My evil heart chapter 1

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Chapter 1

Ragini’s pov 2 years ago
“My sis is coming back to Mumbai from London, she was studying their for her weddingplanner degree and I’m getting engaged to Laksh Maheswari, my crush since collage.” “I’m so happy, my life will change after I get married and I want my sister to plan my wedding, cause she is an expert in it.” “I don’t know, how to share my happiness with Neha!”
End of her pov

Laksh’s pov 2 years ago
“I don’t want to get married to this bhenji(A girl wearing traditional clothes) Ragini, but if I get married to her, I will still have affairs with any girl, I want and she won’t even realise that her husband is cheating on her.” “Hahahahah, girls are toys for me.” “I heard that her sister Neha is coming to Mumbai, I hope she is hotter than Ragini.”
End of his pov

Neha’s pov
“I’m coming didi(sister) and I will never ever leave you again.” “I’m so happy, that you are getting married to your dream man, I hope you both wil stay happy together for a lifetime.” “Di, I love you very much and I will marry the guy you choose for me, cause I trust your choice.” “Mom and dad, why did you leave us and made us to orphans?” A crying Neha thought to herself.
End of Neha’s pov

Sanskar’s pov
“Why do you always take the woman, I love away from me Laksh.” “I really love Ragini and she wants me to get married to her sis Neha, cause she thinks Neha will be perfect for and I’m only doing it for your happiness Ragini!” “I don’t know, if I ever can love Neha.” “Laksh, I know you are playing with Ragini’s feelings, but I will never let you hurt her and if you do then I will kill you for ruining my Ragini’s life.”
End of Sanky’s pov

The next day RagSanLak went to pick up Neha at airport, Ragini was very excited, Sanskar and Laksh were shooting daggers at eachother and whenever Ragini would look at them, they behave like bff’s.

Laksh’s pov
“Are you guys looking for someone.” A very s*xy voice said, then my annoying fiancée shouted: “Neha!” “Yes didi it’s me!” The s*xy voice, which belongs to Neha said, at that moment I turned and was lost in her beauty. “So let me interdouce myself.” I said. “My name is Laksh Maheswari.” I said again, while I wanted to shake her hand,but she hugged me instead with her s*xy body and she said: “so you are the lucky guy, who is getting married to my di.” “And this must ve Sanskar.” Neha said and hugged Sanskar too, which made me jealous.
End of his pov

Neha’s pov
“I don’t like this Laksh, something is fishy with him, the way he was staring at me is making me unconfortable, his touch was very harsh on me and he was looking at me lustfully, so I have to be vry carefull with him.” “On the other hand Sanskar is very nice and I have a feeling he loves di, I jope di gets married to Sanskar instead of Laksh.”
End of her pov

Ragini’s pov
“I didn’t like the way Laksh was staring at Neha.” “I think I will ask Neha about Sanky, I hope SanHa get together, so that we both sisters get married on the same day!”
End of Ragini’s pov

Sanky’s pov
“I like Neha, but not the way like I love Rags.” “It seems like Laksh, that pig is lusting on Neha and I will try to protect both sisters from him, cause girls are like garbage for him.” “I don’t want to know how many girls he raped already.” I looked at Neha and saw, how Lucky grabbed her ass, while he was walking passed her and her face faded away.
End of Sanky’s pov

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48 Comments
  1. Sindhura

    Nice
    I hope sansky marries ragini

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear❤️❤️❤️

  2. hari krishna

    God yaar plz. …don’t make laksh a very bad man …he is also good

    1. AMkideewani

      Thank you very much😁😁😁

  3. Nice one make it ragsan

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks, but you will get to know soon the couples😃😃😃

  4. Raglakholic

    Interesting one
    Is it ragsan or raglak??
    Poor ragini
    She loves laksh
    Nd sanskar loves ragini

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear😁😁😁
      The couple can be 50% for Raglak and 50% for Ragsan

  5. nice next part soon

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks a lot Nikky😊😊😊

  6. Lucky in negative….
    Interesting

    1. AMkideewani

      Thank you😊😊

  7. Moni_ragz

    Nice strt.. hope ragsan get togther..😊

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear😊😊😊

  8. Astra

    Omg..! Laksh is villan here..! It is soo interesting. Hope, neha and rag will be fine. And sanky is soo nice… update soon

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks Astra dear💘💘💘💘

  9. Unite ragsan

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear

  10. ewww bad lucky

  11. Jazzy

    hmmm it is superb coool and interesting loved it a lot
    now i m.sure it is ragsan

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks my Jazz Jaan, love you sis❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  12. in ery fiction story sanskaar is potrait as gud man bt laksh is alwys potrait as selfish flirty ego centric arrognt who never cares or concern others feelings espically ragini..dear atleast sumtym laksh also potrait as gud man lik sanskaar..plz tis tym mak laksh a weak man n ragini intense lover…

  13. here also laksh my hero is goin to potrait as a bad man n sanskaar a nice n careing man….plz dear atleast symtym mak laksh a weak man n intense raginis lover…

    1. Jazzy

      sry dear but she has already a story in mind why she will change it keep faith on the writer she will do something okk she must have planned something
      and i think u should write such a ff in which laksh is a intense lover i would love to read it dear 😘😘

    2. AMkideewani

      Nice reply Jazz yaar❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘

  14. Silent_writer

    Wohoooooooo rocked my sasu maaaa itssss superbbbbbbbb

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks my Fizz jaaan❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  15. KritikaRajpoot

    amazing please make it ragsan

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear😊😊😊

  16. Liya

    Nice one crazy lol😘seems very interesting! Poor ragini she will be heart broken when she knows about laksh! I think its Ragsan😍…

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks Liya yaar😘😘😘😍😍😍
      Yeah I too feel sad for Ragini
      I’m sorry for stopping Is enemity the first step of love

      1. Liya

        You are stopping it? But why dear?its different story..

      2. AMkideewani

        Cause I’m so confused about what to write in it, but I will write it whenever I have some good ideas for it and do read my other stories: A day to remember, Swaragini: You stole my heart and Why me

  17. Plz.make it ragsan only no raglak…plz …

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks Suhani💕💕
      In this story, I will show both couples but I don’t which couple will be the endgame

  18. Osm… but can u tell who r d pair i m little bit confused

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks Jessica I myself am confused about the pairs, cause I will go with the flow, so it can be any couple with Rags

  19. Hemalattha

    awesome.hope ragsan will get marry

    1. AMkideewani

      Thank you so much dear😊😊😊

  20. Moni

    Pls make it raglak..nowadays there are so less raglak ffs..😭😭..even i am a writer but can’t write due to my studies.

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear you will get to know soon about couples, but please don’t cry

  21. A.xx

    Fab hate lakshya and love Sanskaar want Ragsan to get married xx post soon

    1. AMkideewani

      Thank you very much dear❤️❤️❤️

  22. Asra

    awesome dear….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    1. AMkideewani

      Thanks dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

  23. Ragz_teju

    superb

    1. AMkideewani

      Tysm dear😝😝😝

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