My evil heart Chapter 9: Flashback + CS


Chapter 9: Flashback + CS

The saviour of Neha was Laksh! “Neha are you allright?” He sweetly asked her, but from the touch she knew it wasn’t Laksh, but it was someone else! “Yeah, I’m fine thanks for saving me RAJ!” “I’m not Raj it’s me LAKSH!” “Your Raj is dead, why can’t you accept it Neha?” “Cause the way you touched me right now, is the way Raj used to touch me!” “I got the feeling safetiness from you that’s why I thought I was my Raj!” “Hahahahah, you are really mad Neha!” He laughed. “I’m madly in love with your brother and the father of my child, but you won’t understand it, cause you never have truelly loved someone!” Neha’s answer was a tight slap for Laksh! “You think that I’ m an heartless creature, but you don’t know the reason WHY, I became like this!

Flashback of Laksh + plus his pov
“Laksh Maheswari, the guy, who was allways was lost in books, lost his heart to a girl named Swara Raichand, the hottest girl in high school, she was sweet, caring, naughty, cute and very stubborn!” Laksh dreamilly said. “I would meet her everyday, whenever I would meet her my heart would beat really fast, she was breathtakingly beautiful!” “She changed, I became a guy, who wasn’t shy anymore, Raj helped me with it at that time, we had an bonding of brotherhood, care and love, but all that got ruined, cause of our father!” “I loved her, but my father wanted me to get married to Ragini!” “I changed myself to now, what I am, I’m looking for her, she dissapeared, since a few years and RAJ is helping me, so we acted as if he was dead and Neha, I never raped you, it was someone else and he is the reason why Swara is missing!”
End of the flashback

“Then, who is sleeping upstairs?” “That’s Laksh!” “Then you are my Raj!” Neha excitedly said. “Who married Neha?” A concerned Ragini asked and Raj replied back: “I married my Neha!” “Then, who tortured her yesterday?” “It was the man, who raped her!”
End of his pov

Neha’s pov
“I married my Raj, but he doesn’t seem to happy!” I went towards Raj and asked: “are you allright Raj?” “Yes, I’m fine!” “Don’t lie to me Raj, I can see that you are hiding something from me!” “Yes, I am, cause my family is cursed, whoever we love will suddenly dissapear and never come back and I made the mistake allready in loving you!” “Why are you doing this Raj, I love you!” “You can’t love me Neha, you have to hate me, so that you are out of danger or he will torture and rape you again and I can’t see that happen!” “Raj don’t do this to me!” “I have to Neha!” “You don’t have to Raj, we will find a way!” Laksh said, cause he knew that Raj told us the truth!”
End of her pov

RagSan’s convo
“I can’ t believe that Laksh is innoncent!” Ragini angrilly shouted. “Calm down Ragini, we will find out, who the real villain is!” “Yes, you are right Sanky!” “I allways am!” “I love you Sanky!” “I love you too Ragini!” Soon after saying it they fell asleep while hugging eachother.
End of their convo

LakRaj convo
“We have to find Swara at any cost!” Laksh said and Raj replied back: “we will bro!” “I hope so, cause I don’t wanna be the bad guy anymore!”
End of their smal convo

Now to the CS

Swara Raichand, she is 22 years old, loves Laksh and Laksh loves her, she got kidnapped by someone, she is hot, pretty, cute, loveable, stubborn, beautiful, modern, rich, but she doesn’t show of and she brings the good out of Laksh. She will be played by Vrushika Mehta.

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  1. plzz give more ragsan moment and plzz reduced the role of Neha as it is ragsan ff next part soon

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear, but I’m sorry to say, but Neha is an important character too, so sometimes she will have more scenes than RagSan

  2. Silent_writer

    Heheheheh pata nai q mjhe laga sanky hi villan hai ya ragini but it was damn amzing chapppy Laksh is not evil yayyy amazing one

    1. AMkideewani

      Awww, thanks a lot Fizz, love you????

    2. Jazzy

      heheheeh sahi kaha fizzoo mujhe bhi yehi doubt ho raha ha

      1. AMkideewani

        You’ll get to know soon Jazz

  3. Fairy

    Superbbbbb yaaar sam.mmmy….its gettng interestng more n more!!!!each n every charecter is amaznggg…n u r handling all d charecters sooo fabulouslyyy…keeeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety 😉 waitng for nxt u dr 😉 😀

    1. AMkideewani

      Aww, thank you so much Fairy, love you????

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot

  4. A.xx

    Fab xx

  5. Astra

    I’m completely confused now..! Neha loves raj? Laksh loves swara? There is someother villan? Can u briefly explain me

    1. AMkideewani

      So Laksh isn’t bad, he’s just acting like that, cause the villainis forcing him to do that and the villain raped Neha a few times

  6. I m again confused. Pls give a clear summary of this ff. Sometimes laksh is bad and sometimes Raj and now u r saying both r good.

    1. AMkideewani

      Raj was never bad, Laksh just acted to be bad, but he isn’t

  7. Good epi

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot

  8. Liya

    Epi was superb but in mean time its little confusing.Happy that raj is alive?.laksh is acting & he didn’t rape neha??? so the new and real bad guy rapped neha ,so is he a look alike of laksh ?neha saw laksh right? Then neha is badly beaten up by belt,as laksh is not baddy that new guy did that or laksh? I got hundred of doubts like this,so clear it soon??….many more twist are coming up???meri Jaan ,twist ki dhukhaan?? mera chottu sa brain phod jaane se pehle next part post karna…

    1. AMkideewani

      Awww, thanks a lot Liya and yeah I will post soon then you’ll get to know the villain

  9. Jazzy

    amazing dearr

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot Jazzu

  10. Asw

    It soo confusing yaar keep going

    1. AMkideewani

      I hope the next chap will clear your confusion yaar

  11. Asra

    awesome didi…laksh s innocent omg….but again am confused….New villan s also look like laksh…plz clear that didi…waiting for nxt one…tkcr didi….

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot and you’ll get to know soon

  12. Dharani

    super twist

  13. Ragz_teju

    wow interesting

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot

  14. Hemalattha


  15. Interesting

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot???

  16. Twist pe twist……. Bt whn u solve the mystry list..

  17. Kakali

    Awesome. love it Sammm… Ty.

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks sweetheart??????

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