The episode starts with a beautifully decorated room with disco lights, balloons and ribbons by this decoration we can get to know that a birthday celebration is going on. Many children of age 15-16 were dancing on the songs played by D.j. In the centre a beautiful girl was dancing amazingly. She was wearing a short frock of baby pink colour. She was just looking like a doll. Suddenly from her back a boy came and started dancing near her. She didn’t mind as she was fully engrossed in dancing.
The boy said-You are looking very beautiful Swara (She is none other than Swara aka Shona)
She takes it as a compliment and replied-Thanks Rahul (Rahul is not a good character in this ff, he is negative)
He was going more close to her but he landed on floor by a punch on his nose. All were shocked by this.
Rahul was super angry, he saw towards the direction from where he got the punch.
Rahul(shocked and afraid)-Naira! ! (She is our Naira aka sherni, she was wearing a scratched jeans and top)
She shouts-how dare you came close to her?
Rahul-I was just dancing with her
Swara-Are chill my sherni….but Naira interrupts her
Naira-Shona I’m handling na so pls don’t stop me
Again Naira looks at him with anger and was going to say something but a boy interrupts her
Boy-Omg sherni why are you scolding him, he is so innocent yar
Rahul-Yeah lucky bhai I have not done anything (He is Laksh aka lucky, he was wearing blue jeans and a black t-shirt he was looking so handsome)
Rufina-Lucky how can you say that he is innocent
Abhija-Yeah we all have seen him misbehaving Shona
Ishita-We should just break his teeth
Janvi-Lucky ishu is right just beat him

All were saying something except Naira she was silent as she know her best friend.
Swara-Gys leave it
Laksh-Yup let’s go and dance gys and rahul bro drink this (he gives a glass of cold drink to him) and chill bro.
When he drinks that his facial expression changed. He hold his stomach and ran towards bathroom.
All starts laughing and praised lucky. Naira gives hi-fi to to lucky and hugged Swara.
Swara was so happy seeing lucky doing something for her.
Than a boy came and said-Lucky what you have done now without telling me
Laksh-Kunj bro you missed that (He is kunj,he was wearing black jeans with a black shirt)
Naira-Yeah bro you have missed an awesome thing.
The trio laugh except kunj.

Then a girl came running she was wearing a white gown.
Girl-gys it’s my b’day and you all are enjoying here without me, how can you all do this to me
Swara-Awww my b’day girl Twinkle (She is Twinkle the b’day girl)
Laksh-Next time we will inform you and winks
Naira-Don’t worry twinkle your b’day is not over yet
Suddenly kunj started singing the Buddhu sa man hai (from the movie kapoor and sons)
And pull twinkle to the centre. Naiswalak join them. Everyone danced and enjoyed a lot. After some time Twinkle cuts her b’day cake. After the celebration everyone returns to their house.


Sorry for late everyone.
Hope you all likes it.
I will add my TU friends in my each episode this was my surprise this idea was given by Rufi. I hope she will read this so I’m missing you rufi.

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  1. AIHA19

    di the update is awesome.waiting for shivika scene

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much aiha

  2. Alekhika20

    Nice update

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much alekhika

  3. Yashu24

    Amazing , funny , interesting.
    I loved it!!!!!!!!
    Totally cute-sweet ff.????
    Waiting for next
    Take care
    Keep smiling
    Love you ?????

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much micky
      Love you ??

  4. Superb…and thankyou for swalak..they are my favourite couple..i like twinj too..plz post next chapter soon

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much jis
      Swalak are my favourite too

  5. It was awesome
    Pls add twinj pic in wall paper

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much qwerty
      I will add twinj pic

  6. it was nice,amazing,funny
    love it di

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much harshita

  7. Saumya_K

    Amzng! Loved it! Post soon! <3

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much saumya_k

  8. Hiii meri soutan aka..meri jaan aka meri baby finally tune twinj pe kuch likh dia pata h yeh heading padh kar main nachne lagi ??????
    Acha btw this was amazing yrrrr spellbound episode abb na jaldi post kariyo jyaada late na kariyo..main ja rhi apne virat ke pass?????

    1. Kanfi

      Are u any old membr of TU??

    2. Yes i m adeeba_zain

    3. Soumya85

      Hello meri soutan aka meri doll
      Thank you so much yar par mujhe bhi tera dance dekhna h? aur khanbardar jo virat ke pas gayi to ???
      Love u doll ??

  9. Presha

    just loved it…
    too good…
    post soon

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much presha

  10. Sohi


    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much sohi

  11. Vinni05

    Wow amazing one
    Waiting for next

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much vinni

  12. Fenil

    Superb chppy.
    Sherni and Lucky naild it .
    I also missing Rufi.

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much bhaiya
      She comes online sometimes

  13. Kanfi

    Hey somu ammmaziinggg….
    It wss funny n loved it…
    N i ws shocked seeing rufi,ronu,ishu,jany name,,i thought do i missed any intro epi:-P πŸ˜›
    It was good,,fabulous job…..

    Its a ff n???not real???

    Mzaa agya prhke….

    Post soon….
    Take care,.bye

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so my dii
      It’s a ff not real my imagination
      Love you ??

