WHEN FATE NO LONGER FAVOURS YOU-Twinj OS(Shot 3)

WHEN FATE NO LONGER FAVOURS YOU-Twinj OS(Shot 3)

So here i am again with the last part…i am glad that u’re liking it! Its been a short yet sweet journey…
Thank u soo much for ur warmth! 😘❤️

The links to the prev parts are right here:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/fate-no-longer-favours-twinj-osshot-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/fate-no-longer-favours-twinj-osshot-2/

Now lets get on with this part…

❤️________ready set go________❤️

BACK TO NORMAL

Twinj were having an intense eyelock, that of pain….that of guilt.

Twinkle broke the eyelock and slapped Kunj hard across the face.

T-HOW DARED U DO THAT?? WHAT DID U THINK WHILE DOING SO??!! HOW COULD U TAKE SUCH A BIG STEP ON UR OWN! I HAD FULL RIGHTS ON HIM KUNJ! WHY????

She collapsed on the floor, crying hard. Kunj looked down, feeling guilty of his doings. His eyes teared up and he turned to go.

Twinkle noticed this and wiped her tears and got up. She held him tightly by his wrist.

(Shouting)
T-U cant leave without answering me!!! How could u kill MY baby???!!
How could u be so selfish????
U had listened to his heartbeats right???? Then how could u be so insensitive Kunj??? MY BABY!
She cried…

Kunj, angered, pinned her to the wall n shouted while looking straight in her eyes…

K-OUR baby!!!! N i was selfish??? Yes i was! But what about u huh?? How could u hide such a big thing from me??? Had u considered me worthy of sharing such an important thing then maybe we could have avoided it! But no! I dont seem to be important in your eyes! Thats why u took such a big decision without even telling me!
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N yes! I heard his heartbeat! But u know what told me that the decision was right??? This!!

He said taking her hand and placing it on his chest, where she could feel his heartbeat…

She melted for a second but the next, she could still hear the last hearbeats of her baby(in the hospital)…

Twinkle pushed him away
T-OHH! SO U TOOK REVENGE OF THAT??! JUST BECAUSE I DID NOT TELL U ABOUT THE COMPLICATION!!!! WHERE DID U GET THIS CHEAP MENTALITY FROM HUH???

N CHATAAK

This time Kunj slapped her.
K-DONT U DARE TWINKLE! How could u ever think so?
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U are the one selfish here! Anyways…i am guilty in ur eyes…so as a punishment…i am going away from u.

Twinkle’s eyes teared up yet again. She was shocked listening to his words. She was not able to react. She was frozen at her place.

Kunj picked his suitcase which was fallen on the floor.

Twinkle fell on her knees in tears. She just stared at the floor.

Kunj moved towards the door but stopped at the door. He slightly turned towards Twinkle.

K-Ur in very much pain as i snatched what u loved so much right? Do u have the slight idea of how difficult it was for me to make this choice? U were on one side and on the other my baby…on both the sides, i would have lost a part of myself….but i guess u can’t see that….
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U risked ur life for ur baby n i understand u Twinkle. But have u ever thought what leela maa and i would have gone through had anything happened to u? U can feel the pain ur going through…u were going to inflict that pain to us…would u have been able to forgive urself??? U wouldnt…as i am not able to now….We couldnt have afforded to lose u…leela maa would have been broken Twinkle and i…i would have probably come to join u up there…

Twinkle looked up at him.
Kunj was crying and his eyes was red. He put on his shades to hide his sorrow.

K-i will come back to u only when ur able to forgive me…if ur able to someday…but i will never be able to….
N he left the room.

Twinkle burst out into tears on the floor.

