Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 6) (~ By Ria)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 6)

Hi all! Ria here. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m really glad that you all are liking the story. This time seriously I’m feeling too bad as I made you all wait for almost two weeks. But, what to do I was really busy with my tests and college. We have it for three weeks continuously but, I’ll try my best not to make you all wait long. Hope you all would understand and cooperate a bit. Please forgive me for making it this late though.

Also, a very happy friendship day to all of you. Hope you all have a great day.

Here is the link for the previous segment:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-5-ria/

This is just to remind you all that the story is in Twinkle’s voice and not in the narrative voice. I might introduce Kunj’s voice later. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you all excited to read the sixth segment? Let’s continue quickly then.
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“I need a divorce”, I shouted again. Mr. Sarna laughed and walked over to the bed side table. He picked up the water jug and walked back towards me. I smiled and walked towards him. He gave me a confused expression but, continued walking. We stopped in front of each other and he splashed the water on my face. I forwarded my hands and took out the handkerchief from his pocket. I cleared the water from my face and gave it back to him. “How dare you?”, he asked pointing his finger at me. “Why should I tell you?”, I replied. He twisted my hand and said, “Don’t try to be over smart or else, you need to bear more pain.” I let out a faint laugh and replied, “Do you think it hurts anymore? Anyways, I don’t have time to talk to you. I need a divorce.” He laughed and said, “You can’t have any wishes.” “I’m not your slave that I’ll do whatever you wish. I’ve already bore a lot and now, I just need a divorce”, I replied. Mr. Sarna twisted my hand tighter and said, “You should’ve understood in these few days that you’re not less than a slave in my life.” He pushed me hard while my hand hit against the corner of the table making it bleed. He walked towards the cupboard and took out the first aid. I smiled and walked towards him. He applied Dettol on the cotton while I forwarded my hands. He cleaned the blood and aided the cut. “Thanks”, I blurted out and walked out of the room.

I was climbing down the stairs when the doorbell rang. I quickly went down and opened the door. I saw maa and Mahi di standing together. The diary pages again flashed through my mind. I was wondering how I could get to know what happened when maa shook me and said, “Twinkle, where are you lost?” I came out of my thoughts and smilingly replied, “Nowhere. I’m sorry. Come inside.” Maa went and sat in the hall while Mahi di went back to her room. Kunj came down and asked, “Any improvement?” Maa replied coughing, “No.” “I’ll get you some water maa”, I said. Maa smiled at me while I walked towards the kitchen wondering what needed improvement. “You’ve got a really nice life partner for yourself”, I heard maa saying. “I wish he had the sense to understand that”, I murmured boasting about myself and later, smiled to myself.

I came into the hall with a glass full of water while maa said, “The next appointment is next month I guess, on 2nd.” “What appointment?”, I asked forwarding the glass to maa. She was about to reply when she took the glass from my hand and said, “What happened to your hand? Why is there so much of blood clotting?” I quickly hid my hands behind my back and said, “It’s nothing maa. My hands are perfectly fine.” Maa kept the glass on the table beside and pulled my hands from behind my back. “What is fine? Nothing is fine. How did this happen?”, asked Maa pointing at my wrist. “Nothing maa”, I replied. “Twinkle, tell me what happened”, said maa. “Maa actually..umm.. Mr. I mean Ku”, I said and was about to complete when the doorbell rang. I quickly moved my hands away and said, “I’ll see.” “No, you both go to your room. My friends have come”, replied maa. “Okay sure maa”, remarked Kunj. Maa went to open the door while Kunj held my hand and dragged me to the kitchen.

“Mr. Sarna, it’s hurting. Please leave my hand”, I said trying to free my hand. “Just shut up”, shouted Mr. Sarna and entered the kitchen. “What did you think that you’ll tell maa everything?”, he asked pushing me on the floor. “I swear I wasn’t telling maa what you did”, I replied trying to get up. “Don’t try to justify yourself. I very well know what you were upto”, said Mr. Sarna. He walked towards the gas stove and lit it. “What are you doing? I didn’t want to tell maa anything”, I said being scared. He let out a faint laugh and walked towards the cupboards. He took out a packet of camphor and turned towards me. “Now, you’ll always think thousand times before telling anything to anyone”, he said taking out a cube of camphor from the packet. “I wasn’t going to tell today also. Please don’t do this”, I said moving away. “Don’t dare to move”, said Mr. Sarna. “Give me your hand”, he added. I hid my hands behind my back and nodded my head in a no. I tried to run away from the kitchen but, Mr. Sarna caught hold of my left hand and pulled me towards the stove. He placed the camphor on my palm and held my hand above the stove. I closed my eyes in pain while the tears rolled down my cheeks. After around 10 minutes Mr. Sarna freed my burnt hand and walked out of the kitchen switching off the gas stove. I sat by the cupboard and cried on my fate. After about half an hour later I went back to Mr. Sarna’s room composing myself.

