ENTWINED BY FAITH PART 8…

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@PART 8…

@HALL
All the kids are seated in hall while the elders are still tensed making the kids confused. Tej who is least bothered has already left the place.
Finally after nearly half an hour Shivaay and Anika come out.
Anika to Sukanya: Sukanya I want to tell you something… I mean we want to tell you something.
Sukanya casually: Who we mumma?
Anika: Shivaay and I.
Sukanya stands up and goes to Shivaay: Billu ji did you complain about me to my mumma. What have you done? You know when she bhadkofy (she gets angry) it’s very difficult to paccofy (pacify) her. Above all what wrong did I do with you. I am sure you would have complaint about those boys whom I had hit now see my mother’s Jhansi ki rani avatar.

Shivaay without a word is just admiring his daughter’s antics and a small smile is playing on his lips.

Anika: What khusar pusar (blabbering) is going on?
Sukanya being alert: Nothing mummy. You were saying something continue please.
Anika: Actually I wanted to tell that…
Sukanya: Mumma what happened say.
Shivaay: Let it be it’s not your cup of tea. I will only say.
Anika gets angry: Really, do you think it’s not my cup of tea. I can do everything.
Shivaay: Ya anything even if that includes breaking someone’s head.
Anika: Ya. Now see.
Shivaay nods.
Anika tries speaking but nothing comes out of her mouth.
Sukanya: Mumma I wish I knew telepathy.
Anika getting confused: Why?
Sukanya: So that I could understand what you want to say now as I don’t know it so please speak.
Anika: Haan Vo… Me… I was saying.
Sukanya: Relax mom breath in breath out breath in breath out.
Anika does that.
Sukanya: Now say.
Anika closing her eyes in a single breath says: Shivaay Singh Oberoi is your father and you are his daughter.
Sukanya nods and sits back on her seat.

Anika finally opens her eyes on getting no response and sees Sukanya who is sitting as nothing happened every one is looking at her nervously as she didn’t respond while the baccha party is busy calculating what Anika just said. Anika looks at her daughter as if she is an alien.

Anika: Shivaay I said loud enough right.
Shivaay nods.
Anika: Then why no reaction.
Shivaay: I don’t know.
Anika: Suk…
Sukanya: Ya. (finally her mind interprets what really happened and she shout her lungs out jumping from her seat.)
WHAT?
All cover their ears.
Anika: Ya I know it’s a little complicated but that’s the truth. You are his daughter.
Sukanya: Okay.
(shouts after a good amount of pause) Can I please get an ice cream before my head bursts.
All nod.
Shivaay: Rudy get chocolate ice cream.
Anika: How do you know that it’s her flavour.
Shivaay: Long story will narrate you some other day.
Anika nods.

Rudra gets the ice cream and gives it to Sukanya who takes it and begins to eat by giving all the possible expressions she starts from a smile to a plain face to a sad face to an irritated one to an angry one and finally ends up crying after her mini brain interprets each detail of the word that her mother just said right now.

Anika somewhere had an idea about her unpredictable moods just the way Shivaay has but never knew that her daughter can be this big a mad she just smacked her head mentally and sits beside her.

Anika: Relax Suku everything will be alright.
Sukanya: Mom nothing has messed up so what will be alright, presently you are trying to make things alright but alright isn’t happening alright.
Anika hits Sukanya’s head as her stupidity radio got on.
Anika: Stop it Suku you have lost it.
Shivaay a bit angrily: What are you doing Anika?
Anika: Making her get her senses back.
Shivaay: Don’t you dear hit her. I will talk to her you leave.
Anika gives him ‘do as you wish’ look.
Shivaay sitting besides Sukanya: Sukanya what happened? Are angry with me or happy or upset or what?

He says everything being unable to make any head or toe of her emotional outburst.

Sukanya looks at him: Actually billu ji it’s not like everyday when I am walking somebody comes and my mom introduces him as my father. So the point is I don’t know how to react and this is to the best of my capacity.

Shivaay nods while other look her in disbelief.
Shivaay gives Anika ‘look at your daughter’ look, while Anika returns ‘she’s your daughter too.’

