Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 12)


Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 12)

Hey all! Ria here. Thank you so much for all your comments and support. I’m glad that you all are liking the storyline.

I’m so sorry for being so late. I really wasn’t understanding whether you all would like the revelation or not. I don’t think it’s up to the mark but, just let me know what do you all feel about it.

Anyways, here is the link for the previous segment:

Segment 11

This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice would be reintroduced soon. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you all excited to read the twelfth segment? Let’s go ahead.
We were about to enter the hotel when bhai received a call. “Kabir”, he said. “Put the call on speaker”, I replied as bhai attended the call. “H.. Hello”, said bhai as we heard Kabir laughing. “What do you want?”, I shouted losing my temper. “Oh! Mr. Sarna seems to be very angry”, he said. “Just come to the point”, I replied trying to control my temper. “Nothing much. I just need a night with your wife”, he said. I grabbed the phone from bhai’s hand and said, “You dare not touch Twinkle or else, I swear I’ll kill you.” “Mr. Sarna, just calm down. You know your wife is with me”, he said. “That doesn’t mean you’ll blackmail me. I very well know you’re in this hotel itself”, I shouted. “Well. I must say you’re intelligent but, you can’t find me. Do you think I’m a fool? Try finding me if you can. You won’t be able to do anything today also just as you or Yuvraj couldn’t do anything when I raped your sister”, he said. I looked at bhai and di who seemed to be equally shocked. “Your luck won’t favour you every time”, I said and disconnecting the call we all rushed inside.

We rushed towards the reception. “Kabir Kapoor?”, I asked. “Sir, please fill in the details in the visitor’s book”, said the receptionist. I picked up the pen and scribbled in the details. “Kabir Kapoor?”, I asked. The receptionist looked into the computer and after a minute said, “Sir, we don’t have any booking by this name.” I punched my hand on the table and said, “Where can he take her?” I started thinking when my eyes fell upon the visitor in the visitor’s book. It said KK. I quickly ran my fingers along the row and said, “Bhai, room number 4056.” “What?”, shouted bhai following me as I ran towards the elevator. After two minutes, I said, “Bhai, you come by the elevators. I’m going by the stairs.” I rushed upstairs to the fourth floor hoping that nothing would happen to Twinkle. I rushed around the corridor and finally found the room 4056. I knocked the door and said, “Kabir, open the door.” I stood there for a couple of minutes but, didn’t get response. I was about to go away when I heard a voice saying, “Call Kunj.” It was Twinkle’s voice. I broke the door and barged inside.

I clenched my firsts in anger as I saw Kabir trying to force himself upon Twinkle after ripping her salwaar sleeves. He pushed Twinkle on the bed and threw his coat away. He moved towards Twinkle and as he was about to touch her I held his hand and pushed him towards the wall. “I told you not to even try”, I shouted and punched him on his face. I held his collar and pulled him up. I was about to kill him when di and bhai shouted from behind, “Kunj, stop!” “The police will handle him”, di said. I left him and said, “Arrest him.” The police arrested Kabir and as they were about to go di asked them to stop. Me and bhai were quite surprised by her action. “Di, what’s wrong?”, I asked.

Di walked up to him and slapped him hard. He held his cheek and looked at di in shock. “You can take him away”, she said. The police was dragging him as he said, “Mahi, I love you!” Di looked at him and letting out a faint laugh said, “I was your obsession not love. Moreover, you’ve spent nights with so many girls. You love so many girls? I’m surprised.” He lowered down his vision as the police dragged him out of the room. We heaved a sigh of relief as someone tugged my shirt sleeve. I turned around and saw Twinkle standing behind me. “Kunj, you didn’t kiss me”, said Twinkle. I widened my eyes and heard di and bhai giggling among themselves. I looked at them while Twinkle again tugged my shirt and said, “Kunj! Kiss me.” “Twinkle, let’s go home”, I said and held her hand. “No, first kiss me”, she replied trying to jerk away my hand. Di and bhai burst out laughing as I turned to look at them.

“Okay, we’re leaving”, said bhai and dragged di out of the room closing the door behind them. “Kunj”, said Twinkle trying to shout. “Twinkle, you’re not in your senses. Let’s go back home”, I said. “No, no, no”, replied Twinkle throwing her hands in the air and stamping her foot. “Twinkle, just come with me”, I said and was about to hold her wrist when she held my collar and pulled me towards herself. “Twinkle!”, I exclaimed. “Don’t you love me?”, she asked. “Twinkle, don’t behave like a kid”, I said. “You love me or not?”, she asked frowning. I smiled looking at her face and pulled her cheeks. “You look so cute”, I said. “Why don’t you answer my question?”, she asked. “Do you really need an answer?”, I asked. She smiled and nodded her head in a yes. I moved closer to her and pulled her closer by her waist.

She wrapped her arms around my neck as I lifted her up and kissed her. I felt a spark inside me as I kissed her. It was our first kiss and it was the best thing that had ever happened in my life. We pulled back after a pretty long time when we were out of breath. I looked at Twinkle who had turned completely pink blushing. I smiled looking at her and said, “Can we go home now?” Twinkle nodded her head and walked towards me while stumbling. I picked her up in my arms and walked towards the car.

I made her sit inside the car and drove back. We reached home around 8 and I saw Twinkle sleeping peacefully. I smiled looking at her and touching my lips smiled. I got down from the car and while picking her up in my arms whispered, “I love you!” I walked inside the house and later, to OUR room. I placed her on the bed and kissing her forehead pulled the blanket over her. I was about to go out when I realised Twinkle had held on to my hand tightly as if she never wanted to let me go. I smiled and slept next to her sitting on the floor resting my head on her stomach.

Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.

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  1. Ria

    Hey all!
    Just forgot to mention something important. Bhumika won’t be able to post her articles for the time being because she’s in ICU right now and her condition seems to be critical. Please pray that she recovers soon.

  2. Kritika14

    It was just the best! I will kill this kabir. He is just so bad. When twinkle was still lost and spoke kiss me kunj, that was effin cute ? But i am so curious to know how twinkle will react to this when she wakes up. Anyway, you post soon, and also because you have leaves going on rn .. try writing more often alright? ? Love you my idiot ? // I hope Bhumika recovers soon.

  3. Baby

    ria luvd it d episode was super cool n luvd d reveliaton n
    yr i just pray fr bhumika hope she bcms gud n fit n f9 soon
    post nxt asap

  4. soooo nice…..romantic. ….fab..I will pray for bumika

  5. Shatakshi

    Baby doll
    U rocked it
    Seriously tu kitna tension le rahi thi revelation ko le kar…
    It was Awesome
    N that kiss wala part was super cute
    Love u loads❤❤❤

  6. Ria di…
    Ahh! What a revelation! Finally…torture ka the end!!!
    Aur Twinkle was soooo cute!!!!
    I was like….aww!
    And bechara Kunj…raat bhar baithe baithe sona pada…?
    Koi na…main shoulder massage kar dungi?
    Aur finally everything is back in place…YuHi…and TwiNj…
    Now waiting to see Twinkle’s reaction!!!
    Hope Bhumika di is okay….God is there…she will be okay…
    Bye bye tym…love u?

  7. Awesome amazing fabulous episode Ria ……. Loved it…..:*:*:*:*:*

  8. Awesome amazing fabulous dear …..

  9. Zuha Fatima

    Ria…This was amazing‼‼ I am left spellbound after reading this segment! The imagery u used! Hats off to u! Good going!
    Loads of ❤❤❤❤❤
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂


  10. Jiya_Ani

    Hey Ria and what happened to Ikku??..I am so stressed.. What happened all of a sudden??.. Di plz tell or I’ll die in anxiety… Well ff was good..but please tell me what happened to her..plz plz !..may she gets well did you know about this??..

  11. Hey Ria dear finally got to read your ff…when I saw your ff I was jumping out of happiness…loved the revelation to the core…twinj scenes were shooooooo cute…waiting to see twinkle’s reaction…ria dear don’t let twinkle forgive kunj so easily bcoz he has tortured her alot toh mana toh banta hai na…sorry if I have hurt you by saying my suggestion I’m really expecting this in your ff…try to post next as soon as possible dear…can’t wait more…

    Love you??

  12. Shreya098

    Finally it is revealed…
    Loooved it…
    That kiss part?????….

  13. Thanmy

    Wow diiiii
    Kya likha hai apne like seriously awesome diii
    Especially that kiss wala part twinkle behaves sooooo cute in all the ff’s n in ur ff super cute
    And it was sooooooo good I just amazing n I’m running out of words
    Finally diiii only one word kya word ???? Mere dimaag mei kuch nahi aa raha
    Its stupendous diii
    Love u

  14. Tara

    idk what to say..
    the epi was shooo cute.. imean twinkle wanting to kiss was like… “olebabale” haha hope u got me 😛
    i would have hugged u if u were here…
    really awesome episode..
    nd u knw the best part.. i opened tu for ur ff.. and i got it i was almost jumping..
    post the next one soon..
    love ya..

  15. SidMin

    Loved it Ria and Twinj’s kiss was awesome Just Loved it Hope could give a longer comment but I am sorry very busy today 🙂 Post soon 🙂

  16. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous epi…..

  17. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….ria episode was awesome….loved it…

  18. dreamer..arundhati

    Bhumika get well soon
    Riu darlo…lovely epi

  19. Sara28

    Awwwwww Ria this is toooo cute? I was so tensed and intrigued in the beginning part. The adrenaline was rushing inside me. I thought Twinkle would start crying and Kung would console her but after she said “kiss me” I was dying of laughter. ????Omg it was amazing. I can’t wait to see what she does after she wakes up in the morning. Love you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  20. Fan

    Hey ria!!…the episode was too good..i loved it..iam eagerly waiting to read twinkles reaction..btw sorry for not commenting on ur prev epi and on the os written by u n shatz..i went to my hometown n thr i didn’t have wifi..i loved the os..plz write more awesome os

  21. Sayeeda

    Amazing episode yrrr ….awesome…. loved it to the core …..
    Kiss part was really very very cute nd revelation part was the Best one….

    love you??

  22. Kruti

    Ria…….amazing revelation
    Nd that kiss was damn cute
    Awesome epi……loved it

    Love u??

    Hope bhumika gets well soon

  23. Superb epi… I loved that kissing part.. Nd hopd bhumika will be fine soon…

  24. Romaisha

    Yaaaarrrr Riaaaaa diii!!!!!! Omg!! Diii you r soo awesome
    This revelation was the best yet!!!!!
    ??? god damn it dii
    Tooooo good!! First kiss was also hot!!! ❤❤❤???
    Di please post next episode soon nahh i can’t wait!!!
    Srsly hate kabir And mahi was good to slap him!! ??
    Love u yaar ❤❤ ?

  25. Twinjfan.tamanna

    it was amazing ria.. I loved it to the core…get well soon bhavika…

    love u ria…

  26. […] part 12 Today’s segment is in Twinkle’s voice. I would come back soon with Kunj’s voice soon as I guess most of you liked the fan fiction in his voice. I’ll try to keep lesser segments in Twinkle’s voice. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing. […]

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