Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 20 – Last Update)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 20)

Here’s the link for the previous segment:
Segment 19 Part 1
Segment 19 Part 2

This segment is in Twinkle’s voice. Hope you all weren’t confused all this time I’d been writing this fan fiction.

Well, excited for the last segment? Let’s start then.
•••
I came downstairs clipping my hair and walked towards the kitchen. I entered the kitchen and found the breakfast ready when Kunj came and hugged me from back. I placed my hand on his as he said, “Happy anniversary darling!” I smiled and replied, “Happy Anniversary Kunj!” He kissed my left cheek and resting his chin on my shoulder said, “So, where’s my gift?” “Where’s mine?”, I questioned back. He turned me around and lifted me. “Kunj, what are you doing?”

He made me sit on the counter and moved closer to me. “I’ve prepared everything for you on our fifth anniversary also”, he whispered. I wrapped my arms around his neck and remarked, “Oh really?” He nodded his head in a yes as I added, “But, that’s not the gift. I know you very well so, don’t try to act smart.” He smiled and took out a beautiful bracelet from his pocket. It had two hearts attached beside each other with one of them made of a pearl in a heart shape and the other one outlined with embedded stones . He made me wear it as I squealed, “This is so beautiful!” He smiled and touched his forehead with mine. I hugged him tightly and said, “Thank you so much Kunj!”

(Here’s the link for the bracelet:
http://g01.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1dq4YKFXXXXcIXFXXq6xXFXXXn/Free-Shipping-Wholesale-Fashion-Jewelery-Decoration-Alloy-Bracelet-Ladies-Hand-Bangle-Gold-Plating-Heart-Designs-12pc.jpg )

“Mumma”, shouted a girl from behind. I pushed away Kunj and quickly got down from the counter. “Yes Naina”, I said as she came running to me. “Mumma”, she remarked. I kneeled down in front of her and replied, “Yes my baccha, tell.” “Mumma, two months to go for my fourth birthday”, she said. I smiled and settling her hair asked, “Really? Daddy, when is Naina’s birthday?” She lightly slapped her forehead and said, “Mumma, you forgot Naina’s birthday?” I smiled as Kunj lifted up Naina and said, “Princess!” “Yes daddy?”, she replied as Kunj pointed towards his cheek. She kissed his cheek and said, “Daddy, do you remember my birthday?” I giggled as Kunj said, “Ofcourse I remember my princess’ birthday.” Naina smiled as Kunj added, “Even Mumma remembers.” “But, mumma told umm..umm..Mumma, what did you tell?”, replied a forgetful Naina. I smiled and taking Naina from Kunj pulled her nose. “Mumma, don’t do that. It will becomes this long”, she said spreading out her arms. “Okay, mumma won’t do it now”, I replied kissing her right cheek. “That’s like my good girl”, she remarked as I laughed. “You forget everything then, how do you remember your birthday?”, I asked. She smiled and cutely replied, “How can I forget my birthday? After all it’s your birthday as well.” I smiled and said, “Mumma loves Naina!” “I love you more mumma”, she replied kissing my cheek. “What about daddy?”, Kunj asked standing behind. Naina hugged me and replied, “Mumma more.” I laughed as Kunj frowned.

“Okay, why is Naina not ready for school?”, I asked. “Mumma, I’m not going today”, she replied. “Why?”, I asked pulling back from the hug. “Mumma, it’s yours and papa’s anni.. anni..What was that?”, she replied. I giggled and said, “Anniversary.” “Ya, that only. So, Naina won’t go today”, she replied. wi, get ready quickly”, I said making her stand. “Mumma, please?”, she begged. “No baby”, I said. “Mumma, please, please, please?”, she begged again. “Okay, I was thinking of getting Naina her favourite ice-cream today but, if you’re staying at home then, no ice-cream”, I said. “No, mumma. I’m going na. Who said I’m not going?”, she replied. I smiled as she ran out of the kitchen quickly. I turned around as Naina came back. “Mumma!”, she called out. “Yes baby”, I replied turning back. “Happy anni mumma and daddy!”, she greeted us. We smiled and said together, “Thank you baby/princess!” She smiled and ran out of the kitchen.

