FALLING FOR YOU (Episode 42)

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Guys u all r awesome at ur guesses.. mind blowing.. After all u all are my readers.. ? writer ka asar toh rahega hi ? … Naughty writer ke naughty readers… ??

The episode begins with swara
Swara: (innocently) wat happened mom???
Mishti: nothing beta.. Ur dad forgot table manners..
Shekar :(shocked) oh hello wat did i do..??
Mishti : its better if u keep quiet
Sinha: arei shekar, if im not wrong, u r disturbing her under table..
Shekar : (double shock) wat??

Sanky starts coughing..
Shekar immediately gives him water n pats his back.. Everyone gets worried..

Shekar: beta aaram se..
Sanky: thanks uncle..

Swara giggles.. While sanky gives her a death glare.. But suddenly he falls weak. He closes his eyes…

Sanky:(monologue) swara, u r torturing me to the core… U weren’t so much romantic, i think mera asar hai.. See wat i will do, once my anger fades away.. But im not tat much angry now.. As u gave some token advance in my room..

He closes his eyes n now swara’s eyes widens n sanky smirks.. Swara keeps moving from her place but suddenly shekar shouts

Shekar: ahhh…

Swara gulps… Sanky smiles n lifts his eyebrow at her..

Tannu: bade papa wats happening.. First badi ma, n now u…
Shekar: mishti y did u hit me..
Mishti: wat.. Me???? First u hit me n now u r blaming me.. This is too much shekar..

SwaSan exchange glances between shemish n themself… Now sanky shouts ahhhhhh..

Veer: abhe now wat happened??
Sanky: (closes his eyes n holds his arm) my hand… Its paining…
Swara: oh my god.. Come sanskar, i give give u pain killers.. Doctor prescribed some medicines
Sanky: no.. I dont need it..
Sona: beta, go n have it.. U will feel better.. Or else, i will come n give.. Challo..
Swara: no aunty.. I guess sanky will not disturb u guys today, after all u guys have patched up after a long.. Kyu sanskar??
Sanky: (smiles) s mom… I agree with her.. I will manage.. U enjoy with ur frnds..
Sona: but sanky, ..
Sanky: mom..
Sona: acha u take swara..
Sanky:(little louder) noo..
Swara: sanky, im not going to eat u.. I will just give ur medicine n get back here.

She takes him from the restaurant n tanveemish smiles naughtily looking at eachother..

After Coming out from the restaurant

Sanky : swara, wat was tat.. Have u lost.
Swara: wat did i do??? (blinks)
Sanky: wat did u do??? Swara …
Swara: haan sanskar..
Sanky: becoz of u, i kicked ur mom..
Swara: n becoz of u, i kicked my dad..
Sanky: u started it first.. Why were u caressing my legs..
Swara smiles n turns away. .
Sanky: answer me..
Swara: shameless..
Sanky: wat.. U r calling me shameless.. Huh.. I dont understand this girls concept..
Swara: haan toh wat.. How can u say this openly.. Idiot.. N u r not less than me.. U caught my legs..
Sanky: i did so to stop u..
Swara: ahaaha.. Acha come, have ur medicine n rest..
Sanky: i will go by myself. So u leave.. N dont follow me..

He start to move leaving her, but suddenly turns n see some boys coming in her direction n she smiles looking at them.. He immediately goes n hold her wrist..

Sanky: come n give me my medicine..

Swara smiles n they both leave to the room…

[As i told u already, its a resort, so evrything is under one roof.. Restaurent, rooms, spa, clinic, swimming pool..etc.. ,]

After reaching the room, swara gives his tablets..

Sanky: thanks.. U may leave..
Swara: im really sorry sanskar.. I dont know how to convince u.. Plsssssss… Dont talk to me like this.. It kills me…
Sanky: swara.. Whom am i to forgive u..
Swara: u r sanskar.. My sanskar.. U r everything to me..

Sanky smiles listening her but hides it with a stern look..

Swara: N i really hate this arm sling.. how dare those girls.. How can they touch u.. .. Wait a min..

She gets marker from drawer, sanky’s eyes lit up.. He smiles.. Swara come towards him n write something on his arm sling..

Meanwhile, the family was enjoying their dinner..

Veer: listen evryone..

All family members looks towards him..

Veer: so, do u remember, wats days after tomorrow..???

Everyone thinks….

Shekar: no one will dare to forget tat day..
Mishti: haaan.. A precious day..
Tannu: toh, wats the plan..
Veer: sanskar told to discuss among ourself…
Sinha : oh wow.. So its his planning this time…
Mishu: no dad.. But he is disturbed ,wat if our train gets delayed..
Shekar: not in this world im going to travel again in the train..
Sinha: enough shekar.. Over acting mat kar.. We will go in train only.. After all its my swara’s planning..

