Fallen apart – shot three

Hello guys. I am back. Thanku everyone for commenting om my episode. It feels grt to have u all. So again this episode specially jaldii posted for vaasu di. She asked me actually ordered me to post today itself. So here it is. Hope u all like it.

Shakti- i never thought i will be having sny silent reader. I am soo happy. Yes dear its going to be happy ending. Dont worry๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

Bulbul- its ok if u are unable to comment. I know u r busy. No problem sweetheart ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜love u๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ™ˆ

Ayu- tension not. Yeh dono sath hie honge๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

FALLEN APART……SHOT THREE

Next morning *
Everyone was very happy, as today is chinki and adityas mehndi ceremony. Chinki was wearing a copper colour long gown dress. Twinkle was wearing a baby pink lehnga. She looked amazing with her real flower jwellery. Kunj was mesmerised to see her.
Soon the program started and chinki was continusally asking twinkle to sit beside her but rishabh took her for the dance. They started dancing on navrai maajhi.

Navrai majhi laadachi ladachi ga
Avad hila chandrachi chandrachi ga
Navrai majhi navsaachee navsaachee ga
Apsara jashi indrachi indrachi ga
(Twinkle started dancing on this somg with her friend sarah , they were twirling, moving their butt)

Navrai majhi laadachi laadachi ga
Avad hila chandrachi chandrachi ga
Navrai majhi navsaachee navsaachee ga
Apsara jashi indrachi indrachi ga

Navrai chali sharmaati ghabraati woh
Piya ke ghar ithlaati balkhaati woh,
Surmai naina chalkaati chalkaati woh,
Piya ke ghar bharmaati, sakuchati woh!

Chunar mein iski, Sitaare
Saare chamkeele chamkeele chamkeele
Kangan mein iske (ho) bahaare
Aaj hariyaale, hariyaale, hariyaale
( Twinkle went near chinki and cleared her tears and started touching the mirrors in her dress, then her bangles)

Navrai maajhi laadachi laadachi ga
Avad hila chandrachi chandrachi ga
Navrai maajhi navsaachee navsaachee ga
Apsara jashi indrachi indrachi gaโ€ฆgaโ€ฆgaโ€ฆga! ๐Ÿ˜€

Sunyoji isko, Rakhyo jatan se
O Badi naazuk hain naazuk hain naazuk
kali hai anmolโ€ฆ. kali hai anmolโ€ฆ
( Rishabh went near chinki and kept his hand on her head and kissed her forehead)

Aaoji aaoโ€ฆ thumkha lagaoonโ€ฆ
Zara behako ji behako ji behako
Khushiyon ke baaje dhol
Khushiyon ke baaje dhol
( Twinkle and Rishabh were dancing together nd then they pulled everyone for dancing )

Then the gift session started. Kunj came and gave chinki a very big box. This is a small present from my side chinki said kunj with a wide grin.
The best gift that you can give me is, go talk to twinkle once kunj said chinki tears in her eyes. Kunj didnt made any eye contact with her and he went and stood in the corner. Its been two hours and the gift session was going on. Soon the gift session finished and chinki realised the absence of twinkle. She was completely scared and she screamed twinkles name as loudly as she can. Where is twinkle??? Kahan hai twinkle screamed chinki and she started running here and their like a maniac. She was running in the corridor of the hotel, when she saw twinkle lying on the floor. She quickly went to her and started patting her cheeks. She was shocked to see blood coming from her mouth.

Everybody came and aditya took twinkle to her room. Soon doctor arrived and chinki told everyone about twinkles condition. I am sorry its my fault. I came to knoe yesterday night. I didnt told anyone about this because twinkle stopped me cried chinki.
How can u do this?? Shouted aditya.
Bhai stop shouting on chinki. Its not her fault. Dont dare to shout on her again bluted out twinkle. I didnt tell anyone bec i didnt want to disturb anyone more. Please dont blame her cried twinkle.
Soon trio shared a hug. Twinkle refused to take any treatment. Kunj was day by day feeling guilty. He dont know wat was happening with him, but all he wanted to do was embrace twinkle. He wamted her badly. He wanted to talk to her. He wasnt able to understand his feelings.

It may be a new feeling for him , but he wanted to spend time with twinkle. Call her siyaapa queen, love her, and moreover embrace her.

Guys i have written lines along with the lyrics too. Plzz do read them also. Hope u alike it. Two more shots to go. I really love writing but i cannot be a frequent writer nd kya pata tu bhi chodna pade toh. I am not confirmed about anything guys. I know this episode is also boring but in next episode u all will definitely see twinj confrontation.
Maybe ill post next shot on friday. I am not confirm. I amhave alot of tutions. If i get tym ill post tomorrow also.
I didnt do proof reading. If any errors please ignore them๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

Plzz do comment. Comments chahiye bohoot saare. Ok guys samajh gaye na.
Love u all๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’œ
Thanks for supporting me. I really feel grt.
Love u๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜‰
Bieeee
Alvida
Fir milenge chalte chalte

13 comments

  1. Adya

    Adya

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    Chiku di…..hayyeeeeeee…..
    Soooo cute….plzz ye fallen apart ko jldi se joined together kr do !!!!!
    Well that episode was outstanding…I loved it…like seriously…
    Well try Posting soon…
    Love u…Nd hnn don’t leave TU…plzz

  2. Ayu

    Ayu

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    Meri pumpkin pie!!! Tume sachchi mujhe rulane ki thaan rakhi hai…i loved it sooo much! Ab jaldi post karna…wait mat karaana๐Ÿ™ˆโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  3. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Chiku my cutiepie its awesome loved it
    I’m so excited fr next update bohat wait kar rahi hu n eager also
    Plsssss asap
    Loved it n love u

  4. Kanchi

    Kanchi

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    So adorable post
    Plzzz post soon
    Plzzz don’t make sad ending plzzzzz
    I don’t wan
    Want to cry jukam ho jata hai
    Hehe bye see U soon

  5. |Registered Member

    Chiku meri jaannnnnnn tysm for posting soon…amazing epi…very desperate for TwiNj confrontation…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next by tomorrow…cant wait for TwiNj confrontation…

    #XOXO โค

  6. twinj

    Hey chiku,
    Bahat bahat acha tha.Too gud.Luved it.Awesom amazing fab epi.Twinj ko apart maat karna balki unko unite karna ok.Post soon n sry if I won’t be able to cmt but will try to cmt.Post soon.

    Lots of luv,
    twinj

  7. Simiyy

    Simiyy

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    Hey
    It was really emotional.
    I can’t wait for the for the next one
    Try to post ASAP
    Take care
    Good luck for your exams
    Loads of love ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

  8. Sushmitha

    Amazing chiku luved it and I think twinkle should not forgive kunj so easily and plz give a positive ending

  9. Kruti

    Kruti

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    Chikuuuuuuuuu………….I know i am late……..but u know meri condition with exams nd stuff

    Anyways the shot was Good…..looking forward to Twinj’s confrontation
    Hope u continue soon

    Loads of Love ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Awesome just loved it Kunj’s feelings ๐Ÿ˜
    Twinkle’s condition๐Ÿ˜ข love you post soon โค๐Ÿ˜˜

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