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WHEN IT’S ABOUT THEM EVERYTHING MATTERS -ISHQBAAZ -SHIVIKA ONE SHOT

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Hello this is VHM signing in with a one shot OS on IB….please ignore the spelling and grammatical mistakes……..While I was resting this idea sot in my brain so came up with this thought……hope you all will like it …….

The OS starts with the current track of IB where Shivaay announces his engagement with Ragini

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Shivaay moves towards Anika and asks ‘’I am Getting engaged to Ragini…so does it matter to you?’’

Anika had layer of tears and she replied ‘’I am getting late …I have to meet my fiancé ’’

She went out without looking back while Shivaay stared at her sadly …….

Pinky ‘’OMM Shivaay…you have given me the best news of my life’’ she smiled evilly looking at Jhanvi, Rudra and Dadi

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay…I need to talk to you …come with me’’

Pinky ‘’jhetani ji…before that I need to talk to my son…and I know what will you tell him…so now don’t try to manipulate him’’ she looked at her and Rudra and said rather confidently

Shivaay ‘’mom…I have to got to go on an important work….we can talk later ‘’ he left from there as if he was in a hurry…….

Everyone looked on while Rudra rushed towards the gate of OM……..He dialled Anika’s number only to know it being switched off……..

Anika went to Chanda’s home ……….

Chanda ‘’Anika …what happened why are you so sad and teary eyed’’

Anika ‘’chanda can I use your room for sometime …I want to be alone’’

Chanda ‘’sure use it…why are you asking for permission , but before that tell me what happened’’

Anika explained everything and Chanda was shocked…she apologised for putting her in trouble……Anika just left from there and closed the door of Chanda’s room

She sat down crying thinking about bitter sweet moments amid her and Shivaay……..and finally she got stuck at Shivaay announcing his engagement with Ragini…..
Time passed by and there was no trace of Anika in OM ………OmRu , Jhanvi and Dadi were much worried….they were just waiting for Anika to come back…but neither was she
picking up the calls nor was she found anywhere……..

Here even Shivaay was feeling guilty of playing with Anika’s emotions…….he knew somewhere that whatever she had done earlier after her return to OM was to make him jealous…but he just wanted to show her that he too moved on when the truth was he was still where she left him……

Unable to keep calm Om and Rudra went to Shivaay

Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya do you have any fairest idea where Anika Bhabhi could be?’’

Shivaay ‘’I donno she said she will be late and she is going to meet her fiancé’’

Rudra ‘’But it’s very much late now…..ad she is not back home…’’

Shivaay ‘’She is not a kid Rudra…….she will come on her own….don’t worry’’

Om ‘’I can’t believe you are saying this Shivaay….did you see the time…which restaurant or park will be open till now…anyways what can I expect from you rather than this answer…….come rudra…I think it’s hightime we find our Bhabhi ourselves’’

Shivaay was stunned and realised it was midnight and Anika was not home….he couldn’t show his care for Anika before OmRu but now he was equally feeling concerned……..he immediately dialled up Khanna and asked her to trace Anika’s location.

Khanna ‘’I already informed Omkara sir and he is going there’’

Shivaay ‘’have you lost it Khanna…tell me what’s the location…….’’

Khanna ‘’Anika madam’s friends house…I mean Chanda ji’s house’’

Shivaay ‘’fine’’

He too drove off to Chanda’s house……..While OmRu came back sadly from Chanda’s house towards their car……

Shivaay ‘’what happened ? why are you sad? Where is Anika?’’

Om ‘’how does it matter to you? Where is she ? how is she?’’

Shivaay ‘’this is not what I asked Om…where is Anika?’’

Rudra ‘’she left bhayya and now none knows where she is going’’

Shivaay ‘’left ? what do you mean left and you don’t know where she is’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya …you don’t understand or you don’t want to understand …Anika Bhabhi this time for real left us………and you should be happy …this time you broke her heart in such a way that she will never step back in your life……I forgot to congratulate you bhayya…CONGRATULATIONS on your engagement with Ragini…….congrats’’ he spoke with anguish

Shivaay ‘’what are you saying?’’

