Eva’s Raglak OS

Hello everyone…this is Eva….writing a OS on “RAGLAK” lol….vishwas nehi horaha hai na?Mujhe bhi nehi horaha hai…but as i promised all the Raglak fans..that i will write an OS on them….i’m keeping my promise…
This is the story of a rude and arrogant business tycoon Laksh Maheshwari …his past has made him like this….
The story starts with Laksh is seen getting ready for his office..(Total formal look)
Ap calls him downstairs….He is leaving for his office…just then Ap shouts “Laksh have your breakfast first”
Laksh:Ma..i’m getting late…
He leaves for his office…
Ap sits and cries….
Sujata;Jiji….don’t cry….everything will be fine(Universal dialogue)
Ap:My son lost his smile…..i can’t see him in this state…..
Suju:He loved her a lot…
Ap:Yes….that’s why her death has broken him…she was his life…..and how he has become lifeless…
Suju:Jiji….have fate in god…
Ap:Now there is only one way left..i’ll get my son remarried..
Suju:Jiji….Laksh manegaa?
Ap:He has to….
Laksh is in his car….just then a girl comes in between…..and the driver brakes…”What happened?”Laksh asked…
Driver;Sir..someone came before tha car..so i had to brake..
Laksh comes out of the car…and goes to the girl is sitting on the road (Girgayi hai apne app nehi bethi)
Laksh:Hey..u….don’t u know how to walk on roads?
That girl turns..
Girl:Even i can ask..don’t your driver know how to drive on the roads?
Laksh:Ek toh galti karo..upar seh ese tevar?
Girl:U r so rude….i’m new in India…i lost my way….and u…behaving like an idiot…
Laksh:U called me idiot?
Girl:Nehi tumhare bhoot ko kaha…
Te girl leaves from there angrily….
Laksh comes back home at 7…
DP:Laksh..we need to tell u something..
Laksh;Boliye papa..
DP;We want u to get remarried..
Laksh:Papa?
Dp:My friend has come from Australia….he has a daughter….and i want u to marry her…
Laksh:I can’t think of this even papa….i can’t give Swara’s place to anyone…
Laksh leaves angrily….
Its the next day….and Sunday..
Laksh comes out of his room..and is shocked to see everyone busy with works..as if there is some get together…or something…
Laksh:Ma….is anyone coming?
Ap:Ha…tere papa ke dst and his family..
Laksh:I won;t meet them….
Laksh goes back….
Just then that family comes…
Dp:Oh Shekhar…after 7 years……how r u?
They hug eachother…
Shekhar:Ha…baas….thik hii hai ham..Dp….meet her….she is my daughter Ragini….
Dp keeps his hand on her head..
Dp;Bohot pyari bacchii hai…
Ap goes near Ragini….keeps her hand on her head and smiles…
Sumi nehi hai meri story mein…
Ap,Suju and Ragini r talking..
Ap:Beta..i hope u know why we r here..
Ragini nods…
Ap;Beta….my son has faced a lot….i want his happiness now…..
Ragini’s eyes fall on Laksh pic..she gets shocked….as that’s the person whom she met the previous day…
Ragini:Is he Laksh?
AP;Ha…
Ap:Beta…we won’t hide anything from u….beta…Swara was Laksh’s first wife…they had a love marriage..Swara was Laksh’s life…Swara was the light of this house…she was an orphan…we loved her like our daughter..it has been 2 years since she passed away…
Ragini;If u don’t mind me asking….how did Swara die?
AP:Laksh and Swara were going to Lonavla….Laksh’s business rival planned an attack on them….there car was stopped by some goons…those goons have guns and they shot Laksh….Swara came in between…..andd….
Sujata;Ragini..Laksh still couldn’t forgive himself..he thinks that he is responsible for Swara’s death….
Ragini looks at Swalak’s photo…
Ragini in mind:Laksh ko Swara seh zada koi pyaar nehi karsakta hai….
Shekhar asks Ragini to come…
Shekhar;Dp…your son didn’t even meet her….i think..that..
Ragini:Papa..i’m ready for this marriage…AP aunty..can i meet him once?
AP nods…
Ragini goes to Laksh’s room…..Laksh is seen sitting on the floor..Ragini comes near him and keeps her hand on his shoulder..
Laksh gets shocked seeing Ragini..
Laksh:U?
Ragini:Yes….i’m your papa’s friend’s daughter…Ragini
Laksh:Why r u here?Didn’t ma say that i’m not interested in marrying?
Ragini:Laksh….i know u love Swara…and i promise that i’ll never come between u both…i can understand your pain…
Laksh:U can’t…
Ragini:Laksh..do u think Swara is happy seeing u like this?
Laksh looks at her…Ragini leaves….
Laksh cries….
Laksh:I don’t want to live….
He feels another hand on his shoulder..
Laksh:Just leave Ragini..
That person:I won’t…
Laksh looks at that person..full on shocked…
Laksh;Swara tum?Tum zinda ho?
Swara:Ha…in your heart…Laksh u feel that u r the reason for my death….now let me tell u..u can never be the reason for my death…tum mere jineh ki wajah thee…u r saying that u don’t want to live….remember…i gave u this life..i have more right on this life….i’m alive in u….u can;t die…tum Swara ka astitwa ho….i can never see u unhappy….remember this alway…ek insane ke jaane seh zindegi nehi rukti..paar ek ruki huyi zindegi ki wajahse bohot sari zindegiya rukh jaati hai….everyone is worried for u….u can;t hurt them..i want u to move on in your life…
