THE FAULT IN OUR STARS (Episode 2)

thanks a lot guys nd hence I think there are more ishveer fans …and matsh has ended so worried…
and hence you may ask or say how ranveer can join with pragya it is revealed down …and rv actually flirt with girls when he comes to know what a true love is…he will change ….and some people asked why no ishveer scenes…guys it’s my first episode how can I join them simply without any knok jhoks…
and about me I am from Australia. .I am on leave..and naveena could not upload her ff bcoz she is not well now..and she asked me to write
..and hence I was planning for this story for a month and good results ..thanks a lot…I thought whether my language will understood u but I think it’s yes…ok any queries leave it in comments…I think I solved all questions…plse ishveer fans..support me …there are more twist …nd also abhigya fans…..

coming to the story. ..

ranveer takes pragya in his arms and bulbul ,kunj opened the door and three came to a conclusion tat Sarla ma slept…they went inside..rv placed pragya in bed and all three slept there. …

In .mm….
abhi thinks about rv ,pragya. ..nd purab comes there …abhi says how protective is rv ….purab says yes…first I didn’t like him…but after seeing his work I am impressed abhi…
aliya and ishani comes there…ishani says …bhai..pragya is so sweet na. .ofcourse bulbul. ..nd that two guys…rv and kunj..aliya says now we have a big team….abhi asked all to go and sleep and it’s time…

in the morning…
arora’s house. .
Sarla comes into pragya’s room and was shocked to see all sleeping…she shouted to get up… rv ,pragya, kunj all gets up..kunj says i slept here …oh dad will not leave me..pragya plse call my dad and inform..she says ok and calls manohar uncle and says ..uncle. .kunj slept here only…manohar cuts the call.pragya says I informed..meanwhile rv sees bulbul sleeping and says..see we are in tension..madam sleeping beauty is in sleep and takes a bucket full of water and pours on her…bulbul says ohhhhh……why did you do like this…and takes an oil bottle from her dressing table and chased rv…both runs finally bulbul pours oil on rv ‘s head …bulbul says rv bhai…aunty worried tat you will not keep oil so I poured it and takes a selfie with him….rv smirks at her …and bulbul asked all to come and they takes a groupfie…

in the college. …
abhi,purab ,tanu,aliya ,twinkle, ishani were waiting for all. finally pragya,rv,kunj ,bulbul comes…
abhi asked pragya …can I ask you onething…pragya says ofcourse…abhi asked you and rv …both lives each other???? pragya ,rv,bulbul ,kunj looks shocked for a minute and started laughing…others are confused…pragya says…me…rv
..love…..oh good joke…rv says arey abhi …you think we are lovers ….very funny…tanu says guys stop laughing…
all controlled themself. …pragya then says we are not lovers but good friends…and you know we are relations….these two are my cousins
.our parents will not talk with each others but we will talk and moreover these two are very close to me from my childhood…I am very font of my father…when he left us these two supported me…meanwhile pragya was standing in between rv and kunj
..they hugs sidely…abhi says I am sorry. ..pragya says it’s ok…and looks at watch..oops..it’s time to submit record. ..I will see you later…and runs…kunj says hey wait me too coming nd both runs..abhi asked for record submission why are they running lyk this..rv says because of angry Bird…all says angry Bird..rv says it’s their staff who used to be always angry…so angry Bird…tanu says it’s tym I am also leaving…abhi and purab too went..

ranveer comes near ishani…ishani jumps back of aliya…aliya says why are you fearing lyk tis he is our friend…ranveer forwards his hand towards ishani and asked friends ,she says yes ….

all leaves..as college overs…
aiya, twinkle, ishani were in their room ishani’s phone rings…she takes the call…hello…rv says hey tis is ranveer ..I thought let’s we hang out this evening…but before ishani could speak rv cuts the call. ..

ishani says this to aliya and twinkle. ..aliya says may be he is in love with you…ishani says no i am not going to meet …I am afraid…aliya says arey baba…go and meet and twinkle will come with you…ishani hugs aliya…aliya says everythg wil be fyn …

rv comes to pragya’s home…pragya asked arey you …in this evening great …what..rv says i don’t have tym to listen to ur stupid lectures
..say which will suit me and shows a yellow and white t-shirt. . pragya says yellow…rv throws the yellow t-shirt ..pragya asked then why did you asked me? ranveer says you want me to be an obedient boy but I lyk to be a chocolate boy..pragya says arey …wait and combos his hair…rv says thanks after pragya comb his hair but he collapses his hair and asked how am I? pragya says bad..rv says thank you and leaves. ..pragya says stupid. ….

