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Fallen for you…RagLak OS

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Hii friends…this time am back with an OS…do read it and drop your views in comment box…sorry haven’t proof read…
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A road with beautiful small yellow colour flowers on it’s sides is shown…
There three bikes roared…it seems to be a race…
“Whoohoo…you can’t catch us..”a girl turns back and shouts excitedly by shaking her thumbs to the other bikers…
“Bala…make it fast…bhaiyya is about to beat us…”that girl whispers in his ears…
“Ragini…we are in full speed…i can’t speed up more…”Bala makes a pout…
“Ragini…we are coming…”swara from the other bike shouts…
“Bala…Bala…please do it something na…”Ragini hits his head playfully…
“no…we are gonna win the race…”uttara shouts from the another bike like a kid…
Speadbreaker…
“Bala …watch out…”Ragini holds him tight..
“Ragini…hold on tightly…we’re gonna win for sure…”bala assures her…
And to his predictions Bala and ragini combo wins the match…
Swasan and Uttsush slows down at the speadbreaker because their bikes are about to skit…
“yippiee…we won”Ragini gave hifi to Bala…
“madam…please leave my shirt…”Bala sighs her..
“oh sorry sorry…”ragini gets down and jumps in excitement…
“bhaiyya…we won..so today is your treat”ragini points towards sanskaar and Sushanth…
“ok ok…we agree…you won as usual…first movie then dinner…ok ladoo…”swara said in her cute voice…
“deal…”all joined their hands…

Character sketch:
Ragini Malhotra -only daughter of Malhotra family and finished her PG and currently working as an junior scientist in CSIR…
Sanskar Malhotra -Elder brother of ragini and he is owning an trading concern…
Sushanth Malhotra -Second elder to ragini and he is also the part of trading enterprise..
Swara Sanskar Malhotra-wife of sanskar and best friend of Ragini…
Uttara Sushanth Malhotra -wife of sushanth and ragini’s cousin…
Balaji Malhotra-twin brother of ragini and who is enjoying his brother’s wealth even though he is talented…
Ragini mom and dad met with an accident when sanskar was @ 17…after that sanskar and his maami only takes care of the family…sanskar brought up his brother’s and his loveable sister Ragini…
Ragini is special to everyone not only she is the only girl child but the reason is she looks exactly same as her mother…all the three combo consider her as their mother…more than all Bala is fond of ragini…without her Bala can’t do anything…
After Ragini left to Travancore for her career…bala fed up…because he missed her a lot…because of him she got transfer to Mumbai…
Ragini like bike race that too with balaji only because he is the expert in riding…both won many race in their college days…which happens every week with their families too…
Swara was Ragini’s best friend from childhood…swasan always fight with each other but later they understand their love behind every cute fights…they got married officially but swara behaves like a immatured girl even after marriage…sanskar falls for that innocence only…
On the other side uttara is ragini’s maternal uncle’s daughter…they lost their uncle in the same accident…so her aunty(Aarthy) took good care of all the 5 combo(SanSushRagBalaUttara)…
Aarthy fixed UttSush marriage on the same day of SwaSan marriage…Ragini is so happy because her childhood friend and her cousin becomes her bhaabhi…
All the six enjoy each others company…

