when I fall in love (ragsan nd raglak) epi17 ~ pavani

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Rag was about to go
Laksh:plzz sorry I know I should not do with out asking u .I tought u will think metured
Rag(angrily):wt do u mean ??iam not metured
Laksh(by folding his hands):ofcourse if u r metured then u would think it positively nd will excuse mee
Rag:what?? U did mistake nd again saying iam immeture how dare u I will not leave u today

Rag run behind him nd nd reached their room nd laksh stopped but rag was coming with a speed so she came with a force nd collide him nd they both fall on bed nd rags lips touches Laksh lips

Rag stood up with shock
Rag turned her head
Laksh:it is not fair u slapped me for kissing u nd now u only kissed mee
Rag:iam sorry I didn’t done it intensionally
Laksh:who knows I will ask for correct judgment to shekar uncle
Rag(shocked):what??
Laksh:yaa I will tell him that u kissed mee

Rag(angrily):u r blackmailing mee then I will tell him that u kissed me first
Laksh:so wt do u mean I kissed u that’s y u kissed mee
Rag(angrily):yes then she realises wt sge said
Rag:noo I mean..
Laksh:ok I have an offer u forget my kiss nd I forget ur kiss .
Rag(angrily)):nice one(with an angry smile
Laksh:think about it ??
Rag:ok
Laksh:tnk u so lets go

Rag:where ?
Laksh:we missed our date yesterday so can we go today
Rag:no
Laksh:ok I will tell uncle about kiss then he will get us married now only
Rag(angrily):ok

They went to temple
Rag:u go to temple?
Laksh:for these people(showing beggers)
He took her to the people nd gave rag solva to give them nd she distrabuted
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Laksh:it was my birthday today so tought lets start with a good thing
Rag:ur birthday??
Laksh:yes lets go
Rag:wait lets pray to god .
Laksh:really ??I can’t believe it .I tought u r different from others but u r also same like others
Rag gave a confusing look
Laksh:u will pray for ur well being how selfish u r
Rag:wt do u mean

Laksh:have u ever wished godfor him .did u ever told him to take care of him self .nd he left from there
Rag went nd stood infount of ideal nd prayed him nd while returning remembered wt laksh said
Rag:take care of us nd take care of urself ok
she went back to Laksh
Laksh:(laughing):prayed for his well being also??
Rag :why r u laughing??
Laksh:I was just kidding nd u really prayed how budhuu u r ??.
Rag gave a dead glare
Laksh :ok sorry lets go

They went to an orphan (the orphan which rag went in starting episodes)
Rag:y we came hear ?
Laksh:this is the place u will come to know the value of life
Rag(confusingly):did we come on a date or something?
Laksh smiled:every one can give a romantic date I just want to show u wt life is
Rag follwed him
Laksh went in nd talked to all the children nd introduced rag
Rag also talked with them
Laksh:they were crying for love .they don’t have any one who cares about them they just need a person who just care for them nd talk to them.they know the value of love and a person
Rag was surprised (she remembered how she used to hate sekhar who cared for her nd she fees guilty)tear escaped from her eyes
Laksh:y r u crying??
Rag:nothing ..
Laksh:lets goo
Rag:where?

Laksh just wait .
They went to a playground
Rag was surprised to see that .
Rag gave laksh a questioning look.
Laksh:come .
There she saw many people playing football then she remembered how she used to play with her dad inher chaild hood but didn’t played after he left nd then after she never played food ball
Her toughts were disturbed by Laksh
Laksh:lets play …
Rag:what?? Noo way I don’t play .
Laksh:don’t lie uncle told me that u used to love food ball ok now stop ur drama nd lets go

They enjoyed a lot
Rag:ok now iam hungry
Laksh:k lets go I know a place nd I det u u will get good food

They reached a house
Rag:whose house is this
Laksh:my aunt..
When they entered rag saw many old people
Rag:is this an old age home

Laksh smiled ya there children throwed them so ..
Rag relly felt bad for them
She talked with them nd really had a good
Laksh(in mind):I told her it’s my bbirthday she atleast didn’t wished mee??
He was disturbed by a old women
W:she is very nice
L:that’s y I love her
They both laugh
Scene shifts
Rag:aunty are u not angry on ur children
Aunty:how can we ??mistakes are made by children that doesn’t mean parents hate them we excuse them
Rag remembered how sekhar shekar nd sakshi loved her Then she saw laksh with teary eyes who is busy
Rag(in mind):u really showed me my life Laksh
Laksh:wt r u thinking ?

Rag:shall we goo
It became night when they were returning
Rag told him to stop the car near beach
They went there nd walked for some time

Rag:tnk u Laksh
Laksh:y?
Rag:before u my life was only mee but now it is filled with my family,their emotions nd love
Laksh smiled he was about to say something but suddenly he feels soft lips on his lips .he was shocked at first but reciprocated later
They released the kiss

Rag :happy birthday Laksh
Laksh was very happy he was like flying in clouds
Epi ends
Screen freezes with smiling faces of raglak
Tomorrow will be last of raglak

Recap:tragedy ……

Hope u liked it

53 comments

  1. Saanvi

    |Registered Member

    Akka business man dialogue πŸ˜›
    I’m falling in love with Laksh…this is not fair akka…why you killed him 😭
    On the whole awesome episode πŸ˜„πŸ‘πŸΌ

    • Pavani

      |Author

      Ha ha ha iam really sorry but that is what I need he should not last long but the time she spend with him should bee awsomee .

  2. DC1

    |Registered Member

    I just loved the way you portrayed Laksh’s character in this ff…. So sad that he will die… Still again a great episode Akka.

  3. Pammy

    |Registered Member

    Awww..omg i cant described hw good ur writing skills are…laksh z jz amazng till nw i was waiting fr ragsan moments to come…bt nw i am in luv with thz laksh…luvd it di

  4. Varsha

    |Registered Member

    I jus luv Lucky, evry girl wnt a hus lik him evn me. Raglak together r made fr eo n d way u shwd is supr, awsm, nice etc. di

  5. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    laksh is full of life, easy going person, alas he will die soon , i dont know how will i able to read tomorrow’s update. one more awesome update πŸ˜€

  6. Shana98

    |Registered Member

    Wait what Laksh is going to die??😞 But Laksh’s character is just like how a girl would want her future husband πŸ’–πŸ˜˜β€οΈto be. But said his going to die 😞

  7. S priya

    Pavani I’m nt gng to read t nxt part….ill cme back aft u start ragsan…I can’t read laksh death story…such a lovely laksh..hmmm I love ragsan too

  8. Priya15

    |Registered Member

    Wow laksh toh Kamal Ka hai di.. It’s lovely.. I love laksh.. Di i read ur os and replied too.. See to it once..

  9. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved Laksh a lot and Ragini too
    So sad he will be dead
    Waiting for the next one…………..

  10. Crystal089

    |Registered Member

    its awesome loved laksh feeling sad that he’s gone die soon but excited to know how sanskar will win ragini’s love waiting for their love story

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