The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 7


Aashi says “c’mon kunj lets go back to the theatre”. Kunj says “sure”. After kunj and aashi leave twinkle thinks to herself “holy crap! why did he see me? why did we bump together to the same theatre and the same movie? Mr. Kunj Sarna didn’t you get any other theatre in this whole amritsar than this? I am so annoyed right now. I better be taking the popcorn and head to the theatre or else di and bhai may doubt where i have gone”. Twinkle then goes to the theatre and hands over popcorn to yuhi while they ask “where have you been twinkle? what took you so long?” Firstly she had no answer to this but later replied “actually there was a long queue for the snacks area”. They nodded their heads and told her to sit and enjoy the rest of the film.While the film kept running, kunj was twinkle twinkle could think about. She thought to herself “what’s wrong with me? it’s fine if kunj comes here! Ofcourse it’s a co-incidence and what’s the big deal. Shut up with your stupid thought and watch the movie”. She convinces herself and tries concentrating in the movie but within 2 minutes she again starts thinking about the whole kunj thing. She gets annoyed and gets up and heads towards the exit when yuvraj asks “where are you going?” twinkle replies saying “I’ve got to make an important call. I’ll back in a while” ands walks out the theatre. To her surprise she finds kunj in a distance sitting on the bench, all alone. For once she considers to go to him but later decides on rather going to the washroom. While she turns, kunj catches sight of twinkle and walks towards her. Twinkle who notices about him following her, tries walking faster in order to ignore him but eventually kunj runs and catches her asking “what are you doing here?” Twinkle replies “why i cant be here? You don’t own this place do you?” Kunj being very confused with her answer but later understands and asks “what’s wrong twinkle?” Twinkle shouts saying “nothing is wrong! Now get you ass back to the theatre!” Kunj being very surprised by her behavior thinks “i guess she felt bad more than what i thought”. While he was thinking, twinkle leaves towards the washroom.

Twinkle (POV):
What the hell did i just do? with what rights did i shout at him? Are you nuts twinkle!

Kunj follows her,grabs her hand and pulls her towards the wall beside the ladies washroom which does not let her enter. Twinkle shouts again and says “what the hell is wrong with you? Why wont you let me enter?” and before she could continue speaking kunj puts his hand over her mouth and says “you’ve shouted enough! what’s the matter with you? what wrong did i do to you that you are behaving so rude to me? I am sure that you faked a call during the time you came to buy popcorn in order to avoid me”. Twinkle remains quiet. Kunj demands “twinkle say what’s wrong? what did i do?” Twinkle replies “you did nothing wrong.I am the one wrong here. I guess i expected too much from you that early. I suppose someone promised me that they wouldn’t let me feel lonely but they forgot their promise but why would it care to that person after all i am just his friend, nothing else”. Kunj to this says “why do i mean more than a friend to you?” Twinkle then realizes what she spoke and says “No nothing” and demands kunj on letting her go. Kunj leave her hand and she walks to the washroom.
How was it ? did i keep it up to your expectations? really looking forward towards your comments to know about it. and guys please comment more often, it feels like many have lost interest from my ff as when i checked my previous posts, i had way more people who commented. And if that is the case… then i may stop my ff soon cuz i really don’t see many reading! Anyway, drop off your thoughts in the comments. Lastly, thank you to all those who regularly commented(fan,angita,purnima,sidmin,maggi,sayeeda,shreya,kruti,ria,arundhati,jisha,romaisah,rashiverma *sorry if i left anyone*) you guys really are the best. No ones has appreciated my writings before and you guys make me feel like i am on top of the world. Love you guys till the core ❤️ Continue commenting. Loves x

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  1. SidMin

    Monica loved it it was very sweet waiting for the next part pls post asap 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling ❤️ surely will post one asap 🙂

  2. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome epi….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you honey 🙂

  3. Angita

    Awesome episode Monica….Kunj and twinkle both were bold…superbbb post asap..btwn what’s your age do I have to call you di I’m 13.

    1. Kritika14

      well i am sixteen but that doesn’t mean that you’ll have to call me di 🙂

  4. Jisha

    Beautiful episode dear….loved it….some of them are having exams.. may be that’s why they are not commenting. don’t get disheartened….

    1. Kritika14

      Maybe you are right. But i really would like to thank you for supporting me so much throughout. It really means a lot to me <3

  5. Kruti

    wowwwwww monica what an epi …….loved it
    the way twinj were back answering each other letting their feelings overrule their minds …………amazing

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sweetie 🙂

  6. Sayeeda

    Monica dear…plzzz don’t be sad …ur ff is too good…infact I love ur ff..
    Coming to ur episode…. loved twinj scenes …
    Their POV’s was awesome ….nd best part was last scene…My God too good …loved it…
    And remember don’t be sad ….keep smiling ; I know u look so cute while smiling ..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sayeeda ❤ I really am so happy cuz you are so supportive ? and I am sure you look even more cuter when you smile ?

  7. superb epi i like it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  8. Ria

    Hey Monica, don’t even think of ending of your ff. It was amazing. And, never think that you’ve less readers. Silent readers are always there to read your ff. Also, looks like we’re of the same age?

    1. Kritika14

      It is so sweet of you ? Thank you so much for supporting me throughout ❤ are you 16 ? Okay I am excited to meet a girl of my age on the internet ??

      1. Ria

        Yes, I am 16..?

  9. Rashiverma2199

    Monica it was lovely dear….awesome….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling x

  10. Shatakshi

    Hey Monica
    Dear it was really too good
    Please do continue asap
    I m waiting❤❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you shatakshi ❤

  11. Dreamer...arundhati

    Monica osum epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you ?

  12. Fan

    Suqper epi Monica..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  13. Twinj scenes was amazing !!! Good yaar sorry for not commenting in previous epis net probs … Anyway dont get disheartened bcz i really love ur ff so dont u dare think abt stop writing and uploading ok?!
    Good … :v love u ❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much romaisah ? love you too ❤

  14. I just loved it what an amazing epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sweetie x

  15. Hy sry fr commentin late bt the epi wz awsm!!!!

    1. Kritika14

      its okay and thank you x

  16. Baby

    amazing monica luvd it d episode ws osm 1

    1. Kritika14

      thank you so much x

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