Shemish gets shocked..

Shekar: toh she did it purposely..
Veer:(smiles sheepishly) haan bade papa..
Mishti : u guys are impossible.. So wat are u guys planning..
Veer: after reaching home (muted)

At room
Sanky geys little upset seeing wat she wrote…
Swara: get well soon sanskar.. Im not like those girls to write those things.. After all im not them.. Im more than them.. So my style will be different.. So wait n watch..
Sanky:(monologue) wat is she talking.. I cant get anything.. Her words r different.. Wat is she trying to convey..
Swara:(thinks) i know, u must have thought i will write those words on ur arm sling, but no.. I will (smiles naughtily )

Sanky was lost in thought when suddenly , swara leans n gives a peck on his cheek,sanky turns immediately ,towards her in shock and their lips gets brushed (this is for u jaf ? silly me) .. . Both widened their eyes.. Swara turns away quickly n goes out of the room mumbling good night…
Sanky was shocked..

Sanky: no.. I told her i wont do tat until she kiss me.. wat did i do.. But it was an accident.. Wat if she thinks wrong abt me.. I should call her n apologize.. But it wasn’t my mistake..

He thinks for a while..

Sanky: no.. Watever it may be.. She might have felt bad.. Tats y she left immediately..

He takes out his phone n dials her number.. Buf she doesn’t pick the call.. He becomes restless.. So he dials veer’s number, so tat she my have reached their n he will know her reaction..

Veer picks his call..
Sanky: hello veer?
Veer: sanky, leave her yaar.. How much time u both will take.. Wat will ur parents think.. So send swara immediately..

Sanky understands tat she dint come still.. So he somehow manages veer..

Sanky: she will come veer.. Just went to her room with a work.. She will be back..

He disconnects the call n immediately runs out in search of her.. The resort is so big( as mentioned already) tat he is confused ,where to begin his search.. He starts looking for her, evrywhere.. But their was no clue.. He kept searching her throughout the resort.. He calls her but she doesn’t pick up.. He gets worried.. Then his eyes falls on her..

She was standing there with a lady n a guy.. They lady bid bye by hugging her.. N the guy was still talking to her.. He immediately rushed towards them..

Guy: ur r such a angel.. Thanks sweet heart..
Swara smiles..
Swara: my pleasure..

The guy holds swara’s hand n was abt to kiss her, where sanky pulls her..
The guy leaves her hand..

Guy: sanskar ??
Sanky: mac.. Wat r u doing with her. .
Mac: she is such a sweetheart.. Well, is she ur swara??

Swara gets puzzled.. N sanky gets shocked..
Sanky: mac, someone is calling u, over there.
Mac: oh Liza.. OK guys, it was a pleasure meeting you both.. U both are lucky to get eachother..
Swasan smiles at his compliment.. Then mac leaves.. But suddenly a boy comes running..

Boy: swaraaa..
Swara: hey Jack.. Wat happened..??
Jack: ur purse..
Swara: Aww.. Thanku jack.. So sweet of u..
Jack: OK bye.. Come again.. Love U..

He was abt to hug her but suddenly sanky pulls her towards him.. Swara chuckles.. Jack gives him a puzzled look n leaves bidding bye. .

Sanky: wat the hell swara.. Who was he. N where were u.. I called u many time.. N Wat were u doing with mac. N tat guy, walk or Jack.. Y is he at the back..
Swara : sanskaaar.. One question at a time. ..paahh.. How can u question me this much.. N how do u know mac??.
Sanky: woh.. I know him.. But how do u Know him..
Swara: if u tell me, i Will say. .
sanky: u first tell me.. Then later I will..
Swara: sure…
Sanky: haan sure..
Swara: actually, his girlfriend got hurt n I brought her to his shop.. They thanked me.. For tat.. N Jack is working in their place.. I left my purse there.. He returned my purse.. How sweet na..

Sanky:(thinks) sweet my foot..
Sanky: wat ever.. Come we will leave..

Was abt to turn but again looks at her.. Swara gives him a “wat” look

Sanky: wat are this red marks around(pointing at her collar bone and below it)
Swara: huh.. I dont know.. Is it red.. (she checks it..) OMG.. Wat would have jack thought.. Huh..
Sanky: wat the hell.. Wat did u say..
Swara: wat..
Sanky: why did u say tat..
Swara : offo.. Someone is jealous now..
Sanky: no way.. I’m leaving..

