Hi guys am sorry couldn’t post sterday and again a big sorry couldn’t reply to all your comments….. Though the comments are less I’ll post it…… And from this plot the past revelations ll start and this is just a hint or a dot to that…… And I’ve planned with more chulya scenes(chulbul and Saumya) so do suggest for that……. comment both positive and negative…..with no further delay here comes the next plot………
Ll try to reply to ur comments guys….do bear this time..
Kindly ignore typos and grammatical errors….
A lady is standing near a picture which consists of four kids… Two girls and two boys hugging that lady…… The picture was full of happiness and joy filled in their life, but they dint know that was their last day of happiness and joy…… The house of the lady was very big and it was painted with pink and blue color with hangings of butterflies and moon……. If any starnger gets to visit that house none will tell that house is one of the top most international fashion designer’s house coz the look and the fabric gave a childish look……. But she loved and lived in that house for more than 15years…….
Her thoughts were disturbed by her phone…
Lady: really????(kind of surprised)
Lady: then ll be there in India within next two days……
Lady: even am expecting the same…….
Lady: bye…..take care……(saying so she cut the call and wiped her tears that found its way and looked at the picture and smiled whole heartedly after many years……)
After a long lunch all headed to their rooms and guest house but the three brothers stayed back and it was a mere coincidence…
All the three were busy talking over the phone while two were tensed and one was happy……
Shivay(on call) okay…okay….okay….mmmmm….mmmmm…..mmmmm.okau then ll meet tmrw and then ll sign the papers…..
Om(angry) what the hell??? How can he cancel all the deals and now you are telling that the fixed meeting also got cancelled and what the hell????
Rudra(angry but lost somewhere) mmmmmm……okay no probs ll handle it……fine then tell we are least interested in doing business with him…..
All turned and faced each other Shivay could sense the tension amid his brothers and so he questioned…..
Shivay: what is that bothers you right from morning???
Omru together: all the deals related to Shekar’s got cancelled…..
Shivay: what????? Were you guys not aware of it or the reason???
Om: no actually Mr.Kishore Singh Shekar agreed to the proposal and all the documents were signed but sterday his son Mr.Mohit Shekar took over the business in India that his dad was handling and he cancelled all the deals signed with Oberoi industries…..
Rudra( continued from where om stopped) and when we asked them they dint give proper answer and when v asked for meeting Mohit Shekar they denied………..
Om: all the stocks are drastically reducing coz a major deal has been dropped…..
Shivay: what bade papa told??? Did he met Mohit after that or atleast did he spoke with Mr.Kishore Shekar????
Om: Mr.Oberoi dint even bother about it….. Moreover he is not all worrying about it????
Shivay: Om woh actually he’s ur dad so give him some respect….. All I have to say is Mohit must have some reason for doing so and as far as I know he’s good and don’t judge a book by it’s cover….. This is applicable to a person also…..
Om(giving a sarcastic smile) Shivay you are telling this???? Shd I respect him???? And regarding Mohit how come you are sure that he is good……
Shivay( giving a faint smile) All I wanna tell is for whatever happened or happening is not coz of bade papa and nothing else think wisely u shd sometimes think from mind when it comes to professional life and shd think frm heart when it comes to personal life…..it’s you who taught me and now you forgot…….(giving a sigh he jus patted his shoulder and walked)
Om and Rudra who couldn’t believe that it is their bhai who changed a lot and talking about thinking from heart and mind……..
Scene-3 guest house..
The little devil was running up and down with her toys all over the living room and scattered the toys each and every corner of the house….. Sahil and Saumya joined along with the little devil and changed the total house upside down…..
Shivika who wanted to do makeup to her mom and dad with the help of Sahil and Saumya did a beautiful make over….
Tia was glowing with much rose powder on her cheeks, her eyes were drawn with two dark black color line like a fish, her lips were masked with three different Colors of red,pink,orange, her hair turned to a big blunder with all sorts of baby clips and bands……and the most highlighted makeover was a black dot behind her ears put by her daughter in order to protect her beautiful mom from bad omen or bad sight…….
Meanwhile Robin/dhushyant hair turned to a coconut tree(small pony) on the centre of his head and cheeks with powder and eyes with kajal and lips with three coatings of lipstick and similarly a black dot behind his ears….
Both were strictly ordered by the little devil to not to see themselves in the mirror untill they are asked to or made to see…..so both of them were closing their eyes and Tia somehow managed to close but dhushyant just enjoyed his daughter’s torture……
After the makeup is done shivika took both of them to the living hall where others were sitting as soon as they saw them bursted into laughter and Shivay who came on time saw the two beautifully groomed couple couldn’t handle laughed his heart out and all were laughing like maniac holding their stomach…Sahil fell down while laughing and till then they both dint open their eyes became confused and opened…… They both were shocked to see all.of them laughing at them and asked together what happened???
