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THE FATE (Kundali Bhagya FanFiction) CHAPTER-4 : DECISION ARE TO BE MADE (MAHAEPISODE)

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HELLO GUYS, TODAY WE ARE GOING TO HAVE THE MAHAEPISODE OF THE FANFICTION(BECAUSE I THINK STORY NEED SOME TWIST AND IS LAGGINH BEHIND MOVING TOO SLOW I THINK THAT’S WHY TODAY’S EPISODE WILL DOUBLE OF THE EPISODE PRIMARILY COMING.
AND GUYS DON’T FORGET TO COMMENT IF U LIKE THE FANFICTION. WAITING FOR THE COMMENTS AS THEY ONLY MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE MORE OF THIS. THANKS.
CHAPTER-4

IN THE LUTHRA MANSION
RASHI CALLS EVERYONE IN THE HALL.
RASHI: good news today. I have found the right girl for RISHABH . I am sure u will like her RISHABH . But PLZZ I am warning u not to ask any ridiculous question to PREETA.
RISHABH : ok mom, as u say.
RASHI : can I ask u a question?
RISHABH : well are u ready for marriage?
SAMEER: oh oh Mami . Can we talk about this later. Let’s party.
KAREENA: bhabhi, u will always be sad. I am saying to u think again. These low profile girl are not good for our house. SHERLIN is best, I insist u think once .
RASHI : maybe u are right. But once u meet PREETA . I am dead sure . U will like her. She is very charming.
But KAREENA have another plan, she has decided that RISHABH will marry the girl of her choice. After all it’s all about her reputation. PREETA is going to suffer a lot.

AT SHERLIN HOUSE
SHERLIN gets a call from some unknown number. She picks the phone.
SHERLIN: hello who is there? what can I do for u?
Woman: if u want to have revenge on LUTHRAS come here. I am messaging u the address. Then we will talk.
SHERLIN goes to the respective address.

SOMEWHERE AT SOME HOUSE
SHERLIN: so u want revenge . Right . Can I know why?
WOMAN: that’s none of your buisness .do u want revenge or not?
SHERLIN: well atleast show your face or tell me your name.
WOMAN: well there is no need of u to know me. U just stick to the plan I told u. I gurrantee u . You will marry RISHABH for sure.
SHERLIN: whatever. Ok done.

AT LUTHRAS MANSION
IN RISHABH ROOM.
For the first he was thinking about something else. He had decided he will marry. First he was not ready and when her mother asked him is he ready. He was speechless. But after the meeting. He felt different. He feel like every missing things in his life are completed. He was recalling the DATE cherishing it.
(ABOUT 2 HRS. BEFORE.
IN THE CAFÉ
RISHABH: so what do you pursue?
PREETA: well I am a physiotherapist.
RISHABH: good . So do u want to work after marriage.( He felt like a coward, asking rubbish to PREETA . For the first time he felt a little shy.)
PREETA: well. Yes I have to support my family. But it totally depends on the chance. I don’t want to hurt anyone.
RISHABH: well this is the most important question. I am asking u to answer from mind and heart as it will decide our future. What is most important thing for u LOVE, FAMILY, OR MONEY.
PREETA : well FAMILY. And then …. Wait. What is this all. Mr. RISHABH life is not a deal. It’s about compromise to fit together.
RISHABH: oh sorry!( Well he actually wants to say, many other things like “I am buisnessman and everything is deal for me” but he was speechless. Mingled in her thoughts.)
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PRESENT
RISHABH was lost in her thoughts. When he hears his name being called by his DADI.

IN THE HALLL
EVERYONE WAS THERE.
RISHABH: what happened DADI? Is there something serious.
RASHI: well we want to ask . Your opinion. Are u ready to marry PREETA.?
RISHABH:(he was very overjoyed. It seems he was waiting for this moment only) yes, she is nice.
RASHI: well this means, she passed in your test. Oh I am very happy!
KAREENA: this means she is very clever. Bhabhi when are we going to meet her?
RASHI: soon. RISHABH could u bring PREETA here tomorrow.
RISHABH: ok mom. As u say.
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EVERYBODY GOES.
SARLA CALLS AND RASHI AND TELLS HER THAT PREETA HAS ALSO AGREED FOR MARRIAGE.
RASHI WAS VERY HAPPY.(IT SEEMS EVERYTHING IS GOING SMOOTH. NOTHING IS WRONG. SHE WAS VERY HAPPY).