Actually he was.. But swara enjoyed it. She was teasing him.. They were passing over the swimming pool.. continuous blabber of swara,made sanky more furious.. It was enough for sanky, he saw a girl who was smiling at him.. He went towards her..
Sanky: hey beautiful..
Swara was like O..
Girl: hi handsome.. (seducingly)
Sanky: I’m sanky(fwd his hand)
Girl: princess..
Sanky: princes… … I would be glad if my name would be prince..
The girl laughs..
Princess: It would pleasure to be with prince(winks at him)

Swara can’t take it anymore.. She searched here there n she pushed her inside the swimming pool.. Sanky gives an unbelievable look to swara.. She holds his hand n takes himm from there..

Sanky: swara.. Wats wrong..
Swara: just shut up.. How dare u to talk to her like tat.. (mimics) princess.. N Wat u said,u want to be her prince.. Never in any life.. Got tat..
Sanky was taken aback..

Sanky:jealous.. Wow gr8… but u were too talking abt Jack..
Swara: I was just pretending.. But u just crossed ur limits… So Mr. Sanskar Sinha, u r abandoned to talk with strangers.. Especially girls.. Got tat..
Sanky: y is tat. N Wat if I don’t follow..
Swara : if u dint follow, u will be facing troubles, like how u faced today at the dining table…

Sanky gulps..

Sanky: I’m not scared .. Do watever u want..

Saying this, he left to his room.. Swara too leaves to her room with a determined face.. After an hour, there was a knock at sankys room.. Sanky opened the door m was shocked..

Sanky: wat happened.. Is evrything alright.. Aap sab yaha..
Mishti: sanskar, angel told me everything..

Sanky widens his eyes.. Swara slowly peeks from the back n smiles naughtily..

Shekar: sanskar, y did u do tat..
Sanskar: uncle, it was by mistake.. I dint
Shekar: no beta, u shouldn’t have done tatt with her.. ..
Mishti: u shouldn’t have done tat sanskar..
Shekar: wat she would felt.. It would have hurt her..
Sanky: I’m sorry aunty.. Its all becoz of swara.. She only started first..

Swara widens her eyes..

Swara: wat did i do sanskar..
Sanky: dint u cares
Swara : (cuts him) mom, lets go inside n talk.. Wat if uncle n aunty see us.

The trio moves in..

Swara: sanky, becoz of u, she is hurt n she is accusing me..
Sanky: swara, it was u
Swara: haan sanky, if it is me, then too u should haven’t done tat..
Mishti: she is blackmailing her beta..
Sanky: wat.. (thinks) it’s her new plan
Swara:s sanky.. The one whom u pushed in swimming pool.. (winks at him)
Sanky: (shocked) wat me.. It was u..
Swara: ha.. It was becoz of me, as she teased me.. Hai na Sanky..

Saying this she goes towards him n winks. Sanky sighs.. Unable to take of his eyes from her seductive looks.. She was giving him a tempting smile..

Shekar: n I heard she hurted u..
Swara: haan dad, here..

Saying this she touches sanky waist n squeezes it.. .. Sanky jumps..

Sanky: I’m fine uncle.
Swara: no dad, see he is jumping. I think it’s paining..
Shekar: beta are u sure.. If it is paining let us know..

Sanky eyes swara while she winks at him..
Sanky: no.. I’m fine..
Mishti: Acha beta u take care.. Veer will come n join u.. We just returned from the restaurant, n came here as soon as swara told us..
Sanky: I’m OK aunty..

They leave

Swara: toh, how was the punishment for not listening me..
Sanky: u r impossible swara.. (turns away.)

She goes n hugs him from back.. ..

Swara: sanskar, im sorry.. Pls talk to me like before na.. Pls.. Won’t u do tat for me..
Sanky: swara, go n pack ur things.. Tomorrow we are leaving..
Swara: but I promise u sanskar, after we reach home, u will be back with ur own self.. (thinks) I will open up my heart to u.. But now, I just want to tease u.. I’m loving u more in this convincing way..

She breaks the hug n makes him turn..

Swara: Acha tell me, wat should i do ,so tat ur anger fades away.. (pinches his nose)
Sanky: ouch.. (makes faces) im done with ur so called convincing..
Swara: wat the hell.. Wat do u mean by, u r done with it.. I kissed u to convince.. .
Sanky: was it even a kiss(bites his tongue)

Swara widens her eyes.. She quickly pulls him n gives a tight kiss on his cheeks..

Swara: (thinks) now see how I make u restless.. I agree ,I just pecked lightly but u can’t insult my kiss..

She pulls him more n kiss on his right cheek near his lips, slightly touching her lips curve with his.. Sankys heart beat skipped.. A quick current pass through their body.. They both have a eyelock in the same position.. But she was stubborn to tease him more, so she again goes to his left n does the same.. She was teasing him.. He grabbed her waist, but she winks at him n moves ahead getting freed from his hand..

