FALLING FOR YOU (Episode 68)

FALLING FOR YOU
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Hello guys.. I’m really sorry for being late.. But I was sick.. I guess some of you may know.. But again sorry for making you wait. Reading this chapter , all your complaints will fade away.. I hope so.. But guys, i have worked a lot for this chapter.. Read everything.. Especially songs, Coz i have chosen with so much care.. And one of my frnd neha helped me with one song. Other songs are of my choice.. And the song dedicated for Swasan is my all time favorite and it has swasan emotions in it.. I hope u all like it..
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The episode begins with

Swara shouts from the entrance to stop the engagement..

Tannu and veer instantly looks at the door and left out their breath which they have been holding from long.. They find swara and Sanskar standing at the door .. Immediately smile forms on their lips.

But TanVee smile instantly drops when they hear..

Swara: how mean!!! (pouts) you guys are getting engaged without me.

Tannu lifts her veil with a lone tear and smiles sadly seeing swara. Sanskar was smiling like an idiot. Silence filled the hall. SwaSan smiles seeing tannu and veer.. Tannu looks at swara who was grinning ear to ear . Just then the groom leans and kisses tannu’s cheek.

She gets angry and turns to slap him but stops in the middle with wide eyes, while the groom closes his eyes in fear. She sits on the chair with a thud. While veer snaps his head in her direction and widens his eyes.

Veer:(shocked) Rohit!!!!!!

He turns to see his father, who was smiling and looks at SwaSan, who winks at him. Tannu was in the state of shock while veer was like something bit him..

He slowly turns to his bride and lifts her veil with closed eyes. Their was a blow on his face. He opens his eyes and sighs impossible. He was taken a back..

Veer: (whispers in shock) mishu….

Tannu who heard his whisper turns and get shocked seeing mishu.. Both TanVee shooks their head crying, then smiles and then starts laughing with tears flowing.. Mishu and Rohit comforts them holding their shoulder.

Rohit cups tannu’s face and wipes her tears, while mishu wipes veer’s tears and cups one side of his cheek. Tannu hugs Rohit and veer hugs mishu tightly.. And swara jumps on sanksar Ang hugs him being happy..

Sanky hugs her tight fully excited. He kisses swara’s cheek instantly and starts kissing all over her face and hugs her again. He slowly whispers in her ear

Sanky: you have no idea how badly I want to claim those lips..

Swara smiles shyly and hits his chest.. They part away and gets shocked. Both tannu and veer jerks their respective partners shocking everyone.. They get down from the stage. Swara and Sanskar looks on shocked..

Swara: tannu..

Rohit follows tannu while swara holds tannu hand and stops her..

Swara: tannu!!! Wat happened?

Tannu hugs her and weeps.

Tannu: why did he come.. I hate him..
Swara : tannu(strokes her back) relax..
Tannu:(breaks the hug) you too knew it right!!!
Rohit: tannu.. (comes towards her)
Tannu: stop… I hate you..
Rohit :(holds her shoulder) I just wanted to surprise you..
Tannu: by killing me.
Rohit: tannu.. Dare not to say tatt (cups her face) Try to understand.. I just thought to surprise you..

Where as, Veer tries to go but Sanskar holds his hand and stops him. Mishu comes and stand at his back.

Mishu: veer, just an hour ago I got to know abt our engagement…
Veer: so , still you were thinking to give up..
Mishu : veer it’s not like tat..
Veer: then.. Stop it mishu… I just(he starts to go)

Mishu holds his wrist..

Swara: (shouts) will you guys keep quite!! (hold her head)

Rohit and Mishu looks at swara with pleading eyes where as TanVee looks on shocked..

TanVee: swarA you knew everything..!!

Swara gulps and looks on.. She slowly nods..

Swara: first let me tell you everything.. I will tell you from the beginning..

TanVee nods while RohMish looks down and Sanky looks at her proudly..

Swara : so it all started when we went to college.

TanVee looks shocked along with Sanskar.

Swara: tat day me and mishu were pulled into a room. The person was none other than Rohit.. Yeah! Tat day itself we saw Rohit.
Rohit: I know you guys were full on searching me. But at tat time i was not here. It is true tat i went to US , to meet my dad regarding the proposal. Actually I went to cancel the proposal. But, When I saw the girl whom I’m going to marry, I fell in love with her(small smile played on his lips)
Tannu : then why dint u Marry her. Go, go and marry the girl you fell in love..
Rohit : tats wat im doing..(smiles)

Tannu looks at him confused.. He comes in front of her and keeps his hand around her neck

Rohit: Yes tannu, from the beginning I was yours!! Dint You Claimed ME The Day U Proposed..?? You said I’m Yours.. So I’m All Yours and You Are Mine. !!!

