The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 9

Kunj and twinkle sit on the sofa facing each other. They start having dinner. While eating twinkle feels spicy and starts behaving how a kid behaves when it feels spicy. She was running for water when the water was on the table itself. Kunj who now hands her the glass of water adores at her behavior. After drinking the water, twinkle asks “what happened? why are staring ?”. Kunj not being in his senses speaks up “beacuse you look so cute”. Twinkle who is surprised listening to this says “really?” and raises one of her eyebrows. Kunj coming back to her senses says “kuch nahi ! tu bata khana kaisa laga? (nothing! so tell me did you like the food?)”. Twinkle says “oh i loved the food! its so good! from where did you order?”. Kunj says “Order? idiot i made it! Don’t you know kunj sauna is an excellent chef as well?”. Twinkle was completely surprised. She continues saying “really? i cant believe! its just so amazing. don’t lie.. c’mon spill the beans. Which restaurant?” Kunj repeats the same saying that he is the one who made it. Twinkle then says “Mr. Kunj Sarna … I’m quite impressed. your food is delicious … your decoration for the room is splendid …. the dress you bought is absolute beauty …… and those bouquets are incredible. I must say that there is no chance that any girl will not forgive you with such a beautiful way to say sorry”. Kunj is very happy listening to this and says “thank you twinkie” while blushing. Twinkle says “Twinkie ?” Kunj then says “ oh sorry to shorten your name i like twinkie but if you don’t like i wont say it”. Twinkle then interrupts saying “of course not! In fact i like it! Twinkie is really a sweet name. U can call me using that! I wouldn’t mind”. Kunj is glad knowing she liked it. He forwards his hand to twinkle. Twinkle questions why through her expressions with her cute little face. Kunj says “c’mon wont you have a little dance in such an atmosphere?” She says “of course why not?” She gives her hand into kunj’s hand and kunj plays the music. Kunj put his hand around twinkle’s waist and tightens the grip while giving shivers to twinkle’s back while twinkle puts her hand on kunj’s shoulder and they start dancing. Bol do na zara plays on the speaker and they dance like there’s no one int he world other than them. They seem to be so lost in each other that soon they start embracing each other. Soon without realizing they start caressing each other. They get so lost into each other that while looking at twinkle’s eyes kunj speaks “damnit you are such a beauty. I never felt about any girl in this way. You are special, damn special. And darling i know you got mad at me when i went for a movie with aashi but I did this all to know if you felt the same about me and baby you passed it meaning that you too feel the same for me”. Twinkle also replies “acha! so this was all your game plan to make me feel so bad. I don’t like you kunj. It felt so bad. To know if i felt the same about you, you could just look into my eyes.. they would have answered everything to you.” Kunj then replies “surely i did, but i just wanted to confirm myself and look you got jealous, felt bad. But now don’t worry i will never leave you”. Suddenly the vibe b/w them breaks and they realize what they’ve told to each other. Twinkle excuses herself saying he needs to go to the washroom. She leaves and goes to the washroom.

Twinkle (POV):
Wait what? did he just say all that? and did i say all that ? he feels the same ? wait not same .. he feels for me ? wait i feel for him ? oh holy crap! what just happened! so adding things up … WE JUST CONFESSED FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER? we feel ? I feel ? He feels ? Shit what is happening? Do i really? okay wait! Yes i felt bad … okok maybe jealous…. FINE JEALOUS! And he did all this purposely? which means he knew i feel for him? how did he know before i knew? this guy is impossible. And what just happened during the dance? I was lost into him. But whatever it is … he is charming. OOPS twinkle you are falling for him.

Kunj (POV):
are you insane? You spoke out everything. but wait she said that her eyes would say everything? Now its confirmed she feels for me as well. Oh god! you are the best thing that has ever happened to me twinkle. I didn’t know before but i guess i know it now ….. I LOVE YOU TWINKLE !