They both Stare at eachother for a while, with a urge of showing how much they love eachother.. But he was stopped by his ego, n she was stopping herself to surprise him in different way.. She gives him a beautiful smile where he lost himself in it..

Swara: good night.. .

She leaves from their.. Sanky was restless..

Sanky: wat did she do.. Oh my god.. This girl is making me crazy.. But I dint apologies to her for tat , may be it was an accident but I just want to know, wat she feels.. Will talk to her at home..

Soon evryone dozes off…

It was a blissful morning.. Since It’s last day of their trip.. Everyone is packing their stuff.. It’s. The time for boarding the train. They are really happy as their happiness is bak. They are finally United. The motto they came here is fullfilled.. Sanvee helps everyone to board.. Veer arranges the luggage. While sanky was pulling his parents n smiling whole heartedly..

Sanky: mom, be carefull..
Sona: Aii handsome.. If u leave me, I will die n haunt u entire life..
Sinha: Arei jaan.. No fear, when ur darling is here. .
Sanky: dad, flirt karna band Karo..

Sona n sinha gets into the train. Sanky smiles seeing their parents love.. Mishtan enters into the train.. Sanky pulls them with a force tat mishtan almost falls down but holds the train door.. They start beating sanky for his stupid behaviour.. Sanky tries to run.. But they push him n goes in.. Now swara gives her hand towards sanky.. He just stare at her.. Swara understands tat he is still angry n he will not help her ,she gets sad.. So she was abt to take her hand but sanky pulls n she gets hit by his chest.. They both have an eye lock..

After sometime everyone gets settle in one compartment..

Sanky: mom, dad, this whole couch belong to us.. Take any seat.. It’s all ours…
Veer: haan bade papa.. We knew tat u guys will patch up.. So this is a gift from us.. Enjoy in this whole couch.. Sit where ever u like..
Tannu: flirt with ur respective partners (winks at them)
Sinha: wow.. I’m ready. Kyu sona.. (winks at her)
Sona: shameless… (beats him playfully)
Shekar: Arei yaar, they have become old.. Let’s check out other girls in different couch.. (starts to run)
Mishti: I will kill u. (chases him.)

The youngsters laugh.. Swara goes n sit in different compartment at a window seat n was enjoying the nature.. While sanvee goes to get snacks n water bottles..mishtan where with sinson..

Shekar while running collide with a guy..

Guy: ouch..
Shekar: I’m sorry..
Guy:its OK uncle..

Mishti comes n starts beating him..

Shekar: mishti stop. Sharam karo.. He is seeing us..
Guy: sorry for disturbing aunty.. U carry on..
Shekar: arie beta, how mean..
Guy: actually uncle, im busy in searching for a single seat.. But hear, all the seats are available but still the tt is not allowing me..
Mishti: woh, actually its our childrens mischief.. They want to spend time alone with the family..
Shekar: if u want u can take a seat..
Guy: thanks alot uncle.. But ur children..
Shekar: they won’t tell anything.. U go n sit anywhere..
Shemish go n join sinson.. The guy went in swara’s compartment.. She was fallen asleep..
Guy:(thinks) Hm. I think she is their daughter, if I impress her, they will be happy with me.. N i can spent some quality time..

He smile n gets mesmerised seeing her face. He was lost in her.. The guy sits next to her. Swara feels someone next to her n smiles n keeps her head on his shoulder.. He gets shocked.. He was abt to pat her cheek to wake her but someone shouts..
Sanky: hey u.. Get up..
Hearing sankys voice, swara quickly gets up n gets shocked seeing other man beside her.. She thought it to be sanskar.. But now..

Sanky : wat the hell u r doing here..
Guy: hello Pls.. First listen to me…
Veer: how dare u( was abt to beat him)
Guy: Plss Plss Plss. Will u give me a chance to speak.. (tells them evrything in one go) huh. I came to make frnds with her, n she put her head on me.. I was abt to wake her n u guys came..
Swara : he is right.. I thought it’s sanskar, so I…
Guy: thank god dear. Uff.. So guys do u believe me now..
Veer: r u OK angel..

Swara assures him through eyes.. Sanky was angry on tat fellow..

Guy: wow.. Ur name is Angel.. Gr8.. Myself Sahil.. Sahil khurana.. (fwds his hand)

The screen freezes on shocked faces of sanvee…..

So how was the epi…….
Hope u all enjoyed……
Guys don’t bash for using the name sahil. ? . Actually, its me who used the name first, n its the highlight of my ff…. Coz Sanky totally hates tat name..u may know the reason. ?lets c wat happens next..