he is waiting in a cafe where he asked ishani to meet…ishani comes with twinkle and both sits opposite to rv…twinkle says excuse me…I will come and leaves…ishani was frightened and asked why he called her? ranveer says to say love…ishani says how dare you…wait I Wil say to abhi bhai…rv says arey wait. ..I mean I called you bcoz to say love but it doesn’t means I love you…I love your friend twinkle….ishani was shocked…almost don’t know wat to speak…she was silent till the end nd twinkle and rv had some talk…ishani feels jealous on rv
…twinkle says ok it’s tym.. lets see later. .. and both leaves…rv says oh meri jealous queen. ..hope she is at top of anger ….

rv comes to pragya’s home sees kunj ,pragya, abhi, purab …rv says hi.. all are here…pragya ..call aliya,twinkle,Ishani …pragya calls them….abhi asked why….rv says i got tickets for car race …lets go..pragya says but and sees kunj …
and sits near him…rv says arey racer come on…let’s see …I am sure there is no one to beat you and all gets ready…

after the race….
kunj stands alone..twinkle comes and says why are you standing alone…kunj says there must me a luck. .. but I don’t hav it…
twinkle says trust me …you will become a good racer…wait and watch…kunj looks on twinkle…

pragya sees it and turns towards the moon and looks at it…abhi comes and asked why are you standing alone here and looking at tat moon…pragya says i am praying to God to keep my friends and family happy…abhi asked ok but looking at noon…pragya says my dad told when we are wishing something before noon…it will surely come true….abhi looks suprisingly and yhinks how good she is by heart….

next day….
in college… the principal announces that there is an intercollege culturals…
pragya says let’s join and be a team…abhi asked you know to sing…I know only tat…pragya says arey …I have an idea. ..you know in our gang all of them have talents…abhi asked what you have? bulbul says arey abhi bhai…she is professional dancer….she know salsa,waltz,….I am professional singer ….
pragya says rv can play drums…kunj is well-known for playing keyboard..
abhi says here purab is well-known for playing guitar and these three are also knows dance….and abhi pragya together says here we go…..

pragya asked what’s our team name…all gets thinking…

precap
tanu asked how can you leave me abhi ….for this so called friends…you know I am in love with you..you asked me to wait… but during culturals you should have prefered me rather than these guys…pragya says it’s okay I am leaving……..rv and kunj says without our fuggie we are not coming..
.

hope you all love it..

Credit to: Ria Cassandra

78 comments

  1. Ff reader

    Hello dear your episodes are really awesome but i feel that twinkle is not being given much role with kunj .
    If you would add twinkle’s more part then it would be more awesome.
    Do not take it as negative instead try to improve. And once again your ff is really bery good.
    Hope you write well in the same way

  2. durga

    Superb yaar sooooooooo cute… Then my one n only kind request to u I thk tz ff more r less all r reading whether it s a abhigya fans ishveer fans r twinkle n kunj so I suggest n also want u to express all couple scenes with equal n their own way of cuteness according to ur wish BT only one thg tat u give importance to all couple equally it’s my humble request… If I’m wrong r hurt u I’m sorry… I dint mean so I felt it so I just comment my opinion.. Then ur ff s nice n today episode s awesome n cute… I love it…

  3. sana

    Oh love my naughty Ranvi chocolate boy and ria dr l like it.superb.surely ishveerians will support u dr.waiting for next…….

  4. Nivethitha

    Ria u r awesome and today’s episode was amazing I am loving it. Ria tell to naveena that we all are waiting for her ff and I wish for her speedy recovery. Get well soon naveena. Ria u r amazing keep going and upload the next part soon dr..

  5. Sharmi

    Superbbbb yaar…..nd especially their frendship……it reminds me my frnds……thanks 4 giving such a wonderful memorable thoughts back 2 me…….nd its really nice…..i m waiting 4 abhigya scenes nd also more frendship yaar……..

  6. rookey rookers - 4 ever the ♡♥lover of ranvi

    i agree with sree . nice na . . ishu jealous on ranvi . so nice . i love austrslia . and take care ur cousin hope she will alright soon .

