Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 10) (~By Ria)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 10)

Hey all! Ria here. Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m glad you all are liking the story.

Ouch! Looks like I really made you all a bit unhappy with the sudden ending last time. Laddoo said she wanted to kill me.πŸ˜ͺ Anyways, sorry the sudden ending but, you all will surely get to know about the culprit soon.

Also, I don’t really remember but, someone previously asked me how come Usha doesn’t know about Mahi’s case. Actually, Mahi never talked to anyone at home and Kunj got to know about it only after they visited a psychologist. He didn’t want to tell it to any of the family members as when this case happened then, Usha used to say elsewhere. Also, it looks like you all are quite surprised with Kunj’s behaviour. I told you all at previously that the way the characters feel are going to change soon but, let’s see whether the change in behaviour is for good or bad.

Here is the link for the previous segment:

Segment 9

Finally, the wait is over! Today’s segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice will be reintroduced soon. Hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

I hope I’m pretty early this time. Well, let’s start with the 10th segment.
The next morning, I came down to the hall wearing denims and a blue shirt with it. I relaxed myself on the sofa and waited for Twinkle and di. I was looking here and there when suddenly I saw Twinkle coming down the stairs. She looked drop-dead gorgeous in her pink anarkali with open hair. I couldn’t stop staring at her. Her dupatta was pinned on one side and as she was coming down it got stuck to the railing of the stairs. She tried to pull it without the dupatta being torn apart but, she was unable to do so. I walked up till her and placed my hands on hers. We looked at each other but, soon she moved her hand away and started looking here and there. I removed her dupatta carefully and held it in front of her. “Excuse me”, she said. I looked at her and arched my eyebrows asking what. She signalled at the dupatta through her eyes with a disgusted face. I looked down and quickly left her dupatta. She walked past me and then turned around and said, “Mr. Sa.. Kunj, are you ready?” I smiled and nodded my head in a yes. “Even I’m ready”, a voice came from behind. I turned and looked at di and understood why Twinkle called me by my name. The smile from my face soon faded away and in a disheartened tone I said, “Let’s leave.” I took the keys and we went out of the house.

I sat in the driver’s seat while Twinkle and di went behind. “Someone should sit in front or else, we aren’t leaving”, I remarked. “Di, you go. I’ll sit behind”, Twinkle said disappointing me. “No Twinkle. You go”, said Twinkle. “Di, please?”, she asked. “I wanted to talk to Yuvraj but, it’s okay”, di said throwing her tantrums. “Talk or romance”, asked Twinkle teasing di. I smiled as di turned crimson. “Okay fine”, Twinkle replied as a broad, satisfied smile crept over my face. I started driving but, soon applied the brakes and stopped the car at the side of the road. “What happened?”, asked di. I moved towards Twinkle while di said, “Kunj, I’m here too.” I gave her a disgusted look and moved towards Twinkle. I looked at her and found her looking at me with widened eyes. I moved closer as she closed her eyes. She lightly pushed me away while I pulled the seat belt and pressed it inside the holder. “You can open your eyes”, I whispered and moved away. “Oh I thought”, di said but Twinkle interrupted and said, “Let bhai come.” I laughed while di angrily looked at both of us. We reached Taneja mansion and picking up bhai we went to the party venue.

We reached the party venue and got down from the car. Twinkle started walking with bhai and di. I pulled her behind holding her elbow. “Mr. Sarna!”, she exclaimed. She jerked my hand away and said, “Stop acting like a husband.” I smiled and said, “Okay fine. A boyfriend then?” “You very well know you mean nothing to me”, she said. I started walking towards her as she moved back. She was walking behind unless she was blocked by a car. The parking plot seemed to be completely empty. She pushed me trying to move me away but I held her hand and moved closer to her face. “Mr. Sarna”, she said. I kissed her and said, “Kunj.” She remained shocked and after sometime said, “How dare you kiss me?” I moved closer to her and kissed her other cheek. “Kunj”, I said. “Mr. Sarna”, she said. I kissed her forehead and said, “Kunj.” “Mr”, she said but, I interrupted saying, “Next time I hope you know where I would kiss you.” She opened her eyes and said, “Kunj, move away.” I moved towards her face and said, “Politely.” “Never”, she replied. I moved closer to her as I could sense her nervousness. “Kunj, please”, she said. I moved away and asked, “Why are we here? It’s bhai’s friend’s party right?” “To find out the culprit”, she said and pushing me away walked inside. Her words were pondering in my mind unless my phone rang. I picked up the call. “Kunj, come inside”, said di. I was disappointed to find out that di called from Twinkle’s phone. “Ya”, I replied disconnecting the call and walked inside.

Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.


  1. Pagl

    Yaaarrrrrrrr!!!!!!!! Fantabalus. ………..i am your fan 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍

  2. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Waiting for next one.
    Jaldi se post karde

  3. Supriya

    Awsm hmesa ki trh……oh Ria i luved ur writing skills….. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
    plz read my FF on Fb Fan Fictiom of TwiNj is its name

  4. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    Ria that was wonderful…
    I was waiting for his POV

    that “Mr sarna-kunj-kiss” thing….. Haaaye😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    Looooved the epi

  5. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Ria the chapter was cute in Kunj’s voice Loved it
    Kunj has actually started falling for Twinkle Loved the part where he kissed Twinkle so that she says his name and Not Mr.Sarna Loved the seatbelt part too
    Waiting for the next episode Post soon πŸ™‚

  6. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Oh! I so loved it. You know how much excited i was to read in kunj’s pov. So glad you wrote early. Legit loved the part where kunj kissed twinkle and the situation you formed. enjoyed it throughly. Anyway, continue soon x Love you πŸ’•

  7. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    YES finally the wait is over! Omg Kunj’s P.O.V was awesome! I really loved it. And the last scene….omg ur gonna kill me 😍😍😍😍

  8. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Shats di ne sahi naam rakha hai
    Baby doll tu sone diπŸ˜‚
    But still I am gonna kill you
    Again today
    Phir se waise hi ekk jagah par chhod diya
    Par ye Kunj achanak se badal kyun gaya
    Bada to uss ka haath jala rha tha
    Pata nahi bhai
    Par jisne bhi Mahi ke sath ye behuda harkat ki
    Usska toh the end mere haathon pakka hai
    Anyways, post soon
    Or else
    You know, right?😈
    Till then…Love you❀

  9. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode…Kunj’s pov loved it to the core…ria plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next episode asap soon as possible…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

  10. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Maar dala baby doll kunj ke voice ne
    It was damn Awesome
    Loved it shooo much
    Aacha plzzz jaldi jaldi post kar
    I can’t wait not
    Love u sweetheartπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ˜β€β€πŸ’ž

  11. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ria as always boom boom
    woww yr amazing bt now sdnly kunjs change behaviour strange
    heheheee of corse yr any1 wuld angry if behaved lyk dis
    phele nhi socha twinkle ke sath itna bura krne se phele sochna chaiya tha kunj dear ab pta nhi
    ria meri sis tumahri luv stry kaise thik kregi hehe
    post nxt asap
    osm tha last wla scene toh amazing kunj bolo nhi toh hehhee
    luvd it u r fab

  12. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Pehli baar kunj ki voice….. and it was damn freeking good
    Amazing epi ria…..jaldi se culprit ko pakado

    Aur usse bhi jaldi nxt part post karo

    Love u😘😘😘

  13. SidVee

    Awesomeee epi.. I loved kunj’s voice.. it was so cute😍😍I loved that Mr sarna-kiss-kunj part.. I think he has started to fall for twinkle.. eagerly waiting for the next πŸ’•

  14. RiaA MendeZz

    Ria?😐 why do u keep doing tht?😠 you cut the chapter just when I’m enjoying it 😣😩 have some mercy on ur readers and speed up the process before the suspension kill me for one😭😭😭 ughhh….
    Loved the episode to the core… kunj was so cute 😍😍 you amaze me every single time ria..every single time ❀

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