Tannu looks at him and recalls her saying him “You Are Mine”… She jerks his hands little upset.. And Rohit pouts..

Sanky: if he went to US, then how did you guys meet Rohit in clg??

Swara: he went their as soon as the match was over but he was back in the next flight when he heard the news..

Mishu: Me and Swara were so happy as soon as we heard that Rohit was the one seen for tannu..

Tannu widens her eyes.

Tannu: really..!!

Swamish nods happily..

Tannu: you both are my worst frnds.. You kept me crying for this idiot..
Rohit: I’m Sorry(hold his ears) well I’m not an idiot. (pouts)
Tannu: you are an idiot.. And I dont want you ..

Rohit pouts.. Swamish goes and hugs tannu. She struggles in the beginning but they tightened their grips and she gives up..

Swara: it was so fun. dint you see.. If you would have got to know abt this, your engagement would have been without fun.. Now you can tell your children about your dhamakedar engagement.. (laughs) you can tell them ” your brave Maasi came and stopped your engagement and made you meet your Prince Charming.. “(giggles)

Tannu hits her and Swamish burst out laughing…

Swara: sweetu, won’t you talk..
Veer: I don’t want to talk about it. But I’m happy for tannu (hugs tannu)
Swara: wat abt mishu!! Arei, for you guys only i worked a lot.. Tannu ka toh aise hi fixed tha.. But for you I changed the bride(giggles)

[ mishu was the one whom swara saw and had a 100walt smile.. She took her and made her ready for the engagement. ]

At tat time all the parents surround them Shemish, sinson, harivya and Mr. Anand.

Veer : she doesn’t want to marry me angel..
Mishu : who said tat? (hits his shoulder) I’m sorry veer(flutters her eyelashes and holds her ears)
Veer: don’t show me this puppy look.. You hurted me alot..
Mishu: I will heal it tooo..

Sinha and harish clears their throat. TanVee looks at them and gets shocked.. Sinha and harish were standing by wrapping their hands around eachothers shoulder with A smile.

Tannu: (jaws drop) when did this happen??

Swara(giggles) : yesterday.. I kinda locked them for full day..

Sanskar looks at her lovingly..

Veer: then???
Swara: then wat!! They sorted their difference and agreed for your engagement.. Say a big thanks to kanika, Rohit’s sister.. She wasn’t ready for the engagement..

Sinha: if everything is sorted, let the engagement ceremony begins..

Tannu: no.. I dont want to get engaged with him..
Veer: I too don’t wanna get engaged.

Harish : OK, I dont have any problem.. Sinha, let’s do Mishus engagement with Rohit..

TanVee and MishRoh widens their eyes.

Sinha: haan, I’m OK with it..
TanVee / MishRo : waat?????

SwaSan giggles.. They understand that they are pulling their legs.

Anand: I dont have any problem with mishti.. (teases)
Veer: but Rohit is like her brother…
Tannu: haan, veer is right..

Atlas everyone burst out laughing..

TanVee gets embarrassed and scratches their neck understanding their plan.

Harish : still thinking.. ??

Veer looks at mishu and tannu looks at Rohit, atlast they smile but whispers something

TanVee @ RohMish: I’m still not convinced..

RohMish smiles seeing TanVee knowing how to convince them..

Sinha: then I’m taking this silence as No..
TanVee: nooo !!!!!
Harish: nooo??
TanVee: I mean yes.. Noo.. God.!!!. We are ready..

Everyone burst out laughing.. Sanskar hugs swara..

Sanky: I love you swara.. I’m soo happy. (tighten his grip)
Swara:I love you too(hugs him back and closes her eyes)

Shekar clears his throat.. Sanky rolls his eyes..

Sanky : (murmurs) gabbar singh..

Swara hits his chest and they both part away.. But Sanskar kisses her forhead and looks at shekar.. He again kisses her cheeks and looks at him who was now shooting draggers at Sanskar.

SwaSan burst out laughing and looks at TanVee who were are smiling at them but still angry with their partners. Swara shooks her head in impossible.

Swara: I dont want you guys to get engaged with these grumpy faces.. Come-on lighten up your moods especially tannu and sweetu…

Swara winks at mishu.. Mishu smiles and the lights get off.

[ A focus light lands on someone’s back. The music starts ]

Hai wo handsome sona sabse
Mere dil ko gaya le kar
Meri neend chura li usne
Aur khwab gaya dekar (x2)

[ it was none other than mishu.. Mishu wears goggles and sings around veer.. Veer looks surprised but shows attitude]

Ab ye naina bole yaar
Bole yehi lagataar
Koi chaahe kitna roke karungi pyar..