Sukanya stands up to go after finishing her ice cream she looked quite pale by now.
Anika: What happened Baccha?
Sukanya: Nothing I really need some rest I will leave.

She leaves in a rush before somebody says anything. Shivaay is about to follow her but Anika stops him.

Anika: Let it be Shivaay, she needs sometime right now she won’t speak to anyone.
Shivaay: But.
Dadi: Billu give her time.
Janvi: Yes Shivaay she is mature enough she will deal with herself but give her time to absorb things it’s a bigger shock for her.
Anya speaks from nowhere: Please somebody explain us also what’s happening otherwise I will ask mummy to take action against you all under child labour act.
All get confused.
Shivaay: Child labour but who is making you all work.
Anya: You all are making us work our mini heads and that too with great frequency.
Anika: Is she Rudra’s daughter.
ShivKara: Correct.
Anika: Got to know from habits only.
Rudra back hugging her: Bhabhi please don’t speak like these two.
Anika smiles at him.
Shivaay: Come here Anya.
Anya comes to him while he sits on his knees to explain her.
Shivaay: Anya you like Sukanya di alot.
Anya: No. I love her alot.
Shivaay smiles: You know she is my daughter.
All the kids jump in joy: Really that means she will never leave us right.
Shivaay looks at Anika with nervous and a little unsure look.
Anya brings him back: Anya and who is she.
She asks pointing at Anika.
Shivaay in a flow: She is your badi ma.
He looks at Anika as he realises what he just said both of them share an eye lock as Anika’s lips curve in a smile while Shivaay smiles in satisfaction although they share no relation but that isn’t important to them not more then their kids.
Anika bends to Anya’s level and extends her hand: Hi, so you are Anya.
Anya nods in no confusing Anika: I am Ravitanya Rudra Singh Oberoi everybody calls me Anya.
She shakes hand with Anika.
Anya: Nice meeting you badi ma.
Anika kisses her cheeks: Nice meeting you too cutie pie.
Shivaay calls Amanat & Advik towards him.
Shivaay: Anika this is Amanat and Advik.
Anika hugs three of the kids with a layer of tears as she feels she has missed on alot but a part of her is very happy about the fact that Shivaay didn’t marry anyone till date and like her he is all waiting for them to be together one day.

Rudra: Bhabhi you met all of them weren’t you reminded of your extra handsome, extra sweet and extra hot devar.
Anika smiles at him: You will never change Rudy.
Rudra: Never.
They hug each other.
Anika: I missed all of you.
Rudra: Then why didn’t you ever come back Bhabhi.
Anika is trying to search apt words for a reply but fails to voice herself.
Om in a warning tone: Rudy.
Anika looks at him thankfully. Anika greets the rest.
Pinky: O My Mata Shivaay this fatichar will stay here only.
Shivaay: Mom please she is mother of my daughter.
Pinky: So what’s you want Sukanya keep her but send this fatichar back and give her whatever she wants how much ever money she needs give it to her and throws her out.

All look shocked at her while a fear clinches Anika’s heart that churns her heart whatever may happen she can never afford the separation of her only daughter.
Anika: No. No. No. No. You can’t do this.
(she breaks down and gets on her knees and holds Shivaay’s leg) No please Shivaay don’t take Sukanya from me. Please Shivaay not my Sukanya.

Shivaay is baffled seeing Anika’s condition not even in his wildest dreams he had thought that Anika will be in this condition the fear of loos in her eyes was a not so bright depiction of her unfortunate past. Within split seconds Shivaay is on his knees hugging her to sooth her, he is creasing Anika’s back to calm her down.

Shivaay: Calm down Anika,no one will take Sukanya away from you no one.
Anika repeats the same words: Not my Sukanya, Shivaay not my Sukanya I can’t live without her.
Shivaay makes her look at him.
Shivaay: Anika look at me.
She looks in his eyes.
Shivaay: Do you trust me.

Anika’s blank eyes and expression is a good big an answer for Shivaay w know that the one single thing in their relation is long gone a chapter. In no way she is going to trust him ever sooner they both are solely responsible for the lost trust of their relation the only base is now weak no, very weak. He composes himself and continues.