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(I Am including a song here. Please put ur earphones on cuz only then u will be able to feel the pain that they’re going through)

CHANNA MEREYA from AE DIL HAI MUSHKIL is playing in the BG

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ACCHA CHALTA HOON
DUAAON MEIN YAAD RAKHNA
MERE ZIKR KA ZUBAAN PE SWAAD RAKHNA (x2)

(Kunj is shown going in the car while all their moments are shown…)

DIL KE SANDOOKON MEIN
MERE ACHCHE KAAM RAKHNA
CHITTI TAARON MEIN BHI MERA TU SALAAM RAKHNA

(Twinkle wipes her tears and looks at kunj and her wedding pic. She kisses it

T-no kunj i wont let u go! I have already lost something precious from my life…i wont lose u now.

She cries)

ANDHERA TERA MAINE LE LIYA
MERA UJLA SITAARA TERE NAAM KIYA
CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA MEREYA BELIYA
O PIYA….(x2)

(She runs towards the door)

CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA MEREYA BELIYA
O PIYAA….(x2)
O..PIYA…

(She was going to get out of the room when something pulls on her dress.

On the other side Kunj is shown arriving at the airport.

Twinkle hurriedly tries to free her dress when she notices her dress stuck in the same nail on the craddle. Her eyes tears up again and she falls on the ground beside the craddle, recalling her pregnancy, how she got the news. She is very much hurt and is only crying hard)

CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA
CHANNA MEREYA, O PIYA..
(x2)

(Kunj is about to check in…)

TERE RUKH SE APNA RAASTA
MOD KE CHALA
CHANDAN HOON MAIN
APNI KHOOSHBOO CHHOD KE CHALA

‘STOP!!!’
Kunj stops n turns. He finds Twinkle there, sweating and breathing heavily…

She cryingly walked towards him. But as she came nearer to him she started to run and literally jumped on him n hugged him tightly. Kunj wrapped his arms around her waist and responded passionately. Both were crying but Kunj still had his shades on.

T-i am sorry…i love u! Dont go away! Dont leave me…
She said, still in tears…

K-never ever
He said kissing her head.

They broke the hug n kunj cupped Twinkle’s face.
K-I am soo sorry Twinkle…pls forgive me

T-shhh
She said placing her finger on his lips

T-we will move on and forget what happened. I was wrong…that had to be out decision…i was selfish…i am sorry.
She placed her head on her chest as in a hugging position

K-no!! I am sorry…ur right….it was our decision…but i took that alone….i am so remorseful for this. That situation was such that i…

T-shhh…no need…i want to forget all of this now. But promise me u’ll never ever hurt me again!

K-i promise…n u will never hide anything whatsoever from me.

T-promise.

Kunj hugged her loosely

A tear fell from Twinkle’s eye and it fell on Kunj’s hand…

K-what happened jaan??

T-it was my prince right?
She said controlling her tears…

K-no, it was my princes…
He could not complete his word, having a heavy heart.

Twinkle looked at him with teary eyes n hugged him tight.

Kunj wiped his tears n said:
‘Dont worry next time we will try for twins….what say??’
He said trying to lighten up the mood, in a slightly naughty tone.

Twinkle broke the hug and looked at him and they both gave a slight smile to each other while Twinkle shied away a little…

They walked back home, hands in hands…

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N…n….n…i dont know how many of u will agree to the final decision…it is a sensitive matter…but…i feel that no mistake is so big that it cannot be fixed. Both faltered…at the end u need to bring ur relationship on track. However…never at the price of ur self esteem and dignity. Nothing holds more importance than that.

❤️___________THE END___________❤️

Here it was…i hope u guys enjoyed this short story….
Do comment…even the silent readers!

Sorry for not replying back to your comments. I had a hectic day…i was doing revision for nearly 6 hours non stop, including tuitions. N to some extent…it was out of pure laziness. I am being quite honest and i am sooo sorry about it. I will definitely reply to the comments for this part. Thank u guys for supporting😘

This story is very special as this was my theme for the exams so pls share ur views!

