when I fall in love (ragsan and swasan) episode 24

Hii darlings tnk u for ur love nd support nd happy birthday teju darling .

Niya darling if there is no swaras fault then what is tani’s Fault he is a kid how can he accept at once that swara is his real mom but till now he is thinking ragini as his mother .u r saying that in my story iam not justfying any of the charecter that was the story in reality no one will get what they want nd things changes according to time that is what happening I think u r die hard fab of swarasanskar thats y its hurting u a lot first let me complete my story completly that how it happens nd if u think its a worst story if I unite ragsan then its ur view I can’t do anything for that nd tnk u for wasting ur time in reading my ff

Deepa:really deepa if rag loves sanky she is chrecterless how can u say that she just liking him for his affection nd care that she have been missing till now she too suffered a lot these years.y all know how difficult to a girl to live strong with out her parents nd after many years she got some support so she will defnetly raise some feelings towards him .
Nd tnk u all for ur suggessions to unite raglak nd all but I have decided the plot no I can’t change it for ur comments so sorry for that nd if u r not satisfied with my view then iam sorry

Swara :ragini!!!
Rag nd Sanky released their hug nd saw swara nd were.tensed

Swara:rag r u crying ???
Rag:noo dii
Swara:don’t lie I can see it nd I know u very well
Rag:nothing like that just its a happyness of ur return

Swara:ohh k Sanky wt r u doing hear nd wts going on btwn jija nd saali (baava maradalla madya )
Sanky:she is crying soo….

Swara:she is always like that sentii.ok leave it wr is tani.

Rag:he is in his room dii come I will drop u there (swara in wheel chair only )

Swara:noo Sanky u drop mee

They left rag sat there only
Rag to herself :wt r u doing rag u hugged him.y r u doing this u know very well that he loves swara nd swara is ur dii u love her very much then how can u betray her by doing soo .enough till now she have suffered a lot but she deserves some happiness there is only one solution for this problem she wiped her eyes

Scene shifts to swasan
Sanky was thinking about what happened there
Swara:wt r u thinking Sanky

Swara:no problem u can ask if u want to ask any thing
Sanky:u didn’t misunderstand us naa
Swara:what?? Do u really think that I will misunderstand u both
Sanky:tnk u for ur trust
Swara:y not I trust my sister more than u I know her very well
Sanky(fake anger):soo u don’t trust mee
Swara:u two r equal to mee
Sanky was happy
They reached tani’s room
Tani was crying by lying on bed
Swara saw him crying nd worried
Swara:wt happened tani y r u crying
Tani saw swara nd wiped his tears
Tani:maa u hear ..
Swara:haa voo I want to spend some time with u .
Tani:y not maa come
Sanky took swara near tani
Swara:ok tell mee about ur self wt r u studying
They have a casual.talk sanky sees them lovingly
Rag saw this from distance nd feels happy

All reached dining table except ragini
Tani to dp:daduu maa (he stopped)voo maasi nahi aayii

Dp:she went out

Sanky:out that to this timee
Swara saw Sanky ( surprised for his concern to rag)
Dp:voo she have some imp meeting
Sanky:meeting ?? I don’t know about it nd she atleast didn’t informed mee
Dp:don’t know
Swara:its ok Sanky she have some work only then she went at this time

Sanky(in mind):I know she was.disturbed about tani thats y she want to stay away from all godd plzz make sure that nothing should happen to her

Tani(in mind):I know maa u r upset with mee but it is necessary for u to understand that I can’t live without u nd u can’t live without mee

Scene shifts to rag who is driving her car fastly nd stopped at a lonely place

Rag:y god y u always ply withwjy feelings .first after my birth u took away my momm I mommt know any thing nd when I come to know about world society used to critisicritisize meeing iam a bad luck girl who killed my momm but ican’t understand one thing if my mom died then what is my fault in that .then swra dii used to.console mee nd she took care of mee nd dad nd dii .my dii became my world we took care if each other but one day u took her also nd then my dad .at that time u gave mee tani for the meaning of my life .I didn’t gave birth to him but I love him a lot .he is my chaild then u gave Sanky who slowly became my support in need nd u again gave my dii back .u returend every thing but I can’t understand y iam alone now .tani is not my son any more how can I live with out him .u snached my happyness I hate u I hate u .rain starts falling .nd u were not satisfied with that also y u beought,sanky in my life nd y u created those situations that I started feeling for him nd now he is also not my hus u nached every thing from mee till now I trusted u a lot but not any more I can’t trust u any more .if dii comes to know that I married Sanky then she will bee broken plzz if u want to punish mee u can punishh but leave my dii I have lost my every thing so altlest make her to live happily don’t snach her happiness back

Epi ends
Screen freezes with sad faces of tani nd Sanky nd crying face of rag ng questioning face of swara

I know its a small one but situation demanded

Hii darlings plzz lets mee complete my full story then only u can understand my story before that only u r assuming the story and concluding I know all swasan fans are hurting but sorry for that
Urs darling pavani

Credit to: pavani


    • pavani darling

      Tnk u lovely darling I was not hurt its not necessary that every one should like our story its ok

  1. sss

    oh poor ragini really she has to go through Mmuch pain..now she has just tani plz don’t make ragini n tani separate…whatever the situation was bt ragini is tani real mom as she take care of him till now like mom….hope ragsan also get together
    nice episode
    update soon

  2. Lovely ( FF Broken heart)

    You know Pavane I love your story! Everyday I wait for your episode!
    Follow your heart, if you want to reunite ragsan do this!
    And yes I understand what you are trying to express, Ragini and Tani share a special bond, we cannot separate them! Continue ?