Shivaay: I know you can’t trust me but please if even once you had faith on me then for that faith believe me I am not that low to snatch a daughter from a mother. I know I have lost 15 years of our daughter but that loss can never be recovered by bringing another loss and this isn’t only about us it’s about Sukanya as well and in our fight I don’t want her to suffer please for her sake I will never late this happen. I can’t see her fidgeting between our problems she is one innocent soul we will not let that destroy.
Anika: Promise me she won’t suffer.
Shivaay nods: Pinki promise.
They look at each other and finally Anika nods.

@SHIVAAY’S ROOM
Sukanya lays on the bed with a bang and tries to figure out the things while her eyes tear up remembering each and every moment with the Oberoi’s.
The way Shivaay took care of her, how all of them took her tantrums, how close they became to each other with in few days. Life took a 360 degree turn for her within few seconds.

Advik enters the room and sits beside Sukanya who didn’t even feel his presence, Advik keep hand on her shoulder to gain her attention, she looks back at Advik.
Advik: Di how are you?
Sukanya nods in affirmation.
Advik: Di I know you are upset and confused but please take care and I am there for you if you want to say something.
Sukanya nods.
Advik leaves from there.

After an hour or so Shivaay & Anika enter the room just find Sukanya snuggling more into her pillow. Anika cares her hair, while Shivaay covers her with the duvet, Sukanya opens her eyes feeling their presence both look at her so does she, she slightly slips into Anika’s lap all the while looking at Shivaay. Shivaay is about to leave but Sukanya shrugs that through her eyes he understands it and sit their only by her side she smiles slightly and closes her eyes. Shivaay cares her head.

Shivaay: She is really tired.
Anika nods and kisses her head.

@SWIMMING POOL
Both Shivaay and Anika are sitting there dipping their legs in the pool.
Anika: Won’t you ask may anything or won’t you get angry even.
Shivaay: You want to tell something.
Anika: I don’t know.
Shivaay holds her hand and presses it a little: Relax we both will talk about this later for now let it be. None of us would have suffered the less of other.
Anika nods.
Shivaay: What about Sukanya? How was she in her childhood?
Anika smiles: You want to see her.
He nods.
Anika gets up and gets her tab with her and sits besides him and begins to show pics.
First pic is of Anika holding Sukanya in her arms when she was nearly a month.
Shivaay: Aww… She is so cute. That chubby cheeks of her.
Anika chuckles.
Shivaay: What?
Anika nods in nothing.
Shivaay: So was she such a brave hearted, notorious and cute since her childhood.
Anika: Relax Shivaay I will tell everything.
She is cute since childhood and even now.
Shivaay: Ya the only good trait that she inherits from you.
Anika hits his shoulder: Oh really. You mean rest she inherits from you.
Shivaay: Ya of course any doubts.
Anika: Please she is an angry young girl just like you. Anger is on her nose 24/7 and above all she is tadibaaz like you.
Shivaay: She is sleeping beauty like you junior kumbkaran and she copies maximum of your those irritating words and above all calls me billu ji just like you.
He says making an irritated face.
Anika laughs hearing that word: Billu ji… Hahaha…. Hahaha…. Hahaha… I am impressed by our daughter.
Shivaay: Very funny. She is an exact copy of yours. Exact.
Anika: No ways she is Junior SSO.
Shivaay: Really. I guarantee she is like you.
Anika: No she is like you.
Shivaay: Okay then prove it.
Anika: I need not to prove it I know her this much being her mother and I am damn sure she is exact copy of Mr. Tadibaaz.
Shivaay: As if you aren’t tadibaaz.
Anika: You want to see ahead or not.
Shivaay: Okay fine continue.
The next comes a video that has recording of Sukanya’s of her crawling, first step, her first word and her first day at school.

Shivaay eyes just tear up but he controls his tears as the smile of his little angel touches his lips as well, the never ending smile is a gift of his daughter to him, she is his angel in his drowning life.

Anika: You can cry if you want to Shivaay I won’t stop you.
Shivaay cleaning his eyes: No no I am okay.
Anika pacifies him by rubbing his shoulder.

