Fan fiction on apu and malay (INTRO)

This is my first ff and it is going to be short, please comment whether you like it or don’t like it.

characters: 1) Apu, cute, funny and studying engineering 1st year
2) sid- apu’s brother
3) kalpana- apu’s mom and loves her a lot
4) tapur- apu’s neighbor, studying with apu in the same class and hates her a lot
5) malay- cute, handsome and shy
6) mittal family- same as in the serial
In this ff, apu is a vishkanya but little bit different. she goes out and party with friends and she does everything but when she cries due to her tears power her face changes into blue.

INTRO: It is night and near a hilly area a lady with a baby runs fast and behind her a man with a sword rides on a horses chases her. She cries, kisses her and tells that she will not
let anything happen to her and you need to take revenge of our insult. Due to her tears her face changes to blue colour. Finally, she jumps from the hill and falls into river. The man reaches near the end of the cliff and shouts I will not leave you vishkanya and fumes.

Precap: 23 years leap and a cute girl is shown is shown going to college.( guess who is that girl).

This is my Intro, hope you guys liked it. I know it is small but i will write more on the episode. And give me rating about the intro and my writing. I am not very good writer and i am sorry for any mistakes

Credit to: sarayu (honey)

11 comments

    • Sarayu(honey)

      Thank you so much Harshan, hero and heroine entry will be on the same episode.

  1. Kathy

    Hmm this must b Apu… Going college .. Good start sarayu… Waiting for the next episode ..keep on writing . Good luck..

  2. shai

    amazing story sarayu!!!!! 🙂 serial se toh kaafi accha hai
    i will give you 10/10 🙂

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