[ mishu makes faces and dances around him ]

Mere saiyaan superstar
O Mere saiyaan superstar
Main fan hui unki
O mere saiyaan superstar (x2)

[ She wraps her hands around his neck singing and dancing. ]

Haan jabse usne akhiyon se
dil pe autograph diya
Tabse everyday maine
bas usko hi yaad kiya (x2)

[ She makes moves around him and pulls his cheeks ]

Senti mere jazbaat o sunle mere dil ki baat
Saath mujhko le ke jaa main hoon taiyaar…

[ opens her arms as if telling him her heart out through the song, to take her anywhere he wants ]

Mere saiyaan superstar
O Mere saiyaan superstar
Main fan hui unki
O mere saiyaan superstar (x2)

[ Veer atlas smiles seeing her antics and moulds his body with her open arms.. She hugs him tight and kisses his cheeks. He lifts her and spins around taking her to a corner. And the hall busted with claps and whistles ]

[ Then the spot light falls on RoTan.. Rohit cups tannu’s face and sings ]

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood meraΒ [x2]

[ Leaves her face and sings going around her .. Then holds her hand ]

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho

[ Spins her with the hold of her hand and then pulls her into his chest ]

Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

[ they both have an eye lock ]

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi

[ caresses her cheeks with so many emotions]

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

[ then again starts twirling her by holding her hand ]

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

[ He leaves her and steps a little back ]

Tumhi ho… Tumhi ho…

[ points his finger towards her and sings seeing her ]

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

[ Tannu gets teary eyes and runs and hugs him tight. He hugs her back tightly nuzzling in her neck and continued singing ]

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hoΒ [x2]

[ Everyone claps and RoTan stayed hugging eachother.. ]

[ Then the spot light falls on someone’s back and then the music starts.. Swara widens her eyes and closes her mouth with her hand.. Sanskar turns and comes toward her singing the song ]

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya

[ sings by moving around her and Both recalls their first meet ,how they collided .. He recalls how he felt some sparks on seeing her ]

Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

[ comes in front of swara.. points him and points towards her ]

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja

[ opens his arm welcoming her ]

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

[ Swara had tears in her eyes listening him singing her favourite song. She shooks her head and turns around without hugging him with over flooding emotions.. But Sanskar smiles understanding her, then moves in front of her and continues to sing ]

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

[ he stands in front of her and says ]

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

[ swara bites her lips controlling her emotions and Sanskar sings further ]

(Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein)…..2

[ both recalls their forest journey. He dances around her expressing his views and swara looks at him lovingly ]

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa ) ….. 2

[ he pulls her towards him and twirls her around ..they recall their goa trip.. Smile tugged on their faces.. They forgot their surrounding and he keeps his hand on her cheek cupping it side way.. He recalls her proposal and kisses her forhead ]

(Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai) ….. 2

[ he turns away from her and shooks his head recalling how she sacrificed him once due to some misunderstanding and she recalled their baseless fight ]

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata

[ he turns around and again opens his arm welcoming her.. Both had tears in their eyes ]

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa) ….. 2

[ Without wasting a second swara jumps hugging him tight as if her life depends on him.. Sanskar smiles and hugs her even tight. ]

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..

[ He parts away and cups her face singing ]

Baby i love u
Oh i love u
Baby I love u
I love u…

[ Both loose themself in the song and leans towards eachothers lips.. ]

There was an huge round of applause which made them to come back to their sense and joins their forhead instead of their lips and smiles being embarrassed..

RoTan and MishVee hugs being happy .. This was the best moment.. Shemish hugs eachother seeing their daughter.. Sinson smiles seeing Mishu while harivya smiles seeing tannu.. Everything was sorted.

Everyone got their smile back. But people say good moments doesn’t long but their parents prayed to remain them happy life long.. But it’s true tat problems exist.. No one can promise that life is without problems,but everything can be sorted out when you are together.

You will face problems but you can’t fall weak.. Each problem makes you strong and teaches you a lesson.. Now swasan have been through alot and will face many more but just you need to be patient and someone to support.

RoTan and MishVee were taken on the stage. Sona and mishti brings the respective rings.

Swara goes towards the stage and the focus light falls on her.. She held a Mike. Evryone looks confused and shocked..

Swara clears Her throat and smiles sheepishly.. Sanskar looks at her and Shemish were even surprised.

Swara: before the engagement begins (looks at Sanskar) I would like to confess something..

Sanskar looks at her surprised. Swara smiles seeing him and goes towards him..