They reached the theatre…
“bhaiyya…it’s getting late..come fast na…”Ragini make a pout…
“Ahh…bala you took these three girls inside we will come within 5 minutes…”sanskar pleads him…
“bhaai…you’re trapping me again…no way..i can’t handle these three at a time…by the way don’t give assurance orelse swara will start punching me if you didn’t come within 5 minutes means…”Bala makes a sad pout..
“please na chote…”Sushanth requests…
“after buying popcorn…we will be there…”sanskar gave assurance…
Bala gave them a death glare and takes them inside…
“Bala..why your brother is not here…”swara starts pinching him…
“Bala…why the movie not yet gets started…”uttara hits him playfully…
“Ragu…please save me from these two devils…”Bala uttered loudly and sees them both…
Both glare him…”Bala…you said it little bit..naaa…more loudly thinking that as your mind voice …”Ragini burst out laughing…
“devils uh”Swara and uttara punches him hard…
“haiyoo…god save me from this devils…”Bala shouted even more…
“swara bhaabhi…see again..he is cursing us…”uttara punches him and all the three laughs hugging him…
“sorry devar ji..”swara twitched his nose and uttara pulled his cheeks…
“excuse me…”someone touched ragini’s shoulder…
She turns…
“tum Ragini right”a boy asked her…
“yes and you…”Ragini says by giving a glare to Bala who is disturbing her beside…
“Hi…am laksh…i mean Laksh Maheshwari…”laksh forwards his hand…
They shake hands…
“sorry but I couldn’t recognize you…”Ragini apologize…
It’s an awkward moment for laksh and he thought that she is avoiding him because of her family around her…
Sanskar and Sushanth comes…laksh gets tensed while seeing them…”ok…bye will see you later”laksh moves fastly towards his seat at the back…
“hey hello…”Ragini shouts but Bala pulled her…
“Ragu…don’t behave like a kid…sit down…orelse people will shout on you…see movie gets started…”Bala makes ragini sit and holds her hand…
“Bala…do you know that guy…”ragini questioned him…
Bala is about to turn but ragini holds him and says”don’t turn suddenly you brat…he will mistook us…turn casually after few minutes and watch out the man in blue t-shirt who is in the right side corner on the last row of the balcony…”
“ok ok..”Bala turns his gaze towards laksh casually…laksh noticed it and smiles inside…
“laksh…”Bala sounds loudly…
Ragini closes his mouth and says”haan..he said the same name…do you know him??is he your friend…tell something na cutiee”
Bala pushed her hands and uttered”idiot…how can I tell if you hold my mouth”
“sorry sorry…my cutiee na…tell me now…”Ragini calms him…
“ok I will tell you…he is Laksh..laksh maheshwari”he gets interrupted…
“hey I know that…next…”Ragini says like she is much interested…
“hey…wait wait…how do you know him…you said on that day na…”Bala got confused…
“what..”Ragini raises her eyebrows…
“you haven’t saw his pic and it got deleted due to your Mobile failure…”Bala explained her about that incident…
“which pic..which problem da”she hits him and ask him to tell straightly…
“Areyy…small girl…how you became scientist… can’t even understand my clues…ok I will tell…the one who rejected you because you doesn’t want to lose your career for marriage…he is the same laksh…”bala makes a sad pout…
Ragini remembers that incident…

(Flashback )
When Ragini was in Travancore during her training period for her promotion for grade B…her aunty aarthy calls her and inform about an alliance from Maheshwari parivaar…
“maami…it’s too early to get married na”Ragini tries to convince her…
“Ragini…am getting older…i have to see you getting married…so I said ok to the alliance…that family will treat you as their own daughter …please na laadoo… the boy is so good and he is handsome too…”her maami convince her to agree for the proposal
“ok ok…but what bhaai said…”Ragini asked excitedly…
“both Sanskar and Sushanth went to London for official work…they took swara and uttara too…bala and me only seen his pic…wait I will give it to him..”maami gives the phone to Bala and puts in speaker….
“Ragu…he is so handsome and dashing…please agree na…you two will be made for each other…i already send you the pic but you didn’t replied me…”Bala got excited
“Wo…bala my phone is under repair…so I bought new phone in the morning…i haven’t installed any apps because of this training…send me the pic in the evening..but one condition..please tell to his family that I want to pursue my career even after marriage…maami you’re hearing na…”Ragini putforths her condition…
“haan laadoo…i will convey the same to them now itself…take care …bye.. “she is about to cut the call…
“love you…”Bala shouts…
“love you too my twin bird..muaaah…”Ragini cuts the call..
In the evening Ragini waits for Bala message but he called her and tells that they denied the proposal because of the condition…
Bala gets sad…”hey twinny…what’s there to be sad…don’t worry…what to do…it’s your fate that you should be annoyed for some more days too…ha ha…”Ragini laughs loudly…
FB ends…

