Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 11) (~By Ria)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 11)

Hi all! Ria here. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m glad you all are liking the story.

I hope I’m pretty early this time! Today’s episode might be a bit lengthy so, please bare me for a little longer.

Here is the link for the previous segment:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-10-ria/

This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice will be reintroduced soon. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Ready for the lengthy segment? Let’s start then.
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The party was hosted in an open place. There was a bar set-up at one corner and the food arrangements were done in the other corner. The place was overcrowded and I found it next to impossible to find Twinkle, bhai and di. “Kunj”, called out someone. I turned around and shouted, “Aisha!” We hugged each other when I asked, “How come you’re here?” “I also don’t know”, she replied sarcastically. I rolled my eyes when she patted my shoulder and said, “I’m Kabir’s personal assistant.” “Oh.. Wait. Kabir Kapoor? Lucky girl”, I said. “Unluckiest man. He’s a disgusting person”, Aisha replied. “Why?”, I asked. “Hey Aisha”, someone said coming from behind. Aisha faked a smile and said, “Hello sir!” He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulling her closer said, “Kabir.” “Yeah Kabir”, replied Aisha jerking his hand and moving away. “And he is”, Kabir asked. “Kunj Sarna”, I replied forwarding my hand. “I’m sorry. But, I couldn’t recognise you”, said Kabir. “Hey Kabir”, said bhai coming from behind. “Oh hi”, he replied. “He’s my sister’s husband”, said bhai. “Oh I see. Well, you all continue. I’ll be back soon”, said Kabir and walked away to the other guests. “Bhai, where were you? I was looking for all of you”, I said. “Arey. Even we were looking for you”, bhai said. “Whatever. Come let’s go. Oh wait. Aisha, this is”, I said but, Aisha interrupted saying, “Twinkle’s brother. Nice to meet you.” She forwarded her hand while bhai shook her hand. “Okay, now come”, I said. We walked over to where di and Twinkle were standing.

Twinkle seemed to be least interested in the party and was looking here and there. She looked at me while looking here and there. I smiled at her while she made a disgusted face and looked away. “Aisha, this is di, my favourite and this is Twinkle”, I said. Aisha smiled at them while I said, “We met after so many years right?” “Yes. After all you’re so busy”, she said. “Not at all. You only don’t have the time for me”, I said. I looked at Twinkle from the corner of my eye who was looking at us with her widened eyes. “I mean for your friends”, I corrected myself and saw Twinkle heaving a sigh of relief. I smiled. “Let’s rock the dance floor. We would request all the couples to come up on the dance floor”, the announcement said. “Mahi, let’s go”, said bhai. I smiled as both of them walked over to the dance floor. “Aisha, shall we have a dance”, I said trying to make Twinkle feel jealous. “I’m fine. You carry on with Twinkle”, Aisha replied. “Arey come na. Anyways, Twinkle isn’t interested in dancing”, I said pulling Aisha on to the dance floor. We both were dancing as I was observing Twinkle. She looked angry and after sometime went to the bar. I wondered what she was going to do when I saw her drinking Coke. I was relieved. I continued dancing with Aisha when a guy started misbehaving with Twinkle. “Aisha, hold on. I’ll be back”, I said and ran towards the bar. I pushed the guy and shouted, “What were you doing?” “Sorry”, he said and went away. I turned around to face Twinkle who was standing behind me. She held my collar and pulled me closer to herself. “Twinkle!”, I exclaimed as she moved closer to me. “You won’t leave me now right?”, she said. “Twinkle”, I said pushing her slightly. I turned to the bartender and asked, “What did you give her?” “Coke”, he replied. I held his collar and said, “Tell me what did you give her.” “Coke sir”, he replied. I was about to punch the bartender when I felt someone pulling my shirt lightly. I turned to look at the person and saw Twinkle pulling my shirt. “What is it Twinkle?”, I asked. “I ordered Coke”, she said holding the glass in front of her face. I took the glass from her hand and smelt it. “Twinkle”, I said and threw the glass. I looked at Twinkle who stood there with a crying face. “Why did you throw it? It was tasty”, she said. “Twinkle, you come with me”, I said holding her hand. “No, I want the drink”, said Twinkle stamping her foot and throwing her hands in the air like a kid. “Twinkle, please don’t behave like a child. Come with me”, I said pulling her. She jerked away my hand and said, “I want the drink.” I bent down and picked her up in my arms. “Ahh..ahhh.. Wh..What are you doing?”, she asked. I walked towards the empty side of the lawn. “I want that drink”, she repeated again and again.