I hope, I dint bore u with this chap.. I really dont know wat i wrote.. In this chappy also, there are some secrets left.. Let’s c who all gueses right… N for the one who guessed right in the last chappy, here’s the treat, hope u enjoy….
Pls serve urself.. Sorry for the inconvenience caused ?…

Sorry for not replying sterday.. I was busy at home.. I really enjoyed reading all ur comments.. OMG.. Everyday a new readers comment.. My happiness is beyond 7th sky. Lol..
I’m really happy tat u all liked it.. @neha, kaynat khan, Pammy, dhara, reethi, jenisha, jaf, tani, soujanya,sree,dharsha,sweety,Ahana,jiya,nikita,pooja,shan,shagun,kavya..
@sree.. U r not talking so much dear.. I really love to read long comments.. N i use to get a chance to reply long ? silly me. N u r genius,u guessed everything right.. After all u r one of me na.. Tats y. Haha..
@dharsha.. I really missed u.. Sachi.. Was waiting for ur comment.. Now so much glad tat u liked it.. … N ,no sorry no thank you… I got to know u were busy.. Gues how?? seventh sense… ?

@sweety… Chorry dear for making u emotional.. N everyone want sanky to be convinced huh. Swara bechari ne kya Paap kiya ki ,tum log uske peeche ,haath dhoke pade Hue ho.. ? poor angel..

OK stay tuned till next chappy..

Credit to: Sha


  1. Oh god sahil again came!!!!… I can’t stop laughing….. Poor sanky!!!!! All sahil are back of swara only……. Plz.update soon…. And the treat was yummy…..

    • Sha

      Lol sahil .. Glad u liked it…

      HaaaAww.. Enjoyed ur treat without me.. So bad of u.. Waise,i had already… So no probs..

      Will try update asap..

  2. Jaf

    Sha! I never thought ? u will give that kissing ? part specially for me!
    Accidentally though I loved it!
    Love u ? loads…
    Your ff makes me crazy!
    I just hope I am the 1st 1 to comment!
    ????and Ya amazing!
    Sahil? Its called dejavu!
    See you gave the name before hand!
    Waise keep posting! & will keep reading!
    Sometimes it’s there I can’t comment sorry Ha? I can’t bcoz of my exams!
    And it wasn’t boring at all! I never find ur ff boring!
    Are you a gr8 prankster??
    From where do you get such ideas??

    • Sha

      Kya karu yaar, u told me twice na…. I wish to fulfill everyones wish… .. After all har ek frnd zaroori hota hai…

      U liked it.. Awww.. I’m so glad…

      Will keep writing. U keep reading Dr.. Tats enough for me..

      Hey.. I told u.. I’m a Gooooood girl yaaar..
      Only in school, everyone can see the real me… But at home, “awwww such a good girl” is the compliment i get..
      I really have to research my brain.. I dont know from where these weird ideas peeks.. ? .

      • Jaf

        So you have 2 faces Ha?
        Ek andar ek bahar?
        Wow! I liked that u fulfilled my wish!
        Love you ? ????????

  3. Dear sis,
    Recently get addicted to your ff. Swaras convincing, prank, everything in one go.. enjoyed a lot dear.
    And sorry for not reading earlier. And I completed whole in one day.
    Thanjs for the nice updates

    • Sha

      Oh my god!!!!!!! Eveything in one day.. Haawwwwwww… So sweet of u dr….

      Glad u liked it…

      Keep reading..

  4. Suba

    Awesome yaar loved it………….. Again sahil…sanky expression Hahaha… ?…….. ? post next part soon…pls yaar wanna read it… One more part special request

    • Sha

      I’m happy tat u liked it dear..
      Actualy I’m little tired. My mind doesn’t work until I relax.. Work pressure u know..
      Will surely try to update asap… Pls dont mind ha…?Chooorrrryyyyyy… ?

  5. wowwww its so lovely eagerly waiting to know how swara is going to surprise sanky……please jaldi post karna yar cant wait for long…..

    • Sha

      Hawwww.. Glad u liked it..

      N swara’s surprise, heheh.. Just thinking how to convince him still….

      Will try to update asap..

  6. Dharsha

    U said u missed me….sacchi but I missed u even more….sacchi ???
    U know na am very poor at making guesses…so I couldn’t guess but I was laughing loudly after knowing that…..lol ? that too I was crying the minute before but after reading this part…..just laughing ????
    I just enjoyed and loved reading the whole part???
    Am really vvvvvvvvvvvvvvery happy and feeling light now….???
    Right from swasan hit
    to Sahil Khurrana…lol ? sahil really??hope he is safe in future coz dunno what sanky will do?
    And what did swara wrote in his arm sling??….get well soon ahh???
    Mac-jack part was also too good….
    Sanky jealousy…awhhh???
    Then swara jealousy….???
    Swara’s punishment for sanky was really hilarious…..wahhh she can do anything no no Sha can do anything ???
    Swara is a cute convincer….???
    Kiss was really very kissy…lol ? (dunno what’s kissy but u can understand coz u have seventh sense na???)……
    Overall amazing chappy….
    Vvvvvvvvvvvvvvery excited for swara confession ??? And what’s the family planned??…I didn’t get that…what for the plan is????