“Oii…ragu…”Bala shooks her…
“haan…”Ragini comes to senses…
“Intermission…come outside…lets buy something…”Bala drags her…
Ragini nods…
“bhai…me and Ragu will buy snacks and come…swara Bhabhi and uttara Bhabhi what do you want…list it down…then you should not scold me…tell me fast…”Bala waits for their reply…
“hey come da…they will eat what we bring…”Ragini drags him and winks at swara and uttara…
They gave her a glare and says”how mean”at a same time…
“Ragu…ragu…stop dragging me…why you do like that in between”Bala raises his eyebrows…
“hey buddhu…you’re still baby…give them some privacy na…don’t roam over them like a bubble gum…calling Bhabhi Bhabhi…bla bla bla…i think you got it right…”Ragini makes him understand…
“am sorry Ragini…i didn’t think about it…”Bala shooks his head…
“that’s like my cutiee pie…”Ragini pulled his cheeks…
Laksh sees their bonding and smiles unknowingly…”what a bro-sis combo…gonna have lots of fun after my marriage…i love you Ragini…i love everything about you…i don’t know when I fall for you…”laksh lost in her thoughts…

Flashback
Laksh was busy with his office work…Annapurna came over and shows him the picture of Ragini…
“maa…i said it na…if you like her then no problem from my side…”laksh holds her hand and smiles…
“beta…just a have a look…you would like her…she is so cute…”ap keeps her pic on the table…
Laksh finished his office work and he is so tired and feel sleepy…his gaze turns towards the table…he got confused…
“laksh…do you want to have a look at her…naaa…maa is ok with her…why not…let me try once…arggh…what’s happening…cool cool…”laksh got confused…
Laksh slowly goes near the table and tooks her pic and turns it…laksh is so surprised…
Laksh reminisces something…

On the day of the deal with his foreign delegates Mr.Prathap lost his file and explains him about the situation…
“Sir..Wo..i..i lost…i lost it…am sorry…”Mr.Pratheek bends his head down…
“What??u lost…”laksh in anger…
“The file sir…i lost it in the hotel…but don’t worry sir…i will go and get it within an hour…”Mr.Prathap pleads him..
“Hello Mr.Maheshwari…”foreign delegates arrived…
Laksh welcomes them and takes them to conference hall…
“you idiot..saying excuses..they’re here already…”laksh bursts out in anger…
“Sir..”his secretary calls him and stands behind scared…
“What”laksh fumes…
“a girl came here following Mr.Prathap and waited for you…but suddenly she hands over the file to me and went away…”she handed over the file to laksh…
“it’s the same file…thank god…where is she??”laksh runs outside…
“Sir…she went away..already it’s late…let’s go”she reminds him about the conference…
“atleast I should thank her na…”laksh gets sad…
“first let’s finish our conference…then we will find her…i will show you the CCTV footage…”she asks him to come…
Laksh nods…
Conference gets over and the deal has been finalised…laksh gets happy…he drops them to the airport and returns back to the company…
He calls his secretary and asks about the footage…she said that she mailed her pic…he opened it…it’s Ragini…
“excuse me sir…”his secretary comes and handover a small note…
“what’s this”laksh sighs her…
“that girl who returned the file…gave this sir…i forgot about it…”she leaves…
Laksh opens it and smiles…he reads…”it seems to be important…hereafter handle it safely..i handed over the file to Ms.Piya-secretary of your enterprise…~Ragini”…
“thank you so much Ragini…i will find you and tell you face to face…”laksh chuckles…
He searched all over the city but couldn’t find her…

Laksh grinned”finally I found you…that too as my fiance…is it called fate…which united us for life…I searched you in entire city but now I got it…why i couldn’t find you because you are not here…but now you became my fiance…love my life…”
Laksh runs down the stairs with her pic excitedly…but his happiness shattered when durgaprasad denies to pursue her career after marriage…
He heard their conversation…dp and ap turns and sees laksh”the proposal is cancelled…”dp stalked past him…
Laksh heart feels the pain that he never experienced before…yes he starts loving her…
“beta…am sorry…but your father cancelled it due to the condition that ragini putforths…she wants to pursue her career even after marriage…which your paapa dislikes…so he denies the approval…”ap consoles him…
Laksh nods and says”maa…i have important work…so..”
Ap nods positively…