I turned around and picking up three plates was about to go out when Kunj held my hand. “Kunj!”, I exclaimed. He took the plates and placed them on the counter beside. He wrapped his arms around my waist as I said, “Kunj, leave me.” He nodded in a no and kissing my forehead asked, “Where’s my gift?” “Kunj, Naina will be late. Leave me”, I replied blushing. “First, my gift”, he said. “Fine, leave me first”, I replied. “No”, he muttered. “I won’t go anywhere. Leave me”, I said. He loosened his grip as I placed his hand on my stomach and said, “You’re going to become a father again.” He picked me up and twirled me around in the air. “Kunj, Kunj!”, I remarked laughing. “Twinkle, I love you!”, he remarked. “I love you too!”, I replied as he put me down and kissing my cheeks said, “Thank you for this wonderful gift.” I smiled and replied, “Naina will get late. Let me go now.” He picked the plates and said, “You’re back to complete rest darling.” I smiled as he walked out of the kitchen.

I stood there by the counter as my mind pondered upon the same question as before, “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” I smiled and muttered, “Everything is more than perfect!”

•••

Hello everyone! Thank you for all your comments and constant support throughout. It has been a wonderful journey and it wouldn’t have been possible without you all. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more and present before you all something which you all will like.

Well, I’m sorry for ending it without telling but, I feel most you must’ve guessed it when Twinkle and Kunj united.

By the way, the next article coming up from my side is – “I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Comeback). I’ve already uploaded the introduction and I hope you all would support me similarly.

Anyways, I would request everyone including my silent readers to comment today as this journey was for you all and you all have been an integral part of it.

Yours lovingly,
Ria💞

81 comments

  1. Aaliya

    Thank you Ria it was amazing but I have one question can someone please tell me where’s ff of twinkj poor or rich and why isnt any apdate pls tell me that

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Aaliya,
      Thank you so much for commenting! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction.

      Well, I don’t know about the author and seems like no one else does as well.

      Loads of love.💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidmin23,
      Thank you so much for commenting! I’m glad you liked the last segment.

      I’ll be back with my next ff soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  2. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    OMG God Ria. Imagine an 18 year old pounding n the table and throwing a tantrum and fangirling at the same time. That is me. Ria Ria Ria what do I even say anymore? U are making me act like my shoe size rather than my actual age 😂 I saw the “last Update” and literally screamed Nooooooo! Then I was reading and endlessly smiling. Naina was too damn cute. And her “happy anni” just killed me. I LOVE LOVE LOVED this ff and the ending could not have been any better as it is more than perfect. BTW that dp is just phenomenal. Did u make it urself? Anyways, again it was perfect. Personally, I loved how u ended it the most. Can’t wait for ur next ff. Love you ❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sara,
      Aww.. this was the best comment I’ve ever received from anyone. You screamed noooooo.. aww.. thank you so much for the most beautiful comment one could ever receive! Well, Naina is cute after all the character is inspired from my childhood😂. Jokes apart.

      Well, as i told before I didn’t make the cover pic. It’s from insta. I’m glad you liked the way I ended it. The next ff is soon coming up.

      Loads of love.💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Kiara,
      Thank you so much for your precious and beautiful comment. I’m glad you liked this story. Well, every good thing needs to come to an end, right? Stay tuned to my next ff.

      Loads of love.💞

  3. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    U can’t do this to me Ridi…
    U said that there will be a shock ..but this is …to shock ka bhi bap…
    I am not visiting tu visited just for ur ff …and now see my fate Ab to ff hi khatam hogya but I swear if u didn’t came up with a new story I will kill u for sure…
    But how to kill as I love u so much…
    Urgggghhhh….
    Love u bye *still miffed*

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Bulbul,
      You’re not angry now, right? I Love You comeback is coming soon. Don’t worry.