Om ‘’let’s leave Rudra…..he is not the Shivay we have known…the Shivaay we knew has left us 3 months back..now the person who is standing before us is someone we don’t recognise…..he has no feelings…he can’t understand anything…he doesn’t care for anyone..so let’s go…we will have to find Anika Bhabhi and apologise her for giving her more pain……..’’

Shivaay ‘’wait…wait …giving her more pain? What do you mean?’’

Om ‘’Shivaay it was we who bought Bhabhi back to OM …we couldn’t see you in such a condition where you stopped living…you gave up your every emotion that makes you
Shivaay Singh Oberoi…so we requested Anika Bhabhi to step into your life and bring out the old Shivaay..she promised us that she will bring you back to who you are…… and till now whatever she did was what we have asked for………but today you broke her by announcing your engagement with Ragini………and she left us being broken……now be happy Shivaay…3 months back you felt she betrayed you , so you took revenge from her like this……you won Shivaay…you won……congratulations……’’

Shivaay ‘’one minute …why are you blaming me for the reason of Anika leaving…she did it on her own wish…this time I didn’t throw her away…infact I never cared for her…….it doesn’t matter to me…..so stop blaming me for what I have not done’’

Om ‘’really Shivaay….it really doesn’t matter to you ?’’

Shivaay ‘’off course yes…it doesn’t matter to me……and by the way she will not go anywhere …she is behind money….. so once she is out of money she will come back…’’

Om ‘’I can’t believe you are saying this……if it doesn’t matter then why are you here ? I am sure you would have asked Khanna to trace Anika bhabhi’s mobile location and reached here…….tell me why are you here……..it doesn’t matter to you na……then why were you shocked to know Anika Bhabhi left somewhere….’’

Shivaay ‘’fine…still if you feel it does matter to me …then I will leave as I really don’t care…..but one thing when she can move on in life and get engaged then I don’t think I am wrong in moving on in my life and get engaged…….and you both being annoyed with me doesn’t make sense………Shivaay Singh Oberoi can never be wrong in judging people….Anika is a gold digger and she proved time and again the same’’

Omkara ‘’What Anika Bhabhi is engaged and how do you know this?’’

Shivaay said everything that happened in dargah………and OmRu were shocked listening to it…….

Shivaay ‘’now tell me am I wrong? Should she matter to me? Should her presence affect me? ‘’

Rudra ‘’this is not possible….there is some misunderstanding…….Anika Bhabhi can never do this’’

Shivaay ‘’even I thought the same until the day I heard the truth from her mouth …so let’s go …she comes or not shouldn’t matter to us’’

While all three brothers were about to go Chanda came there clapping her hands…..all three looked at her in surprise

Chanda ‘’All these days I thought Anika was foolish to let herself go away for you Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…but after listening to you I am sorry to say you are foolish to leave her’’ she said handing over OM papers and Anika’s mobile to Shivaay

Shivaay ‘’what nonsense…how dare you call me foolish’’

Chanda ‘’yes …I must call you stupid also……..because I know what Anika went through all these months and most importantly how much she missed you Mr.SSO and cried for you….how can you even think she can move on in her life and get engaged to someone else……you could never understand her……so it’s good …it should not matter you anymore…you were leaving na…please leave and for God sake never come back in her life …because you don’t deserve person like Anika….you don’t deserve her at all’’

Shivaay was now looking at her sharply

Om ‘’what do you mean Chanda? Is Anika not engaged?’’

Chanda ‘’no…she is still the same as she was 3 months ago when she was kicked by her so called husband the great SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI…….the fact is she is madly in love with her EX-HUSBAND Mr.SSO who couldn’t understand her…who could identify her and who couldn’t believe her and mercilessly kicked her out …and above all he couldn’t withstand her presence that he wanted to buy this chawl only for making her life hell….it was good that this chawl is not being bought by Mr.Shivaay else Anika would have ran away from the city long back……..’’