Another was a pic of Sukanya where Anika was applying ointment on her wound. Shivaay gets worried seeing it.
Shivaay: What happened to her is she okay.
He was about to go to check Sukanya when Anika drags him back to the seat.
Shivaay: What?
Anika: This is pic when she was nearly four now she is 14 so relax.
Shivaay: But what happens to her?
Anika: Nothing happened to her she had kicked a boy badly as he bad mouthed about me and for doing that he was in hospital for two days.
Shivaay: She is really possessive about you right.
Anika nods with a smile: That’s why Abeer says that fortunate are those whom Sukanya loves because this girl can do anything for her loved ones just like you it doesn’t matter who is in front but if she really loves you she won’t leave you in any problem however small or big it maybe. Well what else can be expected from THE GREAT WALL’S DAUGHTER.

She chuckles while Shivaay smiles proudly at his daughter no doubt she is a perfect combo of Anika and him.

Anika: Trust me if someone dear say a word against me she will dig that person’s grave no matter who that person is.

They continue their session nearly for an hour or so and then Anika goes and sleeps beside Sukanya while Shivaay sleeps on the couch seeing the most beautiful view of his life his lovely daughter and his wife sleeping together in front of his eyes.

@NEXT DAY
@HALL
Everybody is sitting together when Anika comes along with Gauri & Bhavya and three of them take blessings of elders followed by OmRu.
Pinky: O My Mata now this house has become dharamshaala only for everyone.
(To her bad luck from one side Shivaay is coming while all the kids along with Sukanya are descending the stair case.) Any roadside trash will come and make this house as their own. You middle class people…

Sukanya shouts: NOT A WORD MORE.

Anika looks at her and her voice gains even Shivaay’s attention as he was busy with his phone he comes and stands beside Anika with Pinky on other side.

Anika mummers under her breath: Today definitely some disaster will come.

Sukanya comes and stands in front of Pinky and shoots a deadly glare at Pinky if eyes could kill by now Pinky would have been in ashes. Sukanya turns towards Shivaay and with eyes completely emotionless, face as stern as a rock, the same look that THE SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI once carried she looks straight into his eyes. It is going to be a GIRL TO MAN talk definitely.

Sukanya: I AM SAYING THIS FOR THE FIRST & THE LAST TIME THAT ANYTHING OR EVERYTHING IS ACCEPTED BUT NOT A WORD AGAINST MY MOTHER MARK MY WORDS NOT A WORD AGAINST MY MOTHER. I HOPE SO I AM CLEAR ENOUGH WITH MY WORDS SO YOU BETTER TELL YOUR MOTHER NOT TO SAY A SINGLE WORD TO MY MOM OTHERWISE I WON’T BE IN SENSES AND THAT WON’T BE GOOD FOR HER. CONSIDER IT AS A REQUEST OR A WARNING OR ANYTHING BUT I MEAN IT BECAUSE NEXT TIME NO ONE CAN HOLD ME RESPONSIBLE FOR THE CONSEQUENCES. SHE IS FORTUNATE ENOUGH THAT TODAY I AM USING WORDS BECAUSE I AM NOT THIS GOOD TO ALL AND IF YOU HAVE DOUBTS YOU CAN HAPPILY CHECK MY PAST TRACK I DON’T MIND BUT NEXT TIME ASK HER TO BE AWARE. I SPARE NONE. (her eyes soften a little looking at dadi and she continues) exceptions are always there. (but soon covers up after giving a brief smile to dadi who smiles back at her.)

This comes as a shock to every single being present their, Anika is shocked as she is just warning because this is something new and rest are shocked but not really as they have seen the result of first encounter already but still they were shocked. While Tej who got over his scenes laughed out.

Tej: Oh my God what a girls she is she has shut mouth of Pinky. Hahaha… Hahaha…

Few look him with disgust but this time to his bad luck he has messed with wrong person and he understands that soon no, super soon.

Sukanya: Trust me I have never seen a man so pathetic that he finds happiness in his own families’ sorrow.

He words shut the big enough mouth of TEJ SINGH OBEROI.

Tej: Excuse me, you must know whom you are talking to I am your grandfather from relationship.

Sukanya stands in front of him still in same way the expressionless cold look.

Sukanya: Get my words clearly enough as that would be good for you. I am neither Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi nor am I Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi to entertain your nuisance just because we share a relation since birth. Believe me or not I am a devil and I care for none when it comes to my loved ones none means none and you are no exception to it. Better you mend your ways before I make you do them.