    PS. Sorry wapas dhedo coz no sorry no thank you in friendship na………??? and ur guess was lil right lil wrong…..
    I was really busy but not the usual busy….I was busy enjoying my 3 days with my lil sisy (she’s so cute cousin sisy…just 1 year..4 months)

    Bear my long comment coz now an not tired and moreover I already said na….I wanna comment more???

    • Dharsha

      And u gave the treat one to those who guessed….u r so mean….
      No…I will not accept that….
      That too chocolates only for them…..
      Nahi it shouldn’t happen….
      Mujhe bhi treat chahiye…..
      In return to that treat I will also give u a treat coz my pyaari sis have scored 461 in her class 12 boards…..
      She’s is a cbse commerce student…..
      Now am scared for my results alot…..sacchi ???

      • Sha

        Awww.. Baby gussa hogayi.. K don’t worry enjoy this chocolates..
        N u know Sanky ke bhasha mei chocolate ka Matlab.. ? hope u got me.. U want chocolate huh.. ?? kyu sanky se bhijwaadu…

        N Congo for ur sissy..

    • Sha

      Noooo.. I missed u moooooorrrrrrreeeeee… See my more.. ?

      Dont worry u will get to know it soon.. No need to guess… After all Dimag sone ke liye hota hai, Soch ne ke liye nahi ..? me too poor at guesses…

      Glad u liked the epi.. Was thinking, is this epi necessary then something striked in my mind which resulted in this…

      Ahhhaha…. U liked kiss ka kissy huh..?
      Hoho.. Yek kiss kya hai, aur kissy kya hai.. ? well I knew it…

      Their plan is something spl.. U will knew it..

      Hooooo.. Thank god i guessed right.. Everyone will get busy ,if a baby comes.. I too love to disturb them by tickling.. ? the feeling when they kick with their Chotu legs.. Awww, it’s sooo adorable… U r lucky..
      But at my home, everyone grown up.. But my neice, they are such a devils.. Always disturbs me..

      • Dharsha

        U know mera dimag kuch nahi sochega if my eyes see chocolates?…hahaha ??…..
        And I think the u deserve a better kick from the babies for tickling…….??
        Just kidding…..lol ?
        Aur dimag soch aur sone ke liye not only sone ke liye…….waise bhi tumhara dimag bohut work diya?…..double duty???

      • Sha

        Hehe.. Double duty huh.. Thoda sa kissy se dihan hataaya hota toh ab tak, guess kardiya hote… ?

        Waise kahu toh, mera dimag sote waqt hi bahut kaam karta hai..?

  7. I can happily sleep now coz I’ve been waiting for ur post since morning & u posted it thanks yaar episode is awesome, enjoyed it a lot pls don’t forget to post tmrw Goodnight dear

    • Sha

      Aww.. Sorry for making u wait… Glad u liked it… I submitted the epi long back yaar, this tu is so lazy .. Huh…

      Will try to update asap..

  8. Hope

    Not again.. Saahil naam sunkar mujhe itni irritation hote hai ki usse maar daalne ki man karte hain.. Actually i used to lyk Anuj.. But now i hate him..
    “Meri swasan ko seperate karna mushkil nahi naa mumkin hai…”
    aur pehle sirf Sanskar naughty dhi.. Ab poore pariwar naughty ho gayi.. Including our swt Swara…… Kya karoon.. Parents ki azar hai aur precisely WRITER ki kiyakaran hai… lol… I just love dis.. I already fell 4 ur ff.. Dude..

    • Sha

      Noooo hope… Relax.. Sahil bechara…. Usko baksh do..

      Hahaha.. Sab toh Pehle se hi naughty hai, bas abhi saamne aaya unka asli chehra…

      Haawwwww glad u liked it….

  9. Sree

    This ep was super duper awesome. I am veryyyy happy cuz i guessed right. U r correct sangat ka asar hai. Agar sangat itniiiiiii achi ho toh sab kuch aasan hai.hehe. Bachpan se smart hun tumhari tara. πŸ˜‰ I am loving the convincing part. I am eager to see how she convince’s him in home. Vaise sanky ko kyun itna tease kara rahe ho swara ke haat se. My poor sanky how will he keep up with his anger when swara does such cute things πŸ™‚ Why is this sahil again i mean his name but it was very nice πŸ˜‰ post nxt soon dear i am eager to know what happens nxt πŸ™‚

    • Sree

      Treat keliye thanks but u gave only little chocolate i am very sad for that πŸ™ Very bad sha how can u give only two chocolates. Main katti kar leti lekin icecream dekhe bigal gayi. So iss bar maf kar rahi hun. Nxt time kabhi treat deneke time bohot sari chocolates rakna ok. πŸ˜‰

      • Sha

        Ohio.. Tumei bhi chocolate chahiye.. Sanky ko bheju kya.. ?