This time Shivaay was shell-shocked

Shivaay ‘’but she said me in dargah that she is getting engaged and I heard someone calling her to come fast to leave for engagement’’

Chanda ‘’This is your problem Mr.Oberoi….you believe what you see…you believe what you hear…you never try to know or believe what is truth……..for your information that day was my engagement and I requested Anika to take my place for sometime as I had to meet my boyfriend……Anika agreed and saved me from all the mess…it was once again her bad luck that you came before her at the same place, same time and you assumed as per your thinking and taunted her…….had you stayed for some more time there then you would have known the truth……she decided to leave Mumbai because she could bear your anger, your ego, your every emotion except your hatred and you exactly showed hatred to her and broke her ……and today you again misunderstood her and announced your engagement with someone else and it was unbearable for her……it’s true she is unlucky …she is unlucky that she fell for a person like you…who is so heartless and who never misses an opportunity to hurt her…..congratulations Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi for breaking my friend once again and leaving her side for umpteenth time……I request you please leave her this time because I know she has no more guts left to bear anything more……..’’

Shivaay was shocked and looked at OmRu who were angry on Shivaay for his doings….

Om ‘’I don’t believe Shivaay you wanted to buy this chawl to trouble Bhabhi….your hatred overpowered your love to such an extent that you have left no chance to trouble her…I am feeling ashamed that I didn’t try to know any of these things…….how can you Shivaay?’’

Shivaay ‘’no ..what about her meeting with her fiancé in restaurant?’’ he was fumbling

Rudra ‘’bhayya that was my plan ……I asked bhabhi to make you jealous …she was in call with me and was talking to her boss where she was employed ……she went to say that she will not be working with him anymore …..she acted as if she was talking to her fiancé…..only to make you jealous……’’

Shivaay ‘’Whaaat? ‘’

Rudra ‘’yes bhayya …it was all our plan and you just did what we never expected from you today…..if something happens to Anika Bhabhi…I swear I will die of guilt for hurting her this much with my stupid ideas….’’ He cried

Shivaay was deeply saddened by hearing the truth….he started remembering all the antics of Anika that she was doing from past few days…..he slowly began to understand what she tried to do and how successful she was in bringing back him to what he was….and he …he again did the same …….

Shivaay turned back taking the papers and Anika’s mobile and started moving towards his car…he stopped quickly went to Chanda and said ‘’THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TELLING ME TRUTH OF YOUR ENGAGEMENT’’

Chanda was shocked and so were OmRu…while Shivaay sat in his car

Om ‘’Shivaay …where are you going?’’

Shivaay ‘’To our home..OM……aren’t you both coming’’

Om ‘’Have you lost it Shivaay…after knowing truth too wouldn’t you search for her?’’

Shivaay smiled and said

Shivaay ‘’you don’t know Anika…she will die but she will not let her the promise she made to you to break…’’

Rudra ‘’what ?’’

Shivaay ‘’you both said na that she promised you to bring the old Shivaay Singh Oberoi back’’

Rudra ‘’yes’’

Shivaay ‘’so how can you forget the old SSO is crazy for his Panika…..she yet has to bring this side of me to forth along with my tadi and gussa……so I am sure she is in OM and must be waiting for her next move……’’

Om ‘’But ‘’

Shivaay ‘’nothing else…if you don’t believe then come along she will be in OM walking like a pendulum waiting for us in tension’’

OmRu thanked Chanda and followed Shivaay in their car and reached OM……..

Anika was moving back and forth in OM waiting for Shivaay and OmRu…..she couldn’t call them as she forgot her mobile in Chanda’s house……

ShivOmRu entered OM and saw Anika walking like a pendulum in tension…..all three looked at each other and smiled while Shivaay quickly changed his expressions as he used to be with her all these days……

Rudra ran to Anika and hugged her and said

Rudra ‘’bhabhi…are you okay? Where did you go and why didn’t you pick our call?’’

Anika ‘’I am okay Rudra …I went to Chanda’s house as I was ..’’ she stopped looking at Shivaay without completing the sentence and she acted as if it doesn’t matter to her….

Rudra ‘’as you were what?’’

Anika ‘’As I had to pay her , her rent ……and then we were gossiping …in all this I didn’t check my phone…when I realised it got late I quickly came back and in all this I forgot my phone in her house’’

She explained ……..

