when I fall in love (ragsan and swasan) episode 20

Hii darlings tnk u very much for ur support nd ha I want to say from many days u r asking me some questions I want to clear ur doubt .ya I too agree wt is swara’s mistake in it but the point is it was destiny who brought them close
Nd some one asked how can rag love Sanky tough she knew swara is alive see its simple as love just happens with out our knowledge its a heart game then we don’t think about others (its my view) then after we will see the consequenses to be faced.nd mainly she is loving her husband wts wrong in that

Tani woke up nd saw both rag nd Sanky nd felt bad nd went to swara’s room

He becomes emotional by seeing her nd went near her nd hold her hand .with his touch swara opened her eyes but no expression on her face


A drop of tear escaped from her eyes

Tani:u r not my badi maa but u r my maaa .he started crying by holding her hand nd after some time wiped his tears

Tani:I know maa u can’t talk nd move but I know u can listen us .I can understand how u feel when I call maa(and he stoped for a sec nd continued)maasii as maa nd u fell bad too .maasii did a very big mistake by hiding this truth from mee nd ya I am very angry on her but I can’t hate her.I know u gave me birth but she gave me life by sacrifisingsacrifising nd needs .u know what maa I didn’t understand till now y she used to reject laksh uncle tough he loves her a lot but now I came to know now because for mee.her first priority is memeed then others .I know its not your mistake too but don’t u think she too deserves some happiness nd her happiness is mee nd my happiness is with her nd I can’t live without my maa.I love uu.. but not more than my maa I hope u understand me love u bade maa nd he hugged her nd gave a peek on her forehead nd left from there nd then.there will be a movement in sswarashand but was not notice by tani he left nd there rag is listening to all this conversation from back side of the door but tani didn’t saw her .rag became very emotional for his love towards her

Rag went to her
Rag:iam sorry dii .it is not his mistake but it is my mistake that I didn’t tell the truth tlill now don’t worry it takes some time for him to accept the truth nd iam hear naa I will make all set nd just waiting for u
And again a drop of tear escaped from her eyes rag observed it she is about to take her hand from swaras hand she observed movement on her hands

Sanky woke up nd saw no one in the room
Sanky:wr did all went nd he came down but didn’t saw any one nd then he tought of swara room nd reached there nd saw doc checking swara

Sanky:what happened y doc came this morning nd y is he checking her is she alright

Rag:shh wait a min

Doc:very good she started responding to treatment it is good symbol nd nothing to worry do the same exersises nd continue these tablets she will be alright soon

Rag:tnk u very much doc

Dp:come doc I will leave u out
They left sanky ,rag nd tani left in room with swara

Sanky:whats happening

Rag:I saw moment in dii’s hand last night so I called doc nd he came

Sanky:u observed movement last night nd u didn’t told mee till now

Rag:sorry in that exitement I didn’t told to anyone I was just ..

Sanky:how can u bee so much irresponsible it is ur first duty that u should inform mee nd u r suchh.nd leave it he left from there angryly

Rag was hurt nd was crying silently nd left from there

Tani(in mind):y is papa so rude to mom always.not love atleast he dont bother about her nd her feelings .how can he doo that not only mee ndmeede maa but mow momowas also his family nd he should take care that she is happy nd don’t worry mammaa I will make him realise that u r also his part of life
He turned to swara
Tani:bade maa plzz u will help mee naa to unite mammaa nd papa

Epi ends
Screen freezes with swara nd tani’s faces

Urs darling pavani

Credit to: pavani


  1. Fairy

    Wowwwwww diii….its amaznnngggggggggggggg…jst loved it…thnk god tani is dere…he”ll surely do smthng to unite ragsan…good to see swara recovering…lets seee whts gonna happen nxt….eagerly wtng 4 it…love ragini…. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Aastha

    akka sry am unale to read ur previous part. u said me busy na in which time u told i donno that made me really busy. if i free then its lill tough to catch all epis. so dont mistake me. when going to start a new one then plz inform.me.
    hi frnds u all seeing my cmnt in other ff na when pavni akka starts her new ff then tell me ya. its a humble request.

  3. S priya

    I’m ragini’s fan but feeling sad fr swara…wat ill happen to her…really itz complicated nw…

  4. Ohh thank god when tani called swara ma mere heartbeat stop hogaya… Haha???i felt how my tanish can do this to ragini.. Then he came to his own form…haha this ff tanish is the hero and sanky is half villian???