  7. Dhruva{ A DIE HARD FAN OF SHADHIKA }

    Thanks ria for ishveer scene I love dear…..and ya Ranveer is really a chocolate boy……….keep updating like this only dear……

  8. Reji

    Ria this is awesome and I hope naveena will get well soon and continue her ff but waiting for the next part

  9. Sabanana

    I think there’s going to be a tragedy at the end ( Booz I have read the book “the fault in our stars”

    • sudha

      may be not sabanana since ria said she only took title from that book and see the stars all these pairs are faulty only twinki loves uv but marries kunj ,abhi loves tanu but marries pragya eeshani loves ranveer bur married to some one else(i didnt watch meri ashiki tumse hi so dont no much aboyt it) and hope story ends as we wish

  10. ria Cassandra

    thanks guys hope you all read it…and your comments are making me to post here.sorry for inconvinence. ..
    and how much comments for naveena..but it’s tym to say that she had an accident and now she is in coma….I don’t know whether she will continue or not…..hope she will get soon….

    continuing my story…..
    PRAGYA asked what’s our group name? abhi says wait i will think ….
    abhi says DE LA SOUL…..how is it…pragya asked wats de la soul…abhi says arey…it means TRUELY” OF THE” SOUL….rv says it sounds good…all says super…pragya was silent..abhi asked what happened..pragya says hey ..this doesn’t suit…kunj ask why you think so…abhi says it’s my dream band name…I hav offered you…plse don’t anger me…
    meanwhile rv was looking at ishani who is speaking to twinkle and aliya…ishani noticed that rv is looking at her and looks away from him….he calls her…as she comes ,rv drags ishani a side and says hey…I want….ishani looks into his eyes…rv continues ….I want….twinkle’s phone number…ishani says i will text you…rv says ok and asked her not to forget….ishani nods and turns saying…what the hall ..he is thinking about me…
    rv : oh my dear jealous girl..you look beautiful…in anger too..I must say…hope you will say I love you and I will win the bet …

    fb shown…
    while rv was crossing…yuvi calls him..rv asked what?…. yuvi says hey…chocolate boy…rv says i would have killed you on the day you misbehave with bulbul…yuvi says uh…it’s your ….ha..ok ..ok…yuvi says you are a looser..you had lost in the last year intercollege culturals…rv says i am not a loser. .and I can do anythg…yuvi asked anythg….rv nods yes…yuvi says then a bet …you have to make ishani…tats abhi’s sister to say I love you to you before culturals …rv says if I did so…yuvi says i will do anythg you say…and both challenges and rv went…
    yuvi to himself….see rv because of you …you gonna seperate….wait and watch….
    fb ends…

    all were practising…and abhi says though pragya is a professional dancer, she may dance with me at last…all nods ok .. ..but they heard claps from behind…it’s tanu…tanu says ….wow abhi…great.. you forget me bcoz of these so called friends…tanu holds abhi’s cheeks saying …abhi i could not believe you forget me..you know I proposed you a year back. .you asked me to wait. ..till you become a rockstar…I am waiting Abhi. ..but you…and pretends to cry…
    purab says to aliya and ishani ,again she starts of her drama. ….

    pragya says I am sorry I had come between you i think …its okay you guys carry on…I am leaving..abhi you can make tanu at my position….
    and leaves…rv and kunj says with out our pragya we are not coming…and they leaves…bulbul says without my di I Wil not come.and leaves..
    abhi then sees only five people and says to tanu. ..tanu ..for you I can’t lose four people..you are doing modelling…hence you know to act. ..but..a singer.. a dancer..no…I need them ..so you please..tanu says you are asking me to leave ryt ok…as your wish and leaves ..

    pragya was standing alone…rv nd kunj sees her and goes..rv says arey doctor…I have severe pain in my heart and acts he have pain..pragya in panicked voice ask where…rv says …ha….here…and shows heart…pragya beats at his shoulder and ask why it’s paining…rv says bcoz my friend is sad…pragya says it’s not lyk it..rv says leave madam.next tym we can see. ..
    bulbul comes there followed by abhi…all turns to see him..arey tanu is not coming …you people have to do this…pragya please come…bcoz of you I am losing 3 people..bulbul asked so you don’t lose my di..abhi says ofcourse she is main part…plse pragya. .pragya says yes…

    rv calls twinkle…she picks up…rv says hey tis is ranveer. .twinkle says to ishani …this is rv..she ask her to put in speaker…rv without noticing it says hey twinkle I need your help…plse can you act as my girl friend before ishani…twinkle asked why. ..rv says to make her jealous. ..and I am in deep love with her…can you help me…ishani sighs to say yes…twinkle says ok…

    ishani to herself…so he wants to make me jealous…let’s see rv tmrw…and smiles…

    to make clear…
    though rv bets to yuvi he unknowingly starts to love ishani…

    hope you all love it…comment…

    • sudha (a twinj fan)

      i dont know who is naveena but i hope she will get well soon and god give her strength to come back and ria your dedication in writing ff is too good and i started loving it and please make some twinj scenes