OmRu saw each other and smiled and said ‘’Fine Bhabhi…we know you were waiting for us…now everyone is home …go and sleep it’s already late…good night’’

Anika ‘’Good night’’ …she left to her room ignoring Shivaay

Shivaay followed her calmly and once they both were in he closed the door……

Anika ‘’This is my room don’t forget that……’’

Shivaay ‘’ I didn’t …but since my room is not ready I will stay here ‘’

Anika ‘’then get your room ready fast …I can’t bear you more’’

Shivaay ‘’sure will do it….it’s just I am waiting for Ragini to let me know her choice so that I can get it ready as per her choice as soon as possible…you know right after some days Ragini and I will be in same …’’

A jug full of water was splashed on his face before he could complete………..he stood there wiping his face

Anika ‘’I am not here to listen to your nonsense…it doesn’t matter to me whose choice you are waiting for…just…just leave from here’’ she said jealously

Shivaay smirked and moved towards her ……..

Shivaay ‘’it seems it matters to you the most while you are simply denying it’’

Anika ‘’no….’’ she looked into his eyes and answered…….

Shivaay ‘’then why did you throw water …as far as I know you…you do this when you are angry …..and I also know this anger is out of your jealousy that I am getting engaged to Ragini’’

Anika ‘’jealousy my foot…’’ she removed her chameli and showed it and kept them aside and continued

Anika ‘’when I have already got engaged …. why will I think about you and that 2 Rs Cheapde’s engagement…..’’

Shivaay ‘’Ohh ya I forgot …you got engaged na ..to whom ROHIT…am I right’’

Anika ‘’yes’’

Shivaay ‘’so today you went to meet your fiancé’…how was your date? I am sure you must have enjoyed a lot ..am I right?’’

Anika ‘’obviously…I will enjoy…after all I am Anika …..not Sad Singh Oberoi…Sadu Singh Oberoi or Billu ‘’ she said teasingly

Shivaay ‘’Are you sure you went on a date with your fiancé and enjoyed?’’

Anika ‘’don’t you remember or can’t you understand…why are you asking again and again?’’

Shivaay ‘’no nothing…I asked you because you said to Rudra that you met Chanda and were gossiping with her….so’’

Anika ‘’yeah…woh…woh…I first met my fiancé and then went to Chanda’s house …that’s it…yeah that’s it ‘’ she said as if she was convincing herself

Shivaay ‘’yeah …might be so as you are saying …….by the way I need a help from you ‘’

Anika ‘’what help?’’

Shivaay ‘’actually I am also planning a date for Ragini so give me some tips…I want to make Ragini happy and let her enjoy as you enjoyed’’

Anika now fumed in anger and lifted an other jug of water to splash on him when the jug slipped from her hands getting it broken into pieces……she wanted to leave from there and in that hurry she forgot that she had sometime before removed her footware and kept it aside ….she stepped on the broken glass pieces and writhed in pain……Shivaay saw her legs as blood was oozing out …he quickly ran to her and

Shivaay ‘’Have you gone mad ? Can’t you see and walk ? what was so disturbing that you were in so much hurry ? What’s your problem? Can’t you stay safe ? see how much blood is oozing out? ‘’ he screamed at her while removing glass pieces from her legs………

After the glass pieces were removed , Anika was about to leave when

Shivaay ‘’now stop there and don’t move…let me do the first aid first……’’

Anika ‘’no need …whatever you did till now is enough for me…and why does it matter to you if I get hurt or if something happens to me? Why do you care? You shouldn’t do this as you have decided to move on in life…with someone else’’ she almost cried with every passing sentence from her mouth

Shivaay ‘’yes I am moving on the same way as you moved on….yes it shouldn’t matter to me as It doesn’t matter to you….i am caring because you cared for me sometime before when I broke the vase and was hurt….’’ He said while doing first aid

Anika ‘’ohh so you are doing because I did…good….not because it really matters to you….’’ She spoke being annoyed…..

Shivaay ‘’Hmmm……..’’ he looked at her completing the first aid

Anika stood up and tried to leave the room……

Shivaay ‘’Anika ….your mobile…….and these papers …I think you forgot to take these’’ he said while forwarding his hand

Anika looked back and saw the OM papers and her mobile and looked at him…….she was not able to meet his eyes

Shivaay moved towards her and held her hand….she looked at his hold and then his eyes nervously….Shivaay placed both the things and left her hand…she was
disappointed…….she turned to go when

Shivaay ‘’chanda has said me everything’’ he spoke to stop her

Anika looked back and said ‘’What?’’

