ETERNAL LOVE (EP-8)

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Recap – laksh proposes ragini…she accepted to marry…

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Flashback

Lucky reached India….

He tried to call ragini …but her cell is not reachable (as accident happened there it is broken)….ah ragini what r u doing ??? Iam missing u already….

And again he think about y mom called me to come urgently with out informing Bhai…what it would be???

Lucky entered home …

Ap & Sujatha  welcomed him by giving arthi ….he took blessings of elders and asked what mom what hpnd ? Anything serious ???

Ap – come beta will talk but Ur dad will talk about it go to him…and by d way how is sanskar????

Lucky – wo….wo…..fine mom…..and he left fastly…

Ap – it seems something fishy …he is not saying anything…suji …better will ask after sometime…

Suji – ha …iam also thinking d same…but my son….(she felt sad)

Ap – consoles her and take her in…

Lucky – dad , what happened???

Dp – oh , u came ??? How r u ???

Lucky – fine dad …but …

Dp – interupts and said yea I called u here ..bcz sanky asked one day that he don’t wanna live there and he don’t even look after the company anymore… I wanted to ask u what happened to him???
It will be a huge loss to company that there will be no one to look after there…y lucky ??

Lucky – dad ,I know every thing but I want some time to sort out the things…and I will explain everything …but pls give me some time…

Dp – take ur time ,but make him understand that wat he is doing is wrong…

Lucky – ok dad…

Both went to dining area and had their dinner and left to their respective rooms…

Lucky – Bhai , what is this Bhai ?? What are u trying to do to Ur self…u r loosing Ur life ,career because of d girl…..’girl’ ….I have to know who is she ?? And y she did this to my Bhai…

He then dozed off…

#morning

He went to his sanskars college and enquired their frnds about her ….he got the details and pic of her….

U swara Bose , u made my brothers life hell…I will make urs hell….wait for me…

Then while going back in car , there he saw some ppl are surrounded and one person met with an accident…he came near to dat person…his heart beating fastly…..he is shocked that it’s swara…he quickly lift her in his arms and took her to hospital ….

In ICU…

She is breathing heavily….doctor came outside and said we can’t assure you that she will be alright bcz she had bad injuries….

Unknowingly lucky got tears in his eyes and he begged doctor that pls save her ….pls ….pls…..

After some time… Doctor came back and said she is still unconscious…but  we can’t say anything untill she get her senses…

He went inside and hold her hands and said pls come back to Bhai ….pls…sanskar loves u madly…madly….pls for d sake of sanskar u have to be normal swara…pls…
His tears drop on her hand then she took her breathe heavily and slowly open her eyes ….he happily hugged her and went to call doctor…

Doctor came and checked and said everything is alright…she may take some more time to recover but nothing is danger….take this medicines…

After some days…..

Ap – beta where are going daily ??

Lucky – mom , I will discuss everything, but give me some more time…things will get clear…believe me..

Ap – ok beta…but take care…

He came to hospital ..and asked swara….how u feeling now ????
Yeah fine ….but who r u???

Iam laksh maheswari….brother of sanskar maheswari…

Sanskar …. where is he ??? How is he ???

Why did u do this to my brother swara??? And how could u???
He loved u so much…but u…

Pls …listen to me….once… sanskar got misunderstood me..she said…

Lucky – what are u saying ???

Swara – After graduation ……for MBA  I stayed in London wid my friends ….in my college one of my mate name Arjun ( played by Piyush sahdev)

He is totally Obsessed with me…I have avoided and warned him…that I love sanskar…but he never listened to me…he then tried other way that he said to sanskar that iam loving him because of his money….I can’t bear that anyone btwn me and sanskar….so I have decided to clear d things out and asked him to meet me at cafe…but that blo*dy idiot mixed something in that coffee  and took me to room and called sanskar and he too slept beside me and Sanskar came and saw that…but nothing happened there…
He warned me …
Arjun – if u gonna say this to sanskar then I will kill ur best friend ragini and sanskar

So he said to my friends and ragini that iam dead and he took me to India…here he was torturing me …so I got a chance to escape from him and met with an accident…..

Lucky – offooooooo such a tragic love story Bhai had…and u too

Swara glares at him..

Ok sry…by d way Ur frnd ragini….he showed a pic in his mbil …she said…yes she is my rags…

Lucky hugs her and said she is my best friend and I love her…but still I didn’t confess my feelings to her…but  now first  I have to sort things out btwn u and Bhai…

Swara – thanks lucky…

#home

Lucky – mom , mom…..iam so happy today and explained everything to their parents ….now bhai have no prblm he will be there to stay there….

