MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR ::: A SWASAN FF EPI 1

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In gadodia mansion…

A girl is seen standing infront of the mirror….she was getting ready for her marriage..a beautiful curve is playing on her lips…there was no one with her to help her in getting ready…she was getting ready herself…

Girl’s pov….

This is ur life’s important day swara (*-)yes she is our swara only…) today after that painful incident u finally going to get some happiness….yes swara today u going to get married to ur childhood love….ur SANSKAR….he also loves me soo much…he is one who stood beside me in my painful time…he is the only reson for my life…if he not came that day than….no swara dont think about that…now get ready for ur life’s most beautiful event…..

She smiles herself…and starts to get ready….she was smiling being aware of the coming strom in her life….

In the same house on the another room…he was standing infront of the mirror…combing his hair and getting ready for his marriage…here there is an another boy is with him….

Man’s pov…

Here i came swara…ur SANSKAR after 10 yrs…i came here to ruin ur life…wait swara just wait till the night then u came to know my real shade….
Wait MY EX-CHILDHOOD LOVE….

His thoughts disturbed by the boy who was sitting in the bed….

Boy – bhai…are u sure with ur decision….

San – what do u mean shan….

Shan – bhai…i mean this is a sin…how can u do this….

Sanskar turns to him and said…

San – shan u know na…what she did with me…today she is behind my money…how can i leave her like…it is not a sin shan it is just a revenge for what she did to me…ok shan u leave all that…come its getting late for marriage….

Shan nods and both leaves to downstairs….there at the hall no one is there except pandit and guards….sanskar goes to the mandap and sits there soon swara came down and sits beside him…the rituals starts swasan takes seven prehars and sanskar made her wear mangalsutra and fills her maang by sindoor…..swara smiles at him while sanskar smirks at her….

Then after that swasanshan leaves frm there to mm….

At night…

Sanshan was sitting in a room…sanskar was dirinking…shan holds his hands….

Shan – bhai…plzz stop this u r already drunk more….plz stop…

San – shan….wait if i dont drink than i dont get the strength to harm her shan….plzzz leave na…

Shan bcm teary eyed…and leaves his hand…sanskar again starts to drink….

Shan – bhai…u r loving her this much….than why are u doing this….

San – correction shan MY EX-CHILDHOOD LOVE….now she is my culprit….

Saying so sanskar leaves frm there he is not stable….

Shanthanu pov….

I know bhai u r loving her….but ur revenge overpowers u…u ll change soon…

In swasan room….

Swara was sitting in the bed which was fully decorated with rose petals….she was dreaming about her suaaghraat….being unaware of happening…suddenly she hears a door opening sound…she closed her eyes in nervous…she felt a hand in her shoulder….he opens her eyes and gets shocked to see the person……

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Hey guys here is my another ff…do tell me through ur comments should i continue it or not…if u like it leave a cmnt…and if u liked it i ll post the character sketch….bye…keep smiling

By mahna ( maha rakshna )

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