Shivaay ‘’chanda said me everything about Rohit…he is a good guy you should proceed towards your marriage ‘’

Anika lost it completely now

Anika ‘’I never expected that you will ask me to get married…I am foolish…I am foolish to think that you will ‘’ she couldn’t complete

Shivaay ‘’I will what Anika complete it…….’’ He looked on while she stood silent seeing the tiles under her feet

Shivaay ‘’okay fine …I will complete your sentence….you were foolish to think that I will come back to you…but unfortunately it didn’t happen…so now you are feeling jealous, anger, sad ..and you are in a position where you don’t know what to do further…am I right’’

Anika with tears rolling out of her eyes and with choking voice spoke ‘’yes …you are right…I am in a position where I don’t know what to do to get you back…I am in a position where I don’t know how to let you know that I haven’t moved on… I am in a position where I don’t know how to tell you that I can never see you with any other girl…I am in a position where I don’t know how to tell you it matters a lot to me when it is about you…. I am in a position where I don’t know whether I should live by making you mine once again or die seeing you moving with another woman…. and I am in a position where I don’t know how to let you know that I AM MADLY, DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH YOU and can never forget you or move on without you…’’ she broke down and cried closing her face with her hands…..

Shivaay sat beside her and saw her with teary eyes….his tears were also not stopping seeing her state……but he allowed his and her pain to get out…a pain of separation for three months…..

After she calmed …she looked at him and he bent his head so as to not show her that he was crying and tried to wipe away his tears…..

Anika ‘’I am sorry…..i am sorry to vent out my feelings…..now I have no aim to stay in this house or in your life …I should leave now…these papers are yours…I don’t need them anymore…I am sorry once again’’

She held Shivaay’s hand and placed the property papers of OM ……He lifted his head up and she could see tears in his eyes

Anika ‘’Shivaay aap……..?’’

Shivaay hugged her tightly and she couldn’t resist her from hugging him back…both of them were longing to be in each other’s embrace…..his tears were making her shoulders wet while she allowed his emotions to roll out…….after he got calm they broke apart the hug and Shivaay cupped her face with his hands and spoke

Shivaay ‘’Will you leave me once again helpless and go? ‘’

Anika ‘’Shivaay……..’’ she said looking at him and nodding her head in NO

Shivaay ‘’I am still at the same place when you left me or rather when I left you… …I tried to live but I couldn’t because you took my life with you……I tried to forget you but I couldn’t as I saw you in everything and everywhere….. I have never moved on Anika as I couldn’t take a single step without you… I cannot imagine my life with anyone else as no one can take your place in my life ……I tried to hate you but I couldn’t because you filled so much of love till the day before you left me……I don’t know why you behaved such…I don’t know why you annoyed me so much…but somewhere in the corner of my heart I knew onething you will never try to divide me from my brothers or you were after money….but the way you chose to get separated from me hurt me from deep inside and I couldn’t overcome that ….and then I met you at dargah and you further hurt me saying you were getting engaged….then your drama of making me jealous digged the grave of my pain…..WHEN IT IS ABOUT YOU ANIKA EVERYTHING MATTER’S TO ME…BECAUSE I TOO AM MADLY DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH YOU…I LOVE YOU ANIKA….I LOVE YOU’’

Anika just looked into his eyes and this time tears of happiness rolled out from her eyes…….

Anika ‘’I LOVE YOU SHIVAAY…I LOVE YOU ‘’ she hugged him tight and they both cried happily letting the burden of their heart to go away…..after they were steady and in control

Anika ‘’but your engagement with Ragini?’’

Shivaay ‘’I was just doing the reverse drama with you’’

Anika ‘’So you wanted to make me jealous’’

Shivaay ‘’yes….when I am married to you how can I get engaged to anyone else?’’

Anika ‘’but you gave divorce to me…those papers?’’

Shivaay ‘’can’t we tear them apart Anika…afterall they are just papers…’’

Anika smiled in a yes and he hugged her again…….

