Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 17)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 17)

Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m glad that you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.

Well, sorry for such a late update. I was first of all short of ideas for a romantic segment and moreover I didn’t get the time too. Also, this ain’t the romantic segment you all had been waiting for. I’d be surely back with a romantic segment soon but, can’t promise for the next segment itself.

Here is the link for the previous segment:

This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Anyways, are you all eager to read this segment? Let’s continue.
I followed Twinkle as she ran into our room. I entered the room and closed the door behind me. She turned around to look at me and asked, “Kunj, why did you close the door?” I genuinely smiled at her and motioned towards her. “Kunj”, she called out as I held on to her waist and pulled her closer to me. “Yes darling?”, I asked kissing her left cheek. She turned pink and lowering her gaze muttered, “Leave me.” I kissed her other cheek and whispered, “No.” “Kunj”, she exclaimed and hugged me tightly resting her head on my chest. I lifted her head and smiled looking at her as she turned completely pink. “Twinkle”, I whispered. She pushed me back as I held on to her hand and both of us fell down on the bed beside each other. I smiled and wrapping her arms around her waist pulled her closer to me. She tried to free herself but, I tightened my grip and moved closer to her. I was about to kiss her when suddenly the door bell rang. She quickly freed herself and stood up settling her hair. “Twinkle, wait”, I shouted as she hurriedly ran downstairs. “She’ll drive me crazy”, I muttered and ran downstairs.

I came down to the hall as I saw maa and di settling down on the sofa. I frowned and walked over to them. “Twinkle, are you okay?”, maa asked. “What happened..”, Twinkle was about to complete when I squeezed her hand and said, “Ya.” “Okay. By the way, the marriage dates are fixed for the next month so we planned to go for an outing with Leela ji and Yuvraj now to the farmhouse. We’ll return tomorrow”, maa asked. “Maa, I think Twinkle needs some rest for the day”, I replied but, Twinkle shook her head in a no and said, “I’m alright.” I frowned as she added, “When are we leaving?” I felt disgusted and while checking my phone said, “I’ve an important meeting to be attended today. You all carry on. I won’t be able to come.” “Kunj”, maa said trying to convince me but, I interrupted her and replied, “It’s really important. You all carry on.” I left Twinkle’s hand with a jerk as she looked at me shocked. I went upstairs as maa and di continued talking while Twinkle excused herself and followed me.

I entered the room and was about to close the door when Twinkle entered and asked, “Do you really have a meeting?” I ignored her and picked up my files from the table. “Kunj, I’m talking to you”, she said while I continued ignoring her. I was about to go out of the room as Twinkle held my wrist and calmly asked, “Kunj, what happened?” I turned around and said, “Why don’t you understand that I want to spend some time with you? I was handling the situation right? Who told you to speak in between?” Twinkle smiled and wrapping her arms around my neck whispered, “Why are you so desperate?” I rolled my eyes and said, “I need to attend the meeting.” “Fine. I thought we could spend time together at the farmhouse but, since you’re so busy then I won’t stop you. Go”, she replied moving back. I pulled her closer by her waist and whispered, “The meeting is cancelled.” She hit on my chest and hugged me tightly. I smiled and hugged her back.
Okay, so how was this segment? I guess it wasn’t good. Did you like the desperate Kunj? Well, do drop down your views regarding this segment below. I’d be eagerly waiting to know them. Criticism is always welcome but, no ill comments.


  1. SidMin


    |Registered Member

    Wow Ria Loved it So cute when I was reading the end I mean when Kunj left the hall in an angry mood I felt scared what if … But then In the end Twinkle made everything fine Loved it 🙂 Post soon 🙂 Love you 🙂

  2. Ranabulbul


    |Registered Member

    I am cmnting after so long yr ..
    U might have forgot me but I have not…
    Amamzing epi so cute and awesome ..No words to describe this epi…
    Loved it to the core yr ..
    Post soon

  3. Thanmy


    |Registered Member

    amazing diii gud to see this after a long time it was cute “waiting to see desperate kunj desperately” hehe anyways it was fab as usual……
    love u dii

  4. |Registered Member

    Awesome segment ria…love this desperate kunj 😍😍😍😍 post next soon…can’t wait for twinj scenes in farmhouse…

  5. |Registered Member

    Awesome segment ria…love this desperate kunj 😍😍😍😍 post next soon…can’t wait for twinj scenes in farmhouse…

    Love you 😘😘😘

  6. Tara


    |Registered Member

    awww ria.. kitna jhut bolti ho?? u r short of romantic ideas?? huh…
    this was sooo romantic yaar..
    can’t express…
    i was like 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    despo kunj was cute..
    but i liked the last part more… when kunj said.. “meeting cancelled”.. i was again like… awwww..
    i wish kunj aisa mere liye bolta.. i was this throughout 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    love u soo much..
    take care

  7. Kritika14


    |Registered Member

    Hey idiot,
    OMG! How can you say you don’t write romance well? When you write it seems like you have experienced it all tho i know you are super single 😂 Twinj’s scenes were super cute 😍 😍 Loving this kunj. Really eager for more twinj romance! Write soon x
    Lovess xx 💕

  8. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Come on Ria, u seriously say u were short of romantic ideas…It was so cute 😘😘😘 Romantic in ur dictionary means hot maybe 😜 Welk over all good effort! Keep going!

    Keep smiling!

    -Zuha 💕💕💕

  9. Sara28


    |Registered Member

    Aur kuch kehna baaki hai? Been waiting for this and finally read it! I am still amazed how u can perfectly write from a guy’s p.o.v as well a a girl’s. It was amazing and can’t wait to see what happens at the farmhouse! Love you ❤️

  10. Adya

    Whoooooo…….. wooowwww ria………so cuttttteeeee epi………he he
    ..words jyada lmbe ho gaye n…………well very nyyycccc

  11. sujina

    riu after i love u…twinj journey…
    dis is d 1st ever romance in dis segment
    really missed prev ff…when’ll u start s2…
    meeting cancelled…was d best part…
    love u…💕💕💕

  12. Romaisha


    |Registered Member

    Haiii Ria di! ❤❤❤❤
    Loved today’s segment alot! Though it wasn’t the actual romance scene which all of us are waiting for it was still blissful to read! And haww Kunj!😍😍😍

    You’re literally sending me crazy with your ff 😍😂

    Love you di! ❤

  13. Affaa


    |Registered Member

    Loooo riyuuuu… At last I finished reading it…. U may think I forgot about ur ff right…. How can I forget such beautiful ff… Ur storyline is amazing… Outstanding, mind blowing, beloved words yaar… U did it very well… I enjoyed all over ur epi… It’s was amazing… I’m proved of u yaar… Keep rocking.. Love you lots take care… Mmmhhhh

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