        Voh uski bhasha ka chocolate Dedega.. ?

    • Sha

      Glad u liked it.. Haha.. Smart huh.. I cant stop smiling ear to ear, after reading tat,. Actually my school frnds tease me by calling smart.. Not for the smartness…? but something else.. Hey hey.. Kys karu public forum hai.. U remainded me of tat.. So sweet of u…

      Itna sweet aur salty tarike se convince kar kar bhi yah sanky maan hi nahi raha hai… My poor swara.. God pls give her strength to convince more. .. ?

      • Sree

        I will me more than happy actually i will on cloud nine if u send sanky. Usske paas hamesha chocolate hota hai yaar and i am mad about chocolates. Pata nahi tumhe smart kyun kehete hai par mujhe toh smart meri great intelligence ke liye bolte hai πŸ˜‰ Vaise sha whats ur age dear btw i am sweet 16 πŸ™‚

      • Sha

        Next month going to be 21…
        Hey hey I’m elder than u… ?!!!

        Ah ha u want sanky’s spl chocolates huh.. Remember princess.. Swara ne kya kiya.. ?… For just a hand shake she pushed her in pool.. U want chocolate, just imagine. ?..

        N by the way, will tell ur mom tat u need sankys spl choco.. ???lol..

        Just kidding ?

  10. Jyoti

    Awesome epi…u know what? When i came to know that the name of the guy who saved swara in the serial is SAHIL i just started laughing like a mad thinking that maybe the writer has read ur ff lol

    • Sha

      I’m happy tat u liked it dr… Ha bahut se sahil nikal rahe hai.. See in my ff itself this is third sahil..
      1.imagination sahil
      2.clg wala sahil
      3.train wala sahil..

    • Sha

      OMG… Should I take it in a good form or bad.. Nyways I will take it as a compliment… ?

      Yaar I’m so reserved type.. I dont talk much.. Only with frnds, I open up.. Hehe..tats me..

      I write so much huh.. Acha shall I make it less????????

      I’m Happy tat u love my ff…

  11. nikita

    Hey hi I m happy that you are reading my comments.I thought u r not reading it.I really love your ff Yarr it is soon different sweet ff. I m a die heart fan of swasan so I love your story soon much .
    And yaa that sahils part is amazing Yarr I know now sanky’ s jealousy increase more and more but I really don’t like sahil in swasan lovestory not in serial also but I think bcoz of this swasan will come more close to each other so I m waiting for their interesting journey for back to Home
    And yaa I like the way swara convincing sanky it is sooo cute thanks for swasan romance and teasing I really love it
    Post next part soon I m waiting bcoz I really love ur ff soon much u r a good writer I must say
    And yaa this is for you a long comment bcoz u like to read it naa hahaahaha

    • Sha

      Haaawwwww… I’m not so bad to ignore my sweet readers comments… How can i do tat..

      So sweet of u.. I’m so happy tat u like my ff…

      Sahil.. Naam toh suna hi hoga.. Sab hate karte hai use.. Aakhir sanky ko jealous jo karwata hai.. ?

      So happy for ur long comment.. Loved it…

  12. Its really awesome dear…..keep going nd literally waitimg fr sankys reaction poor veer he z gng to suffer…nd one more thng i always liked ur ff frm epi 1 bt i didnt coment…i was ur regular silent readet bt nw i transformed into regular comment reader:-P

    • Sha

      Awwww…. U liked it.. I’m so happy..

      Hehe.. Glad u came up to Comment.. So sweet of u..

      Sanky ka reaction will be ” yah mera dushman “

  13. vyshu

    wow acha episode tha.
    And sahil’s entry…..i thought it will only b some imaginary character but actually dat person exists…..how will sanky react? plz post next chap asap. And yeah….actually serial waale used d name. What a coincidence!

    • Sha

      Glad u liked it dr…

      Sanky ab filhaal gusse se phula hua hai.. ?.. Let’s c wat he does,it depends on sahilz action…

      Will try to update asap..