      Thank you for this precious comment. Well, all good things need to come to an end so, can’t really help. I’ll come back soon, don’t worry.

      Loads of love.💞

  4. Srija

    |Registered Member

    hey ria that’s really a very sweet ending
    thank u for such a wonderful story😊😊😊😊😍😘😘😍😍😘👌👌👌👍👏👏👏👏
    but i will miss it very much😞😞😞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Srija,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this story. Aww.. don’t be so sad na.. all good things need to come to an end, right?

      Well, my next ff is coming up soon. Do stay tuned.😀

      Loads of love.💞

  5. Sidhanshi

    Noooo!!! Ria pls don’t do this… It’s one of my fav ff… I loved it… Infact we all loved it from the core… Nd u r ending it, ab ham sabka kya hoga… U r my sweet, cute, bubbly frnd na so how can u do this… I’m soo sad… Nd awesome epi… Loved it very much…

  6. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Ria dear……it was lovely …..perfect ending to a perfect story…..one of the best ff I have ever read…..amazing ……all the best for studies…..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Rashi,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction. Aww..it really means a lot to me. Frankly, I never thought that you all would like this story so much.

      All the best for your exams and career.

      Loads of love.💞

  7. Sidhanshi

    Noooo!!! Ria pls don’t do this… It’s one of my fav ff… I loved it… Infact we all loved it from the core… Nd u r ending it, ab ham sabka kya hoga… U r my sweet, cute, bubbly frnd na so how can u do this… I’m soo sad… Nd awesome epi… Loved it very much… Take care… Nd waiting for u’r other ff too…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidhanshi,
      I’m so sorry but, I can’t continue this story anymore. There’s no use of dragging it. It means a lot to me when you say that this was one of your favourite fan fiction. I really can’t ask for anymore. Moreover, all good things need to come to an end, right? So, can’t really help it.

      The next fan fiction is coming up. Do stay tuned.😀

      Loads of love.💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Loveleen di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction so much. The next fan fiction is coming up soon. Do stay tuned.😀

      Loads of love.💞

  8. Monica

    |Registered Member

    hey idiot,
    It was just perfect! I loved the end. So now i know what you meant with the shock that I would get -.- Whatever now -.- I don’t think I can give a long note here (that too a sweet one) because all we do is argue with each other 😂 But on a serious note, since the beginning of this ff, you have made me crave to read the next segment even when there was no suspense or something to be revealed. Your writing was just enough for the curiosity in me to jump like an idiot and wait for the next segment. All I’ll say is that I won’t be missing you cause you are coming up with “I Love You” ff 😂. Anyway, quickly update us with that.
    Love you 💕
    P.S – I am so mad at you for not uploading the note of mine but it’s okay now -.- I have a big heart, unlike yours so I have forgiven 😂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey stupid,
      Firstly, thank you so much for this beautiful comment! I loved it so much. Yes, this was the shock I meant. All good things need to come to an end so there’s nothing that can be done.

      Well, we do argue a lot but, it’s all because I love you like anything my stupid. I’m so glad to have you as my Friend who can just listen to all my crap, sad stories, lessen my pain and cheer me up whatever happens.

      By the way, thank you so much again! I’m so glad to know that it was my writing which made you eager to read my fan fiction everytime.

      I’ll be back with the next fan fiction soon. Give me some more time nah, please!

      P.S.: It doesn’t really matter now.😂

      Loads of love my stupid.💞
      ~ Your stupid forever.

  9. Tara

    |Registered Member

    hawwwwwwwww gandi ladki… end kar diya 😭😭😭😭
    chalo koi nei.. it was an awesome journey dear…loved it to core..
    love u. sweet heart…
    muaahhh muaahh
    take care bubye

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Tara,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction. Please don’t be sad. All good things need to come to an end, right? Please cheer up girl.