Take care sweeties!
Love you all❤️

32 comments

  1. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Wowwww its awesome 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍lovely

    Waahhh meri orange kitna kamaal likhti hai tu. Yeh kamaal dhamaal baumisaaal thain. Mujhe bohooot acha laga yeh padhna. 😍😍😍😁😁😁😁😁 olz adjust with this shit hindi😂😂😂😂😂
    I really loved the theme and story nd tu english exam mien top maaregi mera aashirwaad tere sath hai😂😂😋
    Love u orange 🍊

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Awww!!! Thank u for such lovely comments my pumpkin!!! Exam me top karun ya naa karun…i am glad that i managed to make ur heart happy!!! Love u❤️

  2. Ayu

    |Author

    Hey guys! I hope u loved this last one. Now i have something to share. Ritzi, the writer of ‘This is when the feeling sinks in…’ wants to pass pn a message. She is quite stuck and is not being able to write her ff. In that case, she is thinking of discontinuing her ff. If you guys are willing to wait for her, she will post but it will take some time. Show her all your support like me and do let me know in the comments.

    Love u all
    Ayu n Ritzi

    • Meeta

      |Registered Member

      Aww.
      Will wait for her.
      Tell her, I think of her FF every now and then.
      I want her to COMPLETE Twinj’s incomplete LOVE story.
      Will wait.
      Send my love.

    • Lovely

      |Registered Member

      Ayu di..this was really heart touching..I lived this piece of writing.. Really Saying from heart…too good😃
      And yes Tell Ritzi to take her own time…there’s no need to hurry up and don’t dare discontinue…
      Take ur Time Ritzi…We can wait for u😃

      And Ayu di..Love u😘

  3. Sushmitha

    Fabulous ayu ur writing is a big treat for us and this was beyond words loved it and plz post ur ff soon

  4. SidVee

    Hey Ayu! It was an amazing story.. loved the storyline.. and you will definitely get full marks as this was an awesome theme.. keep writing more ❤

    And plz tell ritzi to continue her ff.. i really love it and i’m waiting for it.. i dont mind waiting for her ff for some more days 🙂

  5. sneha

    Amazing story I loved it
    Please listen to me can I buy JIO SIM
    Please tell me its advantage n disadvantage
    Please tell me if anyone have bought it
    And if anyone then please tell that u are happy to buy it or REGRETING for buying it please tell me its a request please tell me please please pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

  6. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Wow, Ayu.
    The 3 shots .
    Wow.
    It was just wow.
    It left me spellbound.
    Means, how could you write so very well.
    I guess, u should be writing more of such stuffs.
    Loads of love ♥ ♥

  7. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Ayu di !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Srrrryyyyyyyyyy……Arre for not commenting in the previous one..
    Sry……..it was soooooo lovely….. plsssshhhh keep writing…
    Nd yeah tell ritzi di that we’ll wait…..bt she shouldn’t discontinue..
    Love u……

  8. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey ayu the OS was amazing…I thoroughly enjoyed it from the start to end…do write like this OS…

    Ayu tell ritzi to continue her ff…I love her ff so much and it’s one of my favorite ffs…everyday I think of her ff…tell her I don’t mind waiting her ff…

  9. Saira

    It was AWESOME
    I loved it soooooo much
    Keep writing more..💗😌
    And yes for ritzi we will…we’ve always waited for her….and we will wait..no issues but don’t she dare to discontinue TwinJs incomplete love story she has to complete whenever she will…. will always wait for her..
    Loads of love

  10. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Ayu I was waiting fr dis n finally u posted it I loved IT specially song wala part was superb heart touching n msg u gave was behind words dear srsly loved it to core n love u n according to me dis was simply superb marvellous Awesome

  11. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Omg …. 😢😢😢😢 meri aankhen bhar aa chukii hain ….. itna achhaa … achhaa bhi ni itna amazing great ….. I loved it …… 😘😘😘😘😘

  12. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Ayu it was so nice and sweet 😍😍 Simply loved it 😘😘😘 What an effort you put over these 3 shots and it turned out to be amazing! Good job! ❤❤❤

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

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