Ap ,suji & dp &rp – at last we will see happy sanskar then….all thanks goes to u lucky…

Lucky – mom he is my brother I will give my life to him and if any one snatch my brothers happiness…I will rip their heart out….I love him mom…

All Felt happy and lucky called sanky but he is not lifting his call( here he is busy wid ragini )….

Lucky – came to his mom and dad and said he will return to London…

Ap & dp – live for some more days beta…after  that u can go…

Lucky was eagerly waiting to see his love and his bhai’s happiness Wen he saw swara…but he nodded yes and left …

Then he came to London….

Flashback ends…

Ragini pov :
Here after  swara hugged sanskar then she realised that swara was madly in love wid sanskar…and she always told about him …how she madly loves him…..and never she said his name as sanskar because she called him baby….but what if now sanskar tells her that he loves me…no i can’t do this to swara…but what to do god….I don’t wanna hurt swara…then her chain of thoughts were disturbed by laksh and proposed her

I can’t do this  to swara….sorry sanskar really I love u…

Pov ends…

Ragini – yes lucky , i will marry you…..

Lucky was on cloud nine….

But sanskar heart was broken again into countless pieces…he left d place widout staying there any second…

Swara – baby….baby….sanskar…..where  r u going???

Lucky to followed swara and sanskar but ragini fell on her knees and cried her heart out…

Iam sorry sanskar…I don’t have a chance….sorry …pls forgive me….

Then she is going to her home…there lucky saw her going …

Lucky – ragini where are u going ??

Ragini – iam tired , iam going home…

Lucky – ragini , see Bhai was gone …I dono y….

She nodded sadly….

He tried calling sanky but he is not lifting ….lucky said everything to ragini that how he misunderstood swara…and he dropped ragini to home and left to search sanky and swara…

Lucky called swara and asked about sanky…
She said I dono lucky but I lost him…iam near xyz street come here…and he came there and both were searching…

At last he said  come swara Bhai will come home… definitely…come…both went home…

Here ragini is crying hard…then he heard some one coming from window and it was sanky…she was shocked to see him there…

He slips while coming through window…she hold him …he suddenly removed her hand…don’t ….don’t touch me…u cheated me…I know u don’t love me…I know u love laksh….(he was drunken)…

Ragini – sanky  pls go from here…I will call lucky to take u…wait….he suddenly hold her phone and fell unconscious and both of them fell on bed…she is on bed and he is on her belly…she tried to get him up. ..but she can’t…she then caressing his hair and cried….

Iam sorry sanskar, I can’t do this to swara…but I don’t have a choice…I love u…and I miss u…

Then at morning …
he wake-up from d bed  and remembered what happened…. ragini is slept on the couch …he then went to her and wake her up and asked y did u do this to me…I don’t love swara…I love u ragini…
How could u accept the proposal of lucky….

Ragini – explained everything and said swara loves u…it’s just misunderstanding sanky …

Sanky heard all the story and run towards swara….
That made her shocked…

She then realized that sanky still loves swara…..

#home

Sanky came home …..came to his room he saw swara slept in his bed….he reminded his and ragini moments on his room…

He then asked swara to get up….swara wokeup and hugged sanky and said I love u sanskar….I missed u so much…..

He cannot say anything …but he brk d hug and tried say that he love ragini….but he couldn’t….

He said sorry swara I can’t be like before…so pls stay away from me…

Those words totally hurted and heart broken for swara…she cried and run from there…

She went to ragini home and said everything….
Ragini felt sad…and consoles her and she assured that I will sort out d things…dont worry swara …

She called sanky and asked him to meet…but he didn’t accepted and said I don’t wanna see u…

She got hurted by those words…and said pls sanskar for my sake. …he then accepted and came to meet ragini at home…

Ragini – come on in sanky…

Sanky – where is swara??

Ragini – she went out ….

Sanky – sorry ragini I know what u want to say that I have to marry swara …bcz she is Ur bf…but listen to me also I loved her…but it’s past…bcz now my life is u ragini…(by holding her shoulder) …he said my love, my life ,my every breath ….is only for u…no one will be ….

Ragini – felt very sad hiding her tears …she said now I don’t love u anymore sanskar….I love laksh…..pls listen to me swara is very good girl…Ur very lucky to get her…

Sanky – oh stop Ur bhajan….pls…i know about her…but I don’t feel anything for her as before…it’s changed now…my feelings are changed…I dono y….but one thing I can say that I love u…and I can’t live without you….that’s it…..

Ragini – y can’t u understand…I don’t love u….anymore….and… suddenly her words are interupted by sanky kiss on her soft lips….he hold her waist tightly that she couldn’t escape….but she tried ….she couldn’t…then she left trying ….she was lost in his kiss…

He break d kiss and asked ….don’t u really love me???

She is lost …
He asked again loudly ….don’t u love me???