FB ends…

Ragini and Bala comes back with the snacks…
Ragini huffs…Swasan and Uttsush comes to senses…
“here it is…”Ragini gaves them snacks…
“thank you laadoo…”swara pinched her nose…
“Shona…i told you na…don’t pull my nose in public…you’re doing the same…bhaiyya see na…”Ragini makes puppy face…
All smiles…sanskar hugged swara from side and says”I want our family to be like this forever…”
“don’t worry…”swara holds him…
Movie starts…Ragini turns her gaze towards laksh…he stares her…she felt embarrassed and turned her gaze towards the screen…
“Oii…can’t you sit silently…shaking over here and there…haan…”Bala questioned her…
“shut up and watch out the movie..”Ragini fumes…
“how can he reject me…and now behaving like a gentleman… haan…how mean Mr.Lakshya…see the name Lakshya…old fashioned…thank god…am saved…if they agreed means…my name will changes from Ragini Malhotra to Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari…oh no…I can’t even imagine”Ragini POV…
“Ragini…”Bala feeds her the puffs…
“thank you cutiee..”ragini uttered and again lost in his thoughts…
Movie gets over…
“chalo na”Bala drags her…
They reached the parking lot…
Laksh followed them…
“bhaai…you four go for the dinner…we are going home because am not well…”Bala sighs ragini…
“Kya Hua devar ji…”swara and uttara checked his temp…
“arghh…this girls bina…won’t understand…”Ragini whispers…
“swara and uttara…you enjoy…i will take care of him…”ragini makes a faint smile…
Sanskar and Sushanth understand and tooks them…all the four sighs them bye…
“areyy waah..cutiee…today you proved that you too have brain uh..kamaal hai mere twinny…”ragini hugs him…
Bala starts his bike…but it doesn’t gets started because of our laksh’s work…laksh comes over there and says”may I help you guyz…”
“no thanks Mr.Lakshya…”Ragini denies…
“so finally…you recognized me Ms.Ragini Malhotra…”laksh moves close to her..bala comes in between…
“hey you…stay away from her…and we don’t need your help…go away..”Bala fumes in anger…ragini sighs him to be quiet…
“chill bro…you can’t do this kind of works I just offered my help….what to do…you be here itself…it’s already evening…”laksh smiles…
Ragini holds Bala’s hand and sighs laksh to proceed…
Laksh repaired it and accelerates the bike..it gets started…”see…it’s over…”laksh stares Ragini…
She turns away…”anyway thank you for your help Mr.Lakshya…chalo Bala”ragini moves forward…bala starts his bike…
Laksh holds her wrist and says”give me your number..and more thing…ask your cutiee to be in his limits…he is misbehaving with his hone waale Je..”he gets interrupted…
“you be in your limits first…don’t dare to take a word against my brother…got it…”Ragini frees her hand from him and give him a death glare…
Laksh smiles…”what an attitude…not bad…I love this too…i love everything about you…i love you Ragini…”he slaps his head playfully and run towards his car where his friends were waiting…
They leaves…
One fine day…it’s evening 6P.M…Ragini finished her works and leaves from the lab…she goes to the parking and leaves in her scooty…
She leaves…on the way her scooty got punctured and suddenly an omni comes and blocks her way…goons get down and tries to kidnap her…
Ragini shouts “kaun Ho tum…”they tries to tie cloth on her mouth…she struggles to get free from them…
Laksh was on that way…Ragini sees laksh…she bites the goon hand who is trying to tie her mouth…he shouts in pain…
“laksh bachao…laksh…laksh…”Ragini screams…
Laksh turns towards the direction….”Ragini…bhaiyya gaadi rukko…”laksh runs towards her and beats the goons black and blue…laksh’s driver informs the police…
“how dare you touch my girl…”laksh bursts out in angry and beat him hard…
Police comes…some ran away due to the siren…but they caught two goons…
Policemen holds laksh’s collar and says “chalo…”
“nahi inspector…he is innocent…if he didn’t come on time then I can’t imagine…”Ragini interrupted inbetween by laksh…
“Ragini…please don’t say like that…you won’t get hurt till am there…till my last breath…”laksh hugged her…
Ragini didn’t even uttered a word and stand blank like she didn’t pay attention to him…
“it seems like they’re lovers…”policemen whispers between themselves…
“chalo…i will drop you at your home…”laksh holds her hand…