    • pavani darling

      Tnk u lovely for understanding my plot nd ya I will write what I have decided I can’t change my decision for others

  3. poonam

    awesome yaar
    i can understand what r u trying to show or tell ur plot is superb plsz don’t worry about bashers u continue it its one of the best ff………..

  4. Jitha

    hai pavani till now i was a silent reader but today i m commenting on ur ff…first of all let me tell u ,u r an awesome writer…….u could showcase a different motherly bond of ragini with tani and that was too good ragini took care of tani when he needed a mom the most so obviously tani love her the most and he comes to know that ragini is not his mom but maasi and obviously he cannot accept swara as his mother bt he do love her…nd ragini married sanky jst for tani sake bt she slowly started to develop feeling for him as u tld love can happen anytime…..i dont know what is the end of ur story who ll b the pair in the end and all sorry if i m judging you but as everyone told its quite unfair with swara…..she was in coma over these years it was not her fault now ragini have tani and sanskar but swara is all alone she is not getting tanis love nd nw loosing sanky also…….thts not fair pls do some justice towards swara.nd pls dont get hurted by our comments u r writing an ff so u ll get positive as well as negative comments so pls tr to accept them……..i m sorry if i hurted u…and yeah egarly waiting for the climax..

    • pavani darling

      I got ur point jitha darling I didn’t scold any of u for ur comments I just gave my explaination nd yaa don’t worry there is a twist after words which changes the story but u should wait till then then u will get to know y I am telling ragsan will be pair nd swara is the lead role

  5. Fairy

    Happpppyyyyyybrthdayyyyyy tejasss…..love u a lotzzzz.u r an angel for me….n dii superb episode yaar….plz unite ragsan sooonnn….eagerly wtng for wts gonna happen next…love ragini..

  6. S priya

    Pavani darling…let me tell onething first itz really a complicated story no one having fault in it….I dono wat u have in mind but wat ever s ur ending ill support u definitely fr sure ….think if u did nt disclose ur final pair ten no one ill b Having prblm nw(swasan fans won’t like tis)..ten aft ur ending tey can realize wat u trying to tel….itz k u did it….but really u r awesome writer trying to tel something diff…

    • pavani darling

      Tnk u s priya darling I told about the pairs because I don’t want to hurt swasan fans as they will hope that I will make swasan.I just want to clear that then after if they want to read or not its their wish

  7. Raglak

    Please u it’s ragsan and tank soon..I’m tearing up right now..and please ignore all the bashers

  8. Azure

    Amazing story and really well handled. This is a complex emotions story and you are portraying it realistically. Sorry I have been very busy this week and couldn’t comment as regularly as I wanted

  9. Piya

    Awesome nd poor ragini.. nd don’t give a damm to those people who don’t wanna understand ur pov… love don’t see time place relations etc etc but it just happens… ragini is not at fault… its a game of destiny…

  10. cute girl

    hiii ….no need to say sory ….i cry to read ur ff …
    becoz i love it and become a emotion…
    well i want apreciate u ….
    becoz of u ff… after a long time i comment no any ff ….
    i read ur all previous part of ff…
    its just a mindblowing ….
    ur ff make me crazy day by day …and i just
    luv it ….

  11. Kittu

    Hey pls make it swasan at last its nt buz i like swara or anythng like dat its jus dat swara deserve to b happy n she has ful ri8 over sanskar buz as pr law if u r wife is alive thn u cnt marry..nd fr tani rags cn give love as maasi too bt no u make thm marry..n tani child though he wil nt feel free wid swara soon bt as time passes he too love her aftr all she is his mother nd mst imply he is nt grown up much..nd child cn divert their mind easily so make it SWASAN.. I ragini is nt totaly at fault bt smwht or smwhr she is at fault…swasan loves eo so unite thm..

    • pavani darling

      Tnk u kittu darling thats the matter did they really love each other do they r made for each other

  12. ria

    I just want to know how you gonna justify ragsan. Ragini married her jiju knowing her sister is alive how you will justify that. There should be some logic I guess as just to keep sanky away from his son she did this so that she don’t loose tani right. What was swara’s fault in this that her sister hated her husband and now she fell in love with him. How you gonna justify ragsan it’s really interesting to see I really hope you don’t potray swara bad to do this. It too mahan to leave even her child for her sister it’s really gonna be more complicated than you would have thought.

    • pavani darling

      Ya I got ur point swara will not be negative nd u should wait to see what happens

  13. PP

    Awesome Superb Emotional epi
    Feeling bad for Ragini and Tanish
    Ragini’s bonding with Tanish is just awesome
    Don’t worry or think about others u go with ur plot dear
    Waiting for the next one……….

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