AT ARORA HOUSE
IN PREETA’S ROOM
She was confused. She had said yes to marriage . But she was not sure , she is ready for it. After all she didn’t thought that all of this will go so fast, that will not have time to think about it.
( ABOUT AN HOUR AGO
SARLA: PREETA are u ready for marriage. RISHABH has said yes. Now It all depends on u. But I will say take time. As these decision are very delicate.
PREETA: mom I am ready for marriage. ( In reality she was not. But she don’t have another option , after all how many years will she wait for the right match.)
)
SHRISTI comes in the room.
SHRISTI: di I heard , from ma that you have said yes to marriage. I am very happy. Hurray, gonna have 3 jjijus all of them rockstar. Well di can I ask u question. Do u really want to do marriage.
PREETA:(SHRISTI shouldn’t have asked this question) yes why not . Is there something wrong ?
SHRISTI: no di, but I just thought. That he is workaholic. He will surely give more important to work everything would be deal for me. Are u sure u want to marry him.
PREETA: well yes u right. But I have decided I can change him. Atleast this much that he respects me and have mine presence felt. ( There was a flickering hope in her, she was ready to change him, to transform him to more social being. After all RISHABH is not bad, he is just different.
SHRISTI: well di it’s your choice. But if u ask me. I will never marry a buisnessman. I have other plans. My husband should be wild and mad like me.
They both laugh.

DOOR BELL RINGS
SARLA OPENS THE DOOR.
SURPRISE!! THEY YELL.
SARLA:( she was overjoyed to see her daughters)I am very happy to see you both after so much time. Atleast now everything is good with u both.
BULBUL: yeah mom! So are we standing here all the day or coming in .
PRAGYA: BULBUL. U will never be right. Why testing mother.
(They come inside and hug each other)
SHRISTI and PREETA also joins them and they have a family time. SARLA band her four daughters.
BUT SOMEWHERE IN HEART PREETA KNOWS THAT THINGS ARE GONNA CHANGE. BUT WHAT SHW DOESNOT KNOW THAT THINGS ARE GOING TO CHANGE FOR THE WORST

AT MORNING RISHABH COMES TO PICK PREETA.
IN THE CAR THEY DIDN’T SPEAI ANYTHING. IT SEEMS LIKE THEY ARE STRANGER. NEVER MET BEFORE.
IN THE LUTHRA MANSION
RASHI do aarti of PREETA and RISHABH. And then ask PREETA to come inside.
KRITIKA: wow bhabhi, u are so beautiful. I really like u. And u think we will be the best. After all I am the only girl here, now I will have u.
PREETA: well u are also very beautiful and charming.
RASHI was admiring PREETA. She was now 100% sure PREETA is made for this family only. After all everyone liked her. Expect two. One hasn’t meet her and the other want this marriage to never happen.
KARAN was coming downstairs. When he sees PREETA there he was awestruck. He thought she is surely here to complain about him. He was trying to hide from him.
RASHI: KARAN , come meet PREETA. She is RISHABH’s fiance.
PREETA sees KARAN and she was fuming .
KARAN : what this can’t be true. She can’t be…
PREETA: what is he doing here. Aunty he is very spoilt.
RASHI : well do u two know each other.
PREETA: yes aunty . I saw him with some girl in the café.
RASHI: well PREETA. U are right my son is very spoilt.
PREETA: ( was dumbstruck) so sorry aunty. I didn’t know he is your son..
RASHI: oh oh. No sorry I know all about him. He is like this only. I am trying to find a girl for her. So that he can be made right. But u know there is not a single right girl who wants to be marry him. All girls are his big fan.
KARAN: oh behenji. So your name is PREETA. Better watch out for me.
PREETA: well my sandals size is 6. Wanna have some .
( Everybody laughs)
KARAN was very embrassed. This girl had made her life so uneasy. But he don’t know why he is always attracted to her.
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SHERLIN COMES IN THE LUTHRAS MANSION.
RASHI : I hope SHERLIN u are not mad at us.
SHERLIN: well aunty. Not at all, I came here as a event manager, KAREENA bus called me. And for a change I am very happy for RISHABH. After all he found her match.
RASHI: we’ll meet PREETA, RISHABH fiance, I am coming in while. U two enjoy.
PREETA: hello.
SHERLIN: hi. So are u willing to marry RISHABH knowing he is workaholic. U must be brave.
PREETA: well he may be. But he is good at heart. And I think I can change him.
Somebody calls PREETA. She goes.
SHERLIN:(to herself) change, I will change your destiny. I will be the one to marry RISHABH. I will make him feel misery for rejecting me. I am here for reason, to destroy the wedding. Well let’s plan the wedding. Isn’t it much time , since I planned any wedding. Ha ha.(she was ready for the revenge)