Swara: ” people say relationship should be based on trust or promise or care or anything else.. But I feel a relationship is something where a couple will be together even when they are not together…

This had been proved in my case.. Yes.. This relationship is possible when you meet your soul mate. I guess, I have.. That’s the reason we have been together even though how we fought “..

Everyone looked on shocked.. Sanskar signs her no..

Swara:(smiles and holds his hands) yes we fought but I seriously regret for my stupid behaviour.. (she holds her ears) I’m sorry Sanskar and seriously I’m.. I was (he closes her mouth but she removes his hand) no.. I want to speak..

Sankar: Swara pls.. We talked already..
Swara: ya. But Sanskar, I thought abt this earlier. So please don’t disturb me.. Let me speak.. Hmm. Where was I?? Yah, I’m sorry.. I’m really sorry (kisses his cheeks tight where as Sanskar smiles seeing her antics) well I’m so lucky to get a soul mate like you.. You don’t know sanskaar, each and every day you make me fall for you. Already you stole my heart but now I’m falling for you hardly each and every second with all My soul… I love you so much Sanskar.. (hugs him) Well I decided something else too (parts away from him and bites her lips) I want to get engaged again with you along with them.

sanskaar eyes lit up and the next moment swara was taken into an bone crushing hug.. Everyone clap for them.. Swara pushes him and pouts. Sanky creases his forhead and asks Wat

Swara: I thought to propose you by kneeling..

Sanky and evryone laughs

Sanky: you don’t need to.. Your one look is enough for me and you will have me wrap around your fingers as a lost puppy..

Swara laughs and hits his chest.. He wraps his hand around her neck

Sanky: Believe Me.. I’m All Yours. .

They both hug eachother..

Sinha: then, we will have three pairs of engagement.. Hurrey!!

Everyone claps and cheers for them. RoTan, SwaSan and MishVee were on stage and the rings were brought. Swara was jumping in happiness. After some time they were asked to exchange the rings and tats it

Sanskar , Veer and Rohit slides the rings to their respective partners and the hall was filled with claps…

Swara kissed the ring and then the girls were asked to exchange. They did as they were told. Everyone shouted with happiness.. Sanskaar pulls swara and whispers in her ears

Sanky : you don’t have any idea, wat you did today. I wanna kiss the hell out the those lips ,so that they will be swollen for a week.

Swara was taken aback. Her stomach twisted with some unknown feeling. She pulls away from him and pants hearing his words, it has obviously sent chills down her spine.. She licks her lips.. He again pulls her and whispers in her ears

Sanky: don’t do tat swara.. You are making me hard…

They both part away hearing the music 🎢… .

[ They see mishti and sonakshi singing.. Mishu, tannu and swara joins them.. All the gents look at them with adoration.. ]

Sukh dukh jhoothe
Dhan bhi jhootha
Jhoothi moh-maaya
Saccha mann ka wo kona jahaan
Prem ratan paaya
Prem ratan paaya..

ni ni sa sa re re sa sa…

( some girls from guest starts dancing along with mishtan.. )

Payo… Payo…
Laayo… Chaayo
Aayo… Gaayo..
Payo…

[ Swara looks at Sanskar and sings ]

Saiyan tu kamaal ka
Baatein bhi kamaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera
Hui main kamaal ki

[ Tannu and mishti joins swara.. They dance along with other girls … ]

Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..

[ Swara dances looking at Sanskar… ]

Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)

[ She dance around him and Sanskar smiles seeing her… He looks at her lovingly.. ]

Rut milan ki laayo
Prem ratan..
Prem ratan dhan payo maine (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo

[ Tannu and mishu dance around rohit and veer. Rovee looks at them with so much love.. ]

Kya main dikha doon
Yaa main chupa loon
Jo dhan hai mann mein
Yeh bhi na jaanu

[ Sona and mishti pulls divya ..then the trio dance around their husbands.. ]

Bajne lagi kyun sargam si tann mein
Khushiya si hai aangan mein

Chehre pe aaye meri rangatein gulaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera hui main kamaal ki

[ Now all the ladies joins together and swirls.. ]

Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Mann gagan par chayo
Prem ratan..
Prem ratan dhan payo maine (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo

[ Swara sings behind sanskaar without coming in front. When he turns she again moves behind and continues singing.. ]

Mujhko the ghere jitne andhere
Ho gaye door sabhi
Sab sapno ki
Sab rishton ki paa li keemat bhi
Prem ko main samjhi
Kisi ne na ki meri
Tune jo sambhaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera hui main kamaal ki

[ Atlas he holds her but she moves back singing and joins the other ladies.. ]

Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)

[ Swara Moves around Sanskar.. All the ladies swings in full mood. Eveyone joins. Shekar, sinha, harish and Mr. Anand dance along with the ladies. All the guest starts dancing. .]