Anika ‘’Shivaay I am sorry three months back whatever I did was because of’’

Shivaay ‘’ssshhhhhhh….we will not talk about that day……I don’t want to know anything …anything about that day ….whatever is the truth of that day is not something I will ever want to know…you know why?’’

Anika ‘’no’’

Shivaay ‘’because today one more biggest truth came out that we both have been dying to listen from each other’’

Anika ‘’what?’’

Shivaay ‘’that we love each other and when it is about both of us then everything matters’’

Anika smiled Shyly and Shivaay cupped her face and kissed her forehead

Anika closed her eyes and said ‘’Shivaay’’ huskily

Shivaay ‘’Ssshhhhhhhhhh’’ and continued to kiss her face until he reached her lips….her eyes closed much tightly and her hands held his shoulders much strongly while their lips met each other smoothly but much wildly……….

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Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…I will try to reply as soon as possible.

73 Comments
  1. Superb akka just awesome superb update…how r u now akka

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…thanks a lot…i am much better nanna…thank you talli for your love and concern

  2. SatyendraSharma

    It was breathtaking.I almost cries when chanda told the truth

    1. VHM

      thank you satyendraSharma…never expected that i would get such sort of reacction…it’s so overwhelming

  3. awesome
    luved it
    how r u now VHM di?
    take care

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…i am much better now dear…thank you for the love and concern…will definitely take care and you too take acre and keep smiling

  4. Di I hope you didn’t forget me?
    Anyways this was mind blowing. 💕 💞 loved it💝

    1. VHM

      Hey Dwet…after a long time…how can i forget you? how are you ? thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  5. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii.. Love you and take care…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nikita…thanks alot…yeah will take care and you too take care and keep smiling

  6. Pooja26

    just fantastic,………
    loved it !!!!!!
    post more os lyk ds………

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pooja…thanks a lot…hopefully i will try to comeback with some other OS …

  7. Amy....

    Superbbb……. As always you nailed it….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Amy…thanks a lot…

  8. Nithu

    Akka super akka…..na phn ma cousin teesukundi akka….adi ippudu vere place ki vellindi 1 week avtadi na mob na daggara radaniki……edi na frnd mob nunde chadutunnaa……sry akka ne ff kuda chadivanu kani comment cheyya leka pothunnaa……..

    1. VHM

      Hey Mohitha….thank you so much …missed you so much…that’s okay dear…how are you and when are you posting your episodes…if by any chance you posted your episodes then please message/mail me the link…….and never mind whenever you have time post your opinion on the FF

      1. Nithu

        Akkaa….na mob lo ne nenu na ff raasta….so tym partadi….unko 1 week….post chesaka…pucca frst neke chepta….

  9. Katz

    Hi vhm…. how are you now?… do you feel better…. this update is nice surprise for me and also it’s very heart warming too. I wish this really happens in the serial also. Waiting for your next update of MMKAD…BYE and take care dear….

    1. VHM

      Hey Katz….i am feeling much better now…thank you dear for the love and concern…is it …i have written so fast and never expected to be liked by readers…i am so surprised to see so much of response…so even this is a surprise for me…

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  10. Nida

    ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️ What a story.. seriously u nailed it today… really today u just made me cry .. it’s outstanding excellent great superb amazing 😉… read it more than 5times but can’t get over it … today i told my family to read this os .. even they all loved it.. and conversation between Shivaay and anika is just beyond words …. reading such a great OS on one of my most favorite couple is just amazing 😉 experience

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie….❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️…….OMG did you read it more than 5 times…are you serious…trust me bestie this is the fastest ever OS i have written till now…within a span of one hour i wrote and uploaded and then i didn’t open TU because i thought this is one of the worst ff’s i have written ever and shouldn’t have uploaded it…but you changed my view totally…i am so happy…thank you thank you …thank you so much to infinity and back…and OMG your family too read this and loved it…Ohh my my you are giving me so many surprises today….love you so much for this gesture of yours….