She shooks her head negatively and goes to her scooty…”aahh…i forgot about it..”she turns and hits Laksh who is standing behind her…
“that’s ok..come…i will drop you…”laksh holds her wrist and drags her…
She sits silently and haven’t uttered…laksh huffs and says”so you got transferred over here…”
“haan…last week only I got transferred here…”Ragini uttered in a soft voice…
“are you comfortable here…matlab do you…”laksh gets interrupted…
“haan…am comfortable…”Ragini smiles and looks down…
“am sorry for the previous incident…that time fault is our side…my paapa denied the proposal…”laksh apologize…
“no no…that’s ok…even that time am not interested in getting married…am happy that uncle itself cancelled it…infact I haven’t seen your pic…so only I can’t able to identify you on theatre…am sorry..”Ragini tells him everything…
“oh..it’s fine “laksh hides his pain…
“friends..”Ragini forwards her hand…
RagLak shakes hands and reached her house…
Laksh gets down and says”ok bye…take care…”
“kaha jareyo…come in…”Ragini tooks him inside by holding his wrist…
“Ragini…leave me…if your bhaai sees me then…he will beat me black and blue…”laksh pleads her…
Ragini laughs inside and says”don’t worry…he won’t do anything…”
Swara and Bala comes and sees them…
“tum..”Bala screams…
“devar ji…u know him before itself uh…”swara uttered in low tone…
“haan Bhabhi…he is Laksh who rejected my twinny..”bala whispers in his ears…
“really…but dekho their Jodi is super na…”swara winks…bala glare her…
“kya Hua swara…what’s going on”sanskar holds her from behind…
“bhaiyya…”Ragini comes forward and tells him everything…
Sanskar goes towards laksh…”am finished today…”laksh gets tensed…
To his surprise sanskar hugged him…”thank you so much Mr.laksh…if you weren’t there…i just can’t imagine…”sobs comes out from sanskar’s eyes…
“that’s ok bhaai…”laksh hugged back…
Ragini chuckles and winks at him…
“you’re so cute Ragini…I love you so much day by day…”laksh grinned…
“ok now am going…we will meet soon…”laksh sighs bye to everyone…
Sanskar sighs Ragini to send off…Ragini nods…
“thank you so much once again…”Ragini smiles…
“don’t talk to me…you prank me na…your bhai didn’t recognize me at all…but you laughs when I am tensed”laksh makes a pout…
“hey…did I tell you bhaiyya will react when see you…no na…infact except Bala and maami noone knows you…that time all of them were in London…so don’t worry…”Ragini laughs again…
Laksh hands her phone which falls on the road…”thanks again…”Ragini chuckles…
“see your call history…last dialled number is mine..”laksh winks and sighs her bye…
Ragini glares…but blushes after he left from there…
Swara,uttara and Bala stares her…
“what…”Ragini shakes her head…
“Oii…kya Hua…”Bala shooks Ragini…
“haan…cutiee…kya??…”Ragini react that she doesn’t understand what he is trying to say…
“kya matlab…what you’re doing with him…i told you na…”bala panics…
“chill na Bala…there is nothing between us…don’t worry…”Ragini calms him and goes to her room…
“Ragu…i know you more than anyone…you are in love with him..i don’t know what gonna happen…”Balaji whispers…
Soon RagLak became friends…they share everything between them…
One fine day Ragini waits for Laksh in the park nearby…
“sorry sorry…am late…”laksh holds his ears…
“that’s ok..chalo…”Ragini gets into his car…
They leaves…
“laksh…where are we going??”Ragini asked him in excitement…
“wait Ragini…i will tell you…”laksh holds her hand…
She feels shivering in her body with his touch…but didn’t react…
Laksh stops the car and blindfolds her with his hands…
“laksh…what you’re doing..tell me na…”Ragini got excited…
He tooks her near the waterfalls and unfolds his hands from her eyes…
“Wow…”Ragini opens her mouth…
“Ragini…i wanna tell you something which I wish to…”laksh stammers…
“kya laksh…tell me…”Ragini holds his hands…
“Ragini I love you…you’re my world…my everything is you…will you be mine…will you marry me…”laksh proposed her with the ring and red rose…
The next moment the ring is in ragini’s finger shining bright…
Laksh hugs her…she pushed him..she didn’t recognize when she forwards her hand to him and when he makes her wear the ring..
“Laksh…what you are saying…just come to senses…it’s you who rejected me…we are just friends…”Ragini shouts like she didn’t love him and returns back the ring…