Twinkle returns back and finds kunj to be nowhere. She starts looking for him. Suddenly someone from the back jumps over twinkle which completely scares hers. She playfully hits kunj on his chests. Within the next 5 minutes … the lights go off scaring twinkle completely resulting into twinkle hugging kunj in fear. Kunj smiles and hugs her backs. Kunj then breaks the hug and holds her with her shoulder and kisses on her forehead which leaves twinkle surprised although she liked it when he did that. Twinkle starts blushing and hugs him again in shyness. She breaks the hug and run but kunj catches hold of her wrist and pulls her to himself. He cups her face and gently kisses on her left cheek.Twinkle turns red. Suddenly the doorbell rings bringing both of them back to their senses. They quickly compose themselves and kunj goes to open the door. They see the rest of the family with yuhi coming as well.
I am so sorry for uploadingg this late cuz i didn’t have any time … i couldn’t write. Anyways i hope you guys liked today’s part. Hoping i was able to stand up to your expectations and if not sorry and let me know how i can improve it so i don’t disappoint you in the next episodes. Drop off your thoughts through commenting about today’s part and let me know what you liked the best in it. Lastly, continue commenting as they are the source of support to me and thank you to all those who have been commenting throughout my ff. I am sure there might be many silent readers but i would really appreciate if you guys start commenting. No hard feelings okay! Love you all. Bye x

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  1. Rashiverma2199

    Monica….it was awesome…..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you rashi x

  2. Shreya098

    amazing…. it was such a romantic part???
    I loved the scene where they just got lost in each others eyes…and almost confessed
    loved the episode??????

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you shreya ? i am glad you liked it 🙂

  3. Fan

    Awesome epi monica!!..keep up the good work..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  4. Joonakanksha

    It was awesome….but plz make it little longer

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you Joonakanksha x and surely i’ll try to make it long 🙂

  5. Amazing ff
    I read it
    As ur request I read it today only
    Now one request from me
    Post sooon

    1. Kritika14

      aww x that’s so sweet of you x surely will post soon 🙂 Thank you sweetie x

  6. Baby

    amazing monica luvd it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very mch yr twinj cnfsion unknown cnfsn ws vry nyc smthing new yr luvd it dear post nxt wen evr u cn bt yh soon n yah luvd all d sidmins scenes dt luvd d episode dear

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much baby ? I am glad you really liked it 🙂

  7. Awsm…. gr8…splended…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you maggi x

  8. Kruti

    Superb epi Monica loved d twinj romance

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you kruti 🙂

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome epi…Amazing….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling 🙂

  10. Ria

    Loved it Monica. It was such a romantic part. The way they were lost in each other and blurted out their feelings was one of the best.?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you ria x i am so happy you liked it after all you are such a great writer ??

      1. Ria

        Monica, it’s nothing like that. I just write in simple plain English and I don’t think it is so great. And, why won’t I love your ff!

  11. Wow amazing epi dear…seriously lovely episode…..oved that twinj movement when i read this i feel to read it from starting & trust me every epi was just fantastic…watng for nxt

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much for commenting x Really happy knowing you liked it 🙂

  12. Jisha

    Loved it Monica…. Twinj scenes were so awesome…you write beautifully…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you Jisha x but i am sure you write better than me ?:)

      1. Jisha

        Nothing like that..we all have our own skills…I love your writing…

    2. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂 It really feels good to know ? but surely i love your writings too ?

  13. Sayeeda

    Wooowwww…..Monica …soo well written ….
    Twinj scenes…. amazing…. sooo romantic …cute….adorable….
    Loved it…plzzz post next soon ….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sayeeda x Happy to know you liked the twinj moments 🙂 and no doubt you write good as well 🙂

  14. Angita

    Twinj scenes were so lovely ….yup you made more to our expectations

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you angita! So happy i could keep up to your expectations 🙂

  15. Shatakshi

    Omg Monica
    It was soo beautiful❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you shatakshi x

  16. impressed d way u xpress kunj n twinkle pov…
    like really its so natural…
    do cont asap….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much for commenting x It feels great knowing you you liked it 🙂 Will surely continue soon.

  17. Zuha Fatima

    Wow Monica??U write so well! This episode was epic! Read your FF! By God’s grace u requested me and I was able to read such a wonderful FF! You are so good at writing! Keep going like this!


    1. Kritika14

      I am so happy you liked it 🙂 Thank you so so much Zuha x

  18. Jiya_Ani was tooo gud., sorry for late comment I was in school… But I feel as a writer..we all love late comments.. Haina…
    Loved it to the core…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you lovely x Feels so good having you back commenting 🙂

  19. SidMin

    Sorry for commenting late and I loved the date wala Dinner and their confession (almost) Loved it waiting for the next pls post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Its okay sidmin. I’m happy you commented .. that’s enough 🙂 and thank you x and the next part is submitted.


    ofcourse we loved it dear

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x I am so glad that you are commenting 🙂


    ofcourse we loved it dear it was really amazing

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