Aaj mann bhar aayo
Prem ratan..
Prem ratan dhan payo maine (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo

[ Evryone were busy with the dance, Sanky takes swara from evryone. And same happens with tannu and mishu.. ]

Chaayo.. Aayo..
Laayo.. paayo..
Paayo

The hall was gushing with cheers and other songs were played… Here Sanskar pins swara to a corner. She was breathing heavily..

Swara: (panting) Sanskar…

He looks at her. They both have an intense eyelock.. Without wasting another second he smashed his lips on Her.. This was the moment he was waiting for. From the time she united MishVee and RoTan, he was so happy with her. He wanted to show her ,wat he felt.. Guess he is showing right now.. Then again she made him restleess by her apology. He felt on cloud nine. Not only she made him feel special ,she made him feel like one of the wonders..

Their lips were moulded perfectly and he was pressed against her. She entangled Her hands in his hair and began playing with it ,where as Sanskar was drawing circles on her waist. They both part away breathing heavily but he dint had enough.. He wanted more.

Swara: I Love You..

Sanky:(cups her face) I do but I want to prove it.. And I will love you till my last breath.. You don’t know, how it was seeing my family united.. It was becoz of you.. Then you gave my sisters happiness.. You are Really An Angel Swara.. But My Angel..

She smiles..

Swara: (kisses his nose) You Are Too An Angel For Me. An Angel Whom God Sent As My Strength.. It’s Indeed Coz Of You. You Were My Strength And You Will Remain My Strength..

Sanky :(kisses her forhead) I Guess Falling In Love With You Was The Best Moment Of My Life..

Swara: (pokes his cheeks) I Have Been Falling For You Daily , So My Best Moment Of Life Is When I Met You.

They Both Smile..

Sanky : I Wanna Kiss You..

She widens her eyes. He have never asked for it. Coz they always Bounce On Eachother Without Permission. If He Is Asking Then

Swara : You Don’t Have To Ask Permission
Sanky : But I Want To Be Little Different (winks at her)

Swara Smiles Closing Her Eyes.. They Lean Towards Eachother..

It was just their beginning.. They Met And Fell In Love. They United their parents and now they have been successful in uniting their friends love ..

Once They Have Fallen in Love With All Their Heart. Now They Are Falling For Eachother Every Day , Every Minute and Every Second.

This Will Not End Until Their Heart beat Stops.. And it Will Continue With Their Soul.. Coz They Have Fallen For Eachother With All Their Soul…

The End

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Shocked!!!!!
But it is indeed an end.. I hope you all agree, coz this was it…. I do want to continue .. But I dont want to bore you with stuffs like bringing twist to seperate them and again unite. Then show their romance.. Its kinda not my thing.. Coz i want to entertain u with different stuffs… Well don’t think FFY is ended.. Lol… It’s just the beginning.. Coz their journey from falling in love was shown with their never ending bond.

FFY is still gonna continue.. Hehe.. But with different season which is absolutely different.. Coz i haven’t solved some puzzles in this still.. Those puzzles will be solved next.. Wat are the puzzles, can u guess it??? Well do you all know, I have been writing on wattpad with two seasons.. The first season involves their school life and the second season is abt their clg life.. Now the next season will not be abt their marriage life but kinda guess it.. πŸ˜‰..

Acha one more thing, I know you all wanted to see Swasan marriage.. Well I will love to write it.. Just wanna ask you again???
Do you wanna Read swasan marriage???
If so, I will give it as a bonus chapter which will be full of marriage and the rituals.
If you don’t want to read it, I will directly give an epilogue for this and end it..
So choise Is yours. ..
And abt the next season, I’m thinking of continuing it on wattpad.. Coz submitting on tu takes a lot of time.. Well I will try here as well but it depends on your response.. And guys if any of you on wattpad, support me by your votes on my stories…. My ID is shabbu95 …

One more thing ,I want you all to comment now… Guys its a pretty request.. Don’t remain as a silent reader till last. U know ,I have been talked with so many who tells me they are my silent readers but guys today break your silence in this last chappy.. Pretty pleasshhh.. I will give bonus chapter of Swasan marriage only if you all say. If no , then there will be no update from me. And abt the epilogue I will give tat, but for swasan marriage I want ur answer.. Well do comment all of you.. Last time I asked u to comment on chap50.. Now as its my last chappy, I want all ur comments.. Big comments are mostly welcome.. πŸ˜‰ I dont know when this chappy will be posted.. But Im submitting it at10.. So everything depends on tu..