I walked into the room and laid down my suitcase on the floor. Mr. Sarna stared at me and asked, “What are you doing?” I ignored his question and packed my luggage. “Answer me”, he shouted. I got up from the floor locking my suitcase and said, “I’m going to Taneja Mansion. Please send the divorce papers there.” I pulled the trolley and was about to get out of the room when Mr. Sarna said, “A step ahead and I’ll kill your brother.” I immediately stopped at the doorstep while he continued, “My revenge will also be over.” I turned around and looked at him shockingly. After a fraction of seconds I asked, “What revenge?”
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Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.

26 comments

  1. SidMinTwinj

    Hey ria remember I promised you that I’ll comment on your ffs from next time so I’m doing it…nice episode ria but hating kunj so much why is he torturing twinkle so much feeling very bad for twinkle…please reveal the reason behind kunj’s behavior and make him realize his mistakes soon…its very difficult to imagine kunj(Sidhant Gupta) in a negative role…try to post next soon…

  2. SidMinTwinj

    |Registered Member

    Hey ria remember I promised you that I’ll comment on your ffs from next time so I’m doing it…nice episode ria but hating kunj so much why is he torturing twinkle so much feeling very bad for twinkle…please reveal the reason behind kunj’s behavior and make him realize his mistakes soon…its very difficult to imagine kunj(Sidhant Gupta) in a negative role…try to post next soon…

  3. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Ria you know what even though Kunj is wrong but I can’t hate him if he was another actor I surely would have but he is Sid year
    Loved the episode hope the mystery comes out soon Loved it 🙂

  4. Bhumika12

    |Registered Member

    awesome ……….episode ria di ……I was waiting for this….i loved it ……..Love u ……But what happened with Mahi ???

  5. Monica

    It was just amazing as ever! And now I understand why you hate kunj 😂 thank you for messaging me to let me know that this was posted 💕 continue real soon okay x cuz you know I love this one. Andandand update the other ff as well 😂 love you 💕

  6. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey baby doll
    Yaar kitna mast jalaya tune twinkle ka haath😂…jk but it was really painful
    😢😢😢😢
    N u know when u msged me that time I was reading ur ff😉😉😉
    Sorry for the lie but loved it❤❤❤
    Loved it to the core
    N of course I love u shoooo much😘😘😘

  7. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Ria
    That was so good.
    Damn
    Please update soon.
    Waiting
    Eager
    Also update I love you…..
    Dad took the tab
    No WhatsApp now.
    *Crying*
    Well biee
    Love you

  8. sujina

    happy friendship day 2 u too….
    epi is filled wid mystery bt kunj he is so harsh i know he’ll regret very soon n cont. asap….awesome epi…love it….

  9. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Happy friendship day dear… 😍💕
    Ria u r so busy nd struggling between ur hectic schedule but still u spare time for posting ur ff as u know how much eagerly we wait for ur ff….

    Episode was mind blowing… Amazing… The way u expressed Kunj’s cruelty was beyond awesome…
    Loved it..
    Love u 💕😍

  10. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Ria di
    Just know that u r a marvellous writer and u don’t need anyone to praise your writing. U just need to keep writing like this, don’t dishearten urself, DON’T underestimate urself, be positive and I love u💞
    As for the episode, outstanding as usual, and I really cried at the part when Kunj burnt her hand. I don’t need to say anything else.

  11. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    omg…its too much of torture…….wats d secret plz reveal soon…btw nyc episd…m missing ur oder ff soo much..
    plz updt dat too…

  12. Saby

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god riu…. 😍
    Its damn interesting…. Do cont soon….
    I m feeling like… Aur dikhao… Air dikhao..
    Poor twinkle… And so cruel Kunj…
    Still I love ur ff…. As well as uh…😘

  13. Baby

    |Registered Member

    amazing ria di ofcourse missed u alot di n d episode oh god dis kunj how cn he do dis to his twinkle definately aq big mystry post nxt asap di luv u all d best n a very happy friendship day

  14. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Very bad di!! You said i was angry at you because you didn’t comment? Not truee di … I’ll never be angry with u never … I just missed you that’s all 🙂 thank you for commenting on my previous episode 🙂 …
    Now back to this wonderful storyyyy….dii how do u manage to write so well? This eppi was simply amazing!! I loved it to the core 👌 and can’t wait to hear Kunj’s revenge …

  15. RiaA MendeZz

    Ria even I miss u and ur fanfictions but I’m not finding the chapters to your other fanfiction did u post any previously? I think its either I’m really late or my tab giving me a problem but when u post the next chapter of your “I Love You” fanfiction can u put the links to the previous chapters? I’d really appreciate that..anyway, about this chapter I understand why kunj is doing what he is doing but I hate it na cz twinkle is so innocent.all in all i enjoyed the chapter and i wont stop saying how much of a great writer u r

  16. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Ria,
    Feeling sad for Twinkle…I know there will be a justification for Kunj’s behavior… awesome episode dear… this time I am too late…
    Take your own time to post ff… concentrate on ur studies…

  17. Lover

    |Registered Member

    Sorry for being late I just want to tell I don’t know what to say after reading such a episode. Love you

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