Tej: Badtmeez (Mannerless.)

Sukanya: Koi shak.
(Any doubts.)

The final shot and all wickets down with zero out. Now I hope so you get it why she is called “NEVER TO MESS WITH GIRL.”.

Anika: Phail Gaya raita.
She says bringing everyone back as slowly everyone recovers from the trauma of shocks.
Rudra: Bhabhi yeh ladki hai yah missile.
(Is she a girl or a missile.)
Anika: Missile.
Rudra: Phaad ke nikal gayi yeh toh.
(She left by shaking all of us to the core ).

He says as Sukanya moves towards exit but not before doing the famous SSO hair move solely inheriting it from her father.

Gauri: Bhujai is she Salman ji’s fan. She is full to dabangg.
Anika: This is just start Gauri.
Bhavya: Bhabhi make her enter Police she will break everyone’s bones.
Shivaay: What’s the need to join police for that she is doing that without even joining police.
Om: I am impressed she has shut everyone’s mouth today.
Kids laugh whole heartedly looking at statue figures of Tej & Pinky and their sister’s darwaaza tod moves.
Advik: Seriously I love her guys.
Elders smile at them.
Dadi looks at everyone with full happiness and contentment.

@PRE RECAP:
A DAY OUT.

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SHIVIKA 😊…

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16 Comments
  1. Lauren

    Amazinggggg.. fantastic…. loved d OMM part most… it was fab…. post nxt soooooooon…

  2. Nithu

    mujhe tho pinky ki omm and tej ki omm bahooooottttttttttttttt……………………..achaaa laga………loved it

  3. Firstly I really loved tej’s and pinky’s omm…secondly sukanya’s reaction was sooooopper…thirdly…really loved each and every word of sukanya in scolding tej and pinky…finally last but not the least shivika moments and childhood memory was awesome dude..
    U really nailed it dear…i want more shivaay,anika and sukanya family moment where sukanya witness her parents nok jhok…waiting very eagerly for next episode….ummmmaaaaa…love u dear…

  4. i just loved it plz next epi post soon i can’t wait so long

  5. This was awesome, Sukanya was shocked so her reaction is normal. Shivika were superb but I can’t wait to see the truth behind their separation and what happened when Anika came with Sukanya as a baby,how Shivay moved to New York and his come back. Considering that Sukanya knows the true story things are going to get interesting especially with Tej & Pinot. She seems to be another great wall like her father. Pls post the next part as soon as possible.

  6. Wow!!! Shivika pinky nd tej’s OMM part was Amazingggggg……. Enjoyyyyy it mosssstttt…..
    Shivika part was Awesome dr….

    Not excepting this type of reaction from Sukanya…. Waiting 4 nxt…

  7. Ashwinee

    Sister India sukanya is just marvellous 😘totally unpredictable and Ofcourse darwaazatodh.
    Shivika awww😍😍.pinky ki saath tej ka bhi oh my Mata hogayi and that’s the best part. Totally in love with sukanya 😍😍😘😘.

  8. Nikita_jai29

    Khidki todh update… Lovely dear… It is awesome…. The best part is omm of tej and pinky

  9. Pooja26

    haha suks is d best !!!!!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    loved it!!!!!!!
    post asap…….
    tc…….

  10. Superb. I love each character

  11. Namrata Singh

    Amazing story pls continue like this ……and post d next episode soooooon

  12. Sagithya

    Awesome yaar… I loved it to the core… I like sukanya bold Avatar… N the way she made pinky n tej to shut their mouth… Post the next part soon…

  13. Dhar

    I loved the omm of pinky and tej…. Sukanyas reaction was really good… U made it perfect by adding some humor to it…. This was a total blast wala epic episode… Loved it to the coreeeee… Plzz do post the next update ASAP

  14. Very interesting loved it so much……..thanks for the great episode

  15. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

  16. Anci

    It was an amazing episode… I really loved it… Last night I came across this ff and started from Part – 1 and trust me, it was a bang… I loved your way of writing and Sukanya completely…
    Our own blood makes OMM of the elders for their deeds was very beautifully described…
    Waiting for the next update…

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