Comment and let me knew abt the bonus chappy.
Love u all.. Arei, I forgot one thing
How was today chapter??? Did u enjoyed??? 😜
And songs 😍😍let me know…

77 comments

  1. Hadi

    Hadi

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    Am not shocked as I had a feeling in start that today’s chapi is the last as everyone problems are sought out as usual awsum fantabulous mind blowing this chapter of yours u end it with ful of emotions n happiness the way u portrayed their moments were really n highly appreciative songs set perfect on situations I generally nit read the songs as I don’t have any interest in listening or reading songs but I read today in ur ff n it describes ur scenes more beautifully no doubt u brought the end of chap n season 1 splendidly
    Coming to ur whole season as already told u in every chap that u did a remarkable performance the writing of serious ff wid separation part is easy than a naughty n full of tafree ff which u did splendidly I become out of words now n really believe me now I don’t have any words to describe my feelings towards ur ff will surely gonna miss it to core of heart as this ff is kind of addiction to me n am heartily connected to ur ff will love to read if u write swasan marriage n of course will super duper excited for season 2 will gonna miss u n ur laughter ff may u get success in every step n may ur lyf be a successful n full of happiness like u gave us through ur ff keep smiling love u loads :-* :-* :-*

  2. |Registered Member

    Sha di
    I am really very very very sorry.
    I know I never commented on your ff. I seriously repent for that. I won’t speak abt the prev chaps, but lemme speak abt this last one. I loved your song selection firstly. All my fav songs. Spcly I came across Pehli Nazar Mein after a long, long time. I really loved all the songs u selected. The suspense would break in such a way, I never thought of that. Well, to be true, I ain’t very shocked, coz u had once said that u would be ending this ff. I so wish that u come up with a season 2, and please post it on TU only…pleaseeee! I am not on WattPad, and I can’t handle TU and WattPad together. Please di…I am ur li’l sister na…please…
    And ya….please do show SwaSan marriage, and along with their, RoTan and MishVee marriage also…,please…
    And yes, I always admired Veer the most in ur ff. I dunno why, aaj tak koi Sanky se zyada bhaya toh nahi….par pata nhi kyu iss baar Veer zyada pasand aa gaya…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    And haan…if u don’t give marriage epi na…then….then….then….I will cry😭😭😭
    And yes….when will u upload My Saviour? You haven’t updated it in a while. Hope you haven’t ended it….anyways….always will admire you….and u are my elder sister cum idol….love u😘

  3. RAINA

    Till now I am a Silent reader I am sad that you are going to end this offπŸ˜“ episode was mind blowing

  4. Shreeyu

    It was a wonderful ff …. It was really different from others ….. With a unique concept nd a unique way of presentation…. I just loved ur ff from the beginning till the end …. And ya I agree that extending it will really make it bore so it’s better to end it happily ….. And please try to post ur next episode on tu …. Will b loving ur ff alwayz

  5. Diya

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    This is not done…I used to die waiting for these episodes and ur saying it’s over??😱😱Di I can’t beg u to continue the ff as it is completly ur decision but pls we want a chappy with proper wedding rituals and romance and a epilogue!! Itna to banta hai na??Pls..and Im really gonna miss this ff…and ya u also..😍😘Love U Di ❀❀

  6. Arshaanya

    Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    I was a silent reader i never commented on ur ff bt i must tell u dat u r such a wonderful writterπŸ‘Œ… i jus love d way u write ur storiesπŸ‘… ur unique way to entertain ur readers make u specialπŸ˜™… even i dun want dat seprtn n dan uniting track😌… ur dis story FFY is so dffrnt from other stories n i jus loved it… ur story was lite sweet simple lovely cute bfl unique etertng😍… n coming to todayz chappie its so beautiful n lovely.. while reading it i was jus imgng as its so real… ur song slctn dance evrythng was so gud…i so luv it luv it luv it..m gonna miss dis story bt exctd also for season 2😚… n plzz post it on TU also.. icant manage both wattpad n TU plz…Continue soon

  7. Maryam

    Maryam

    |Registered Member

    Don’t make me cry again…I was totally shocked reading the phrase “THE END”..I am very upset with this news yar…I wanted swasan marriage..plz plz plz continue with swasan marriage…and about the episode it was just marvellous…I am spell bound yar..and the song Pehli nazar. Is myfavourite and the singer Atif aslam is my everything..he is kinda my first and last crush..hehe……….I was smiling ear to ear reading the song and swasan scenes. ..plz don’t end my favourite fiction…at least complete it till episode 70…plz plz plz…n ya plz don’t upload the next season in watt pad I won’t be able to readit there…I really don’t wanna miss it..so can u plz tell me how to make a watt pad id..

