Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 19 ~ Part 2)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 19 ~ Part 2)

Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m glad you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.

Well, as you all supported me so, here’s the second part with mature content. Frankly speaking, I’ve never tried it out so, I hope you all will bare me even if it’s bad.

Also, please take a note that this part for everyone who’s 16 or 16+. If anyone younger than that is reading please read it on your own risk and don’t come and bash me up later.

Anyways, here’s the link for the first half of this segment:

Segment 19 Part 1

Well, this part of the segment is also in Kunj’s voice. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you excited to read this part of the nineteenth segment? Let’s start then.
I was sitting near the pool when Twinkle came and placed her hand on my shoulder. “Kunj, this is really beautiful”, she said as I turned around to look at her. She looked elegant in the blood red knee-length dress I bought for her with the minimal makeup she applied. “S*xy love!”, I said as she blushed and looked away. “Twinkle, can you get me a towel?”, I asked pointing at the towels kept beside us. “Sure”, she replied and walked away to get one.

“Here”, she said forwarding me a towel. I stood up and wiped the water from my legs. I smiled and threw the towel behind her. “Kunj, it’s not our towel”, she said and turned around to get it as I held her hand and pulled her closer to me. Her back touched my front as I breathed on her neck letting her feel the warmth. “Kunj!”, she exclaimed. I moved her hair to one side and ran my fingers down her neck. “I can’t take my eyes off you”, I whispered making her blush. I kissed her neck and whispered, “You smell so good.” Twinkle smiled and turned around. I locked her gaze with mine and was lost in her deep brown eyes when she raised her foot and kissed me. I remained shocked for sometime and as she was about to move back I locked my arms around her waist and kissed her back. We pulled after a long time being out of breath as Twinkle lowered her gaze. I smiled and lifted her in my arms.

I walked inside the palace and went to the guest room. “Why are we here?”, Twinkle asked tightening her grip around my neck. “Another surprise awaits you”, I replied. She widened her eyes and squealed, “Really?” “Slow Twinkle. Everyone’s sleeping here”, I replied unbolting the door. We entered the room as I noticed Twinkle’s changing expressions. She was shocked and happy to see the room beautifully decorated with candles and rose petals spread all over. She hugged me tightly and said, “This is just so beautiful.” “Not more than you”, I whispered making her blush. “Put me down Kunj”, she complained. I nodded my head disagreeing and motioned towards the bed. I made her sit on the bed and sat down in front of her. I placed my hands on either sides of her and moved closer to her. “Kunj!”, she exclaimed as I increased the proximity between us. I caressed her face with my forefinger as she turned her face away turning a dark shade of pink. I smiled and removing her right earring bit her earlobe. She clutched the bedsheet and closing her eyes tightly moaned, “Kunj.” I smiled and placing my forefinger on her chin made her face me.

I kissed her eyes as she slowly opened them and quickly hugged me shying. I smiled and hugged her back. I pulled back after sometime as she lowered her gaze. “I love you”, I whispered and moved closer to her as she moved back. Within a few minutes we both were lying down on the bed with me on top of Twinkle. “Kunj”, she moaned as I placed my finger on her lips and kissed her forehead. “Twinkle, I love you”, I repeated myself caressing her face. “She’s nervous”, I thought and said, “Twinkle, it’s okay. You can take your own time.” I looked away and was about to get up when she held my wrist and muttered, “Kunj!” I looked around expecting an apology when she said, “Please take over me.” “Are you sure?”, I asked shockingly. She nodded her head in a yes while playing with my shirt buttons. I smiled and kissed her. She responded quickly while unbuttoning my shirt. We pulled back after a long time being out of breath.