KARAN WAS IN HIS ROOM WHEN HE GETS A CALL
SAMEER: Bhai , there is problem, u want to play in MPL, but there is one condition….
….
KARAN: what my career Is in risk. I have to do this. I don’t have any choice.
….
PREETA: maybe SHERLIN was right. But I have to try, I have to change RISHABH.
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RISHABH: I will make sure that PREETA never feels bad and lonely here. After all she is going to be my responsibility.

PRECAP:
KARAN: SHERLIN, CAN U MARRY ME. I LOVE U AND I WILL GIVE U EVERY HAPPINESS OF THUS WORLD.
SHERLIN: OH FOR SURE. WHO WILL NOT WANT TO MARRY YHE ROCKSTAR.
SHE HUGS HIM.
RASHI IS HAPPY HEARING THIS.

21 Comments
  1. Shivampahar

    Hey everyone. Hope u like the MAHAEPISODE. If u do PLZZ comment, so that I can put more of long twist episode.

  2. Rehmat

    superb keep writing next post soon

    1. Shivampahar

      thanks rehmat. Any guess who will preeta marry.

  3. Excellent

    1. Shivampahar

      thanks sam. This one world means lot to me.

  4. Rehmat

    karan

    1. Shivampahar

      well not quite right

  5. Rehmat

    oh ok I said because i love preetan

  6. awesome shivam
    so sorry i am unable to reply to your pm’s actually i don’t open my pm
    or rather feel lazy to do so
    but anyways u cn talk wid me here
    lemme introduce myself
    I am polly , 17 yrs old living in rajasthan
    tell me abt u??????

    1. Shivampahar

      Well I am Shivam from kanpur. Did u like the FF, I am writing.

      1. Yaa yaa the story is awesome

  7. Sreelekshmi

    Awesome episode dear 👏👏👏👏 keep writing next episode 😊😊😊

    1. Shivampahar

      thanks i will try to give more intresting turns.

  8. I loved this mahaepisode and want more and more episodes like this …

    1. Shivampahar

      thanks shreya. I will try to give more mahaepisode

  9. Kashu

    This chapter was really awesome yaar.. I loved Rishabh’s and preeta’s meeting… I think rishabh is falling for her.. And preetan scene was also too good.. Waiting for the next part…

    1. Shivampahar

      thanks . I am glad u liked it.

  10. Asana321

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.interesting part.
    Update next part soon

  11. Hey! Shivampahar, u are writing atleast better than that another writer. But could u PLZZ disclose the villian or a hint for PREETAN fan like me. Is this story match for PREETAN or RISHTA. And good characterization by the way. Focusing on every character. And not forgetting anyone. And thanks for giving tribute to kumkum Bhagya my favourite show. Plzzzz bring soon the merge of PRAGYA and Abhi

    1. Shivampahar

      Thanks Sandhya di. I will never disappoint u. And thanks for appreciating the hardwork. And for the villain name it’s a suspense.

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