  8. Sree

    Awesome chappy dear.. One of my favourite ff in tu.. I was falling in love with ur ff after each and every updates.. Really feeling sad that its gonna end but super duper happiee knowing that u will be back with the second season.. Im damn sure that u will b back with a bang.. Now atleasr i want swasan marriage episode with lots of nok jhoks as well as a romantic epilogue.. Im gonna miss this one for sure.. Will be waiting for ur next season to fall in love all over again.. Thanks for giving us such an amazing story.. A fabulous writer u are… Hats off for all d effort u have put in to it.. Come back soon.. Till then Take care and stay blessed… 😘

  9. Pooja26

    Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    omg !!!!!! i m literally shocked !!!!!!!! it is d end………

    no worries ………..

    i want swasan marriage a grand one…… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    plz write dat……..

    & ya plzzz……… submit ur all ffy chappyss…… on tu season 2 or wat u r going to write plz……….. πŸ˜‰
    becoz m not in wattpad
    post it in tu;….. ;); )

    yaaa ……
    amazing
    superb chappy…..
    mind blowing……..
    πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    i hv read all d chappysss….. of ffy…… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    & if u remember i have give d characters which should u choose for tanu, veer… .etc.. in starting….

    i feel very haaapy to have a amazing friend & writer like u!!!!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    keep smiling dear πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    tc…….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ya,,,,, post asap… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  10. Saranya

    Saranya

    |Registered Member

    Awesome chappy dear!!! But cant digest that this is the end… pls write swasans marriage.. that to grand and dhamaka one pls..pls.. i will miss u and ur ff.. pls write next season. U have made me smile through ur ff.. thanx 4 ur story.. u r just an awesome writer.. luv u…will miss u.. stay blessed… mostly i am a silrnt reader but firat time posting such a long comment

  11. Nikita

    Soooooo nice dear I Miss u sooo much
    And yaa plz update on telly updates Yarr I m not on wattpad plzz I wanna read ur ff
    Bcoz I just love it

  12. Swapna

    Hey…Amazing work !!! Indeed sad.for the end but happy to knw abt the upcoming new season & Me,want Swasan’s marriage

    Do continue & make Swasan more beautiful :)))

  13. Harshi

    Toooo goodd….. during reading i felt that u were ending it, bt i making myself think that u arent ending….. please continue it here… many dont have wattpad acnts too….. even in schl i was thinking how u r gonna unite everyone……. Love FFY

  14. Dedeepya

    Ending is pretty perfect…. Im a silent reader. And biggggg fan of ur ff. Will be Waiting for marriage chap… Hope u will come soon with next season asap.

  15. Neha_priya

    Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    Sha it’s the end…. Noooo…. Oh god that’s the surprise for me now….. Uff…. Yup I want their marriage…. Write that part…..god… Early morning you planned to break my heart…. Well the selection of songs were commendable… Saiyaan superstar, tum hi ho, and then swasan ahh the whole phase of their meeting till falling in love…. Awesome….. Finally families united…. All solved…. Anything which u left I can’t guess now bcoz my mind is revolving around just one simple sentence of sanky…… My god how did he admitted of kissing swara so that her lips remains swollen for one complete week…. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆhaaye… Mar dala is ek line se…. Sha I loved this whole concept re…. Wonderful marvelous treacherous awesome amazing beautiful outstanding….😜swasan romance… πŸ˜‚ I’ve many more to write but I’m afraid tu won’t let me to comment… Again I wish it doesn’t show duplicate comment 😏

    • Sha

      Sha

      |Author

      neha😍😍😍u know i too loved those line while writing tat… u wont believe me,my hands were eager to write tat.. lol.. silly me…

  16. chanu

    Sry 4 short cmnt.. my sisters engagement is going on πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    So hv 2 arrange things…

    I wnt 2 tell u..broke my heart.. I always said 2 u dnt end this.. πŸ™ πŸ™ ; ( ; ( :'( :'( bt u end diz.. & u ddnt even complete century..

    U know wt??
    Early I ws nly silent reader of swasan ffs.. bt ur ff made me helpless by its charm & I finally cmnt in dis ff.. so my first cmnt is in ur ff.. hee heeelols..
    After dat u & I share a lvly frndship.. thankx 4 dat dr.. u r rly sweet grl..
    I hope dat bond is last forever. And ha u shd invite me 4 ur wedding. Hee hee..