Laksh looks at Swara…
Swara;I know what u r thinking….Laksh if u marry someone that doesn’t mean that u r giving my place to someone..let someone make another place in your heart….
Laksh hugs Swara…just then he comes back into the reality…..Swara is gone….
AP comes there….
AP:Beta…r u fine?
Laksh:I’m ready for this marriage….
Laksh leaves….
Next day….
Ragini comes to MM house…..AP thinks of letting Raglak spend some time so she asks Ragini to take food for Laksh….Ragini nods hesitantly…Ragini takes food for Laksh….she comes to his cabin..Laksh is surprised to see her..
Ragini:May i come in?
Laksh:Yeah…
Ragini:AP aunty has sent food for u…
Laksh:I’ll have it later..
Ragini:k then i should leave now..
Laksh:Ragini…we need to talk..
Ragini:I even think so we need to talk..
Laksh:Ragini..why r u marrying a widower?U can get any man u want…why me?
Ragini:Maybe because i saw true love for your wife in your eyes..and maybe i can see this same love for me in your eyes sometime later.and i was impressed by your honesty…
Laksh:But…
Ragini;Haha..janti hu..that u love Swara only…but i’ll be happy to live with u as your friend only..itni sit oh jagah dehdo…aur patahai…if u would have forgotten your frst wife and would be extremely happy for your second marriage then i wouldn’t had married u…because then i would know that if by chance if i die then u will not hesitate to bring another one….
Laksh:Ragini…..ek acchi insane ho tum…
Ragini:Pata hai…
Laksh smiles seeing her childishness…
Ragini:Aur tum be bohot cool dikte hai jab haste ho…
After some days..your Raglak has became good friends….
They r in car…same incident takes place..a girl comes before the car…Laksh comes out…so does Ragini…and the best part is Laksh doesn’t scold that girl….he takes her to the hospital..
Ragini:Hayyy..itna change kuchhi dino mein?
Laksh:Aphiki sangat ka aasar hai Miss Gadodia..
Ragini:Oyee..call me madam….phir kyuki mujhise toh ye saab sikh rahe ho…
Laksh’s face expression changes..he has remembered something that has made him sad..
Rags:Kya huya?Did i say something wrong?
Laksh:I used o call Swara madam..when she used to show tantrums…
Ragini:oh sorry..phir mujhe….ha teacher hii bula lo…
Laksh give a light smile..
Some more days passes…Laksh and Ragini r huge cricket freaks….they were watching New Zealand VS England match…Ragini was supporting England and Laksh was supporting New Zea…England won…they also had a bet..and Ragini won the bet..
Laksh:Hamesha mere saath hii eisa kyu hota hai…..Swara ke saath bhi jab bet lagata tha she used to win and now u too…
Ragini:Aww….now as i won the bet..i want an ice cream treat..
Laksh:Ha chal…
They were going to the ice cream palour when Ragini saw ice cream stall in the road..
Rags;I want to have ice cream from there not ice cream palour..
Laksh:That’s unhygienic
Rags:Please….
Laksh:Thik hai…
Both go near the stall…..Laksh receives a call and goes other side to talk…Rags is busy ordering her fav ice cream..she turns and sees Laksh talking on phone….just then she sees a car coming in high speed towards Laksh…She shouts Laksh and pushes him…and in this process..she gets some scratches..Laksh comes and helps her to stand..and then hugs her…
Laksh:One person lost her life because of me…now if something would have happened to u then i could not live with these burdens…thank god u r fine Ragini….i lost Swara…now i can’t lose u…i love u yaar..don’t leave me……u made me live my life….don’t go away from my life..or else i’ll die….
He breaks the hug…and looks at Ragini…who got so many scratches and cuts still smiling…she was happy to hear all those words from Laksh’s mouth..
Ragini:I love u too…isiliye mein tumhe hurt honeee nehi desakti…
Laksh hugs her again…….He sees Swara behind Ragini…she has tears in her eyes and smiling at them…..
Swara;Thank u Laksh….your smile is my biggest happiness…….
After 6 years years…….Raglak r sitting for Swara’s barsi….Laksh has tears in his eyes….Ragini(in mind)That’s why i love u…..u did not forget Swara even after loving me…..
They have a 5 years old daughetr..and they named her Swara………………………lo dedi meri pehli happy ending….khush sabb?I’m sorry if u did not like it…this is a raglak os…..cause at last Raglak hii toh huya..someone told me..ff kis couple ka hota hai yeh pata chalta hai iseh ki last mein koon saath hai..so here is Raglak..i can’t write fully on Raglak..so i did this..so sorry if u r hurt…