      Loads of love.💞

  10. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved your ff 🙂 It had been an amazing Journey to read your ff seeing the worst side of Kunj to the best seeing the bechare Twinkle to a strong Twinkle 🙂
    The episode was so cute Naina was so sweet 🙂 Love her 🙂 She remembers her birthday and not the other things selective memory even i have it 😉
    Keep writing 🙂
    Love you 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidmin,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad that you liked this fan fiction. It really means a lot to me. Well, Naina is cute. I agree. By the way, I forget everything😂 *No selective memory*😂

      Anyways, I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  11. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Hello di..I hope to get the next post asap
    .
    This was really cute NAD sweet…I have something to share..I am doing it here since I have no other way out..
    Muah😘😘

  12. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    C THIS IS HOW FRIENDSHIP BREAKS👇

    Both friends will think that they are too busy 😔

    They will not contact each other thinking it may be disturbing 😡

    As time passes, both will think… “let the other contact me” 😨

    After a while, each will think… “why should I contact first?” 😳

    Here, your love will gradually be converted to pride 😈

    Finally, without contact, the memory becomes weak 💆

    They forget each other…..❔

    One day they will meet and blame one another 😪

    So, let’s keep in touch, my dear friend 👫

    I don’t wanna be one of those kind of friends 👎

    So here I am saying,
    I miss you! And hope that all is well with you? 👍☎😃😄

    Life is no fun without FRIENDS 👧👦

    It’s “World Best Friends Week.” Send this to all your good friends. Even me, if I am one of them.👷

    See how many you get back… If you get more than 3 you are really a lovable person…😍

    I am waiting!!! 💓

    u wil get gud news on Friday by d person u like.

    and tomrow will be the best day of your life.

    Dont break this chain.

    snd this to 9frns in 10mins whn u read…😘☺
    Be brave….n snd dis 2 ua frnz n c vich 3 colours dey give u..
    red…..=….i love u ❤
    pink….=….u r cute😊
    green…=….funny..😄😉
    white…=…so good :D😉
    yellow…=…u r amazing.xd😙
    orange…..=…. sweet :)😘
    blue ….=….i miss u very much😭
    purple…=…u r gud luking 😘
    aqua….=…. Wanna. Marry u😚
    golden….=….u r precious for me😌😌
    grey….=….i don’t wanna loose u dear 😌
    black…= u r a crack bt still mah bestie…..😜
    Waiting fr ur rply

    • Ria

      |Author

      I’m so sorry Shreya. I barely get the time to message anyone. Whenever I come on TU, I’ve so many articles to be read. I’m so sorry. It’s not about a problem of being the first one to be messaging but, I don’t get much time. So sorry.

      Well, for this one, here are the ones for you..
      Red; Love you a lot sweetheart!
      Golden; You’re really precious Shreya. Please, stay the same. I love the way you’re.

      ~ Ria di with loads of love.💞

  13. dreamer...arundhati

    Riu it.. Was.. Chumz… The journey was tooo gud… Im filled with poignant emotions… 😀 luv u

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Arundhati,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this entire journey. I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Do stay tuned

      Loads of love.💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Roshni di,
      Aww..I’m glad to know you read my ff. I’m a huge fan of ur ff, love ya fate.. aur marriage of our life. I loved that ff so much.

      Well, please don’t be sad. I’ll be back with my next ff, “I Love You” (Comeback), soon. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  14. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Hey uuuuuuuu👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻
    Omggggggg I really thought yesterday wen u told that ders some surprise that this episode may be a last one and ya it was.
    So it came to an end
    My fav ff came to an end
    Really
    Nd i am thinking now wat to say
    Its an amazing ff. I really loved it from start. Twinj and naina 😍😍
    I am gonna miss this ff alot but i am not gonna miss u 😂 Bcz u r coming with another ff
    Love u❤️❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Chiku,
      Firstly, thank you for this beautiful comment! It makes me so happy knwing that you liked my ff right from the beginning. Well, what to do! All good things need to come to an end, right? So, here’s the end. Please cheer up! Don’t be sad as I want all of you to smile while I end this ff.