    Hey plz uplode next season in tu.. plz…

    keep writing dr
    be happy always
    love you alot..
    u r always in my heart dr… so remember me as ur biggest fan… β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    Stay blessed

    • Sha

      Sha

      |Author

      hey chanu… i really missed u.. sorry for replying so late… well well congo for ur sisso engagement.. wil not call u for my marriage😜 hehe..
      aww i dint do anything..i will send sanku to help to regain ur broken heartπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      haan abt century if u add my season 3,u will get 100 chapters.. lol.. well how are u.. ?? haan i ws sick but nw fine.m u kniw y im late in replying ,i nearly fainted seeing huge comments.. lol.. well u were admitted😱😱 wat happened ?? hope u fine now.. gosh…i wrote so much..

      well love u loads.. meet u in next chapter .. tc..

      • chanu

        Hey u….. if u ddnt invite me 2 ur wed.. ill definitely cm their by forcibly. … ;-P ;-P πŸ˜‰

        Sha????? R u fine??? think u ddnt gt well perfectly. Dats y u going gv sanky 2 me… wtevr im sooooo hpy… yaay yaaay… πŸ˜€
        finally u accept dat sanky and I r ment 2gthr…. πŸ˜›
        thankx dr…
        Byee
        lv u..
        waiting 4 da nxt epi..

  17. Dhivya

    Ur FF is like😍😍😍😍. I have read every episode and I was a silent reader till date cuz i had exams n this ur to be my stress busters… I usually read n close them instantly so never had the time to comment eventhough I always wanted to comment. I love your FF n i am always waiting for it eagerly… I actually visit TU to only read your FF. This FF never fails to bring a smile on my face… Thank you so much for that! … I can even read it again 1000 time… Its that gr8

    • Sha

      Sha

      |Author

      so happy to know dr.. Glad u broke ur silence. .

      im really flying reading all the comments.. its so good to know my ff helps u in some way..

      love ya. .tc

  18. Kavya_08

    Kavya_08

    |Registered Member

    Will mish you & your ff shooooo much😒😘
    Before I say anything about the epi I just wanted to say that I Love this sooo much like literally sooo much that once I’d read all yoir chapters from the start overnight because I had a holidayπŸ˜πŸ˜‚ strange na but ya I love this ff that much & I always wish that you come up with new ideas & keep on entertaining us & making us laugh😁

    I’m desperately waiting for the next season but I know you’ll take time after all ideas don’t just jump we have to think of such plots that readers don’t get bored & I’m sure that your ideas were one if them. No matter when you posted, how long or sometimes because of lack of time short you posted I was always hooked to your ff lime a magnet😍 then I became busy & now I don’t read any ff on telly I just read one of my favs & that too I check it after some 2 or 3 daysπŸ˜‰

    Coming to the epi I thoroughly enjoyed it. Swara’s planning, songs, swasan romance everything😍 like swasan fall for eo everytime you make me fall for your ff everytime I read it😍(yep I know cheesy lines naπŸ˜‚but that’s true)

    It was somewhat shocking to me😢about the end I srsly never thought about it but I know you never want your ff to get boring you don’t wanna drag you wanna keep it unique & I really appreciate itπŸ–’will miss your ff like hell😣 till you think & post the 3rd season😘

    I know I’m so late in checking but actually that day I happened to check in noon & after that I’m checking it now. But we’ll be in touch in wattpad I’m definitely gonna commentπŸ˜€

    I wanna type more but you my problem na lazy bugπŸ˜‚

  19. Manvi

    can you please tell any good swasan stories in wattpad.
    i am a big fan of swasan and i will be waiting for your reply.

    • Sha

      Sha

      |Author

      actually i read vampire sstories often… if i should recommend then u should go throght my reading list.. i have a quite good collection in all.. give a try sweety.. love ya..

  20. Sree

    I had a feeling that u r gonna end this..dont know how and why. But i never wished for it to come true.. Am happy that u will be giving the nxt season soon. Will be waiting for it. Sorry for such a late comment. Actually am not so regular in TU. So sorry.
    Love the chapter. Awesome songs😍😍
    And felt sooooooo happy to see everything fine😍😍😁😁😊
    Love ya😘😘😘

  21. uzma

    hi, sha i am uzma i am a die hard fan of ur ff…. u r a really best writer actually i was a silent reader … u know i used to read ur ff daily i hav not even missed any episode of yours …. pls dont stop writing …. create a new ff pls a request from me.. i m in love wid ur ff really its like i will die wid out ur ff

  22. daisy

    hi i am a silent reader…i hav read many ffs but u know what this ff is the best of all and i m in luv with it…i dont know how to describe….but i share something very deep with your ff sha…lol but trust me i m serious …when i saw the end i felt like crying..sorry i know i m freaking out…will miss you and your ff like hell byeeee….luv u

  23. Simin

    Sha this ff is truly amazing i am too like swara who doesnt believe in love but since i am reading ffs i feel i have started believing in it.Swasan are amazing plz give their marriage epilogue or whatever u can and plz update soon loved it

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