79 comments

    • Eva

      |Author

      Ha…i always try my best to keep all my promises….and i can’t post Samjhota today…aj isiseh kaam chala lo…yeh ek likhte likhte hii mera band baaj gaya…thank u…

  1. Crazygirl

    Thats the first Raglak os I read, cause I’m not a fan of them and Eva, your story is awesome

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u…..for reading this..u r not a raglak fan still u read this and liked it..glad to know that 😀

  2. ria

    It’s nice eve finally your first happy ending loved it so sweet yaar. You make simple stories so emotional that one gets attached to them loved it in raglak also you rocked

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u Ria…i like to write simply complicated stories…and emotional too…galti seh happy ending dedi lol…

  3. Sanskriti ?die hard fan of swasan ?

    Eva it was just awsm….. amazing……..no words to express as always u kept ur promise. Ab us Riya air Sonia ka akal thikane mein ayega anyways luv u loads ???
    Can I call u by name bcz I m just 13 yrs

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u Sanskruti..and i do keep my promises….abbhi unke dimaag thikane nehi aye..dekho upar ek hay.. 🙁 koi nehi chodo unko..luv u too..and u can call me Eva…itna accha sah toh naam hai mera…

  4. Sonia

    This comment is deleted.

    Reason: Creating disturbance on all articles / using multiple names.

  5. Joona

    |Registered Member

    Eva…I loved swara’s sentences to laksh.. Really it was awesome.. And the OS was imotional.. Dear u rocked it..

  6. Meher

    |Registered Member

    Omg!! Omg!! Omg!! Please pinch me!!! ??????

    EVA n Raglak ????

    Look Eva u can write raglak… try to write more ??????

    Coming to os it was osm n naming their daughter as swara was best part…

  7. Nandini

    Really awesome story dear…truly loved it?
    Forget the bashers as without daily dose of drama they won’t be able to digest their food?

    I know that u don’t like RagLak at all and have been requesting ur frnds to write an os on them where they would be bro-sis…then l have a suggestion…
    Read Azure’s Pride vs Prejudice…alongwith beautiful writing, storyline u ll get ur bonus of seeing RagLak as bro-sis…but l don’t know if u ll like RagSan as they r the leads and also Ragini is the lead…so l don’t know if u ll like to read it?
    Sorry if u feel hurt by my suggestion

    • Eva

      |Author

      i read that before u suggested….how can i miss a ff were raglak r bhai behen?I’m loving that…thank u for this suggestion…i like ragsan…so no problem….and i never care about bashers….anyways..thank u

  8. Sree

    |Registered Member

    Wah eva wah. Lik hi diya tumne. Bohottt acha tha. So sweet os. It was not bad at all. Tumne Raglak pe bhi acha likka. Thats u??? ??

    • Eva

      |Author

      aww thank u dear……and i’m sure ki koi aur hoti toh raglak peh better likh paati…raglak nehi hota yaar mujse…i won’t deny this..sach hii kahungi…

      • Sree

        |Registered Member

        Lekin yeh kuch kam nahi tah. It was fab. Meri wifey ne lika hai toh achha hi hoga so dont say that??

  9. sss

    awesome os…..both swalak and raglak were amazing…..though its raglak os but u give a little treat to swalak fan..being swalak fan I’m telling that…
    plz write a os swalak…in recent ff swasan in previous ff also on swasan…..ab raglak bhi karli to swalak to bantahe or use tmeh ki prblm bhai so pretty plz

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u..and i can’t write anything based on 1 couple only….even after reading the title u read it..being a swalak fan u read raglak ff….thank u….for that too…swalak peh likhne keliye koi request ki zarurat hii nehi..that’s my first love..