The fact is that she falls for him unknowingly but her ego prevents her to express her feelings because of the previous incident…
Laksh tells her about that denial happened because of his father and that time too he loves her a lot…he also tells her about that file missing incident…
“Ragini…please try to understand me…i love you and will in future too…i will convince my paapa to agree…then will you accept my proposal…”laksh gave her assurance…
“laksh frankly speaking…my family is everything to me…if my bhaai,maami,bhaabhi agree with the proposal means…i have no problem at all…if they didn’t then am sorry…”Ragini tries to leave from there…
Laksh holds her wrist and pulled her towards him…”am asking about your feelings…not your family’s acceptance…tell me what you feel for me…will you…”laksh stares her…
They shared an eyelock…Ragini remains silent…
“shall I take this silence as your acceptance…what say??”laksh raises his eyebrows…
Ragini didn’t react to his question…”I got the answer…”laksh leaves her and moves towards his car…
But he stops when two arms wrapping him from behind…”I love you too..”Ragini blushes…
Laksh turns and kissed her forehead…
“I started loving you from the day we met in theatre…and when you save me from the goons I realized it…but our family is the one which makes me feel bad…”Ragini expressed her feelings…
“I will make everything fine…you’re mine…”laksh hugged her…
They enjoy the nature’s beauty and finally reached their home….
Ragini tells everything to Bala and asks him for the help…swara and uttara overhears it…
“so my laadoo is in love…”all the three says in excitement and starts tickling her…
Ragini runs over the entire house…they followed her…
She hides behind sanskar who reached home from office right now…
“hey guys…what’s going on…”sanskar asked them…
“Wo…sanskar..our Ragini is in love…”swara opened it casually…all glares her…
“kya…with whom…”sanskar and sushanth at the same time…
“with laksh…”uttara winks…
“oh…that guy who save you na…you haven’t tell me na laadoo..but good selection. ..am so happy for you da…”sanskar hugged Ragini…
But the twist comes when sanskar came to know about laksh as dp’s son..
He gets angry…”first they rejected…then their son proposed you…do they think us as fools…no never…i will get my sister married to a guy who respects her values…i hate them..Ragini just forget him…”sanskar warns her and stalked past her…
Swara sighs Ragini that she will make him understand…
“Sannu…”swara hugged him from behind…
“swara…just go away from here..i know you came here to convince me…am not interested please leave me alone…”sanskar shouts…
“but sanskar…”swara got interrupted…
“swara…you can’t understand…do you know how much it hurts when someone rejects you…just think about it…”sanskar shakes her…
“sanskar…am telling the same thing…last time it was not laksh’s fault it’s his family who denied for the proposal…but now Ragini and laksh loves each other…ok let me ask you one thing…”swara tries to make him understand…
“what…tell me..”sanskar gets irked
“what will you do when I deny your proposal because of my family…eventhough I love you the most…what will be your reaction…”swara shooks her head to and fro…
Sanskar realized what he has done with RagLak…
He ran towards ragini’s room and knocked it…he goes inside and hugged her tight…
“am sorry Ragini…it was my mistake…but don’t worry I will make everything fine..it’s a promise..tomorrow I will talk with them…”sanskar said by cupping her face…
Ragini cries hugging him…”thank you so much bhaai…love you a lot…”Ragini said in excitement…
She ran towards the car and leaves to laksh’s concern…
She enquires about him to his secretary and she points towards the conference room…
“Laksh…”Ragini opens the door and shouts in excitement…
Laksh stares her and they lost in each other eyes…
Mr.Prathap shooks him and says”Sir”…laksh sees everyone in the hall staring RagLak…he felt embarrassed and sighs Ragini to wait outside…
“Excuse me guys…will be back within 5 minutes…”laksh stalked past them hurriedly towards the door…
He sees Ragini waiting in his cabin…he opened the door…she ran towards him and hugged him tightly…
“kya Hua laadoo…what makes you to come here…”laksh said teasingly…