Shivay(still holding his stomach and controlling his laughter went near Tia and aksed her) Ti..Tia….what happened to you and what is this beautiful art or makeover on ur face and you dhu…dhushyant…. dhushyant…what is on ur head some extra growth……(and again started to laugh)
Tia: Shivay woh na….shivika ka art or make up skills…….I know what she wud have done to us……..am used to it Shivay…….lagtha hei universe ne yahi chahiya……
Dhushyant: now laugh man you will come to know when your little devil do like this….. For me atleast one devil for you two devil’s so definitely two extra growth on ur head……
Shivay(his eyes are now wide open in shock and disbelief) wha…wha…what…..what does my children do like this?????
Sita: arre beta not oly shivika or ur children all the children are like this even sumo used to do all sort of mischief with me and her dad specially……so be ready for this shivay…..
Anika: Haan Haan Shivay not two u have to handle three including me….. How will I miss any such chances like this to embarrass you or to make fun if u….. If I alone do this then your usual dialogue ANIKA GROW UP!!!!! so am waiting for my devils to torture you…..
Shivay(now his mouth turned to an O) this is not fair and ll nt let anyone to groom me and they are my children so ll definitely not do so……
Anika: yeah they are your children but who is their mother????(winking her eyes)
Shivay now felt defeated left from the area to play with his little devil while others laughing at his poor situation……
Their laughter created such a noise….the people inside the mansion felt jealous but few ppl were enjoying the jealousy…..
Scene-4 OM evening….
Dadi who was sitting on the couch in the living room along with pinky and Jhanvi discussing how to handle the situation and how to win them back was distributed by dadi’s phone..
Dadi: hello…… What??? really???? Pakka????
Dadi:teek hain…. Then I’ll make all the arrangements and ll be awaiting for u……… bye…..
Dadi smiling after the phone call turned to Jhanvi and asked her to arrange the guest room….
Jhanvi: what happened mummy ji who is coming???
Dadi: my college friends are coming after a long time…..we three were really close and best friends……….when we got married we don’t know that they both married the sons of oberois business rivals………
Jhanvi: what business rivals????
Dadi: Haan puttar they both were childhood friends and we met during college period and their parents were also childhood friends and they married their daughters to their business partners sons…….
Jhanvi: then how come they are rivals to us???
Dadi: one married the son of Rathore and one the son of Shekar and both Rathores and shekars are family friends like them and I married son of oberois so we became their rivals….. And this rivalry affected our friendship and we three parted our ways…. But they two are now still together……..
Jhanvi: what is their name mummy ji???
Dadi: Vidhya Raj Singh Rathore and Leela Karan Singh Shekar……
Jhanvi: their children mummy ji?
Dadi: for Leela two daughters and one son….. Vidhya one daughter and one son…
The eldest son of vidhya married eldest daughter of Leela and the youngest son of Leela married youngest daughter of vidhya…..
Pinky: but mummy ji what about second daughter of Leela ji????
Dadi: patha nahi puttar……. I just got to know that she’s no more….. Some say she eloped and some say she’s no more and even her mom doesn’t knw exactly……
Jhanvi: chulbul…….(at her top voice)
Chulbul: ji maa ji….
Jhanvi: arrange the room for our guests they will come by tmrw so make sure that everything is set properly and take care of it okay…..
Chulbul: ji…… Maa…… I ll handle and the arrangements ll me pakka……
One pair of ears was listening the convo and came to the living room…….
Tej: maa…… Were you talking about the Rathores and shekars????
Dadi: Haan puttar…..kyun????
Tej: kuch nahi….woh Wahi shekars hein na hamara sara deals cancel kardhiya???
Dadi: Haan Wahi shekars hein wo…
Tej(murmuring) pail Gaya raitha………….have to do something before all the raitha spreading all over………….
Dadi: kuch kaha????
Tej: no maa nothing……jus thinking that it is an golden opportunity to discuss with them regarding the cancelled deals and the reason for it that’s it……(saying so he left from there thinking)
I have to stop them…… Especially Rathores……..what if she comes to know???? I don’t want her to be stressed again, after a long time she’s living happily and peacefully so I shd stop them before she meeting them…..am god damn sure mom will introduce her and will insist her to meet them…… She can’t handle it and I can’t let her past disturb her present……… Have to stop them……..
End of pov….
Scene-5 unknown place..
A boy is sitting on the chair and talking to a picture…… Tmrw the great great MR.KAILASH SINGH RATHORE is coming back to India and his wife…….. Tmrw is such an important day for me coz he’s gonna pay for all his deeds he has done to us and sure he will regret……. Jus few hours Rathore then it’s my payback time….. So just get ready…….(with a smirk)
WHY TEJ BOTHERING AND ABOUT WHOM???? WHO IS YHE BOY WAITING FOR HIS PAYBACK?????WILL OM UNDERSTAND HIS BROTHER ????so many questions…need the answer then wait till the next plot……
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See you soon with next plot untill then
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