      Anyways, “I Love You” (Comeback) will be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  15. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    yaar kyun end kiya yaar… im really sad… aisa bi koi karthe… yaar kyun…will really really miss ur ff…aur todays epi was so cute… I loved the ending…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Tamanna,
      Thank you so much for this beautiful comment dear! I’m glad you liked this story. Well, don’t be so sad, alright? All good things need to come to an end, right? So, even this did.

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) will be updated soon. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  16. Sana(sanu)

    Awesome amazing fabulous fantastic superb splendid spectacular…. Jo bhi kahun kam hi yrr….. Rlly ….

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sana,
      Thank you so much for this precious comment dear! I’m glad you liked this story.

      Loads of love.💞

  17. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria this ff is one of my favorite ffs…I’m sad that it ended but no worries as your coming up with I love you TwiNj journey S2…Ria reason for loving this ff like hell is your way of writing your a phenomenal writer dear…the journey of this ff was amazing and I enjoyed it thoroughly…in the last few segments you nailed it girl…coming to last segment it is just perfect I so loved little Naina,her sweet talks and the way she forgets things and TwiNj scenes too…waiting for I Love you TwiNj journey update…try to post soon…

    Love you 😘😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! Haha.. phenomenal writer!! It really means a lot di. Thank you so so much! Your comments have always been a pleasure to read throughout. Thank you so much for supporting me constantly throughout the journey. Well, I’m glad that you liked Naina as well as Twinj and the end. Thank you so much!

      Also, glad to know that you liked my way of writing. I guess I’ll be continuing to write similarly as I seem to feel more comfortable writing like this.😀

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Anayaali,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff. Well, I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Stay tuned.😀

  18. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Huh..It ended…Well jaan (I hope u did not mind and also see the reply I gave you on my FF a while ago) you ended it so perfectly 🙂 “Life is just more than perfect!” These lines of your touched my heart…There was a unique message behind this FF of yours, “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” And also the title was so damn amazing that anyone will crave for this wonderful FF!! Waiting for your upcoming FFs!! Nothing more to say as I am still in the hangover state (no yaar I don’t drink!!!) But your FF was so damn amazing 😉 Love u jaan!!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Firstly, I don’t mind if you call me “Jaan”. In fact, I’d be so happy if you do. Seriously❗❗ Well, thank you for this ever beautiful comment dear! I’m so glad that you liked the end and especially the ending lines. It makes me feel that you all liked the ending. Thank you so so much!

      Aww..you liked the title so much? I’m glad. I always used to think that it’s quite boring and moreover, it’s so long, people would anyways find it boring but, you changed my conception.😀

      By the way, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  19. Lama

    |Registered Member

    Ria diii…its soooooo fantastic…yr really its wonderful…loved it to the core…come back soon wd another superbbb ff…love u darling 😘😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Lama,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this ff. The next ff, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Also, I’d mailed you some days before. Please check your mail. I’ve been waiting for quite a long time. Hope you aren’t mad at me for not mailing you before.😀

      Loads of love.💞

  20. SidVee

    Beautiful ending 😍😍😍.. naina is soooooooo cuteee 😃😃.. loved her n all twinj scenes n twinj-naina scenes.. I’m sad that this ff ended.. I loved it very much.. n will miss it sooo muchh.. waiting for I love you s2.. ❤❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidvee,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the ending, Twinj scenes as well as the little Naina. Don’t be sad dear. All good things need to come to an end, right? So, please don’t be sad. Moreover, I wanted to end this ff with a bright smile on all your faces. So, please smile!!

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  21. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Riaaaaa.
    Omigod.
    That was bliss.
    The whole journey was wonderful.
    How do you write so very well.?
    Wow.wow.wow.
    I love you infinity.♥♥

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Meeta,
      Thank you so much darling! I’m glad you liked the ff throughout. Well, idk. I feel I don’t write well but, according to you all it seems to be different. So, I really don’t know.