  14. Neha

    Sha so good I’m laughing so badly I asked to make swara convince sanky I wanted you to torture her but I forgot indirectly toh sanky hi victim ban jata but still carry on this convincing drama…. Swara’s prank are really oh god…. Jack god San’s expression when Jack told love you but tit for tat when San flirted with princess haha ? and princess got pushed in water and became water princess…. Parents are they really itne badmas isliye bache aise h…. Sahil aww sanku baby gussa ho ga…. Sha one request plz continue sanky to be angry on swara till they reach home…. Guessing I’m not so good but one thing swara is planning to pour her heart out to sanskar…. But parents ?

    • Sha

      Yaar, tumne hi toh kaha tha swara convince kare.. Iska style hai ye.. Acha hai na??

      Glad u liked it..

      Parents ka hi asar hai shayad.. Heheh..

      How will Sanky miss his golden chance. Itna sweet convince raha toh, sab log baar baar rootte rahenge… ?

      Ha, Lets c wat she does… Parents ka pata nahi.. Jo hoga tab dekha jaayega

    • Sha

      OMG.. so many compliments in one go….
      So sweet of u…
      Glad u liked it…
      Will try to update asap..

  15. Sweetie

    Hey Sha baby,
    How r u??
    Busy thi so late comment.. πŸ™
    Haww!! Swara ne kya kiya?? Woh Sanky ko itna pareshaan karti hai, uske liye aise hi chod doon, nahin..So I thought she should convince him in many ways possible.. Hahaha.. πŸ˜€
    Today’s episode is superb,fantastic, plzz give me suggestions for appreciation yaar.. πŸ˜‰ LOL.. I’m lack of words.. πŸ˜€ Ohh!! My poor Sanky.. Getting the sweetest torture ever possible.. πŸ˜‰ Now Swara is going to surprise Sanky..Yayyy!! Ab Sahil kaha se aa gaya… Uff.. My Sanky baba doesn’t get a smooth journey of love,right?? No problem because I’ll get to see cuties all the way.. πŸ™‚
    And the treat.. I didn’t guess anything but I’m going to take all the icecreams,alright?? I’m crazy for them.. Pleaseeeee don’t mind.. Pretty please.. πŸ™‚
    Waiting for the next update buddy.. πŸ˜€
    Take care.. πŸ™‚

    • Sha

      Hey sweety !!!! I’m good…
      Indeed I was waiting for ur comment..

      Haan sweet torcher ever..

      Haaawwww. So mean.. Having ice cream without me!!! Katti…

      Well,i will try to update next chap asap.. Not yet started writing. Today guest came n my work got doubled.. Huh… Really tired..

      Glad u liked the chap.. Tc..

      • Sweetie

        Heya!! I’m fine dear.. πŸ™‚
        Kal sunday tha na, so family time.. πŸ˜€
        Katti?? No No.. See I only took icecreams rey.. I left all other items to you.. πŸ˜‰ So big treat huyi naa?? LOL.. You gave me treat and I’m giving back that treat to you only.. πŸ˜€ So share karenge icecreams,okay??
        Don’t stress yourself,alright?? Start writing only when you feel good.. πŸ™‚
        Are you on FB?? Hain tho ID bataade yaar.. I’ll meet you there too.. πŸ˜€
        Love yaa.. TC.. Bye.. πŸ™‚

      • Sha

        actually i was not on fb.. but i created d account to read swasan ff on fb.. but no frnds,nothing.. to be true i dont know anything abt fb..?… lol… . my fb name ShabFath with two cat pic..

      • Sweetie

        No worries dear.. It happens.. I sent you a friend request.. Accept that.. I also sent you a message.. I don’t open FB that much.. So most probably we’ll chat over TU only.. Cool??

    • Sha

      im from tn dr.. u???
      hmm ya.. i posted it,as my frnd suggested..but not sure to continue there..

  16. Amu

    Hi… really awesome episode… i really wait for ff every day and after reading it, it just makes my day… i suppose it is swaras bday and evryone is planning for dat… next update pls post

    • Sha

      im glad u liked it.. so sweet of u..

      n ya,lets c ,is ur guess true.. n i will update asap..

  17. sakina

    Wow yrrrr what an episode yrr osm fantastic plz update nxt episode as soon as possible plzz

  18. Kavya

    Awesome yaar!!! How u make your ff so funny??? yaar loved it!!? u like writing long replies but I’m really lazy for it lol?? I srsly don’t even want to comment also but u force me to do it? from the time you’ve started your ff I’d always waited for it in bw u became irregular I was angry ?? but now when u post your chappy frequently I’m very happy?? omg!! This was my longest comment?lol?

    • Sha

      Heheh.. So sweet of u.. Glad u liked it dr.. I was irregular coz of some responsibility.. So..

      Keep reading.
      Really Happy for ur Long comment too..
      Don’t stress ur fingers.. ? I will adjust with some small comment.. Lol

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