    • Reji

      Feeling sad for naveena though I can’t meet her but my prayers are always with her definitely naveena will get well soon ria and she will be back by writing her ff and ria u r doing a great job and ur ff is so nice keep going

    • durga

      Superb yaar today’s episode s also awesome n my question s till 24 feb u vl update ur episode in comment box itself ah r else only tz episode…. Thn sooooo sad 4 naveena don’t worry all our prayers vl make her get well soon… I have full confidence in my prayers n others too tat God vl listen to our prayers n make her well as soon as possible…

  11. Ria its owsome then dry to use this page no one has updates their ff on Sunday i was madly waiting for mistake love of life definitely may be and etc sugashini has stopped writing past month pls do write I am waiting for story of opposite attracts each other

  12. Vanessa

    A big f to this ff whoever writing this well now I don’t like to read these ff’s India people just made stupid stories don’t get mad because I’m also half Indian lol

  13. sudha

    a request from me ria please show aliya as positive character in this ff she is very beautiful but her character dominates her beauty if her character is positive then she looks very cute and pretty and add some one else for aliya s love please please and off course u are having ur own idea of writing but if posible think about it and not least ur ff is interesting

  14. thanks ria for d update…. it was so sweet of abhi… i truely luved it… nd i am really happy as there were no updates on sunday… n u posted ur nxt prt in d comment.. that was really sweet of u…. luv u loads… nd i will pray for naveena… for a speedy recovery….

  15. sana-always loves my Ranvi♥♥♥

    It was superb ria.thank u for the update.ishveer is rocking in this ff.love it.
    So sad about naveena surely she will be in my prayer.

  16. Dhruva{ A DIE HARD FAN OF SHADHIKA }

    Wow ria its too much magnificent I hope that fake love of Ranveer is really gonna to be real love soon but before he should be sorry…..like Ishani really fall in love then Ranveer say I was just pranking with you to win the bet……she gets shocked and then Ranveer realise his love and apologise……like that only………..do any one agree…..
    AND YA DEAR PLS TAKE CARE OF OUR NEW FRIEND HOPE THAT GOD WILL MAKE HER WELL SOON………FEELING SORRY……..AND YOU’RE TOO GOOD SISTER YAAR RIA YOU’RE COMPLETING THE DREAM OF YOUR SISTER……

  17. rose

    Ria… Wt happened to naveena in coma… plz take of her .. am didnt see her but my prayer ill be with her always…convey my msg to her ria.. Hi my frnd naveena.. my prayer ll always with u.. get well soon.. return with a great come back… we r all waiting for u frnd.. get well soon

  18. ria Cassandra

    guys…hence I could not upload in this comment..it’s quite uncomfortable. u can read it on fb in ria’s the fault in our stars…

  19. somiya

    Reji ur doing an amazing job i m shocked about naveena May God bless her i don’t know her personally but my prayers are with her……

  20. amu

    I love ur ff..plz.. make as aliya positive character nd there r no twinj scenes hope that in ur next ff there will be twinj scenes nd rithika is not in abhi’s gang

  21. Sharmi

    Its very shocking yaar…..plzzz naveena di get well soon…..we pray for u…….nd ria its really nice….nd y all other writers didn’t post any update…..plzz i m waiting yaar….

  22. hey sharmi… actually tellyupdates is nt accepting any written matter till wednesday morning… so v hav to wait till thn dear…. n ria plzz take care of naveena… she will be fine for sure ….

    • Sharmi

      Oooo kk i m waiting 4 all d epi…..plzzz telly upload it fast….nd also roa plzz take cara of naveena di….our prayers are there 4 her….she will get well soon…..

  23. rookey rookers - 4 ever the ♡♥lover of ranvi

    i dont know naveena still she will get up soon i pray 4 her . very nice waiting 4 next

  24. shree

    What happened all of u no one update their ff from 3 days… we r waiting yar.. so please make it clear all r continue to write the ff or not…

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