      Loads of love.💞

  22. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Why….are you ending………..hmmmm…….thus us soooooo Bas…….how can u end ..leaving us all alone haaaww???? …… I’ll miss u……really………Nd I order u to start ur next ff asap……..else….else….else…….else…..kuch ni…….I can’t do anything to my friend……..I’ll always miss you……coz u know n I LOVE YOU……..I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really LUV U………… seriously……..nd u ended it soo nicely that I can’t forget it………shi me……. I’ll miss…… obviously …u ……Nd I want a new ff as soon as possible……..Nd it’s really so perfect around u…… LOVE YOU

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Adya,
      Thank you for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked the ff as well as the ending. Well, please don’t be so sad na. All good things need to come to an end, right? You people have always told me that this ff was good so, it had to end. Please, cheer up. I wanted to end this ff with a bright smile on all your faces. Please, smile bright!😀

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  23. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Well u know how sad and angry I m rgt now..
    I can’t help..they’re ur decisions! I can’t intervene!
    The end was perfect, I agree, but I never thought that this’d be that surprise’
    *rolls eyes*
    *twitches lips*
    *starts crying*
    Now you handle. Bye bye.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Laddoo,
      Please don’t say like that na. I know you were angry and sad at that time but, what to do! Don’t all good things need to come to an end? You always told that this ff was good so, it surely needs to come to an end, right?

      Well, I’m glad that you liked the end. Also, please don’t cry na bacha. (See, mumma is telling😂) You know, I can never see you crying. I don’t want you to cry ever. I wanted to end the ff with a very bright smile right across your face. Please cheer up. Just a bright smile, that’s all I need.

      Loads of love.💞
      ~ Ria dibhai

  24. Payal ....

    Ria u cant do to me no no no
    Tumne itne fab fab fab ff ko end kr diay this is not done😂
    Pr Mujhe pata hai ki tumhari next amazing post jaldi jaldi update hone wali hai- I love u twinj muuuahh ilove it

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Payal,
      Thank you so much for your precious comment! I’m so glad you liked this ff. I’ll surely be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  25. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Thank u ria for giving this ff such a cute si happy ending………Thank u for such a blissful love story…..I throughly enjoyed reading each nd every part of it

    Love u loads💕💕😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Kruti,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad this story as well as the ending. Well, I know you were mad at me bit, please be normal na. (Itne dino mein toh ho bhi gayi hogi😂)

      By the way, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  26. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Riauuu… Seriously this ff going to end… It was my favorite….😥😥😥😥… One day every ff have to end… But still I’ll miss this ff.. This ff was the blust of this tu… My journey with this beautiful writer was amazing… Really I’ll miss this page this ff… U made us laugh cry… Simle… Thank you soo much for everything… Yaar ur outstanding… Hats off to u… Dea… I’m waiting for next ff… All the very best for it… I’ll support u… Love you lots

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Affaa di,
      Firstly, the way you call me is just so adorable, Riauuu..aww.. Well, thank you so much for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked this ff throughout. It means a lot di that it’s your favourite ff. I feel so happy. I’m glad you understood me and aren’t mad at me for ending the ff. Thank you so much di!

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  27. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful ending ria…❤❤
    Naina is sooo cute..😘
    Loved ur story…
    And ya the ending was really more than perfect..💞💞💞💞💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Shreya,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the story as well as the ending. Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  28. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode ria I loved it to core each n every epi was amazing frm start I’m going to miss dis badly
    Bt plss come back soon
    N last part was ssoooooooo cuteeeeeeeee
    Loved it N love u

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ramya,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff right from the beginning. Aww.. even I’m going to miss this ff especially because of all your special comments throughout. I’ll be back soon. Please, don’t be upset.