Ragini is so happy that makes her to kiss him all over his face which in return makes laksh stand shock…
Ragini laughs…”What happened…”laksh makes her sit in his chair and he holds her from behind…
She turns facing him and says”bhaiyya agreed…”
“kya…”laksh jumps in excitement…
“but it’s been a tough one for me..at first he dislikes…but swara and bala makes him agree…he also said that he will convince uncle jii…am so happy laksh…”Ragini hugged him…
“me too Ragini…”laksh said by cupping her face…
“don’t worry…i will talk with my paapa about us today evening…”laksh kissed her forehead…
His secretary knocks the door…”Sir…the clients are waiting..”she giggles…
“Wo…am coming…”laksh replied…
Ragini sighs him not to go…
“Just few minutes…i will be back…”laksh kisses her hands…
Ragini nods…
Laksh comes back after the meeting and said”come let’s go home together and tell paapa about our relationship…”
Ragini stands not moving an inch…”come na…”laksh drags her…
“that won’t sounds good laksh…you yourself ask permission…bhaiyya will come today to your home…”Ragini hugged him and they leaves…
Before Laksh reaches his home sanskar came…and he is trying hard to convince dp…
Ragini calls laksh…he picks and says”haan…bolo…”
“Laksh…bhaiyya….”Ragini got interrupted…
“yes Ragu…he is here only trying to convince my dad…i don’t know what to do…”laksh panics…
“don’t worry laksh…we have one last chance…try to convince uncle…if he didn’t agree…then I will talk to him laksh…”Ragini consoles him…
While saying that Ragini reached his home…”laksh…”ragini calls his name…
“Ragini…tum…”laksh gets shocked…
“don’t worry…everything will become fine…i will talk with uncle…”she holds his palm and moves forward…
Laksh stands in shock…Ragini overhears their conversation where sanskar is convincing dp…
“sorry for interrupting in between…am ragini…”she introduces herself and takes durgaprasad’s blessings…
“khush raho beta…”dp blessed her…
“I know paapa you don’t like in allowing bahu to work outside…but if you don’t like means I will quit my job too…”Ragini said in one breath…
“Ragini…what are you saying…peoples are struggling hard to place in CSIR but you’re saying like this…”laksh interrupts them…
“laksh…stay away…this the convo between the father and daughter…what say paapa..”Ragini winks at laksh…
Durgaprasad is touched because he have no daughter and smiles inside that he got a girl who is his bahu and his daughter too…
DP goes outside without saying anything…”paapa…”laksh holds him…
“laksh…leave my hands…there is lot of works to do with..because there is only 5 days remaining for your engagement with Ragini …”DP smiles…
Laksh hugged him…Ragini got excited and hugs sanskar and run towards DP and RagLak got blessings from him…laksh hugged sanskar…
“come beta…let’s share the works.. “dp takes sanskar with him…
Ragini calls Bala and tells him about their engagement…
“Ragu…put the phone in speaker…i want to talk with laksh too…”Bala said in excitement…
Ragini smiles and put the phone in speaker…
“laksh are you there…”Bala asked him…
“haan bhaai…bolo…”laksh smiles…
“am sorry laksh for misbehaving with you…please take care of my twinny jeju…she is my treasure…if you hurt her means I will break your bones…”Bala warns him..
Ragini chuckles..
“I know Bala…she is so important to you…don’t worry…i will make her feel the same as like she is with you guys…i promise…i will keep her happy always…and I won’t break it…”laksh assured him…
“thank you so much jeju…I believe you…”Bala cuts the call and he tells everyone about RagLak’s engagement…everyone jumps in excitement…
Laksh holds ragini’s wrist and took her outside to the same place where he proposed her…
“So now…will you be mine…”laksh kneels down and forwarded his hand…
“yes”Ragini blushes and laksh makes her wear the ring…they hugged and Ragini kissed his cheeks…
“but Ragini why did you say like that…what happens if paapa asks you to quit your job…”laksh raised his eyebrows…
“I will quit laksh…i will do anything for you…”Ragini holds his palm and enjoys the sound that created due to the flow of water from higher altitude…
Sobs comes from laksh eyes…
“I love you Ragini…”laksh kissed her cheeks…
“I love you too Mr.Lakshya…ha ha”Ragini blushes…