  10. Chaitali

    |Registered Member

    i didn’t read it yet…just saw ur name and raglak…and i directly came to comment….u really wrote it!!!

    Congrats…infinity

    • Chaitali

      |Registered Member

      Arre happy ending hogaya….Am i dreaming??First raglak then happy ending….i can’t believe it!!by the way r u eva or her ghost???lol…i am proud of u bhabi..who can go out of her comfort zone and write so well…is definitely a great writer…so u have proved it now

      • Eva

        |Author

        Oyeee…tu kuch bhul nehi gaya?U promised ki u will declare who is your first wife when i write this os…ab kya huya?Tu dream toh nehi kar rahi hai….aur bhoot hoti toh sabse pehle tujhe darati…..aur..ha thank u bhi bolhi deti hu…

  11. seebu

    Eva…u know what…i love ur stories…i didnt comment bcs of personal problems…but now onwords i will surely comment…my only request is write in english dear…u have so many fans who dont no hindi

  12. Nita D

    |Registered Member

    Wah Eva bhabhi….awesome….i have not read your other ffs (but i’ll surely read after exam) so i am not shocked that’s its Raglak…..but i loved this simple, sweet, cute n beautiful love story…..

  13. Aami

    |Registered Member

    hy eva nyz episode…. ur ryt couple is not a matter stry is the matter n u dear just stole our heart with ur stry….. am wytng for ir nxt episode on samjhota….

  14. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    That’s the first raglak os I read. Bcz tumne yeh likka hain.V.nice os(isse zyada kuch nehi bol paungi).

  15. Riya

    |Registered Member

    Some one pinch me fast.. Give me glucose drink otherwise I will faint.. Baba re are u Eva.. Jokes apart dear.. First raglak os I read just because of u .. beautiful story .. Hope some crazy heads get some moral lesson from ur os

    • Eva

      |Author

      nehi punch dungi..mein halki chiseh nehi deti….and thank u for reading this because of me……hope u enjoyed it…i’m Eva..the only Eva…jiseh request karke yeh raglak os likhwaya gaya…..i promised some raglak fans…and wrote one….crazy heads lessons nehi samajte..

      • Riya

        |Registered Member

        Sahi kaha Eva.. But I told u na I was feeling something fishy about this Riya.. See tu deleted her comment … She was only changing her name and bashing u .. U are a lovey Dovey no one can hate u other than some crazy heads .. Sirf head hai yaar andar se Khali hai without brain
        .. And pls don’t punch me .. I am already on verge of fainting ..

  16. Anu Ann

    Awesome it is the first time I’m reading raglak os…. And it was too good…. Loved ur writings

  17. anonymous

    Hi eva it’s me again………………u promised me that u will write at least an OS on raglak………..and even u commented in one of the ff analysis saying that u will write an os.but sach mein…i didn’t expect that u will write one,as u said u don’t like to write on raglak.But u kept ur promise……………first of all thanks for that…….and now I am going to read the OS as I didn’t………..i got excited nd 1st i commented……

  18. anonymous

    now done with reading.what to say………..it might sound a lil bit crazy but i liked swalak part than raglak.and ending was unexpected………i liked swara’s words to laksh,that she has more rights on him as she saved him………..thanks once again
    Can i get the link to samjotha 2nd epi

    • Eva

      |Author

      Glad that u liked it…i keep my words…and this was a treat to all the raglak fans….u liked swalak part more…that’s fine..and u want the link of samjhota hisaab barabar epi2? Or any other series of samjhota?I’ll give it with my next chappy?

  19. neoline

    this is the first evr os i read on raglak just coz u wrote it was sweet..! btw did you write any os on swasan? i want to read..

    • Eva

      |Author

      That’s so sweet of you.u read it for me..thank u…and i did write os but I forgot the names..sorry..when I remember it I’ll give the names to u.pakka..sorry once again:(

  20. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    Very nice usually I read only rag based ffs nd os in ur laat ff also I uaed to ask u many times to write an ff based on ragini nd when u told u hate raglak I felt bad but today by writing time u really made me very happy love u eve darling I may not be seen in ur ff comments as usually I don’t read any swara based storieds but I like u because ur ffs will bee emotional I used to folow ur samjotha but u know how hard it is to read about the pairs we don’t like nd really we need a strong heart to write that pair which we don’t like as a writer I can understand as for the first time I to wrote an ff based on ragsan nd swasan it was very difficult for me to write on swasan soo I really appreciate ur work nd sorry if I talk lot just I want to share my view think me as ur elder sis .nd not but least I see ur ff to see the comments u get really people were crazy nd silly bhi ha ha (im meture) kids .

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