FANAAH tere ishq mein (Episode 1)


So guys the episode begins with a view of night sky .It is clear that it is a full moon night. The moon is really looking good with all those clouds covering the sky. Then a snow covered little high mountain with forest all around it is shown . that s a miracle that in such snow cover too amazing flowers are covering a small portion of the jungles. All are shining like a bulb due to the glittery unusual fireflies around them. like the sun helps the moon to shine the fireflies are helping the flowers to glow. Among those flowers a girl looking at the most beautiful unusual flower and then suddenly plucking it . she thinks ,” abhay ko pakka acha lagega. Par ye yahan khila kaise.”

(abhay will definitely like it but how can it grow here). Then she hears the sound of a horn and runs from there taking the flower. She reaches in the middle where there is a very small road and a bus leaving . she runs behind the bus screaming ,” arre ruku please , abhay abhay. (please wait abhay abhay) but the bus goes leaving her . she thinks of taking a cab to the hotel where they were going but thinks:wah is sunsan jungle mein specially mere liye cab aayegi naa.(i realy think that a cab come for me in this deserted forest?) but to her surprise she suddenly sees an auto coming . she again thinks : wah kya kismet payi hai.(wah what a miracle). She stops the auto. Auto driver : ji madam . she : woo mujhe wo upar wali pahadi par jo hotel hai na waha jana hai. (I want to go to the hotel there on the top of the mountain) indicating at a grey black looking shadow of a tall building at the peak.

Auto driver : app waha akele jayengi, wo sunsan jagah hai bohut salo pehle rajmahal tha aur phir hotel ban gaya par chala nahi kyunki kaha jata hai ki wahan bhoot the.( do you want to go there it is a deserted area , it was a palace many years ago but a few years ago became an hotel but the hotel didn’t work as it is believed there are ghosts there) . GIRL: nahi mein wahan jaa chuki hun haan thodi ajeeb jagah hai but ap tension mat lijiye bhut jaisa kuch nahi hota . aap mujhe thoda piche utaar digiyega.(no, i went there ,its a little different place but there are no ghost as ghosts doesn’t exist. You leave me a little bit back) she then sits in the auto and thinks: abhay ka birthday to shuru hone wala hai mujhe use wish karna hai, bus to haveli pohunch gayi hogi.

(abhay s birthday is going to start I have to reach there, bus would have reached) on the other hand inside the bus a boy is seen with a black cloth tied on his eyes and many youngsters surrounding him, a boy of almost there age is driving the bus. The boy with black cloth: tum log mujhe kahan leke ja rahe ho hint to do , mein excitement ke mare hi pagal ho jaounga .(where are you taking me please give hint, I will get mad due to excitement) his friend: tension mat le just REST IN PEACE(don’t take tension) the boy: mar dalo mujhe.(yaa kill me) friends: nahi nahi mera matlab tha so ja utha denge, waise bhi ankho ke samne bhi andhera hi hoga.(no, no i mean ‘t to say seep ,i will wake you up as your eyes are tied) the guy: nahi mujhe sab kuch dikh raha hai.(no, i am able to see everything) his friends: teri girlfriend ne dondhe hai, wo itni badi galti nahi kar sakti so jaa.(your girlfriend has searched ,she can’t do such big mistake ,go sleep) the boy lays back on his seat.ont he other hand the auto in which that girl was travelling got punctured . the girl gets out of the auto: bhaiya aap ghar kaise jaoge(how will you go home)

the auto driver: mera ghar niche hi hai , aap kaise jaoge. Aap to bohut jaldi mein thin a.(my home is just her , i will drag the auto but how will you were late) the girl: aap jaiye , mein dekh loongi, abhay tak to pohunchana hi hai( you go, i will see , i have to reach abhay) the auto driver drags his auto downwards. The girl : ab abhay tak kaise pohunchungi , lagta hai is snow cover se hi jana padega, beech jungle se.(how will i reach abhay now, now i will have to take this snow covered jungles route.) she starts to walk through the shortcut forest . she feels a little dizzy and also that someone is following her but keeps moving. Shee suddenly gets a roar and turns . she screams to see red eyes in darkness , feeling down in the snow with that flower in her hands.

Credit to: Piyali


  1. Piya


  2. nisha

    Hey piya so we are friends now. My dear.

    What an episode. Loved it to the core of my heart. But one thing why are you writing hindi +English. Sometime I loose the flow. My jaan loved your story and want more readers for ur story that’s why I tell.

    Karan singh Grover fits perfect. U know Dil Mil gaye me unki chemistry Awesome thi so suits and if u think to make him another vampire than it would be awesome .

    Like Vampire diaries in english I like it too. and you get lots of new stuff if just u want my dear.

    Today episode is a little what can I say Mysterious But I love the confusion and many love too.

    Do update the next soon waiting .

    LOve u friends Keep smiling Once a friend always a friend.

    and Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Devga how r u dear. Misiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing u toooooooooooooooooooo much dear.

    Masakali devga Love u Keep smiling . Always loving u dear.

    Once a friend always a friend.

  3. nisha

    One more thing or you can say a doubt dear.

    Are you a fan of Pyaar ki yeh ek kaahani or you love writing .

  4. Piya

    actually I am writing in both languages because in hindi dialogues look real and many people don ‘t understand hindi and I have watched pyaar ki yeh ek kahani but I forgot story line so i am reading its written updates and and I am loving it so yes I am a fan of PKYEK and abhay , piya and even I like supernatural elements.

  5. nisha

    Sounds like I know It dear. Because You choose name piya the character name itself.

    And the story name fanaa which is the most popular show on Mtv

    and supernatural too.

    Love too know what cook in ur head in this story.

    We are unite dear.

    Well my choices are a little different but I love this serial .

    I also write a fanfiction which is on manmarziyaan serial

    Naadan Dil Ki manmarziyaan. ( Musical love story)

    But this serial is my favourite when it aired on Tv.

    Bring it on girl and I am ready to be with you in this journey dear. Really getting so much ideas and so much spark in this story Love u dear.

    Keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

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