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  29. Ashu

    |Registered Member

    Ria!!! I’ve never read such a cute epilogue!!!

    Naina is so cute!!! I can imagine tht little Ria😂😂😂😂
    And such a perfect ending, for such a perfect story!!! Hate to love concepts are always beautiful! It might be sad at the beginning, but they always end on a happy note!!! And u have given this story a perfect perfect plot with hatred, love, hurt and happiness…all in one!!
    Love you❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Firstly, thank you so much for reading this inspite of being a swaragini fan I couldn’t have asked for more.😀 Well, I’m glad that you found the epilogue cute.

      Aww..you could imagine me as that li’l Naina? Well, the character is really inspired by me. I mean especially that nose reaction. I used to hate it when someone did that and instantly reply this.😂

      Hehe..you found this ff an all in one combo? I’m so glad to know about it.

      Loads of love.💞
      ~ Your one and only Cutie pie❗😀

  30. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Hawww u ended it?? 😢
    Anyway I’ll miss this story very very much ❤❤
    I loved every damn dialogue and twinj scenes 😍
    Loved it to the core Di!
    Excited for you next one 🙂
    Love you 💕

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Romaisha,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff right from the beginning. Aww..you liked every dialogue and Twinj scene!! It really means a lot to me. Thank you so much for supporting me throughout.

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Also, try uploading your ff soon. I’m excited to know how Kunj saves Twinkle.😀

      Loads of love.

  31. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Diii apne end kar diya hmmm but baat yeh bhi haii ke bina story ke drag karna bhi thik nahi haii anyways dii I enjoyed each n every episode of this beautiful ff it was outstanding n last lines of twinkle were gud n naina wow she was shooooooo cuteeeee awesome dii plsss post l lvu u journey also plsssss soon
    Love u dii 💞💞

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Thanmy,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this entire ff. It really means a lot to me. Also, I’m so happy to know that you all liked the ending and found it perfect. Hehe..Li’l Naina is really cute. I’m so happy you all found the same.

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  32. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Ria….i read it lonng ago n the only thing that came to mind was….katti!
    Khatam kyun kiya?????😠😠
    Maine nahin baat karni tumse! Dhamakedaar epis di…vo bhi back to back….itna pyaara saffar….climax pe tata bye keh diya??? Not fair!
    Mujhe ye epi kitna pasand tha pata hai??? I know meri galti bhi hai…i did not comment par uske liya this big sazaa!!

    Par promise karo di! U’ll come back with another one varna mein baat bhi nahin karungi😞

    Ab epi ki baat! Naina is soooo sweet! Shararti hai n kitni cute hai!!!
    n naya chotu sa baby! Aap family planning ke baare mein serious ho…2 babies😝

    Par par….i want another ff ya iska season 2!!!!

    Sorry di agar rude ho gaya to…

    Love u❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ayu,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad that you liked this ff so much. Aise nahi karte na. Har cheez toh khatam honi hi hoti hai na. Tum logo ne mujhe itna pyaar diya aur hamesha bola that this ff is very good, right? All good things need to come to an end, right? So, here’s the end. But, please don’t be angry or upset. I want you to have a bright smile right across your face. It would suit you more.

      Family planning!!😂😂

      Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.

      Loads of love.💞

  33. Ria

    |Author

    Hello, everyone!
    Thank you so much for commenting and supporting me throughout. I’m really glad that you all liked this ff throughout. I couldn’t have expectated or asked for anything more. The love that you all have showered upon me throughout this journey is just unbelievable and cannot be expressed. Some things remain to be better if they’re kept unsaid; so, here’s another journey which I can’t express in words. Thank you everyone for making this journey the most memorable one. It has been an absolutely amazing jour ey and it wouldn’t have been possible without all of you. Thank you so soo much.

    Also, no one’s being upset or crying over the end. I want a bright smile right across all your beautiful faces. Just a bright smile; that’s all I need.😀

    Love you all!💞

    Take care. I’ll be back soon.😀

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