I stood at an empty place and made her stand. She was about to go when I held her hand and said, “Twinkle, stand here.” “No, I want that drink”, she replied trying to move away. I tightened my grip on her hand and said, “Twinkle stand here and talk to me.” She walked towards me and holding my collars pulled me closer. “Twinkle, what are you doing?”, I asked trying to move away. She sensually moved her finger on my face and then neck. “Twinkle!”, I exclaimed trying to move her away. She said while playing with my buttons, “You won’t leave me right?” I smiled and said, “Never. Now, move Twinkle. Let’s go back to the party.” “No. You won’t go there. You’ll again go to that girl then..what’s her name? Aa..a. what?”, she said. “Aisha”, I replied. “Ya whatever. You won’t go anywhere. Stay here”, she said wrapping her arms around my neck. I moved my hands to her waist and holding her tightly said, “Okay. I won’t go anywhere.” She smiled and kissed my cheek. I pointed towards my lips. She turned crimson as I moved closer to her. I was about to kiss her when she lost her balance and moved away. I removed my hands from her waist and later, hers from my neck. “Twinkle, you wait here. I’ll get you some lime juice”, I said. “No, you won’t go anywhere”, she replied holding my hand. “I’ll come back in two minutes”, I said and ran away.

I came back after a minute or two and found the place completely empty. I searched everywhere but, couldn’t find her. “Twinkle, Twinkle”, I shouted but, didn’t get any response. I suddenly remembered Aisha’s words. “Kabir. I hope he didn’t do anything”, I said becoming tensed. I went back to the party and searched for her but, couldn’t find her. I called di and bhai aside and told them everything. “Kunj, do something and find out Twinkle”, said di. “Where di?”, I asked. “Kunj, let’s check in the hotel first then we’ll do something else”, bhai said as we ran inside the hotel.
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Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.

27 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Shit!
    Hope nothing happens to Twinkle!
    God! This was stupendous!
    Marvellous!
    One of the best segments so far!
    I loved it so much!
    Tym to sleepy sleepy…g’night…love u😘

  2. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Omg ria darling …😨😨😨 meri aankhen toh phatti ki phatti reh gayi hain ……itna amazing …n aaawwww twinkle was so cute while drunken………..😍😍😍
    N suspense huh!? 😆
    Naughty …now post next one soon

  3. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it the episode was too good and drunken Twinkle was so cute and Jealous Twinkle too and My Kunj Just Love him
    Twinkle still loves Kunj just hope that Kabir does not do anything wrong with Twinkle and even if he tries to our Hero will save her for sure (smart hu na mai sochte hu jotish ban jau (Just joking)) Love the episode and pls post the next part soon 🙂
    Love you 🙂

  4. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ria oh god amaizng episode
    jelous twinkle i luvd it 2 d core
    amazing epside yr n now i m nt sure bt i thnk
    d victim is noneodr dan kabir mahi wala bhi n twinkle ll b saved by kunj i thnk 😀
    sry fr dese foolish guesses
    luvd it it was amazing n of course twinj romance haha angry young lady………..
    post nxt asap dear

  5. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey Riya fabulous episode…loved it to the core…I think kabir is the real culprit…I just hope he doesn’t do anything with twinkle…super excited for next episode…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to post next soon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  6. SidVee

    Superb epi.. loved it.. loved this jealous and drunken twinkle.. hope kabir doesn’t do anything wrong with twinkle.. do cont soon 💕

  7. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    Yes! Finally my wait is over. The episode was awesome. And u write so well in Kunj’s voice. Whether it be a guy’s voice or girls’s voice, u nail it all! ❤️

  8. Tara

    |Registered Member

    ufffffffffff what to say ria
    u knw i have my practical exam today bt still cudnt stop myself from reading ur segments..
    i read all today lol 😛
    i loved everything abt ur story.. they way u write.. the title.. the picture is so awesome and matches the title…..
    loved ur plot
    loved ur descriptions
    coming to today’s segment..
    loved twinj indirect talks.. jealous twinkle was just fab..
    idk y i feel this kabir is the guys who is the real culprit of mahi…
    hope twinkle will be safe
    nd they confess their feelings soon..
    loved it..
    nd love u more..
    update soon

  9. RiaA MendeZz

    Lovely episode. Tht kabir…ughhhhhhhh such a disgusting pervert.. Love the twinj scenes tho hehehe….
    Update soon

  10. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Omg ria……what an epi it was
    The jealous nd drunken twinkle was soooooo cute
    Nd that twinj ka romance ……amazing
    Hope twinkle is fine

    Post d nxt one asap

    Love u😘😘😘

  11. Monica

    |Registered Member

    I so loved it! It was lit. Twinkle was just so cute when she was drunk and the way kunj took care of her 😍 Hope she will be okay. Anyway, you continue soon x and love you 💕

  12. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Heyy Di!!
    I know I’m late, Sorry ..
    Yeh episode 😍😍😍😍😍
    Like damn! Ohh God yaar! Too awesome like Twinj scenes were amazing and yah too hot 😘
    Do post your next segment soon!
    Cant wait 😁
    Love you !! ❤❤❤

  13. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Awww the episode was super cute baby doll
    N this chepo kabir….I think I know the rest story…..
    But chill I won’t revel it
    N it was Awesome as always
    Lobe u loads💞💞

  14. shikha

    amazing parts
    I just read so many parts in one go and I must say I never get bored reading any of it rather I was getting more n more curious after every part
    and this part is also equally cute I totally loved Twinkle’s jealousy part and their kissing part was really so good
    sorry for commenting late but what to do I just read all the parts
    plates continue soon

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