  11. Zaveesha

    Wowwwwwwwwww…..
    Awesome one di…. It is just fantastic…loved it…
    I love the way Everytime u connect the real IB in a way which all of the crazy Shivika fans want…u connect all the loopholes nd make a perfect story…
    Loved their convo…
    In short loved everything about ur ff…
    Do come up with more OS along with MMKAD…
    Take care…

    1. VHM

      Hey Zaveesha …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines…thanks a lot…will try to come up with something new for sure but i will first concentrate on the FF and then write another OS…thank you so much once again dear…thanks a lot

  12. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous mind blowing no words to say di loved it 😍😍😍😍😍how’s ur health di..I hope you are fine now take care di.Love you 😍😍😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…i am so glad you liked this FF…thanks a lot…i am much better now and i will for sure take care…you too take care and keep smiling…love you loads

  13. Wow wonderful di
    i loved it.

    take care

    1. VHM

      Hey Arfa…thank you so much …thanks a lot….will definitely take care…you too take care and keep smiling

  14. Navz

    Dil churaliyaa apne…loved it soo much…thank u dii for writing this.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…thank you for reading this…

  15. Pritika

    Bahut bdiya di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika….thanks a lot

  16. Priyadas

    Di you are from this world only right. How can you write so beautifully… Every emotions were just perfect for the place and very much justified. How I wish the same happens in ishqbaaz too…. Just awesome and I am really speechless. Well it by any chance I would get to gift you a special award I would surely gift you an award for making me speechless with your writing skills.
    Hmm the atmosphere change gave you such an awesome thought so I think that you should always keep yourself in an atmosphere where you get such great thought. And I think yesterday’s hospital frustration you finished it off by writing such an extra ordinary chapter.
    Just wonderful di I really don’t know what to say. Love you loads and do take care.

    1. VHM

      Hey Priya,…i am definitely from this planet dear…not an alien…awee thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for those amazing lines…

      True yesterday i was so pissed of that i was thinking what to do and this idea came into my brain…and i wrote it may be within one hour and uploaded it without proof reading it…as if i am in a hurry….and then i was hell nervous that i am for sure going to get chameli’s for writing a crap…but now when i see such a response i am surprised…

      I too don’t know how to thank you dear…thanks a lot….loads of love to you …keep smiling and take care

  17. Fffan1234

    Super awesome OS. Loved it. Kaash show per bhi ye hota

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…

  18. Pui

    Powrful writing!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pui…thanks a lot

  19. Sagithya

    Awesome di…. Lovely part….
    U described Annika feeling so good….
    Take care di…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…will definitely take care and you too take care and keep smiling

  20. Sairish

    super duper os…khidkitod..darwazatod and what not …simply lovable and……….I AM SPEECHLESS..thats what all I can say..cant type much as I have got a bruise in my left eye and hence it’s painting like hell …
    do post your mmkad soon …
    this was amazing
    lots of love
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey Saiiiiiiiiiirisssssssshhhhhhhhhh….aweeee so cute name….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….

      OMG bruise in left eye? what happened ? did you go to doctor and get it checked….please take care and take rest …speedy recovery to you dear…MMKAD i uploaded it long back …

      Loads of love to you….keep smiling …take care

  21. Sorry akka I could not comment on your ff as i was busy I hope you remember me ff is nice and even os is awesome sorry for not commenting akka ninnu oka sari spy ff ni ishqbaaz ni base chesi rayamananu kada plz update cheyava plz I think you don’t mind if I will ask you like this bye….☺

    1. VHM

      Hey Sri….nenu ninnu roju talchukunna…kani nuvu registered member kadhu kabatti nenu neeku message cheyaleka poyanu…but that’s fine…MMKAD ff IB ni base chesukuni spy story ne….nuvvu adignadi kabatte nee kosam wait chesthu undipoyanu….

      thank you so much nanna neeku OS nacchindi ani cheppinanduku…nuvvu eppudu free ga unte appudu ping cheyi…okay…keep smiling…love you loads and take care

  22. Ashwinee

    Awesome mind blowing great super update akka. Loved it

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….