She got her senses and shouted Noooooo…

Sanky – ok then….i got my answer….good bye ….

Ragini fell on her knees and crying…then swara came by shouting…ragini….ragini….

Swara – saw sanky there and runs towards him and hugged him…

Sanky pov :

There is no choice to prove to her that she loves me…I can’t be wid swara as I love ragini….yes widout hurting swara I have to  make ragini  realize  her mistake …yeah I will do it…

Pov ends…

He too hugged her and said iam sorry swara I was being rude…

Swara – don’t be sorry baby….I know u love me…

Sanky – can I say u something…

Swara – sure baby ….

Sanky – after that incident I had changed a lot and my feelings too…now I don’t feel anything like before…so let’s be friends for now…don’t mind

Swara – I believe u baby…as u like…I will be Ur frnd…untill u realise Ur feelings…I will wait for u till eternity…

Sanky – felt sad for her words and said don’t say this to anyone….ok …

Swara – ok baby….as u wish….by d way where is ragini..??

Sanky – she is in room…

Swara & sanky both went to her room…knocked her room

Then ragini rubbed her tears and came to open d door…

Swara – ragini ….open d door…

Sanky – Wen she opened d door he hugged swara….
Ragini saw that  and her heart broken…she hides her tears and said happy now….

Swara – more than like anything…u and baby …I got both in my life back…

Let’s party tonight ….I will call laksh…

Sanky – ok I will be there at 7 ….I have one meeting…bye swara…he pecked her forehead and left…

Fb:

Sanky while dropping ragini in college…

Some girls are looking at sanky and said…omg he is damn hot….look at him…

Sanky and ragini notices…

Ragini – owww all girls are on ur back …ufff

Sanky – wid smile he said ….some girls can’t resist my good looks, my charm,my style…
Well, you clearly underestimate  the number of girls who would die to spend a night wid me…

Ragini – shut up….Ur mine …and mine….and mine only…..
From now  onwards  Ur every dream, Ur every hug, every kiss and every u….is mine and remember only mine…

Sanky – kissed her and said so much possessive…

Ofcourse ….

Fb ends…

Ragini remembered that cried…..

Sanky went to Adharsh gadodia (uncle of ragini)

#office

Can I meet Mr.adharsh gadodia…?

PA – yes sir…he is waiting for u ???

Sanky enters his cabin…

Adharsh – hello Mr maheswari…it’s glad to meet u…

Sanky – hello…

What r u upto Mr Adharsh gadodia…?

A – I can’t get u?? What r u talking about ?

Sanky – about ragini ….

A – what ….ragini ….how do u know her ???

Sanky – she is my……she is my frnd….I know about u and ur cheap tricks to get the company…and I know how Ur acting wid ragini…

A – wh….what….no Mr maheswari Ur getting me wrong??

Sanky – stop it…..(loudly)….just stop d bakwass…say to Ur staff…they will listen…iam not ready to listen…

I know about that accident ….it was planned by u…

If this action is continued for next time…u will definitely pay for it…remember…

One move against her….u will be out….
Remember one…when I kill someone, they were supposed to be dead….so don’t be…..be nice to her …

If anything happens to her….I will rip Ur heart out…for sure…

Then sanky left d place..

Adharsh – got scared that how would he know about that accident….

For next time i should  plan very carefully….and for sure I will kill u Mr maheswari….how dare u to warn me…

Scene shifts to lucky

Lucky – Bhai are u ready???

Sanky – yup…u??

Lucky – yeah Bhai…

Sanky – ok then chaloo…

Both went to pick swaragini….

Lucky was driving….and sanky sit beside lucky….

Swaragini were in backside…then suddenly sanky asked to stop d car…

Y Bhai???

Lucky I want to sit with swara….ragini can u come front…
Ragini felt hurt and she sadly said ok …

Swara blushes…lucky too….

To be continued…..

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28 Comments
  1. Awesome sissy

    1. Suma123

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  2. Superb dear

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  3. Amazing dr

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  4. Awesome

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  5. Ossommmmmm. Can’t see ragsan like this unite them sooooon

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  6. Amazingggg. Poor rags😯

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  7. Awesome yaar

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  8. Unite our RAGSAN soon

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      Sure dear

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  9. Awesome

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  10. Superb superb superbbbbbb!!!!loved it so so so muchh!!!emotional one yaar!!!aww!!!ragsan🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄 d way u write is fabulous yaar!!!dis story is damnnn amazngggg!!!keep rocnng n stay blessed!!!umaah😘😘😘

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      Thank u so much dear….it means a lot to me….as iam disappointed…all Ur comments make me feel happy ….I thought iam a bad writer….love u loads….😘😘😘😘😘

  11. Superb dear,loved it

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