Happy ending
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~Darshu

52 Comments
  1. I have read this as swasan os!!! Why do you guys copy the concept just make up a story yourself!!

    1. Darshini

      Hello…this is my story…i haven’t copied from anywhere…i have written on my own…see the dialogues…what’s the name of that swasan OS…all dialogues are mine…may be the concept is similar …but I haven’t copied it…

      1. Sally_blr

        Hey dear. Don’t take such comments seriously. Keep writing. I know such comments hurt but you got to ignore negative thoughts and people for your own good. Just tell her a thank u and finish it off. Because silent reactions are the best weapons against such people. Sorry to waste your time with my blabbering. I loved the story. Keep writing and keep smiling

    2. Sally_blr

      Hello dear just felt an urge to reply you. The SwaSan OS you are talking about might be copied from somewhere you never know. You know we are more than 600 chores of people on earth so it happens that a person might think of the same thing at a time. So you cannot say copied alright. You cannot blame anyone about copying the concept. I hope we have freedom of thought so she has thought about it. So do understand the difference between thinking and copying. If someone write a story about increasing women abuse in India you cannot call that copy of your dreams are mine. So basically understand it and most importantly Swaragini has ended long back so please drop this hatred also. If you can’t say good then don’t say anything at all.

      1. Darshini

        Thnks dear…it hurts me…so only I said like that…don’t take it serious…and sorry if I mentioned anything wrong…

  2. it was jst brilient yar..amazing..plz give more os on raglak plz

    1. Darshini

      Thnks ..glad u liked it…

  3. It’s awesome dear…I liked it to the core

    1. Darshini

      Thanks dear…glad u liked it…

  4. Harinipriya

    It;s really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee. Loved it sooooooooooo much. I think so it fits better to Raglak than Swasan

    1. Darshini

      Thnks haripriya..glad u liked it…

  5. Amazing, excellent, mind blowing, superb. Loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq jaan…glad u lovd it…

  6. A.xx

    Amazing and loved it xx

    1. Darshini

      Thanks dear…am glad that you lovd it…

  7. Shana98

    Awesome loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq Shana…am glad that you lovd it…

  8. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq Sindhu dear…am glad you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq Vk…glad you liked it…

  9. Cute and lovely

    1. Darshini

      Tq lovely…glad you liked it…

  10. superb!!! loved it!!

    1. Darshini

      Tq chandu…glad you liked it…

  11. Superb…..
    Loved it…..

    1. Darshini

      Tq teito kun…am glad that you lovd it…

  12. Asw

    It’s so cute keep going

    1. Darshini

      Tq asw…am glad that you liked it…

  13. Astra

    sorry for late comment… i took long time reading it as this is lonnnggggg os…. but, enjoyed it. i simply get confused when many charecters are there… hahaha… but enjoyed it though… awesome and beautiful

    1. Darshini

      Thnks da…no pblm…am glad that u liked it…

  14. Awesome
    Loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq tani dear…am glad that you liked it…

  15. Asra

    hi dear….Hw r u? …fabulous os yar….ragini oda twin balaji character superbbb dear….raglaji both r cute…2per oda ella scene superbbb….loved it alot….laksh proposal place semma….dp kida peasum pothu ragini laksh’a pathu kanaduchathu than highlight….sweet os dear….plz write another one dear…waiting for you…na ungala darshu nu kupidava…tkcr dear…

    1. Darshini

      Thnks da…actually raglaji is me and my bro combo…unakku epdi thonutho apdi koopdu da…tke cre too dear…

  16. osm…

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…am glad that you liked it..

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…glad u liked it…

  17. Jazzy

    it was soooi good amaazinggg

    1. Darshini

      Tq jazzy dear…am glad that you liked it…

  18. superb

    1. Darshini

      Tq Saranya…glad you liked it..

  19. IQRA222

    Awesome really loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq IQRA dear…am glad that u liked it…

  20. Sangeetha

    @cutiee Don’t make others hurt by ur comments..She didn’t copy from any os..Why should she copy? Writing a story is not a simple thing..People may think similar..concept may be similar to both..if u can’t encourage, then don’t discourage anyone..just keep silent.. I just get aggravated by these kind of people who came to comment first about belittling and discouraging others…just understand one thing frnd there are many people with same thoughts…Nd there s huge difference btwn copy and create .. @vp the story s awesome ra as usual..keep writing..the way of delivering the story is outstanding…

  21. Darshini

    Aww my dr bestiee…thnks for your support da…and also thnks for being with me in alwyz in each and everything…love u loads…
    Am glad that you liked the concept…

  22. Awesome os dear and loved Raglak

    1. Darshini

      Tq ammu…am glad that you liked it….

  23. Ragz_teju

    superb

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear😊 glad u liked it…

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