  14. Ayesha51

    fantastic &
    post soonest
    lots of love

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much ayesha

  15. Purnima.agrawal30

    Interesting awesome

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much purnima

  16. Baby

    saumya dii I missed u……β™₯
    too cute loved it so mch…..β™₯
    amazing n loving d couples too osm muaahhh….β™₯
    post soon……β™₯
    lods of love……β™₯
    hope u remember me…. β™₯
    lods of love……β™₯
    I really missed u……..β™₯

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much baby
      But I think u misunderstood me as I’m writing in twinj page first time

      1. Baby

        ohhh m soo sriee actually there was soumya dii…who also use to write marvelleous stories…..β™₯
        well friends…. πŸ™‚
        m really sorry…..

  17. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Hello Soumya!
    This is really Cute! Beautifully written! waiting for next! post soon!

    With Love,
    Urs Tamanna

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much tamanna?

  18. Superb update…

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much ankita

  19. Aradhana

    wahhhh somu!!! it was really amazing!!!and I like chirpy swara…lets see how it unfolds in next epi..waiting for it!!

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much aru di
      Love you ??

  20. Abhija17

    osm bff..beautiful story…n wordz to explain my happiness after reading this…n missing cutie a lot..but we talked yesterday….n keep writing bff..post next part soon..love uuuuuuuuu

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much BFF
      Love you ??

  21. IME

    Awesome Sumooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    loved ittttt
    i loved my line!!
    post nxt part soon
    love you
    take care

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much ishu
      I knew it that u will love ur line
      Love you ??

    2. Yrr ishu yeh somu pagal hp gai h kya..thank you kyu bol rhi h?? Ohh zyada formal baan rai h somu????

      1. IME

        haa sach boli tu

      2. Soumya85

        Are yar aisa nai h ff’s me to thanks chalta h na?? agar nai chalta to an se nai bolungi

    3. Soumya85

      Ishu tu bhi to thanks bolti h apne ffs me???

    4. Hamari friendship mein nai chalta h somu h na ishu?

  22. What to comment?? Thinking better I don’t comment just kidding I miss u too bff n I am extremely sorry that I can’t wish u on your birthday n this was awesome.lucky is too cool boy n I am excited for Shivika as shivika is my favourite n I like Raglak too others I can just read as I have not watched other show.n post next epi soon so that I can read

    1. Soumya85

      Why u shouldn’t commented bff? ?
      U have to comment tahts it
      Love you??

  23. Ramya

    Awesome soumya amazing one

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much ramya

  24. B_Ani

    it was really good somu…
    doing great!

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much Ani
      Love you ??

  25. AditiB

    vaah Bhai somu….mujhe bada pasand aaya…..tumhara ye concept bhi….aur gaane jo select kiye h…..vo bhi….I loved it…..very good…..keep it up Somu…………..bhagwaan aur m…dono tumhare saath h….

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much dii aapka comment padh kar mujhe to bahut hasi ayi ??
      Love you di ??

  26. N.M

    loved it awesome di , u know i just love & miss my school days and when i saw the precap about school aaahhhhhh so excited to read next one , please next aaj hi post kardo , plz plz plz

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much nidu
      I’m sorry I can’t post today sorry
      Love you??

  27. Epi amazinggg miyoko….loved it??

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much sizuka
      Love you ??

  28. Wow this ff was so amazing waiting for the next part ? bechara rahul!

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much bua
      Love you??

  29. Awesome ! Amazing ! Waiting 4 the next prt.. bechara Rahul ?

    1. Soumya85

      Sach me bechara rahul

  30. Wow saumya di …..luv uh

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much naymaz
      Love u??

  31. areee diii!!!! no words , bahut achha tha . loved itt to the core . good that sherni and lucky taught a good lesson to rahul . eagerly waiting for shivika entry and next epi . iss bar zyada wait kara diya , next time pls update soon .i am eagerly waiting

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much varshini
      Sorry for late as I’m writing 3 stories
      I will try my best ab jyada late nai hoga
      Love you ??

  32. Riyaditi

    Finally mera wait khatam hua……. i was waiting for it ……

    It was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ……. loved it…?? both my fav couples swalak and twinj ??…….. waiting eagerly for the next epi.. ..post soon

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much riya
      Sorry for late ??
      Love you ??

      1. Riyaditi

        Ohoooo… thank u bhi bol ri ho aur sorry bhi ???? ???

    2. Soumya85

      Are yeh sab ffs me chalta h??

      1. Riyaditi

        Sorry kahi ni chalta

  33. Orchid

    Wow fantastic updt di. Post asap. Love u.???

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much Oreo
      Love you??

  34. AMkideewani

    Superb my dear Soumya, I love it’s mindblowing??❀❀??

    1. Soumya85

      Thank you so much sam di

      1. AMkideewani

        I love you darling?

  35. Rahul96

    Hi somu please talk to me yaar. I am sorry. But please reply to me !!

    1. Soumya85

      Bhaiya aap sorry q bol rahe ho I’m not angry on u so why sorry and kiska reply kar aapne to koi pm nai kiya??
      Aur aap pm me bat kijiye mai to vaha reply karungi hi aur karti but hu

      1. Rahul96

        Somu i texted you on hangouts and messenger but you are not replying to me!! Why?? Pm means??

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