The Exotic Love (KaNchi FF) – Part One

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Hello lovelies , First of all an entire box of sorry for not being able to post and reply any of your comments!!! Pardon!!!! Exams were on so I had a very tiring schedule these days….
Anyways so so so many thanks to all my genius’os Dhruti,Riya,Palak,Mayoori,Anee,Niyati,Niyaa,Afiya, Abhilasha ,Anu, Sanjana, RuCh, Amnaa and Jess ….
So sorry guys… Here goes the first part ….
Tell me how it was !!!!!

//Exotic Love\\
Part —— One
Everyone in the house are shown on hustle …. Savitri was busy in the house decorations…. DR Malhotra was getting ready to go to the airport with his younger brother Dr. Adarsh and his two sons Veer and Dhruv ….

Dr. Malhotra- Savitri , do it fast else we will be late … You know your son doesn’t prefer waiting !!!
Veer- Mom please come fast na!!! We are having ants in our pants till seeing him ….
Savitri- Coming , Coming …..
The group was about to leave when the guy was standing on door step, folding his hands attaching it to the chest ….
Veer and Dhruv ran towards the guy …

Dhruv & Veer – Bhai !!!!!!
The trio drowned into a big hug ….
Savitri- Kabir????
Kabir walked to the others to meet … Everyone was so happy to see their elder son back home after 10 years ….
Savitri- Didn’t you have food there to eat (with a very stressing look)??? What have you made of yourself???
Kabir- Mom !!!!!!!!!
Nita- Hey Handsome….
Kabir hugged Nita …
Kabir – Hey girlfriend !!!
How are you doing ???
Neeta- How can I be good , when my boyfriend left me aback ???
( Everyone was enjoying the chichi and vatija scenes )
Dhruv – Guys ,guys ,guys !!! We have thrown a party for Bhai’s homecoming celebration , so everyone has to be there, Okay …
Kabir- Oye !!! what is the need of parties and all … We all will have dinner together , that would be enough for me…
Veer – Who asked for your opinion , bhai !
Kabir smirked…
Kabir- Waise where is Choti ( choti is priya) Why isn’t she here to welcome me ???
Anand- Actually she is in the hospital on duty … As we all are here so she had to stay there …
Kabirs attention from the conversation was distracted when a name echoed in his ear , the name which fills his heart with love , the name which made him learn the definition of love , the name which brings smile on his face no matter what the situation is!!!!
The name of the beautiful girl for whom he felt when he was 18 and the girl was only 10 !!!
It was Sanchi !!!
Kabir reappeared into his senses by Dhruv’s gesture …
Dhruv- Where have you been lost , big B??? Girlfriend and all !!!
Veer and Dhruv were pulling his legs as they knew that their dishy brother was 28 and still single to mingle….
Kabir gave the two a dead stare… So did Anand and Adarsh …

Dhruv- Well well well , Bro u freshen and get a power nap … We have to ace the party at night …
Kabir- Where are you both going???
Veer- We have duties bhai… We will be back before the party …
Kabir- I also wanna come…
Savitri,Neeta,Dhruv,Veer —- No way!!!!

Scene shifts to SDCH ….

A girls group were gossiping in the canteen with snacks …
Amaya- Where is the Duffer???
Pragya- Look , someone is being impatience for someone …
Amaya- Codswallop ….
Pragya- Ahahahahaha…. Look who is saying that !!!
Sanchi- Stop PraMu … Dhruv and Veer has gone to pick Dr. Kabir up from the Airport …
Amaya- Oh god …. The handsome is back !!!!!
Pragya – Don’t you even dare to think about him … He is all mine , Ms. Make up ki dukan !!!
Amaya- You don’t call me that , jhalli …
Sanchi- Oh god , girls… Grow up … stop fighting like toddlers … Its time to catch up the patients , lets go….

Sanchi in thoughts …
( As now Dr. Kabir is back … Veer and I will talk to him about our relationship … Finally we are gonna get rid of this hiding and covering stuff…Hope everything goes well )

Kabir was laying down resting his head on his mothers lap …
Savitri- Kabir, I think its high time you should bring my daughter in law to this house…
Kabir- Mom please … Is it a crime staying single ???
Savitri- Yes… It is a … I want to play with my grandchildren’s… So tell me , Do u have someone in your heart ???
Kabir’s thought—
Shall I tal to mom about Sanchi , now???

Precap- Stay Tuned budds…..

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18 Comments
  1. Its awesome… Update soon

    1. Maisarah

      Thanks a loot Amnaa dear……

    2. Maisarah

      Thanks a lot Amnaa dear……

  2. So so beautiful and amazing start……..I am really waiting for this ff…….. thanks a lot yaar

    1. Maisarah

      ANUUUUUUU thank you so much swettieeeee…….

  3. Riyarocks

    nice start Sarah dear……keep rocking………luv u loads……..

    1. Maisarah

      First of all a biggy hugggggg ….
      thanks a lot buddy … love u too …..

  4. Ohhhh… So finally u got time…uhh.. U know main tumhe bahut datne wale thi per ye exams aa gaye raambaan bankar tumhe bachane k liye …hehe.. But iska ye matlab nahi ki tum hamein bhul hi jao… Ab regularly update karna h… Samjhi… Btw epi is awsome, super duper… Sanveer already in relationship.. My poor kabir phir se uska dil tutega and bhaiyon me bhi kahin duriyaan naa ajaye…. Per koi nahi tum ho naa sab thik karne k liye… Lovvv u dear… Post nxt asap.. Bye tc

    1. Maisarah

      Big hug Niyaa….. Hahahaa niyaa…. swettie i m so happy getting such lovely friends like you,Riya,Dhruti,Anee,Niyati, Abhilasha ,Anu, Sanjana, RuCh,Jessica and Amnaa ….,…. Datna to banta hai !!!! But i promise to update regularly dear… KaNchi is meant to be together ,so lets get a chill pill… Loads of love ….

  5. awesome
    interesting dear
    you increase the curiosity what will happen next

    1. Maisarah

      Hey there , Swetha …. i m so glad that i m being able to increasing yours curiosity ….. Thank u so much dear… Loads of love

  6. Nyc,,epsd.. Update soon..#

    1. Maisarah

      Thank you so much , Tumpa …. I ll try to update asap….

  7. Dhruti

    superb starting of ff dear……………….update next one soon…………..i wanna tell you something that after this week i will not able to comment on yours and another ff because of my exam so i hope you understand me…………………….bye……………………love you……………..tc……………..

    1. Maisarah

      Hey budd , Never ever say a bye, from today its gonna be “i ll be back asap” if u say so again i ll be very angry !!! No problem dear … Ace the exam first …. All the very best and a big hug …..

  8. AMAZING EPISODE

    1. Maisarah

      Thanku so much sweetie …. Dont mind me asking ur name , right ?

  9. Aafiya

    Interesting….

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