  23. Amazing….. Marvelous just simply fabulous

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot

  24. DreamerForever

    It’s an amazing OS!It’s splendid and marvelous!Your stories are always great!I just love them!Continue writing like this di!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much DreamerForever …thanks a lot…hopefuly i will continue to write something which will be liked by you all

  25. VHM.dear, rulane ka iraada he kya???….agar mere baash ki baat hoti na toh main abhi tumhe meri ek photo vejti
    ..meri ankho ki anssun ke saath..
    It is really a heart wrenching OS…

    Aise hi khidkitod OS likhti rehena…and yiur ff is also nice….
    Love you soooooo much. ..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Arpita….after a very long time…nice and glad to see you…
      pakka mujhe rulane ka koi idea nahi tha…maine ye sab bahut jaldi mein likha jaise koi bhoot mere peeche bhaag ke aa raha ho…naa dubara padha naa kuch seedha upload kar diya…

      par yakeen nahi ho raha ki ye padke sabko accha laga raha hain….

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot and love you tooooooo so so so so so much to infinity and back

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much

  26. AMAZING EXCELLENT FABULOUS MIND BLOWING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot…by the way i really wanted to know your real name…if you have no objection can you let me know

  27. Jahanara

    Wowwww amazing😘😘😘 jst in luv wit ur writings….. awsm Harika akka

    1. VHM

      Hey Jahanara…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say such amazing words…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  28. Arthi

    Superb…….fantabulos…. awesome… mind-blowing…..and what not di……just loved it…..and superb…their reunion was cute and emotional too…but Super di..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi…thanks a lot…OMG so many amazing words for this OS makes me overwhelmed …thanks a lot once again

  29. JhanviPatel

    It is OUSUM di…😍😍😍😍
    Just loved it from the core of my heart…
    Kash yeh os gul khan dekh le aur…
    Kash aesa real ib mai ho jaye… omgggg agar aesa ho jaye to TRP to harharaiyke TOP pe aa jayegi…😍😍😍… Amazing di… Apko aese idea bimari mai bhi ate kaha se hai.. yeh bhi ek bahot badi mystery hai…🤔…I have to find out… And yes abhi os and ff dono ho gaya so abhi rest haa… Don’t forget… It’s my order😉😁… So take care di… Love you byee…😍😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jhanvi…thanks a lot…also thanks a lot to RITIKA ….swee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines for me….bimari mein aur koi kaam nahi rehtha na isliye aise ideas aate hain…normal time aate hi nahi…kya kare….took rest dear and took care to…so totally followed your order….thanks a lot dear for the immense love , care and concern you showered …love you loads sweety

  30. Madhuani

    What a pleasant surprise di.
    Tablatodh os.
    The way you brought truth out yet not revealing the actual matter was superb.
    Waiting for MMKAD

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhu…thanks a lot…i am glad you liked it…thought never expected this sort of response for the super speed OS written by me

  31. Brillient Mindblowing di….. Just luv it 2 d core….. Take care of urself….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…….will for sure take care …thank you for the love and concern

  32. amazing

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Daljit Mahi….thanks a lot

  33. Gayathri.visu

    Wow!!! Surprise OS di..
    MIND BLOWING…. SPEECHLESS!! The way u portrayed Shivika’s emotions n OmRu’s caring also Chanda’s anger and disappointment towards Shivaay…….PERFECT di! OMM……Shivaay guessed Anika’s thoughts! Brilliant part di….

    Take care di….keep smiling!
    Love u loads…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Gayu…thanks a lot…will for sure take care and thanks a lot for your love and concern…

      love you loads , keep smiling

  34. Nita D

    Wow….this is awesome di….I don’t know what is going on in the current track but I would like to see this….the last shivika convo is very well written….u have beautifully portrayed their emotions as always….I liked chanda’s dialogues as well…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita….thank you so much dear …thanks a lot…this was an attempt in hurry …no proof reading no editing …in a hurry to sleep and without any other thoughts i just uploaded …glad you liked it….thanks a lot again

  35. Shraddha-DBO

    You really made me cry & was emotional too.
    I’m in pain seeing our baes too in pain, this was so nice….may be awesome than the show…
    Love all ur stories, u r such a magical writer… Waiting for more😉😉

  36. Jerry_36

    This one is just the synonym of marvellous ! I mean seriously how can you just write so good. Loved the plot and how you included everything.
    Totally out of the box. The ending was splendid. Awesome work, amazing sista !❤

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