“I hate you”, I remarked as she immediately opened her eyes and looked at me in disbelief. “Kunj?”, she muttered with teary eyes. “I hate you because you always distract me”, I completed as a smile crept over her face. “I hate your eyes because they kill me eyeryday”, I said and kissed her eyes. “I hate your cheeks because they make the red colour look fade”, I said kissing her cheeks as she blushed. “I hate your lips because my lips have forgotten their own taste”, I added and softly kissed her lips. “I hate your neck because it smells so good”, I said and bit her neck. “Kunj”, she moaned as I smiled. I moved down and said, “I hate your br..”, I muttered when Twinkle softly kissed my lips and said, “Enough.” I moved closer to her and kissed her yet again. While kissing we rolled over the bed with Twinkle on top of me. I smiled seeing her becoming comfortable and started massaging her legs and later, her thighs as the dress came up till her thighs. “Kunj”, she moaned as I moved my hands up and ran my hands through her hair. I moved her hair to one side and unzipped her dress. I pushed her back on the bed and coming on top of her slid down the right strap from her shoulder. I kissed her shoulder and later, bit her over there as she moaned my name. I slid down the other strap and did the same as the other shoulder. A few minutes later I slid down her dress a bit and kissed her cl**vage. She laid there shyly as I whispered, “Twinkle, I love you!” She smiled and within the next few minutes her dress was haphazardly thrown on the floor. “You’ve a perfect figure darling”, I remarked as she covered my eyes. I smiled and removing her hands said, “You need not feel shy.” “I know”, she muttered and removed my shirt.

I smiled as she pushed me and came on top of me again. She kissed my cheeks and then, my bare chest. My hands roamed around on her back desperately to unhook her bra. I unhooked her bra and came on top of her again. I removed one of the straps as she placed her hand on mine to prevent me. I kissed her to make her make feel comfortable as she unbuttoned my trousers. I slowly removed her bra as she laid there shyly with the only intimate piece of clothing on her body. She hugged me tightly and muttered, I love you!” I smiled and hugged her back. We pulled back after a while as I moved down and traced her legs upwards. I slowly went up and within no time we both were naked. I was kissing and biting her everwhere when she muttered, “Kunj, I need you.” I looked up at her and slowly started thrusting her.

After almost three hours, I laid down next to an exhausted her. She wrapped her arms around me and said, “I love you!” I smiled and pulled the blanket over both of us. I wrapped my arms around her waist and muttered, “I love you too.” She smiled and whispered, “Good night Kunj!” “Good night Love!”, I remarked kissing her forehead and both of us slept in each other’s embrace.
Okay, so how was this? I’m sorry if you expected more but, there’s a limit to everything and I don’t want to go continuing.? Also, I’m really sorry if anyone felt it was too vulgar but, that was the sole reason why I gave an age limit.

Anyways, please drop down your reviews below. I’d be eagerly waiting to read them and please no one’s bashing me up. I told all the bashers and readers below 15 years stay out of it. Well, as I say criticism is always welcome but, no ill comments.

P.S.: The next update might take a few days time as I’m really because of Durga Puja as Sara told you all. I’m barely getting any time to write. Also, sorry to all the authors on whose articles I didn’t comment as I’m rarely getting any time to but, please don’t be upset as I read them all.

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  1. Sara28

    Oh God Ria. ? Only you have the power to make “hate” into something so amazing and give it a new meaning. Gosh I just loved that! And woah, this is a new side of you I’m seeing and it’s a good thing. Even such things u are able to write so composed and maturely. Love you ❤️

  2. Anam_sidhant

    Hawt hawt hawt!! Tu mein aag lag gayi???? someone please call the fire brigade coz this ff is too hot to handle!? it was amazing ria and ya I didn’t expect more coz this enough for me??? thnks for uploading sooner after reading Sara’s msg I thought u will be not uploading for some days… but uh uploaded it today it self?? I loved it?

  3. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous hot romantic epi…..

  4. Ayesha Khanum

    ut was not vulgar it was very good whoever reads they should read on their own you need nt to ask ur u did ur job

  5. Sooo romantic epi…

  6. Ranabulbul

    Oh my god????????? I am still smiling…
    So romantic epi haye hate word ki definition hi change ho gayi yr….
    Meri Ridi is awesome…..
    Main bhi 15 hun ..but mmaine Rhoda Rhoda skip krke padha liya …main use Bulger nhi ….romantic bolti hun…
    Muaaahhhhhh….Ridi love u loads

  7. Chiku

    I am 15 ????????
    Itna hot Omgggggggggg
    I never thought ull write like that. I used to think u dont like writing mature content.
    Episode was oh lal laaa
    Really how do u write so amazing
    Plz give me some tutorials so that i can also write so awesome ❤️❤️❤️??????
    Love u❤️

  8. Rashiverma2199

    Ria episode was awesome…..
    U describe everything perfectly…..
    Amazing job….

