FANAAH tere ishq mein (Episode 21)

Hey guys , thanks for all your comments and lets start with the episode ;
Links to previous episode:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=FANAAH+tere+ishq+mein
the episode starts with abhay entering the home while rhidhimaa is lost thinking of armaan.

Piya just gave up of her thinking and was enjoying the beautiful praises she was getting.
Abhay entered in with a plastered smile and waved his hand in front of rhidhimaa.
Where are you lost , in my thoughts- abhay asked her smiling.
Rhidhimaa got out of her illusion , she knew that she was again doing the same thing but she couldn’t stop herself , she was not doing it intentionally , it were just her thoughts pushing her towards armaan but she controlled herself , smiled and said : when you always remain in my heart then why will i think about you???

Abhay eyed her while piya smiled as she saw them both smiling at each other, she was happy for them but from some end of her heart came a sound : YOU LOVE ABHAY….
She was boggled and just suppressed these thoughts.
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The day passed like this , abhay –rhidhimaa enjoying while hiding there feelings from each other and piya enjoying with aniket while confused about all these illusions.
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The next day was Sunday and the day passed with the brother –sisters trio enjoying by playing some games , watching rhidhimaa-abhay’s engagement video and all such things.
Abhay was shocked as he was not able to sleep more than 2 hours last night , he was feeling as if his body doesn’t need sleep while armaan was wondering thinking that how he will stop himself from all those craving from blood.
Abhay – armaan both were confused and trying to find the reason for the illusions they see while piya forgot that illusion easily due to her being busy the whole day.
Abhay wanted to consult a doctor while armaan was getting worried over his craving for blood.
On Sunday night:
The time was around 11:30 when a van stopped near the dobriyal mansion, it was dark but we could identify that it was ambulance.
All the dobriyals were standing there except for rhidhimaa.

Piya was crying and hugging aniket and whispered in his ears : bhaiyaa, please forget her, get well soon , i am dying to listen your stories , your jokes , bhaiyaa after five years i met you but you are same , bhaiyaa she must be happy in her life but you are suffering bhaiyaa ,will power is everything , please bhaiyaa…. please…..
She breaked the hug while we see that sugandha was consoling madhu and saying : didi , please don’t be sad , you always go to meet aniket in 2 days so again that will start why to worry , our aniket will be fine soon…….

She too cried saying this while the a doctor said: mr dobriyal , we are trying are best but if aniket doesn’t want to get well then what can we do……something happened….. something is there that we don’t know…….
Piya eyed him tensed and remembered how aniket fell from the terrace.
She thinks : sorry uncle…..i can’t tell you i am sorry …..i can’t put my bhaiyaa in problem….sorry…
Doctor : where rhdihimaa???(he’s close to the family)
Piya tensed : uncle , she won’t let bhaiyaa go back if she’s awake , tomorrow is her birthday so i didn’t wake her up.
He nods and caresses piya’s hair saying : you both sisters love aniket so much ……….
Piya nods while he holds anikets hand and tries to take him towards the ambulance.
Aniket screams : piyaaaaaaa…………. you are sending me…………….. i don’t wanna go…………. they’ll give me electric shocks…………………..i don’t wanna stay away from you please piya……………..piyaaaaaaaaaaaa…………………….
Piya cries bitterly seeing him while rhidhimaa who was sleeping suddenly wakes up by the noise.
She goes near the window to check.
She sees the ambulance and is shocked.

She runs down bare feet , when she reaches down she finds the car going.
She starts running behind the car when all see her and get shocked.
Piya starts running behind her saying : rhidhima…..
Rhidhimaa is running bare feet on road while piya running behind her, both are crying while there’s a vehicle coming in rhidhimaa’s direction.
Piya sees it and saves her in nick of time.
She slaps rhidhimaa in tension while rhidhimaa hugs her crying and says : piya , bhaiyaa is going , please stop him, please i don’t want to loose my bhaiyaa……please piya please……
Piya breaks the hug and says : rhidhimaa , please come with me ……please…… you knew this …. bhaiyaa will have to go……………….please…….(caressing her head) tomorrow is your birthday na……please don’t cry ……please……….
She takes rhidhimaa from there consoling her while rhidhimaa is blank and is walking like a dead.
They reach dobriyal mansion while mr arnab was about to say something when piya stops him by her hand and says whispering : tayaji , she’s not fine thats the reason i didn’t wake her up…..we’ll talk later please……
She was taking rhidhimaa upstairs saying this while rhdhimaa stops her in middle and says : piya , when will bhaiyaa be fine, tell me na…..please……

Piya cries and shouts loudly : when bhaiyaa will himself want this rhidhimaa…………………he doesn’t want to get fine………………….till when will he be thinking of past memories ………………….i don’t know he doesn’t want to get fine……..this is just due to…….
She was saying this when she gets into senses that what she was about to say.
She suddenly stops in middle while mr prem dobriyal comes to her and says angrily : what did you just said …… whats the reason for aniket not getting fine….
Piya just kept her head down while rhidhimaa said : chachu…. she must be saying something else….. listen to her……
Prem shouts : rhidhimaa keep quite, i can take anything but you know that aniket is the soul of this house and she know something which she’s not telling…..piya tell me…
Piya is in the same position while rhidhimaa again : chachu…..if she would be knowing something….she would tell…..i know her……
Prem : i know her better rhidhimaa so stay away from this matter……piya i am asking you something……
Piya : papa….nothing…….

Prem : so you won’t tell??
Sugandha : please prem…. first listen to her ….please…
Madhu : yaa prem please………………………………..
Prem angrily : no bhabhi , sugandha please don’t interfare…
He holds piya’s arm saying this and drags her to her room.

The episode ends here….
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Credit to: Piyali

6 comments

  1. Hi good Epi but I feel that u r dragging it too much. Sry if u felt hurt . Plz put some more scenes between the leads yaa nd try 2 update regularly

    • Piya

      hey blossom ,dear i also felt the same thats why i am thinking to just do a little fast …..but you know i just sometimes start writing and exatrate the scenes , sorry dear…..i also understand so i am not at all hurt ……………..now i’ll try to be a little fast though the scenes in todays episode are important for the storyline so can’t help………………..but i’lll try my best……………be happy dear…………………………..

  2. Maybe somewhere I didnt like it mayb because it was unexpected for me that piya abhay and armaan riddhina will be apart…. I cane across ur fan page first time so dnt know what the story is… Judt it didnt looked interesting.. Sorry yaar bit plz dnt apart arman riddhima atleast plz

    • Piya

      hey roshini dear…………….i am not able to understand your comment fully but i’ll reply in the way i understood………………..dear i was really small when dil mil gaye and pkyek aired so you know i don’t rememebr its story thats why my story is totally new and dear sorry but you just can’t judge a book by its coves page so sorry but by just reading one episode you can’t say that it isn’t interesting …….i am a school going small child so please understand that i am writing it according to my level thats why it isn’t very interesting…
      abhay-piya , armaan -rhihimaa apart i am not able to understand it so can’t reply dear……………………….thanks and sorry if you felt waste of time reading my stories 1 episode dear………………….be happy………………….

  3. Neha

    Hey pia jst b a lil fast fst…thts it otherwise ur story line up is grt..
    About the epi liked the way ritz loves her Bhaiya n al d illusions of love..love u tcr..

    • Piya

      hey neha , i also felt the same so from next episode i’ll try to be fast , please spare me for my mistakes till now and thanks for your constant support …………………be happy dear

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