t knew this at all” I said “exactly kunj…..tht is what I want to say…..can u even imagine by my face tht I hv been through this hard times….no….bcus life teaches us everything……till this date I love my real mom….but her love from me doesn’t makes me weak….it always gives me strength… We should keep the old memories in our heart nd use it as our strength” she said nd after her tht words I felt the my life completely changed….I kind of confidence….a sense of joy or say happiness was felt in my heart….i felt tht I had taken a new birth….I felt tht all my bad times hv gone faaaar away from me nd will never cm back…. Thank u twinkle…..thank u nd I turned my face see her …..as her head was resting on my shoulder…..but she slept….. She is sleeping solo peacefully I tucked her hairs behind her ears just to hv a clear glance of her innocent face…..her tht face always gives me blushes…..I promise twinkle…..from tomorrow u will see a new kunj with same motive but different way….the way taught by you nd this kunj will always live for u…..I love u my girl!
End of kunj’s POV

Unknowingly kunj too slept with his head resting upon twinkle’s head….nd his hands holding twinkle’s waist as tightly as he could seems tht he never wants her to leave him

Precap: trip to manali has not even started guys….a new kunj nd TWINKLE’S POV!

33 comments

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Oh dreamer this means a lot to me yaar….but wait u also used to write a ff….if m not wrong….most probably u r not writing it right now….m not sure as I don’t visit tu nowadays but if ur not writing then pls continue na!

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Arre arre amu…..patience naam ki nhi cheez hoti hai….khane wali cheez nhi uh…chill girl chill….mystery will get unlock sooooon

  1. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Ritzi Loved it Twinj’s past was really sad But I loved the bond between Twinkle and Mahi
    Waiting for the next one please post asap
    it is just an request to you Ritzi I want you to read my ff (will you?)

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Thank u so so soooooooo much my dear sidmin…..nd I would love to read ur ff….will u pls tell me the name of ur ff as in tu I only read selected ffs due to lack of tym but would srsly love to read urs

  2. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Ritzi ur just tooooooo awesome
    Ur writing skills r tooooooo good
    Amazing epi loved it eagerly waiting for the mystery to unfold

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      M glad tht I m able to bring excitement in u all….nd don’t worrty shreya098 will surely upload it by tomorrow or day after

  3. Romaisah

    Wow damn it yaar amazing !!! And twinkle’s past got me emotional yaar .. Do post soon ..

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Oh jisha……thank u soooooo very much girl! Ur waiting for twinkle’s POV perhaps nd I m waiting fr ur ff….post it na!

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Hey angita …….where is ur ff? Yaar don’t make me wait for it more! Pls post it nd by the way thank dear

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Ya rashi….honestly even I m excited about it…..hehe….u must be thinking I m mad but this ff is really very exciting to write for me too as I hv planned a gr8 more things for u all nd I can’t wait to write it as I don’t hv much free tym

    • Ritzi

      |Author

      Hmm….I agree shona….its emotional but wht to do….accha I hv a plan….post yr ff to make every1 smile…. Nd by the say ty girl!

  4. sujina

    lovely episode…
    sad hearing twinkle past…
    eager 2 c new kunj….
    trip 2 manali…
    twinkle pov..n many more…
    plz post asap….B-)

  5. zayb_zikra

    Yaar Ritzi m in love with ur ff…..
    Uff ufff ufff kya kahu..?.?.
    Juss one thng k do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz…….

  6. Baby

    |Registered Member

    om g hey ritzi fab yr luvd dis episode sad about twinkles past n kunjs as well it was amazing episode now cnt w8 fr nxt episode

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