  9. dreamer...arundhati

    Riu dekha jaye to i shouldn’t have read…. I will b 15 in june…. But ue kambakt aankbe bina padhe reh hi nahi pati…. U wrote it beautifully.. Romance queen.. Luv u

  10. Meeta

    That was Bliss.
    N yaa limit.?
    Sorry m not 16??(You know,right)
    Very well, IDC.
    That was so good.
    I guess you should be writing more of it.?
    Love you, infinity.?

  11. Loveleen

    poore TU mein hotness overloaded ….damn romantic….m glad m over 18….lol….bt there ws nothing vulgar dear…

  12. U know my age.
    U know what I wanted.
    U know if I liked ot or not.
    U know why I am commenting.
    Baki log aone kaam se kaam rkhe.
    I know I am small.
    Love u?
    Post soon.

  13. Hey ria
    it was so romantic
    And it was not vulgar
    Loved twinj hot hot romance

  14. Shreya098

    Ria it wasn’t vulgar at all…
    Infact it was beautiful❤

    And ya I looved that “hate” segment..

  15. Kruti

    Omgggg Ria tumne toh “hate” ka meaning hi badal dala…..I so loved that part
    U indeed r an amazing writer y wrote everything in a limit nd in d best way possible not making it feel vulgral

    Amazing…..very well written…..Loved each nd every bit

    Nd no worries take ur own time to post d nxt part…..we are waiting

    Loads of Love????

    1. Kruti

      Y nahi u hai vo

  16. Kitni garmi hi …:B:B:B
    omg ria it was awesome…. amazing…. fabulous… splendid…..spectacular…..
    Loved it …..
    U hve portrayed it very well….

  17. Hey… Ria first of all ur epi is so romantic and hot and its not vulgur it was amazing but i am small sorry iam less than 16 i am 15 years sorry i love each and every part of this epi otherwise ur full ff is awesome…… Plzzzzzzz post nxt sooooooooonnnnnnn

  18. Plzzzz writte more part like it and make this ff more romantic u describe it very nicely

  19. Kritika14

    Hey idiot,
    DAMN! This was blissful. I loved this. There was nothing vulgar in this … Infact this was just so beautiful and that “hate” part, bro I am dead! You write so well. Although i know you suck at romance but this reading this makes me doubt on you ? Anyway, try to post the next one soon. You better comment on my ff okay -.- *jk jk ?*
    Love you ?

  20. Hey Ria it wasn’t vulgar it was so beautiful and romantic…that “hate” part tho ?????? Ria your a phenomenal writer dear…in every segment you make me to fall more and more for your ff…Kudos girl…u nailed it in this episode…

    Love you ???

  21. So hottt ????.. uff so much hotnessss ??.. haha it was soo romantic n beautiful ??.. n there was nothing vulgur in it.. you wrote everything in a limit n that was enough.. n have portrayed each n everything beautifully ??.. loved that “hate” part as well.. do cont soon ?

  22. Adya

    I HATE u ria bcoz u r a much better writer than me…………..ohh sry I was talking about the school sovereign…….??? I HATE u bcoz u r more creative than me………I HATA u bcoz I LUV u ……….it was awesome ria……………??????

  23. Romaisha

    Well damn yaar ??????
    No more mistress nice girl ???❤
    Naughty yaar Di.. Haww but i loved it !! ?
    It was too damn hot and romantic! Too cute!
    And yaar u no I’d wait a lifetime for your ff and not forget the story! ??
    So u can post whenever you’re free!..
    Love you yaar! And u made my day with this epi! ?

  24. O my god,superb….Very nice……tei ka last epi ye hona chahiye tha.

  25. its superb
    and yaa not at all vulgur

  26. SidMin

    My JJ Loved it 🙂 Awesome romance was too good episode was hot 🙂 Loved it 🙂 The hate part was the best 🙂 All the best for your exams 🙂 Try posting soon 🙂

  27. awesom…amazing…fab… romantic epi…post soon

  28. Tara

    hahaha.. ria i guess ajkal k sabhi ko bohut knowledge hain… so dont worry 😛
    nd yeah it was enough..isse zyada even i cant take it..
    it was beautifully written so chillax
    and i really appreciate ur use of vocabulary..
    love ya

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