Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 15)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 15)

Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m glad you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.

Well, mostly all of you felt bad for Kunj in the last segment but, along with it you all also added that he deserves it. I’m glad all of us think alike. Also, it’s good to see many of the silent readers commenting recently. I hope you all will continue commenting and supporting all the authors.

Anyways, here is the link for the previous segment.

Segment 14

This segment is in Twinkle’s voice. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you all excited to know what’s coming up? Let’s continue.
I sat down on the bed reminiscing Kunj’s words. “He applied for the divorce”, I murmured as the tears rolled down my cheeks. I clenched my fist with the bedsheet inside it and shouted, “Kunj!” “I can’t live without you, I can’t”, I said resting my head between my legs. “I wanted you to realise your mistakes Kunj. I never thought you’d seriously apply for the divorce. I can’t think of a day staying away from you even after what you did. Whatever you did was just due to a misunderstanding but, I know my Kunj”, I murmured crying. I suddenly lifted my head and said, “Where is Kunj? I hope he doesn’t do anything himself.” I wiped my tears and ran downstairs.

I came to the hall and saw maa reading a magazine. “Maa, where is Kunj?”, I asked. Maa looked up from the magazine and said, “I saw him going out. But, I don’t know where he went. Why? What happened?” “Nothing”, I replied and rushed out of the house. I got inside the car and quickly drove away.

It was 10 at night and I still wasn’t able to find Kunj. “Kunj, where are you?”, I murmured driving faster when suddenly, someone came in front of the car. I hurriedly stopped the car as the person fell down on the road. “God! Another problem”, I remarked getting down from the car. I went closer to the person and seeing the person whispered, “Kunj?” I kneeled down and sat next to him. I patted his cheek and said, “Kunj? Kunj?” “Tw..Twin..Twinkle”, he uttered with great difficulty. “Yes Kunj. See your Twinkle is here, right next to you”, I replied placing my hand on his cheek. “He held on to my hand and said, “Don.. Don’t leave me.” “Never”, I replied. I stood up and forwarding my hand said, “Give me your hand.” He moved his hand in the air and said, “Please bring my Twinkle.” I understood he was drunk while the tears rolled down my cheeks. I kneeled down again and said, “Kunj, your Twinkle is here. Come, let’s go back.” I made him stand with great difficulty and giving him support walked over to the car. I opened the door and made him sit next to the driver’s seat properly. I drove back to the house as Kunj kept murmuring, “Twinkle, please don’t leave me. You’re mine. Please give me another chance to rectify my mistakes.” I looked at his face as the tears kept on rolling down my cheeks continuously. “You’re responsible for his condition”, I remarked blaming myself. We reached home at around 12 in the night.

We entered the house and found it completely empty. We both went upstairs while I supported Kunj. I entered his room and made him lay down on the bed. I was about to go away when he held my hand and pulled me back. I fell on him as he said, “Twinkle don’t leave me.” I struggled to get up as he wrapped his arms around my waist. “I can’t go to di’s room now. I’ll stay here for the night and then go back to the room early in the morning”, I whispered. “Twinkle don’t leave me”, Kunj repeated. I kissed his forehead and resting my head on his chest replied, “Never.” He tightened his grip around my waist as if he never wanted me to go away. I smiled and soon both of us fell asleep.
Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.


  1. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    Awww so Twinkle never wanted to leave Kunj. Now I’m going to repeat my same dialogue: I can’t wait anymore for the next episode. If you show such a beautiful episode then just end like that then of course I can’t wait! 😂 When Kunj wakes up and sees them like that, it will be interesting! Loved this episode ❤️

  2. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Ria!!!!!! It was sooooooooooo Awsome……….. kunj was superb n twinkle’s concern was amazing … next one soon ….. eagerly waiting for it 😍😘

  3. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Diii diii diii diiii diiiii diiiiiiiiii what an episode this one was epic wow!!!!! I just don’t have words to describe it I mean twinj were awesome in today s episode n twinkle was tooooo good I really love the way u express emotions diiiii I mean whatever emotions they r u write them soooooo well rona tho rona hasna tho hasna really hats off diiii its just amazing I’m waiting for the next part !!!!!
    Love u dii💞💝

  4. Ritzi

    |Registered Member

    AWESOMEEE!! you don’t knw ria but I always eagerly wait for yr ff….nd to be honest it manages to give me goosebumps..

  5. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Ria di😣😣😣😣😣
    One of d most emotional episodes ever…
    M literally in tears right now…
    When guilt fills hearts😢
    M so sad…wish that they reconcile soon…
    Do post soon…love uh😘

  6. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Ria I’m speechless…kehte hai na sometimes silence speaks more than words so today I prefer to be silent…take my silence as my compliments…waiting for next…try to post soon…

    Love you😍😍😘😘

  7. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    awesome amazing..fabulous….mtlb twinkle bhi kunj k saath hi rehna chahti h….emotional tha….kunj k liye bura bhi lg raha h…bt jo bhi ho ab twinkle usse ni chodegi….eagerly waiting for next part…..

  8. Anam_sidhant

    |Registered Member

    It was beyond amazing❤
    I just wanna know how can someone write so well?😍 and to be honest I always wish to see ur ff whenever I open tu💞 I just cant praise uh enough 😻 do post soon I can’t wait now😩❤

  9. SidVee

    Amazing n emotional epi.. so twinkle never wanted to leave kunj.. well I had thought she wanted it for real😑.. but u managed to surprise me.. hehe.. I can guess kunj will wakeup in the morning n see twinkle next to him.. hope I’m not wrong 😛😛.. do cont soon 💕

  10. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Hey idiot,
    OMG! I am in deep pain. This episode was so emotional yet so good! The way you depicted their feelings was fab. I mean how can someone write so good. I was reading and reading and then I was like … Aow .. It’s over ? I was so into it. Write the next one asap!

    Love you 💕
    My stupid 💓

  11. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    I’m like really mind blown by this segment Ria di 😢
    Like it was literally one of the best segments yet!
    Emotional also! I really thought twinkle was serious about the divorce but now.. Its a relief to no she’s not.
    It breaks me to see kunj like that (break me i mean imagine nah … I have a wild imagination when it comes to reading any of your epis or any other)
    Please post your next episode soon.. I can’t wait to keep reading! 💕
    Love you dii 😘

  12. Tara

    |Registered Member

    i never thought twinkle was pretending… u always end up giving me a shock.. but this was achha wala shock.. 😂😂
    coming to the ff.. u know i loved it sooo much…
    but i wished it would have been a bit long…
    hope everything settles between the two…
    love u..

  13. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Hey! Ria…..u always make me awe stuck with u writing skills yrr…..
    Twinkle’s care towards Kunj is really worth to be praised….
    Felt bad for kunj but I know very soon Twinj will be one…..

    Loved the episode to the core….. do keep posting ur ff earlier like u r doing now a days…..

    Love U😍😍😍😍😍

  14. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Sorry for being late. But like always I will say u are rocking‼ I was really happy knowing that Twinkle also want to be with Kunj! Great! Loved it as always. Keep going. Stay blessed. Take care. Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂 loads of love.

  15. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Amazing epi ria……twinkle’s care towards Kunj was just sooooo cute…..loved it……post d nxt one asap

    Love u 💕💕😘

  16. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    I loved it di….Cohot kuch kehna hai but vakt se paband hoon I will surely write long comment on your next post coz tom is my last exam…

  17. Meeta

    I’m sorry for not commenting.
    N of course I do read such a Attractive FF
    That was bliss
    You must write more often
    Post soon.
    Sorry again.
    Love you♥

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