    Tanish proved that ma cant be considered by blood its considered by heart…that relation should be like dil se dil ka rishtaโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บand sanky god he hurted her alot..and di ur POV is really nyc ..u gave a good ans…

    • pavani darling

      Tnk u priya darling nd yaa tani is the hero tnk u for liking my view nd ya I will try to update soon

  5. sss

    yeah tani will unite ragsan as i thought….
    emotional episode even I’m happy for ragsan bt still feeling sad swara
    nice epi update soon

  6. poonam

    awesome …………………………… awesome episode was so good loved tanish he will defenitly unite ragsan hope sanskar realises that he hurted ragini feeling bad for her…………..sorry for not commenting for pervious part and ya i too agree with u that love is heart game and it can happen ……………

  7. Waiting for next part . ragsan pls unite.. Nd m sure you won’t let swara suffer.. Plan something nice for her also..

  8. Amna

    Awsm epi. Good that tani is not angry on her. It’s true by giving birth you don’t become a parents of a child but it is when you give them birth by ur heart.

    • pavani darling

      Tnk u megha darling nd ha nee fd choosa monna I read that for the first time adi superr nd iam impressed for ur launguage skills (I think u r same megha about whome iam thinking

  9. PP

    It was really Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Tanish I just loved the way he said everything
    Waiting for the next one……….

  10. azure

    really beautiful part. both ragini and swara are victims of circumstances. ragini took care of tani. lived only for him. stopped her life. she never claimed any right on sanky nor ever tried to create problems. she was clear she would hand everything back to swara. she in fact sorted sanky to make him work. and at the the end of it, she will not have anything. she knows this but is not bothered by that but trying to get everything sorted for her sister. swara too is not at fault. she would have wanted to be with sanky and tani if not for the accident. important to realise both are hurting. not just swara.

  11. azure

    i hope you are not going to get ragini with laksh here because you have mentioned him.

    • pavani darling

      Really tnk u very very much azure iam big fan of ur ff red strings nd I felt very bad as it completed plzz come back soon nd haa I too want to say that only rag have sacrificed her life for tani nd swara ya its not her fault but fate played with her nd don’t worry I will not make it raglak

      • Azure

        Big thx dear…..and I have strayed a new story ๐Ÿ˜‰ only updating it on Saturday though…lot of work so but busy….but I am loving your story a lot…it deals with emotional complexities so well ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Piya

    Awesome… tani is such a mature child… nd his love for ragini is unconditional… hope sanky don’t hurt ragini emotions…

  13. Megha

    That was awesome!! Tani is so loveable and understanding, such a lovely kid he is.
    The update was nice, I liked it. And Sanskar, he hurts Ragini most of the times, me don’t like it.
    Overall the update was good, Tani’s the hero!
    Continue soon.

  14. Angel Goldie

    Nt agreeing wid da Story…ok i agree Rag took care of Tani in absence of Swara so its Obivious He will be close to Ragini more dan Swara..bt atleast dnt show Tani Hating Swara who is His Real Mom n hope Sanskaat does Justice wid Swara wen she comes in senses completely…he shud nt forget Swara is his first wife n a Mother of his Child too..u cnt show RagSan As couple wen Swara his First Wife is Alive…completely disagree wid da Story..sorry if i hurted u..bt insaid wat i felt like..SwaSan r Meant to be together n will alwy be..in this story Rag San r Forced Couple..no sense at all..

    • pavani darling

      Ha ha ha I understand ur words darling but I never showed tani hating swara but I showed that he loves rag more than swara .ya I agree that they were foreced to marriage due to sircimstances but that doesn’t mean that he shouldn’t love others ya swara is his first love but love it happens any time with any person nd may be due to situation nd may be swara unite them if my view hurting u then iam really sorry for that

    • Aanya

      I totally agree wid angel goldie…
      Dere is no sense in d story… swara suffered alot nd in d end u r going to show ragsan 2gthr n wat abt swara?? U’l mae swalak or make her die 2 unite ragsan..
      I agree love can happen anytm bt when sanskar’s first love is alive dan how can he forget swara nw n luv ragini… n abt tani jus imagine how bad a mother ve felt wen his child says i love ragini more than u…
      In ur story also swasan n meant 2ghtr.. sorry if i ve hurt u bt dats my Pov n coz ragsan wont read it further coz m sure its ragsan at d end

      • pavani darling

        Ha ha ha really he didn’t started loving her but u r saying as if he loved her leaving swara .swara is his first love nd plzz wait untill the story fully completes I was not hurt but its really funny that u people are asuming first that what will happen nd its my humble request first stop assuming the story I can’t make him love directly

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