Eternity… One shot

Hey guys its me dolly …I am writing one shot for the first time ….this Is also a idea of my sis …..she also uploaded it in Google …but total my story only ….-.–hope u all like it ……

So here is the story
Swara POV *
BEEP -BEEP-BEEP .that’s all I hear right now ..its been a while since the last visit ..I can’t ,move or talk …
May times I tried to open my eyes ..but I couldn’t .the last thing I remembered before I went into darkness was a sound of a car honking loudly..It was raining ,a Friday .I was skipping home with my daddy from the nearby park ,then a bright light shined into my eyes .
That’s all I remembered ….

It feels like its been an eternity .My mommy sometimes come into my room I’m in and reads me stories .
I like the story about Cinderella . For some reason when my mommy finishes reading ,she sounds like she is crying .
Then she kiss my cheecks and whispers “bye my beautiful angel”. I want to hug, and tell her its alright . Anything to syptop her crying ,but I couldn’t move .

On, what I believe is my birhtday , my mommy and daddy come in . I can hear them sniffling . I think mommy is crying ,
I try to tell my mommy I love her , but my voice ins’t working .

Daddy hugs me gentlely and whispers in my ears , “you r now 8-years old .baby girl . I love u ”
Mommy suddenly bursts into tears , and daddy had to take her out of room . They didn’t come back .

It seems like an eternity when they came back . Daddy and mommy we’re both crying . That’s weird
Daddy never cries unless something really bad happens …

I heard a strange man walk into the room and say,”you may have 10mins with her ,and say ur good byes . When the time comes I think u should leave ” . The strange man leaves .and my parents immediately came up to me and hugged me .

Mommy kept crying, and when she spoke ,her voice cracked , “I love u darling , u r always my beautiful princess”. I tried to say I love u too , but I couldn’t ..

Daddy caress my cheecks ,and whispers in my ears “you’re going to make a beautiful angel . I love u ” his voice cracked , and I can feel something wet hit my cheecks

The strange man came in , and that’s were my mommy started screaming , ” no ! no ! She is still there! No !” I felt like crying .wanted to yell out that I was right there . I think daddy took mommy out of the room . I can tell because her screaming starts getting fainter . As if she was in the hallway .

I heard a strange man walk up to my bed . Then I felt a strange pinch in my arm . It feels just like a needle I get when I needed to get my shots .
The man then says , “rest in peace” .

The beep-beep-beep turns into a beep-beep . Then just a beep . I feel tired, and start going into sleep .
Maybe when I wake up, I’ll be able to move again . As soon as I fall asleep , the heard the beep end …..

*******NOTHING IS THERE TO COME , AND NOTHING PAST , BUT AN ETERNAL NOW DOES ALWAYS LASTS************
Character !!
THE YOUNG GIRL = Swara gadodia
THE MOMMY = sharmishta gadodia
THE DADDY = shekhar gadodia
THE STRANGE PERSON = anil kapoor
HOPE U AL, LIKE IT …AND PLZ DO COMMENT ON IT AND TELL ME IF U ALL WANT MANY ONE SHOTS FROM ME OR NOT !!!!!!
WITH LOVE ,
dolly ……

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Credit to: Dolly

8 comments

  1. priya

    A different thinking and a gud msg is conveyed hope to c u with more one shots …….and henceforth in futher one shots pls make it as a long episode

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