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Our Fate: Twinj os (Part 3)

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Thank you everyone for your lovely comments.Hey chiku I will try to continue my ff if possible

Part 3
At sarna mansion
Kunj came back to home and straight away went to his room.
Kunj’s POV
Wow! I can’t believe that khushi is my daughter..and my twinkle is back..!! Iska matlab twinkle Mumbai mein hei thi. After 4 years I have seen her nothing has changed in her that innocence, cuteness and that glow in her face..but one thing has changed now she has become more responsibility women.
(Suddenly his face turned pale) I did very bad with twinkle.Mein ne use kya kya nahi kaha?Aaj twinkle aur meri beti itni mushkil zindagi jee rahe hai toh iska reason mein join.Twinkle loved me so much but what I did? I disrespected her love even I told her to abort…..chee!!! I feel ashamed of myself

POV ends
He had tears in his eyes.He was crying badly..
K:I did very bad to her so now I m getting this punishment. None is there with me.Even mom also left me and went near god now I m lifeless
He cried a lot and slept there only.Next day kunj arrived to park before khushi.She was coming near him and he was just adoring his daughter and sometime he came back to sense and controlled his emotions.
Ku:ohho!! Dost u r here earlier than me
K:I have a surprise for u

Ku:surprise?
K:yup now come with me
He made her to sit it the car
Ku:dost where r we going?
K:I said na its a surprise so u just come with me
After 15 minutes the car stopped at children’s mall.Kunj went near khushi and opens the door.She holded his hand softly and came out of the car
K:so this is your surprise (pointing towards mall)
Ku(surprised +happy):oh wow! Mall..!!! It was my wish to do shopping in this mall and my mom promised me that she will take me to this mall on my 5th year birthday
K:did u like the surprise?
Ku:ya I loved it

They went inside the mall.They first enter a clothes shop.Kunj ordered those shop vendors to show the costliest and preetiest dress for khushi.Then they took khushi to change the dress.After sometime she came out wearing and pink color frock which was having a diamond and pearl work on it.Kunj was having lil tears seeing his angel in that beautiful dress.He went near her and pecked a kiss on her forehead
K:you are looking like angel
Ku:(attitude) I know I m an angel from before only
Kunj smiled at her and thought
K(in his mind):she is same like her mom full of attitude and tashan
They took the dress and went to toys shop.They purchased many toys and after that they went to pastries corner
K:which pastry you want?

Ku:swiss choco pastry
K:bilkul mujh pe gayi hair
He ordered the pastry.They enjoyed the pastry and went back to home.

Precap:twinkle to know about khushi and kunj’s meeting

17 Comments
  1. Angel20

    It was amazing! Loved Kunj-Khushi relation👌 it was really awesome! Post the next one soon! And a longer one next time.

    With Love

  2. Ramya

    Soumyad
    Awesome amazing fabulous loveed it I’m eager about next post pldsss asap

  3. It’s was awesome episode i loved it to the core and the precap is making me more and more eager plssssss can you post the next asap I’m really desperate to read it

  4. Roshini125

    Do continue soon….gowing on nicely

  5. SidMin

    Just loved it Khushi and Kunj rocked the day awesome just waiting for the next episode to know Twinkle’s reaction
    Post soon Love you ❤❤

  6. Superb episode but aap twinkle ko pta chala toh shayad vo mana ker de… khushi ko kunj se milne ke liye…

  7. Chiku

    Woaah it’s amazing 😄😄😄😉😉😉😉😉lovely. Kunj khushi sooo cute. Hoping to see twinj meeting in next episode. Post soon. Plzzz try continuing ur ff also
    Post soon
    Love u😉

  8. Wow its just awesome… Luv the father,daughter bond…..luv it…post soon and do cnt….

  9. It is amezing but small one plz make long and asap soon too 😍😍😍😍😗😙😙

  10. Anshikajainn

    Soooòoo cuttteeeee

  11. Ayu

    🙄🙄🙄kunj!!! Thats bastard! Hate him for that…with which right did he call khushi his daughter and brought him for shopping???!
    But i liked the epi….atleast he was shameful and remorseful of his deeds…but i still want himnto be treated like a dog😌
    Loving it…cont soon😘

  12. Aanya_pandey

    Amazing.. superb too godd jst loved it

  13. AWESOME FAB WHAT NOT LOVED IT WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT EPISODE

  14. Amazing episode 😘😘
    N kunj khushi bonding is fabulous
    Post next episode soon

  15. SidMin23

    Episode was cute and I love khushi and kunj bond and precap seen interesting twinkle get to know about kunj and khushi meeting wating to know twinkle reaction on that. Do post ASAP.

  16. Simiyy

    Enjoyed reading it
    Try to make it longer please
    Post soon

  17. Baby

    ohhhh god………..
    sooooo cute loved d episode 😀
    bt kya hoga ohhh god amazing 😀
    loved it♥♥♥♥♥

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